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Chino (CV. Inori Minase) - Mirai Puzzle

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Noffy
Mirai Puzzle

Put the artist fields as->
チノ(CV.水瀬いのり)
Chino (CV. Inori Minase)
the unicode uses the special japanese parentheses, while they look similar they're different, i swear.
the romanised needs a space after the CV. for clean reading.


[Easy]
cute diff!

[Akitoshi's Normal]
cute diff!

[Intermediate]
Advanced is a more common diffname for these kinds of difficulties, consider using that instead.
00:48:603 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I really like how this was handled on this difficulty!
00:59:103 (1,2,3) - spacing could be a bit deceptive here since 3 is the the same distance away from 1 as typical 1/2 spacing.

[Hard]
cute diff!

[Light Insane]
cute diff!

01:32:853 (3,4,5) - (also applies to barista) the drums are kind of weak at this point compared to the other instruments, leading this to feel a bit unfitting to the song when most instruments instruments have dropped out at the end here, consider removing the note on the bluetick and repositioning appropriately. Or not. Your choice!

[Left's Insane]
00:01:353 (3,1,2) - turn stacking view on and you'll see the problem here
00:37:353 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ...these claps are really random and sound kinda.. awful.. fix these to be like other diffs maybe?
otherwise, cute diff!

[Barista]
Cute diff!
except
00:09:790 (2,3,4) - 00:11:290 (2,3,4) - , 01:15:790 (2,3,4) - 01:17:290 (2,3,4) -
See these timestamps. Normally I can understand mapping subtle drum doubles as triples to be easier to play, but here the sounds on the red ticks are practically non existent compared to the doubles in the song like 00:09:884 (3,4) - . this results in the triples feeling awkward and unnatural to play, because they're ignoring what the song is presenting extremely clearly. It's a 5 star top difficulty, I think someone of this level should be able to handle a simple rhythm like this when it's that obvious in the song (as long as they use their ears)
00:51:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part in particular 00:51:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - is so overdone, that when 00:54:603 (1) - comes in with the tense, high pitched vocals, it lacks contrast and emphasis. and overall, this patterning just feels unnaturally large compared to the rest of the map. I understand what you're mapping to, since the song does get tense, but it could be executed better.

01:03:603 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This increase in spacing I feel does fit the song well! gj!

01:06:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Since the song and hitsounding has emphasis on the odd numbered notes, I found it a bit weird the spacing was constantly increasing even in the odd->even note transitions. I suggest keeping the spacing increases just for the odd numbered notes. An easy way to do this could be something like stacking all the even numbered circles.

01:08:103 (1,2,3,4,5) - Since this part of the song is so relatively calm compared to what came just before, maintaining the high spacing feels a bit lackluster. Would suggest lowering it some.
Topic Starter
LeQuack

Noffy wrote:

Mirai Puzzle

Put the artist fields as->
チノ(CV.水瀬いのり)
Chino (CV. Inori Minase)
the unicode uses the special japanese parentheses, while they look similar they're different, i swear.
the romanised needs a space after the CV. for clean reading.


[Easy]
cute diff!

[Intermediate]
Advanced is a more common diffname for these kinds of difficulties, consider using that instead.
00:48:603 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I really like how this was handled on this difficulty!
00:59:103 (1,2,3) - spacing could be a bit deceptive here since 3 is the the same distance away from 1 as typical 1/2 spacing.

[Hard]
cute diff!

[Light Insane]
cute diff!

01:32:853 (3,4,5) - (also applies to barista) the drums are kind of weak at this point compared to the other instruments, leading this to feel a bit unfitting to the song when most instruments instruments have dropped out at the end here, consider removing the note on the bluetick and repositioning appropriately. Or not. Your choice!

[Barista]
Cute diff!
except
00:09:790 (2,3,4) - 00:11:290 (2,3,4) - , 01:15:790 (2,3,4) - 01:17:290 (2,3,4) -
See these timestamps. Normally I can understand mapping subtle drum doubles as triples to be easier to play, but here the sounds on the red ticks are practically non existent compared to the doubles in the song like 00:09:884 (3,4) - . this results in the triples feeling awkward and unnatural to play, because they're ignoring what the song is presenting extremely clearly. It's a 5 star top difficulty, I think someone of this level should be able to handle a simple rhythm like this when it's that obvious in the song (as long as they use their ears)
00:51:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part in particular 00:51:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - is so overdone, that when 00:54:603 (1) - comes in with the tense, high pitched vocals, it lacks contrast and emphasis. and overall, this patterning just feels unnaturally large compared to the rest of the map. I understand what you're mapping to, since the song does get tense, but it could be executed better. Made a change but kept the high spacing on the last combo because of the intensity of the song at that part

01:03:603 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This increase in spacing I feel does fit the song well! gj!

