Yukinoshita Yukino (CV.Hayami Saori) & Yuigahama Yui (CV.Tou

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-Nya-
Hi, NM from my queue.

General:
  1. Not really such a big issue, but just thought I’ll point it out. The BG’s size is quite big. Changing the image to jpg might lower the size a bit. This is just to ensure the folder takes up as little space as possible.
  2. The preview point is snapped to a 1/16. Not an issue but just checking if it’s intentional or not.
  3. From 00:00:560 – to 00:09:813 – the hitsounds can’t be heard that clearly. I suggest raising the volume just a bit so the hitsounds supporting the piano can be heard especially.
Lie:
  1. 00:03:676 (1) –The distance of this object can be increased a bit more imo since the beat on the head of the slider is quite strong and the distance don’t really emphasize that. Perhaps somewhere here: X:112
  2. 00:05:624 (2,3) –Hmm, the hyperdash here don’t really make sense to me since the music’s intensity is still the same and you didn’t place any hyperdashes here: 00:02:118 (1,2) – so the hyperdash here 00:05:624 (2,3) – looks out of place.
  3. 00:19:261 (1) –While playing I expected the spacing of this object to be bigger since the beat on the head is quite strong. So making the spacing similar to 00:18:482 (3,4,5,6) – don’t make much sense since the beat on 00:19:261 (1) – is different. So perhaps try placing that slider somewhere here: X:452
  4. 00:23:157 (3,4) –The flow from (3) to (4) was a bit uncomfortable for me. It’s because I expected 00:23:547 (4) – to be placed on the left side of 00:23:157 (3) – Consider placing 00:23:547 (4) – somewhere here: X:192 and just moving the tail of the slider a bit to the right to improve the flow.
  5. 00:30:949 (3,4) –I don’t really understand why you placed a hyperdash here. There is no strong beat on the head of 00:31:534 (4) – so I don’t really see a need to emphasize it. Emphasizing this strong beat would be a good idea though. Same goes for this beat: 00:31:728 – Making one of these or even both a single fruit or the head of a slider would be a good idea so that they can be emphasized.
  6. 00:32:897 (4) –Increase the distance of this fruit a bit because the current spacing is a bit too low imo. Perhaps somewhere here: X:252.
  7. 00:34:261 (6,7) –Same as 00:30:949 (3,4) –
  8. 00:36:404 (1) –There’s a stronger beat on the head of this slider so rather not make the distance similar to the previous circles. Perhaps place the slider somewhere here: X:392
  9. 00:39:910 (2,3) –Placing a hyperdash here would be nice since the beat on 00:40:300 (3) – is quite strong.
  10. 00:51:988 (7) –I think the new combo must be here since the strong beat is on this slider’s head. So add NC here and remove NC here: 00:52:378 (1) –
  11. 00:54:131 (1) –The new combo here don’t make much sense imo. It looks inconsistent with the previous patterns and there’s no strong beat on 00:54:131 (1) – to support it.
  12. 01:08:547 (6) –To be consistent with 00:55:884 (1) – I think it would be a good idea to place a new combo here.
  13. 01:21:598 (1) –Same as previous instances: Increase the distance of this object a bit for more emphasis. Somewhere here: X:4.
Collab Platter:
  1. Uncheck widescreen support. No SB and inconsistent with other diffs.
  2. 00:05:235 (1) –I suggest spacing this object out a bit more because of the strong beat on the head of the slider. Emphasizing the beat more would be a good idea. Perhaps somewhere here: X:160
  3. 00:06:988 (2,3) –Perhaps make these two sliders’ shapes similar. While playing it’ll look consistent and cohesive. Something like this:
  4. 00:12:248 (1) –Make the spacing of this object just a bit bigger so it’s more similar to the spacing of the previous similar patterns. Somewhere here: X:56 would be nice.
  5. 00:26:663 (3,1) –I suggest placing a hyperdash here to support this hyperdash: 00:25:105 (4,1) – and also because the beat on 00:27:053 (1) – is distinct and can be emphasized more.
  6. 00:30:949 (3,4) –Same as 00:06:988 (2,3) – Would play nice if the shapes were similar. So something like this:
  7. 00:34:456 –Hmm, this beat is so strong and it would be better to have it as a fruit for more emphasis. Having this beat as a tick just isn’t enough imo. So I suggest a pattern like this:
  8. 00:39:521 -^, plus these two objects: 00:38:741 (2,1) – are quite close to each other. Space 00:39:326 (1) – out a bit more. Somewhere here: X:248
  9. 00:40:300 (1) –This new combo is unnecessary imo and looks inconsistent with previous NC’ing patterns. Consider removing the NC here.
  10. 00:47:118 (6,1) –A hyperdash here would fit in perfectly and will also support this hyperdash: 00:48:482 (3,1) – I know it’ll be difficult to incorporate it since previous patterns will probably have to be moved around to make it work so it’s up to you.
  11. 00:50:040 (3) –Increase the distance of this object a bit. It’s quite close to 00:49:455 (2) – and because of the strong beat on the head of the slider, it will be nice to emphasize that more. So perhaps place 00:50:040 (3) – somewhere here: X:96
  12. 01:00:365 –I think you should rather place an object here. Seems out of place to leave this empty. Sort of breaks flow.
  13. 01:04:066 -^, this beat is rather loud.
  14. 01:21:209 (3) –Increase the spacing of this object just a teeny bit. Right now it’s very close to 01:20:819 (2) – Somewhere here would be nice: X:396
  15. 01:22:378 (1) –I suggest rather removing this new combo. It looks inconsistent with the previous patterns.
  16. 01:22:962 (4,5) –Rather remove this hyperdash. The reason is because the vocals on the head of the slider actually quiets down and don’t become stronger so emphasis isn’t really a good thing here.
Sc4's Salad:
  1. Uncheck widescreen support. No SB and inconsistent with other diffs.
  2. 00:05:040 (4,1,2,3,4) –Rather make the pattern/rhythm here similar to 00:01:923 (1,2) – and 00:08:157 (4,5) – because right now it looks inconsistent with these two and also I like the simplistic patterns better. These patterns: 00:05:040 (4,1,2,3,4) – don’t follow the piano that well for a Salad diff imo.
  3. 00:08:157 (4) –For consistency with 00:01:923 (1) – you have to add a new combo here: 00:08:157 (4) –
  4. 01:07:572 (1,2) –Perhaps turn these two objects into a slider. The reason for this is to prevent 5 consecutive fruits because it looks a bit inconsistent with the other similar patterns.
Cup:
  1. Uncheck widescreen support. No SB and also inconsistent with the hardest diff.
  2. 00:25:495 (1,2,3,4,5) –This combo is quite long for a Cup and exceeds 8 objects. My suggestion would be to add new combo here: 00:27:053 (4) – otherwise the plate might stack up too much.
  3. 00:47:314 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -^, you can add new combo here: 00:48:871 (4) –
  4. 01:02:897 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -^, you can add new combo here: 01:04:456 (4) –
  5. 00:56:663 (1,2,3) -^, this one only exceeds 8 objects by one so it’s probably fine.
  6. 01:09:131 (1,2,3) -^
  7. 01:15:365 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -^
  8. 01:18:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -^
  9. 00:17:702 (3,4,5,6) –It would be nice if you can place the other similar patterns like this as well, just to make them more interesting. Right now the placement of these: 00:20:819 (3,4,5,6) – and 00:33:287 (3,4,5,6) – etc is quite boring.

