Easy

00:00:670 (1,2) - Since this diff is easy, it'll be too hard for beginners to play with 1/2 distance note. I would change this slider more simple and adding at least 1 or more distance between notes. (And you can do the same on 00:04:386 (2,3))

00:03:925 (1) - How about replace the slider to a circle instead?
00:06:728 - Why is there an inherted section here?
00:07:181 (5) - This slider is not perfectly snapped
00:08:805 (2) - It may be easier to play if you replace this slider to a circle on the next white tick
00:09:503 (3,4) - And I would change this part as shown by the picture below


00:11:600 (1) - I think this circle should be removed
00:12:530 (2) - Replace this to a circle on the white tick
00:14:623 (1) - This slider is good at emphasizing the vocal part here, but putting the slider tail on the red tick is quite tricky for beginners. Put the slider tail on the white tick can help, since in easy diff you have to put at least 1 beat distance between other note.
00:16:251 (3) - Remember about the distance between two note? It'll be better if you replace this slider to a circle on the white tick.
00:17:410 (1) - To make this part simple, remove this circle, and try to put the slider tail at 00:16:945 (4) on the white tick, and make 00:17:879 (5) starts at white, and remove one reverse.
00:19:042 (6) - Remove circle :^)
00:19:270 (1) - NC here
00:19:270 (1,2,3) - Make this part similar to 00:00:670 (1,2)
00:22:991 (2,3) - Do the same pattern as 00:08:107 (1,2)
00:24:619 (5) - Remove slider
00:24:856 (1) - This slider head can be moved to 00:24:856, and put its tail to 00:25:321
00:25:549 (2) - Remove the slider, and replace it with a circle on 00:25:786
(You can do the same pattern starting from 00:26:483 to 00:33:228)
00:33:921 (5) - Remove this slider, and put the spinner head 00:34:386 (1) on 00:34:158
00:46:014 (4) - Remove the circle
00:46:247 (4) - slider tail is not perfectly snapped
00:46:945 (5) - Remove the circle
00:46:945 (5) - ^
00:47:875 (2) - ^
00:48:805 (3,4) - ^
00:49:735 (2) - ^
00:50:669 (3) - ^
00:51:600 (2) - ^
00:52:526 (3,4) - ^
00:53:456 (2) - I would replace this slider to a circle.
00:54:158 (3) - Remove this slider, and try to replace 00:53:693 (2) to a slider
00:56:018 (3) - Imo, this slider is better if you place it with a circle.
01:02:759 (2) - Remove circle
01:10:204 (2) - ^
01:12:991 (3) - Remove one reverse, and move its head to the white tick
01:17:642 (1) - Remove circle, replace 01:18:111 (2) - to a circle and move it to 01:18:344
01:25:549 (2) - Remove reverse
01:26:247 (1,2) - I think this slider tail must be snapped on blue, since the vocal ends on it.
For a good emphasizing, I would remove 01:27:642 (3) and make 01:26:945 (2) reversed slider.