• Raise every section volume by 10%, it's more balanced (yeah, it will take you a while but it's worth it). Then replace your custom clap with this one, it has a slightly higher volume: http://www.mediafire.com/?jd90bsn9rwdspqf
  Then, as Raging Bull pointed out, the video resolution is quite bad (i didn't notice before), so here's a 360p version with a really good quality: http://www.mediafire.com/?b12u1h47zjukiuh
  Remember to do a Full submission after replacing those files.

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   01:00:067 (6) - move one square to the left

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   01:06:426 (7,8,1) - you didn't move these up a bit. If you want to keep them that way at least tell me why D:
   02:01:208 (7,8,1) - ^ (same thing, but move down)
   03:13:763 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - you should consider making these a vertical stack:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   02:34:469 (6) - misleading as hell. When following the pattern you made with 02:33:002 (2,3,4,5) the player is very likely to consider (6) as 1/2 after (5). Please move it.

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Ok, final things and this should be ready to go.

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)

• Raise every section volume by 10%, it's more balanced (yeah, it will take you a while but it's worth it). Then replace your custom clap with this one, it has a slightly higher volume: http://www.mediafire.com/?jd90bsn9rwdspqf
  Then, as Raging Bull pointed out, the video resolution is quite bad (i didn't notice before), so here's a 360p version with a really good quality: http://www.mediafire.com/?b12u1h47zjukiuh
  Remember to do a Full submission after replacing those files.

- Route:

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   01:00:067 (6) - move one square to the left

- One-Way Route:

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   01:06:426 (7,8,1) - you didn't move these up a bit. If you want to keep them that way at least tell me why D:
   02:01:208 (7,8,1) - ^ (same thing, but move down)
   03:13:763 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - you should consider making these a vertical stack:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   02:34:469 (6) - misleading as hell. When following the pattern you made with 02:33:002 (2,3,4,5) the player is very likely to consider (6) as 1/2 after (5). Please move it.

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

(ノ° - °)ノ 彡

• 
  Artist: Miku Hatsune

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Oh, Miku is not capitalized D: (silly me for not noticing, sorry)

Please fix it and do a full resubmission (be careful and follow these steps: viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443&start=0).

If you have troubles (like a making duplicate by mistake), feel free to ask me for help.

After you do this i'll rebubble.
EDIT: no wait what am i saying, it IS capitalized, only the thread title is not
/me double stupid.

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2006年1月18日 at 17:13:43

Aleks719 wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2006年1月18日 at 17:13:43

YOU ARE WIZARD, STAR

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2006年1月18日 at 17:13:43

Zerostarry wrote:

00:43:111 (1) - Remove the new combo, it is not musically correct

It's really all that bugs me, mapping wise

chamelepeace710 wrote:

ack.... Late mods...

You know, screw it... Good luck.

One quick look and it's good already.

And for some reason, just because it's bubbled or something else, I can't star it.

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2006年1月18日 at 17:13:43

WTF?

Zerostarry wrote:

Oh wow, I didn't realize i forgot the diff

It's [One-way Route] i'll rank as soon as it's fixed