This is a pretty nice set. If you have any questions regarding my mod, feel free to poke me in-game. Good luck with ranking this~
Sc4v4ng3r
Fixed all from Nya's mod, except the last suggestion as making a slider still makes a 5-fruit pattern. I believe slider would add unnecessary difficulty to the map as you also need to catch the droplets(albeit the fact that it is still easy in this case, but still). Thanks for the mod!

@tasuke - This code contains both fixes from benny's and nya's mod so don't worry if this is a separate fix lol
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Title:Everyday World
TitleUnicode:エブリデイワールド
Artist:Yukinoshita Yukino (CV.Hayami Saori) & Yuigahama Yui (CV.Touyama Nao)
ArtistUnicode:雪ノ下雪乃(CV.早見沙織)&由比ヶ浜結衣(CV.東山奈央)
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Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
Tags:Ascendance Sc4v4ng3r yahari ore no seishun love comedy wa machigatteiru. zoku ed My Youth Romantic Comedy Is Wrong As I Expected Oregairu SNAFU
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Time-
You make really good ctb map :O
Topic Starter
tasuke912

-Nya- wrote:

Hi, NM from my queue.

General:
  1. Not really such a big issue, but just thought I’ll point it out. The BG’s size is quite big. Changing the image to jpg might lower the size a bit. This is just to ensure the folder takes up as little space as possible.
  2. The preview point is snapped to a 1/16. Not an issue but just checking if it’s intentional or not.
  3. From 00:00:560 – to 00:09:813 – the hitsounds can’t be heard that clearly. I suggest raising the volume just a bit so the hitsounds supporting the piano can be heard especially.
Lie:
  1. 00:03:676 (1) –The distance of this object can be increased a bit more imo since the beat on the head of the slider is quite strong and the distance don’t really emphasize that. Perhaps somewhere here: X:112
  2. 00:05:624 (2,3) –Hmm, the hyperdash here don’t really make sense to me since the music’s intensity is still the same and you didn’t place any hyperdashes here: 00:02:118 (1,2) – so the hyperdash here 00:05:624 (2,3) – looks out of place.
  3. 00:19:261 (1) –While playing I expected the spacing of this object to be bigger since the beat on the head is quite strong. So making the spacing similar to 00:18:482 (3,4,5,6) – don’t make much sense since the beat on 00:19:261 (1) – is different. So perhaps try placing that slider somewhere here: X:452
  4. 00:23:157 (3,4) –The flow from (3) to (4) was a bit uncomfortable for me. It’s because I expected 00:23:547 (4) – to be placed on the left side of 00:23:157 (3) – Consider placing 00:23:547 (4) – somewhere here: X:192 and just moving the tail of the slider a bit to the right to improve the flow.
  5. 00:30:949 (3,4) –I don’t really understand why you placed a hyperdash here. There is no strong beat on the head of 00:31:534 (4) – so I don’t really see a need to emphasize it. Emphasizing this strong beat would be a good idea though. Same goes for this beat: 00:31:728 – Making one of these or even both a single fruit or the head of a slider would be a good idea so that they can be emphasized.
  6. 00:32:897 (4) –Increase the distance of this fruit a bit because the current spacing is a bit too low imo. Perhaps somewhere here: X:252.
  7. 00:34:261 (6,7) –Same as 00:30:949 (3,4) –
  8. 00:36:404 (1) –There’s a stronger beat on the head of this slider so rather not make the distance similar to the previous circles. Perhaps place the slider somewhere here: X:392
  9. 00:39:910 (2,3) –Placing a hyperdash here would be nice since the beat on 00:40:300 (3) – is quite strong.
  10. 00:51:988 (7) –I think the new combo must be here since the strong beat is on this slider’s head. So add NC here and remove NC here: 00:52:378 (1) –
  11. 00:54:131 (1) –The new combo here don’t make much sense imo. It looks inconsistent with the previous patterns and there’s no strong beat on 00:54:131 (1) – to support it.
  12. 01:08:547 (6) –To be consistent with 00:55:884 (1) – I think it would be a good idea to place a new combo here.
  13. 01:21:598 (1) –Same as previous instances: Increase the distance of this object a bit for more emphasis. Somewhere here: X:4.
Collab Platter:
  1. Uncheck widescreen support. No SB and inconsistent with other diffs. I'd keep neat curve pattern
  2. 00:05:235 (1) –I suggest spacing this object out a bit more because of the strong beat on the head of the slider. Emphasizing the beat more would be a good idea. Perhaps somewhere here: X:160
  3. 00:06:988 (2,3) –Perhaps make these two sliders’ shapes similar. While playing it’ll look consistent and cohesive. Something like this:
  4. 00:12:248 (1) –Make the spacing of this object just a bit bigger so it’s more similar to the spacing of the previous similar patterns. Somewhere here: X:56 would be nice. fixed
  5. 00:26:663 (3,1) –I suggest placing a hyperdash here to support this hyperdash: 00:25:105 (4,1) – and also because the beat on 00:27:053 (1) – is distinct and can be emphasized more. fixed
  6. 00:47:118 (6,1) –A hyperdash here would fit in perfectly and will also support this hyperdash: 00:48:482 (3,1) – I know it’ll be difficult to incorporate it since previous patterns will probably have to be moved around to make it work so it’s up to you. i have no idea
  7. 00:50:040 (3) –Increase the distance of this object a bit. It’s quite close to 00:49:455 (2) – and because of the strong beat on the head of the slider, it will be nice to emphasize that more. So perhaps place 00:50:040 (3) – somewhere here: X:96
  8. 01:21:209 (3) –Increase the spacing of this object just a teeny bit. Right now it’s very close to 01:20:819 (2) – Somewhere here would be nice: X:396
  9. 01:22:378 (1) –I suggest rather removing this new combo. It looks inconsistent with the previous patterns. made more distance
  10. 01:22:962 (4,5) –Rather remove this hyperdash. The reason is because the vocals on the head of the slider actually quiets down and don’t become stronger so emphasis isn’t really a good thing here. hmm, okay
Cup:
  1. Uncheck widescreen support. No SB and also inconsistent with the hardest diff.
  2. 00:25:495 (1,2,3,4,5) –This combo is quite long for a Cup and exceeds 8 objects. My suggestion would be to add new combo here: 00:27:053 (4) – otherwise the plate might stack up too much. Fixed.
  3. 00:47:314 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -^, you can add new combo here: 00:48:871 (4) – Fixed.
  4. 01:02:897 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -^, you can add new combo here: 01:04:456 (4) – Fixed.
  5. 00:56:663 (1,2,3) -^, this one only exceeds 8 objects by one so it’s probably fine.
  6. 01:09:131 (1,2,3) -^
  7. 01:15:365 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -^
  8. 01:18:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -^
  9. 00:17:702 (3,4,5,6) –It would be nice if you can place the other similar patterns like this as well, just to make them more interesting. Right now the placement of these: 00:20:819 (3,4,5,6) – and 00:33:287 (3,4,5,6) – etc is quite boring. other mother said it's hard for cup, so i'm hesitating to do it now

This is a pretty nice set. If you have any questions regarding my mod, feel free to poke me in-game. Good luck with ranking this~
Thanks a lot. :)
alienflybot
rank when?
Minato Yukina
[Collab Platter]
00:09:813 (7) - How about to remove this and add HDash on 00:09:715 (6) - ? just like this
00:21:209 (2) - x:304 seems better for the connection of flow with the movement on 00:21:598 (3,4) - .