01:06:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Since the song and hitsounding has emphasis on the odd numbered notes, I found it a bit weird the spacing was constantly increasing even in the odd->even note transitions. I suggest keeping the spacing increases just for the odd numbered notes. An easy way to do this could be something like stacking all the even numbered circles. Mostly changed to how you said but made a spacing a bit varied on the even side because i feel just in general the song is building up

01:08:103 (1,2,3,4,5) - Since this part of the song is so relatively calm compared to what came just before, maintaining the high spacing feels a bit lackluster. Would suggest lowering it some.
Thanks for the mod and kind words :D No Reply=Fixed
Noffy
🐇Cute mapset! 🐇

wishing it the best!
Noffy
I'm an idiot and can't read call me back when Left replies I'm gonna go hide in a hole for a few years

sally sob story
sees that the mod has been replied to
checks the reply
rechecks the map (very carefully!)
...
forgot that i had anything to say for left's diff
...
..
then remembered that i did
end me
then call me back
im sosorry
Topic Starter
LeQuack

Noffy wrote:

I'm an idiot and can't read call me back when Left replies I'm gonna go hide in a hole for a few years
N-N-Noffy senpai you're moving too fast >_<. L-L-L-Left sama hasn't even responded to their mods yet (but in all seriousness thanks for the bubble)
- Frontier -

Noffy wrote:

Mirai Puzzle

Put the artist fields as->
チノ(CV.水瀬いのり)
Chino (CV. Inori Minase)
the unicode uses the special japanese parentheses, while they look similar they're different, i swear.
the romanised needs a space after the CV. for clean reading.
Shouldn't it Minase Inori?
Noffy

- Frontier - wrote:

Noffy wrote:

Mirai Puzzle

Put the artist fields as->
チノ(CV.水瀬いのり)
Chino (CV. Inori Minase)
the unicode uses the special japanese parentheses, while they look similar they're different, i swear.
the romanised needs a space after the CV. for clean reading.
Shouldn't it Minase Inori?
It may be an option if I missed something, but on her website every instance of her name romanised is Inori Minase https://inoriminase.com/
- Frontier -

Noffy wrote:

It may be an option if I missed something, but on her website every instance of her name romanised is Inori Minase https://inoriminase.com/
B-But... The Japanese title is Minase Ironi.. ;-;
Left
thx~ all fixed!

omg who put clap
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Noffy
🐇 Ok for real this time 🐇


- Frontier - wrote:

Noffy wrote:

It may be an option if I missed something, but on her website every instance of her name romanised is Inori Minase https://inoriminase.com/
B-But... The Japanese title is Minase Ironi.. ;-;

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). For artists which have a preferred romanisation, use this one. If you're unsure of your artist's name, then check previously ranked maps, Google, Wikipedia, or ask a BN for help.
This case falls under the preferred artist ordering.
- Frontier -

Noffy wrote:

🐇 Ok for real this time 🐇

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). For artists which have a preferred romanisation, use this one. If you're unsure of your artist's name, then check previously ranked maps, Google, Wikipedia, or ask a BN for help.
This case falls under the preferred artist ordering.
Oh, thank you for your clarification :D
R _ E _ K _ T
just a very short one

Barista

01:09:040 (6,7,8) - feels a bit weird to play for me, i'd rather have those like this:


01:15:603 (1,2,3) -
01:17:103 (1,2,3) - distance is different in those and that feels weird to me, especially because in those two the song sounds the same (maybe just use the distance of the second one (would look like this, for example: ))

Left's Insane

01:08:853 (1,2,3,4) - stacking this with a triple doesn't play well (it's also a bit confusing), rather use a triangle

Advanced

00:36:040 (5) - rather apply this to the new combo so we have 00:36:040 (1,2,3) as a combo.