00:40:689 (2) - It's really a minor thing but how about to ctrl + h and replace on the current place? It looks better for its aesthetic

Does this diff even need mods

[Lie]
00:39:910 (2,3) - This has a long distance than usual and pretty sudden, how about to consider add HDash or decrease the distance some more?
00:50:332 (6) - make a bit more distance is good for playability and aesthetic, try to replace on x : 240
00:53:449 (5) - same reason as above, x : 268
00:59:683 (5) - ^, x : 320
01:12:150 (7) - This time it shall be good to more stacked, x : 448?

Does this diff even need mods (2)

:idea:
Topic Starter
tasuke912

CLSW wrote:

[Collab Platter]
00:09:813 (7) - How about to remove this and add HDash on 00:09:715 (6) - ? just like this
Cool. Applied!
00:21:209 (2) - x:304 seems better for the connection of flow with the movement on 00:21:598 (3,4) - . Fixed
Does this diff even need mods

[Lie]
00:39:910 (2,3) - This has a long distance than usual and pretty sudden, how about to consider add HDash or decrease the distance some more? fixed.
00:50:332 (6) - make a bit more distance is good for playability and aesthetic, try to replace on x : 240 i feel it's far. used 1.2x snap instead
00:53:449 (5) - same reason as above, x : 268 ^
00:59:683 (5) - ^, x : 320^
01:12:150 (7) - This time it shall be good to more stacked, x : 448? okay

Does this diff even need mods (2)

:idea:
Thanks CLSW-san!
Sc4v4ng3r
Small update on my hitsounds as they sounded damn weird lol

osu file format v14

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Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
Tags:Ascendance Sc4v4ng3r yahari ore no seishun love comedy wa machigatteiru. zoku ed My Youth Romantic Comedy Is Wrong As I Expected Oregairu SNAFU
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Ascendance
Hi guys! Sorry for not really replying to mods. Since my half was a bit old, I went through all of your suggestions and adjusted distances as needed. I fixed some small hitsounding things as well (mostly on sliderticks)

Thanks!

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TitleUnicode:エブリデイワールド
Artist:Yukinoshita Yukino (CV.Hayami Saori) & Yuigahama Yui (CV.Touyama Nao)
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Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
Tags:Ascendance Sc4v4ng3r yahari ore no seishun love comedy wa machigatteiru. zoku ed My Youth Romantic Comedy Is Wrong As I Expected Oregairu SNAFU
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48,161,26663,2,0,L|136:150,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,82,27053,5,2,0:0:0:0:
464,124,27248,1,8,0:0:0:0:
493,203,27443,1,10,0:0:0:0:
480,286,27637,1,8,0:0:0:0:
413,338,27832,2,0,P|376:323|320:352,1,85,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
66,127,28222,1,2,3:0:0:0:
73,85,28320,1,2,3:0:0:0:
80,44,28417,1,2,3:0:0:0:
360,296,28611,6,0,P|388:220|320:152,1,170,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,128,29196,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,72,29391,2,0,L|440:72,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,24,29780,2,0,L|152:24,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,30170,6,0,P|368:160|296:224,1,170,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,224,30754,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,304,30949,2,0,L|432:304,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,224,31339,2,0,L|176:112,1,85,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,64,31728,6,0,L|136:48,2,170,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,80,32702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,144,32897,2,0,L|312:256,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,312,33287,6,0,L|280:336,2,170,10|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,248,34261,2,0,P|228:172|276:108,1,170
432,32,34845,6,0,L|248:24,1,170,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,88,35430,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,160,35624,2,0,L|264:272,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,304,36014,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,344,36209,6,0,L|504:360,1,170
320,240,36793,2,0,L|208:248,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,200,37183,2,0,P|72:144|128:64,1,170,10|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
232,56,37767,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,104,37962,6,0,L|368:296,1,170,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,328,38741,2,0,L|360:352,1,170,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,168,39326,6,0,L|80:168,1,170
176,168,39910,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,168,40105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,256,40300,6,0,L|192:376,1,85,2|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,272,40689,2,0,L|328:368,1,85,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
65,43,41079,6,0,P|40:167|121:208,1,229.499992996216,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,162,41858,2,0,P|271:221|229:299,1,152.999995330811
119,115,42443,6,0,L|150:29,1,76.4999976654053,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,239,43027,2,0,P|420:269|498:226,2,152.999995330811
186,198,44196,6,0,P|155:261|198:340,1,152.999995330811,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,332,44780,2,0,P|357:265|326:198,1,152.999995330811
226,122,45365,2,0,P|188:114|149:122,1,76.4999976654053,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,197,45754,6,0,P|393:167|422:98,1,152.999995330811,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,74,46339,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,105,46534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
165,177,46728,1,2,3:0:0:0:
191,248,46923,1,2,0:0:0:0:
258,284,47118,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,316,47313,6,0,L|509:263,2,85,2|2|2,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,341,47897,2,0,L|134:288,2,85,2|2|2,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,149,48482,2,0,L|393:243,1,85,2|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,78,48871,6,0,L|30:131,2,85,2|2|2,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,42,49455,2,0,L|401:95,2,85,2|2|2,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,264,50040,2,0,L|34:227,1,85,2|2,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
52,194,50332,1,2,3:0:0:0:
54,155,50430,5,6,0:0:0:0:
324,34,50819,2,0,L|352:126,1,85,2|0,3:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,86,51209,2,0,L|194:178,1,85,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,188,51598,2,0,L|356:288,1,85,2|0,3:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,188,51988,6,0,L|472:288,1,85,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,285,52378,2,0,P|140:248|52:298,2,170,2|2|2,3:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
418,31,53547,5,6,0:0:0:0:
344,52,53741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
293,109,53936,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,185,54131,1,2,0:0:0:0:
305,258,54326,1,2,0:0:0:0:
370,297,54521,1,2,0:0:0:0:
445,309,54715,2,0,L|352:318,1,85,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
95,96,55105,6,0,P|57:142|98:238,1,170,6|6,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
417,96,55884,1,2,3:3:0:0:
165,45,56274,2,0,L|144:103,1,48.8750009322167,2|2,3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
212,94,56469,2,4,L|233:152,1,48.8750009322167,4|4,3:3|3:3,3:3:0:0:
128,176,56663,6,0,P|80:216|144:320,1,187.000005706787,6|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