Good luck with the set! Can't wait to see this ranked!
Topic Starter
LeQuack

R _ E _ K _ T wrote:

just a very short one

Barista

01:09:040 (6,7,8) - feels a bit weird to play for me, i'd rather have those like this:

MOvement flows better with the triple moving towards the next note and considering the song is pretty low intensity compared to the previous part I want to have flowing movement as opposed to sa sharp turn in direction which would occur wiht your proposed change

01:15:603 (1,2,3) -
01:17:103 (1,2,3) - distance is different in those and that feels weird to me, especially because in those two the song sounds the same (maybe just use the distance of the second one (would look like this, for example: ))
Vocal intensity is different in both parts and this is represented by the change in spacing

Advanced

00:36:040 (5) - rather apply this to the new combo so we have 00:36:040 (1,2,3) as a combo. NC on the downbeat is better because that is where the music changes

Good luck with the set! Can't wait to see this ranked!
Thanks for the mod but no changes Why people modding my bubbled map smh my head
Topic Starter
LeQuack
Left is RIP so i guess i'll respond

R _ E _ K _ T wrote:

just a very short one

Left's Insane

01:08:853 (1,2,3,4) - stacking this with a triple doesn't play well (it's also a bit confusing), rather use a triangle He's done this because the 1 2 jump patterns have finished and to show this in play he has stopped player movement in this section


Good luck with the set! Can't wait to see this ranked!
timemon
General

Light Insane
  1. 00:02:103 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - With how you hitsound this stream, you place emphasis on the drum (red tick) but the clickable objects emphasize the other instrumental sound (white tick). I suggest that you pick one to emphasize on as both will make the rhythm sound weird. You can either change how you hitsound this particular stream or change the pattern to match the hitsounds by making clickable objects on red ticks instead.
    Also I think you can afford to make 00:03:228 (7) - a little bit harder like 2 kick sliders like the top diff as it is more intense than other sliders.
  2. 00:48:603 (1,2,3,4) - It is weird that in the pattern 00:50:103 (3) - has different visual spacing than the others. I believe that a pattern should look visually consistent in their own pattern. I would move (3) further away to match the visual distance of other objects in the combo.
  3. 01:31:728 (2) - such a wide angle and tbh you can just copy and ctrl+H the 01:31:728 (2) - slider. Considering your maps dont use 45 angle a lot its better to stick to something like I suggested.
  4. 00:42:603 (1,2,3,4) - at this exact part I feel the drum is very prominent as it is very loud and kind of takes over the vocal. I would suggest temporarily switching to map the drum then resume to vocal like you do at 00:44:103 - .
  5. 00:38:853 (7) - this one sounds like a 1/4 reverse slider to me rather than 1/2 reverse.
Hard
  1. 00:25:353 (3,1) - center the (3) like you do on 00:28:353 (4,1) - it looks neater.
  2. 01:05:103 (5,6,7) - weird NC measure as you usually only do it every downbeat (this one is two). Also the way it's mapped and NC'd make it seem like 01:05:103 (5,6,7) - is part of the 01:03:603 (1,2,3,4) - pattern of sound. When the vocal gains intensity at 01:05:103 - . I would suggest you to NC it and if possible make the pattern different from 01:03:603 (1,2,3,4) - .
  3. 01:32:853 (2) - why not make this slider 1/4 + reverse? it has a triple sound.
Left's Insane
  1. 00:38:665 (5,1,2,3) - the spacing seems unusually harsh considering the angle and general spacing of the difficulty. I would nerf the spacing a bit.
  2. 01:08:853 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is also abnormally hard to read when the map itself does not play around with reading at all in the concept. It just kind of shows up and like one off thing. I just feel that this stack pattern doesn't work in a map where it is very easy to read. I would just separate the stacks out.
Barista
  1. the normal-hitclap.wav is extremely loud (louder than other custom hitsounds by a lot) It becomes very apparent at 01:18:978 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:36:790 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this could be a global issue if you happen to use this hitsounds to other diffs as well
  2. 01:06:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I feel like the pattern could use some polish, why visual spacing of 01:06:790 (2,4,6,8) - "scales" but 01:06:603 (1,3,5,7) - is "constant" I think picking one way to do it will make the pattern visually consistent and more neat.
  3. 00:49:353 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - you can afford to silence the sliderends I think. they dont stop at audible sounds just add green lines with 5% vol.
Advanced
  1. I think you should make 01:33:228 - clickable because with reverse arrow it implies that all ticks are similar in strength but the final tick is obviously stronger.
Yea all done
Topic Starter
LeQuack

timemon wrote:

General

Light Insane
  1. 00:02:103 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - With how you hitsound this stream, you place emphasis on the drum (red tick) but the clickable objects emphasize the other instrumental sound (white tick). I suggest that you pick one to emphasize on as both will make the rhythm sound weird. You can either change how you hitsound this particular stream or change the pattern to match the hitsounds by making clickable objects on red ticks instead.
    Also I think you can afford to make 00:03:228 (7) - a little bit harder like 2 kick sliders like the top diff as it is more intense than other sliders.
  2. 00:48:603 (1,2,3,4) - It is weird that in the pattern 00:50:103 (3) - has different visual spacing than the others. I believe that a pattern should look visually consistent in their own pattern. I would move (3) further away to match the visual distance of other objects in the combo.
  3. 01:31:728 (2) - such a wide angle and tbh you can just copy and ctrl+H the 01:31:728 (2) - slider. Considering your maps dont use 45 angle a lot its better to stick to something like I suggested.
  4. 00:42:603 (1,2,3,4) - at this exact part I feel the drum is very prominent as it is very loud and kind of takes over the vocal. I would suggest temporarily switching to map the drum then resume to vocal like you do at 00:44:103 - .This whole diff is prioritizing vocals (aside from the bit before the chorus which is 1 2 drums and the vocals aren't dense enough to be mapped for this difficulty) plus mapping the drums would take emphasis away from the vocals at 00:43:165 - and 00:43:915 - mapping the drums would also mean spacing is much lower so emphasis of 00:43:353 (3) - is also lost
  5. 00:38:853 (7) - this one sounds like a 1/4 reverse slider to me rather than 1/2 reverse.No sound on 00:39:134 - so i think the 1/2 works better, plus i was thinking about the vocals in the pattern rather than the drums (even tho there is substantial overlap between the two
Hard
  1. 00:25:353 (3,1) - center the (3) like you do on 00:28:353 (4,1) - it looks neater.
  2. 01:05:103 (5,6,7) - weird NC measure as you usually only do it every downbeat (this one is two). Also the way it's mapped and NC'd make it seem like 01:05:103 (5,6,7) - is part of the 01:03:603 (1,2,3,4) - pattern of sound. When the vocal gains intensity at 01:05:103 - . I would suggest you to NC it and if possible make the pattern different from 01:03:603 (1,2,3,4) - .
  3. 01:32:853 (2) - why not make this slider 1/4 + reverse? it has a triple sound. More focusing on the brass instruments here and unlike before where i added the repeats for the drums this section has more defined brass notes which take priority
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LeQuack
Ok part 2

timemon wrote:

General

Left's Insane
  1. 00:38:665 (5,1,2,3) - the spacing seems unusually harsh considering the angle and general spacing of the difficulty. I would nerf the spacing a bit.
  2. 01:08:853 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is also abnormally hard to read when the map itself does not play around with reading at all in the concept. It just kind of shows up and like one off thing. I just feel that this stack pattern doesn't work in a map where it is very easy to read. I would just separate the stacks out.
Barista
  1. the normal-hitclap.wav is extremely loud (louder than other custom hitsounds by a lot) It becomes very apparent at 01:18:978 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:36:790 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this could be a global issue if you happen to use this hitsounds to other diffs as well
  2. 01:06:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I feel like the pattern could use some polish, why visual spacing of 01:06:790 (2,4,6,8) - "scales" but 01:06:603 (1,3,5,7) - is "constant" I think picking one way to do it will make the pattern visually consistent and more neat.Had it as you said but Noffy brought up that there's more emphasis on the white ticks so the pattern right now has the increase in spacing happening on the white ticks
  3. 00:49:353 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - you can afford to silence the sliderends I think. they dont stop at audible sounds just add green lines with 5% vol.
Advanced
  1. I think you should make 01:33:228 - clickable because with reverse arrow it implies that all ticks are similar in strength but the final tick is obviously stronger.
Yea all done
Ok that's all my stuff now just need to get Left to respond As before no response = Fixed
Left
Ill fix it tomorrow xd
Left

timemon wrote:

General

Left's Insane
  1. 00:38:665 (5,1,2,3) - the spacing seems unusually harsh considering the angle and general spacing of the difficulty. I would nerf the spacing a bit.oki
  2. 01:08:853 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is also abnormally hard to read when the map itself does not play around with reading at all in the concept. It just kind of shows up and like one off thing. I just feel that this stack pattern doesn't work in a map where it is very easy to read. I would just separate the stacks out.actually here's a key sound of this song, the only kiai and the middle of that. so i wanna gave some emphasis on this pattern :)

Yea all done
thx for mod~

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01:03:228 - missing hs

the clap .wav on top diff is still very loud, maybe find a new .wav or reduce the volume on the file not the green lines because the map sounds very good with other skins (or just not with the loud claps)
Topic Starter
LeQuack
Alright I've replaced the .wav and fixed the hitsounding issues
timemon
Do you need to change anything else?
Topic Starter
LeQuack
Made some minor Updates to Hard and Light Insane hitsounds but now it's ready to go
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Noffy
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Akitoshi
👀 gratz
Destirox
i want to FUCK chino
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LeQuack

Destirox wrote:

i want to FUCK chino

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