240,280,57248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,336,57443,2,0,L|472:336,2,93.5000028533936,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
224,288,58027,2,0,P|184:240|248:128,1,187.000005706787
344,96,58611,6,0,L|464:96,1,93.5000028533936,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,40,59001,2,0,L|160:40,1,93.5000028533936,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,224,59391,2,0,L|456:328,1,93.5000028533936,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,328,59780,6,0,L|80:336,1,93.5000028533936,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,256,60170,1,2,3:0:0:0:
64,184,60560,2,0,L|72:64,1,93.5000028533936,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,60949,2,0,L|200:0,1,93.5000028533936,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,104,61339,6,0,P|376:152|320:248,1,187.000005706787,2|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
168,232,62118,2,0,P|136:272|208:360,1,187.000005706787,2|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
320,360,62702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,224,62897,6,0,L|48:24,1,187.000005706787,6|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
160,88,63482,2,0,P|256:104|344:64,1,187.000005706787,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,8,64261,2,0,P|80:64|144:168,1,187.000005706787
232,168,64845,1,2,3:0:0:0:
112,248,65040,2,0,L|312:248,1,187.000005706787,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,192,65624,2,0,L|512:192,1,93.5000028533936,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,120,66014,6,0,L|-8:120,2,187.000005706787,6|2|2,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,120,66988,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,200,67183,2,0,L|224:304,1,93.5000028533936,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
447,359,67572,5,2,0:0:0:0:
458,266,67766,1,0,0:0:0:0:
470,173,67961,1,2,3:0:0:0:
205,86,68352,1,2,0:0:0:0:
325,166,68547,2,0,L|301:278,1,93.5000028533936,2|2,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
176,295,68936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
435,36,69131,6,0,P|490:105|428:163,1,187.000005706787,6|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
325,166,69715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,198,69910,2,0,L|59:207,2,93.5000028533936,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
325,166,70495,2,0,B|327:212|327:212|348:252|348:252|352:346,1,187.000005706787
200,40,71079,6,0,L|182:152,1,93.5000028533936,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,40,71469,2,0,L|378:152,1,93.5000028533936,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,164,71858,2,0,L|43:255,1,93.5000028533936,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,234,72248,6,0,P|408:283|480:234,1,187.000005706787,2|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
340,158,72832,2,0,P|283:175|278:287,1,187.000005706787,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
434,357,73417,2,0,P|400:358|341:343,1,93.5000028533936,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,164,73806,6,0,L|59:280,1,93.5000028533936,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,72,74196,2,0,L|328:165,1,93.5000028533936,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,72,74585,2,0,L|183:165,1,93.5000028533936,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,164,74975,2,0,L|452:257,1,93.5000028533936,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,165,75365,6,0,P|105:125|46:190,1,187.000005706787,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,226,75949,1,2,0:0:0:0:
341,63,76144,1,2,3:0:0:0:
400,122,76339,1,0,0:0:0:0:
385,205,76534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,151,76728,6,0,P|76:220|126:299,1,187.000005706787,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,297,77313,2,0,P|320:228|270:149,1,187.000005706787,2|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
127,150,77897,2,0,L|105:60,1,93.5000028533936,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,34,78287,1,2,0:0:0:0:
371,75,78384,1,2,0:0:0:0:
379,116,78482,5,6,0:0:0:0:
96,198,78871,2,0,L|45:301,1,93.5000028533936,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,78,79261,1,2,3:0:0:0:
276,131,79456,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,215,79650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
247,288,79845,1,2,0:0:0:0:
166,317,80040,6,0,L|41:308,2,124.666670471192,2|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
497,60,80819,2,0,L|504:144,1,85,2|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,184,81209,2,0,L|394:291,1,85,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,140,81598,6,0,P|60:117|4:176,1,170,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,228,82183,1,2,0:0:0:0:
294,204,82378,2,0,L|307:310,1,85
154,108,82767,1,0,0:0:0:0:
455,130,82962,1,2,0:0:0:0:
460,168,83060,1,0,0:0:0:0:
461,213,83157,2,0,L|459:321,1,85
158,67,83547,6,0,P|77:97|150:279,1,318.750012159348,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,28,84715,6,0,P|453:77|418:179,1,170,6|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
303,107,85300,2,0,L|297:283,1,170,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,344,85884,2,0,L|435:261,1,85,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,28,86274,6,0,P|59:77|94:179,1,170,6|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
220,205,86858,2,0,P|194:254|68:297,1,170,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,67,87443,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87637,12,0,89196,0:0:0:0:
Benita
Recheck as requested

Cup
  1. 00:09:131 (4,1) - Why is distance lower here when 1 is a really strong beat but has the lowest distance in the whole intro
  2. 00:28:222 (2) - I would make this two single notes to better emphasise the downbeat
  3. 00:54:910 (7,1) - You can put a little distance here like you did 00:14:196 (6,1) -
  4. 00:47:702 (2) - 00:49:260 (2) - I think you can remove the repeat on these, I feel it emphasises the drums better and there is almost no audible beat on 00:49:650 - so i feel it works a lot better this way
  5. 00:57:832 (2) - 01:10:300 (2) - same as before about downbeats, should be a single note or something with a little bit more distance on the downbeat instead of a boring repeat...
Sc4's Salad
  1. 00:09:910 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - I don't think these types of dashes fit in a Salad at least when it's that many in a row, pretty strong direction change between the notes right after a dash so maybe try using c shaped sliders instead so the movement after the dashes follow the direction of the dash. Also the 3 note standstill on 00:12:832 (1,2) - feels kind of boring as a build up so maybe consider moving stuff around a bit
  2. 00:27:832 (3) - 00:30:170 (1,3) - I think a few whistles are missing here
  3. 00:28:611 - I think for this section you're using 2.00-2.05 as dash distance but I think it's a tiny bit too low because it can easily be catched without using dash so maybe increase it to like 2.15-2.20, then it's still lower than kiai dashes
  4. 00:36:404 (1,2,3) - Make the spacing equal here? Doesn't look good nor does it make sense to have bigger distance between 1,2
  5. 01:01:339 (1,2,3,4,1) - a maybe lowe the distance here a bit as most will dash back and forth between all objects which is quite hard, same here 01:13:806 (1,2,3,4,1) -
  6. 01:05:040 (2,3,1) - Not really a fan of this antiflow, especially when the dashes are getting this long, it's almost 0.10x longer than all other dashes
  7. 01:07:767 (2,3) - quite long dash so consider reducing a bit
  8. 01:24:521 (2,1) - 01:25:884 (3,1) - 01:26:858 (2,3) - same as above, all very long dashes compared to the others and the song is easing out so consider reducing these
Collab Platter
  1. 00:06:598 (4,5,1) - I can't really hear any distinct sound on 5 and considering 1 is a pretty strong beat, I'd like to see a hyper here but since 1/4 hypers is unrankable and as I said, the beat on 5 is really low, I'd just delete 5 and have a hyper from 4 to 1.
  2. 00:12:832 (2,1) - 2 would fit really good as a 1/1 slider
  3. 00:16:144 - 00:28:611 - I think all hypers in this section fit way better as dash, remember that platters are supposed to be an introduction to hypers and placing them in almost the calmest section of the map feels weird to me. I can agree to this hyper though 00:28:417 (8,1) - cause it's a new section in the music
  4. 00:50:040 (3,4,1) - Basically the same as first point, I'd delete 4 and make a hyper from 3 to 1 cause it's a pretty strong beat and works good as a build up to the kiai
  5. 00:51:598 (4,1) - same here, would be really cool with a hyper building up to the kiai
  6. 00:56:274 (3,4,1) - Here again is where the 1/4 rule is stupid... maybe try deleting 4 and adding one repeat to 3 and from there have a hyper from 3 to 1 to emphasise the kiai start
  7. 00:56:663 (1,2,3,4,1) - all these notes can be watched without even touching dash so maybe try moving 4 to x168
  8. 01:07:183 (3,1,2,3) - idk if this is supposed to be a hyper but it's very long if it's supposed to be a dash, also would be nice with some movement on 1,2,3
  9. 01:18:287 (4,5,1) - ah same as before, delete 5 and at least make a dash to 1, it's very strong beat
  10. 01:22:767 (4,5,6,7) - I'd remove hyper between 4 and 5 as 5 isn't a strong beat at all and I can't actually hear any sound on 6 so please remove.. then you can also have a dash to 7 for vocals
Lie
  1. 00:03:482 (6,1) - 00:05:040 (6,1) - Would be nice with either a longer dash or maybe even a hyper between these notes and then remove the hyper on 00:05:624 (2,3) - as it's not really fitting as the first hyper in the map
  2. 00:12:832 (4) - I think this would sound really good as a 1/1 slider and a single note afterwards to hold the melody before the drum builds up, doing so also removes a very awkward hyper between 00:12:832 (4,1) -
  3. 00:19:066 (6,1) - Considering the strong vocals, this should at least be a dash.
  4. 00:25:884 (2,3) - I think this also could look really good with a hyper
  5. 00:30:949 (3,4,1) - This is really really weird, the stronger beats are on slider ends and the hyper going to a weak beat flows really weird considering you've held a consistent hyper to downbeats previously. So basically, remove hyper between 3 and 4, remove one repeat on 4 and add a hyper to 00:31:728 - for consistency. And same goes here 00:34:261 (6,7) -
  6. 00:40:300 (3) - try ctrl+g on this and move 4 a bit to the right, i feel the beat on 3 is pretty strong and leaving it without a dash even seems pretty dull
  7. 00:45:365 (3,1) - why is this a hyper when 00:42:248 (3,1) - 00:43:806 (4,1) - isn't even dashes?
  8. 00:47:897 (2,3,4) - eh the beat is pretty strong on the slider end of 3, try adding one repeat to 2 and make 3 a single note or whatever with a hyper from 2, strong notes don't belong on slider ends ):
  9. 00:48:774 (5,1) - also, hyper here for consistency
  10. 00:51:793 (6,1) - Very strong beat, even has a finisher so maybe try a hyper here as well?
  11. 01:09:715 (2,3) - beat on 3 isn't strong enough for a 1/4 hyper imo, especially when the exact same sounds previously didn't even have a dash 00:57:248 (2,3,4) -
  12. 01:21:404 (5,1) - Hyper for finisher?
Hope you find this helpful! I would still like a few more mods before doing anything with this set though, but good luck!
Sc4v4ng3r

Benny- wrote:

Sc4's Salad
  1. 00:09:910 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - I don't think these types of dashes fit in a Salad at least when it's that many in a row, pretty strong direction change between the notes right after a dash so maybe try using c shaped sliders instead so the movement after the dashes follow the direction of the dash. Also the 3 note standstill on 00:12:832 (1,2) - feels kind of boring as a build up so maybe consider moving stuff around a bit Removed some of the excessive dashes and re-did some slider shapes. Blame my old mapping style :c Also re-did the standstill into something better
  2. 00:27:832 (3) - 00:30:170 (1,3) - I think a few whistles are missing here Whoops added them
  3. 00:28:611 - I think for this section you're using 2.00-2.05 as dash distance but I think it's a tiny bit too low because it can easily be catched without using dash so maybe increase it to like 2.15-2.20, then it's still lower than kiai dashes Well yea, some of them are way too close to each other, but mostly it's fine - a salad player would be convinced the distance is a dash because of how far it looks relative to the other notes. Increased those distances that required them.
  4. 00:36:404 (1,2,3) - Make the spacing equal here? Doesn't look good nor does it make sense to have bigger distance between 1,2 #blameoldmappingstyle
  5. 01:01:339 (1,2,3,4,1) - a maybe lowe the distance here a bit as most will dash back and forth between all objects which is quite hard, same here 01:13:806 (1,2,3,4,1) - Yea sure
  6. 01:05:040 (2,3,1) - Not really a fan of this antiflow, especially when the dashes are getting this long, it's almost 0.10x longer than all other dashes To be honest, now that I think about it, I feel that the distance is more clearer than the other dashes. I now care more about how clear the dash is rather than the linearity of the dash(I thought the opposite in my past mapping style) so I don't really think the distance requires any fixing. However I did re-do the pattern a lil bit so that there's lesser anti-flow, this should make the dash a little bit more natural to follow.
  7. 01:07:767 (2,3) - quite long dash so consider reducing a bit Tbh I'm not sure if I really fixed this or not because I moved this note while I was re-patterning from the above, but I think it is xD
  8. 01:24:521 (2,1) - 01:25:884 (3,1) - 01:26:858 (2,3) - same as above, all very long dashes compared to the others and the song is easing out so consider reducing these Instead of 'easing out', I think because the song is ending, I want to give a last 'bang' of some sort. And the musical section here isn't really weak relative to the other parts of the song(well, other than the chorus), so I believe it is well justified to give stronger dashes to these. Besides, as I also explained above, I feel that the current distances are more clear for the players to know that they are dashes xD
Also did some refining on the difficulty on my own, dashes that looked a little bit too close were increased in distance, and distance increments were reduced slightly to avoid any misconceptions.
Thanks for the mod!

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Topic Starter
tasuke912

Benny- wrote:

Recheck as requested

Cup
  1. 00:09:131 (4,1) - Why is distance lower here when 1 is a really strong beat but has the lowest distance in the whole intro fixed.
  2. 00:28:222 (2) - I would make this two single notes to better emphasise the downbeat
  3. 00:54:910 (7,1) - You can put a little distance here like you did 00:14:196 (6,1) - fixed.
  4. 00:47:702 (2) - 00:49:260 (2) - I think you can remove the repeat on these, I feel it emphasises the drums better and there is almost no audible beat on 00:49:650 - so i feel it works a lot better this way
  5. 00:57:832 (2) - 01:10:300 (2) - same as before about downbeats, should be a single note or something with a little bit more distance on the downbeat instead of a boring repeat...
    No change in 1/2 repeated sliders. In my opinion, it is not necessary to make big distance for downbeats or strong sound if normal distance has good visual, or makes good flow. Also, in this case, repeat notes are easier to follow and good for beginners.
Collab Platter
  1. 00:06:598 (4,5,1) - I can't really hear any distinct sound on 5 and considering 1 is a pretty strong beat, I'd like to see a hyper here but since 1/4 hypers is unrankable and as I said, the beat on 5 is really low, I'd just delete 5 and have a hyper from 4 to 1. There is actually 1/4 sound though, changed to 1/2 notes in order to emphasize the sound.
  2. 00:12:832 (2,1) - 2 would fit really good as a 1/1 slider i like 1/2 here but 1/1 is good as well. hmm, changed
  3. 00:16:144 - 00:28:611 - I think all hypers in this section fit way better as dash, remember that platters are supposed to be an introduction to hypers and placing them in almost the calmest section of the map feels weird to me. I can agree to this hyper though 00:28:417 (8,1) - cause it's a new section in the music This part isn't calm, and usage of hd is still okay for platter in my opinion. Some ranked maps of platter has more HDash. Removed only two HDs 00:27:053 (1,5) -
  4. 00:50:040 (3,4,1) - Basically the same as first point, I'd delete 4 and make a hyper from 3 to 1 cause it's a pretty strong beat and works good as a build up to the kiai 1/4 drum sound is strong enough to be followed.
  5. 00:51:598 (4,1) - same here, would be really cool with a hyper building up to the kiai since 2 has HD, 1 doesn't need HD. also i prefer emphasizing the vocal
  6. 00:56:274 (3,4,1) - Here again is where the 1/4 rule is stupid... maybe try deleting 4 and adding one repeat to 3 and from there have a hyper from 3 to 1 to emphasise the kiai start fxed
  7. 00:56:663 (1,2,3,4,1) - all these notes can be watched without even touching dash so maybe try moving 4 to x168
  8. 01:22:767 (4,5,6,7) - I'd remove hyper between 4 and 5 as 5 isn't a strong beat at all and I can't actually hear any sound on 6 so please remove.. then you can also have a dash to 7 for vocals changed the pattern
Lie
  1. 00:03:482 (6,1) - 00:05:040 (6,1) - Would be nice with either a longer dash or maybe even a hyper between these notes and then remove the hyper on 00:05:624 (2,3) - as it's not really fitting as the first hyper in the map Almost the same reason as Cup. I prefer no dash because it makes better flow and visual. it's my mapping style
  2. 00:12:832 (4) - I think this would sound really good as a 1/1 slider and a single note afterwards to hold the melody before the drum builds up, doing so also removes a very awkward hyper between 00:12:832 (4,1) - Fixed like platter
  3. 00:19:066 (6,1) - Considering the strong vocals, this should at least be a dash. no change ^
  4. 00:25:884 (2,3) - I think this also could look really good with a hyper Normal Dash works good enough imo
  5. 00:30:949 (3,4,1) - This is really really weird, the stronger beats are on slider ends and the hyper going to a weak beat flows really weird considering you've held a consistent hyper to downbeats previously. So basically, remove hyper between 3 and 4, remove one repeat on 4 and add a hyper to 00:31:728 - for consistency. And same goes here 00:34:261 (6,7) - making hd on notes before strong sounds is more popular, but making hd on strong sound is also good way to emphasize sound in my opinion. not weird to me
  6. 00:40:300 (3) - try ctrl+g on this and move 4 a bit to the right, i feel the beat on 3 is pretty strong and leaving it without a dash even seems pretty dull now it has a dash
  7. 00:45:365 (3,1) - why is this a hyper when 00:42:248 (3,1) - 00:43:806 (4,1) - isn't even dashes? kicked
  8. 00:47:897 (2,3,4) - eh the beat is pretty strong on the slider end of 3, try adding one repeat to 2 and make 3 a single note or whatever with a hyper from 2, strong notes don't belong on slider ends ): changed patterns there
  9. 00:48:774 (5,1) - also, hyper here for consistency there is it now.
  10. 00:51:793 (6,1) - Very strong beat, even has a finisher so maybe try a hyper here as well? I rather emphasize the vocals.
  11. 01:09:715 (2,3) - beat on 3 isn't strong enough for a 1/4 hyper imo, especially when the exact same sounds previously didn't even have a dash 00:57:248 (2,3,4) -
    it is strong enough. Also making different patterns from similar parts/position is common way of emphasizing music, or avoiding being boring.
  12. 01:21:404 (5,1) - Hyper for finisher? no change.
Hope you find this helpful! I would still like a few more mods before doing anything with this set though, but good luck!
Thanks for the mod, I will continue later again!

Edit: updated
KamizonoShinobu
I am concerned about the artist... isn't the CV be Toyama Nao? (From Nardo's ranked mapset https://osu.ppy.sh/s/559266)
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