Lifetheory - Sakura

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Topic Starter
campa97
Ho capito, grazie mille del consiglio, per la prossima volta cercherò di applicare ciò che mi hai detto :)
E grazie infinite del kudosu *.*
-Bumblebee-
+3 ;)
MisakiAN
Hy,just some quick mod

[Insane]
*Please Check Aimod,

00:39:811 (2,3) - Stack this note with 00:39:126 (1) -
01:29:011 (4,1) - make it more closer,there's no strong beat in there
01:51:640 (6,7,1) - dont stack with 01:51:297 (4) - , its hard to read it
01:52:840 (4) - stack with 01:52:154 (2) -
01:55:411 (6) - move it more far from 01:55:240 (5) -
01:57:468 (1,2,3,4) - its not good to stack it too much like that
02:19:240 (1,2) - blanked
02:19:925 (3) - move a bit far from 02:20:097 (4) -
02:44:268 (2) - stack with 02:43:583 (7) -
03:00:040 (4,5) - it can ruin the flow,why just dont make it like this? 03:02:097 (3,4,5) -
03:06:211 (2) - stack with 03:05:525 (6) -
00:11:611 (6,1) - put another note in red tick

okay thats all,and sorry for bad english X"D
Good Luck~~~
Topic Starter
campa97

misakiakill wrote:

Hy,just some quick mod

[Insane]
*Please Check Aimod, Ups, didn't see... Thanks ^^

00:39:811 (2,3) - Stack this note with 00:39:126 (1) - Thanks, didn't see this too
01:29:011 (4,1) - make it more closer,there's no strong beat in there Fixed
01:51:640 (6,7,1) - dont stack with 01:51:297 (4) - , its hard to read it I think is not too difficult
01:52:840 (4) - stack with 01:52:154 (2) - Fixed
01:55:411 (6) - move it more far from 01:55:240 (5) - Fixed
01:57:468 (1,2,3,4) - its not good to stack it too much like that Mmmm... they have the same sound
02:19:240 (1,2) - blanked Fixed
02:19:925 (3) - move a bit far from 02:20:097 (4) - Fixed
02:44:268 (2) - stack with 02:43:583 (7) - Fixed
03:00:040 (4,5) - it can ruin the flow,why just dont make it like this? 03:02:097 (3,4,5) - uhmmm idk
03:06:211 (2) - stack with 03:05:525 (6) - idk
00:11:611 (6,1) - put another note in red tick There isn't sound here

okay thats all,and sorry for bad english X"D
Good Luck~~~
Thank you so much for your mod ^^
Topic Starter
campa97

-Bumblebee- wrote:

+3 ;)
Grazie mille ;):)
-Bumblebee-
2016-12-14 00:00 -Bumblebee-: o blanketti 00:45:983 (3,4) - questo, o 00:46:668 (4,5) - questo
2016-12-14 00:00 -Bumblebee-: che ne so ahaha
2016-12-14 00:00 -Bumblebee-: se no puoi anche lasciarli così
2016-12-14 00:00 campa97: nono ho fixato
2016-12-14 00:00 -Bumblebee-: dato che comunque fai un pattern a prisma
2016-12-14 00:00 campa97: più bello così
2016-12-14 00:01 -Bumblebee-: 00:50:097 (1,2,3) - triangolo
2016-12-14 00:01 campa97: è un triangolo ora
2016-12-14 00:01 -Bumblebee-: 00:52:840 (4,5,6) - questo te lo posso anche concedere dai
2016-12-14 00:01 -Bumblebee-: 00:56:954 (3,4,5) - questo no
2016-12-14 00:01 -Bumblebee-: ahahaha
2016-12-14 00:02 -Bumblebee-: 01:01:754 (2,3,4) - perchè il DS è diverso? o.O
2016-12-14 00:02 -Bumblebee-: controlla l'AiMod hehe
2016-12-14 00:04 campa97: cazz
2016-12-14 00:05 campa97: ahahaha
2016-12-14 00:05 -Bumblebee-: ora del decesso: 00:05
2016-12-14 00:05 campa97: che schifo quel triangolo
2016-12-14 00:05 campa97: bon dai, non è tanto male XD
2016-12-14 00:05 -Bumblebee-: è anche colpa della griglie eh
2016-12-14 00:06 -Bumblebee-: ahahaha
2016-12-14 00:06 campa97: putroppo l'ho mappata con le griglie
2016-12-14 00:06 -Bumblebee-: e va beh
2016-12-14 00:06 campa97: 01:03:126 (3,4) - questo si che è un blanket
2016-12-14 00:06 campa97: XD
2016-12-14 00:06 -Bumblebee-: solo utili per fare le figure
2016-12-14 00:06 -Bumblebee-: ma usa quella più piccola
2016-12-14 00:07 campa97: ah
2016-12-14 00:07 -Bumblebee-: ah è un blanket? ahaha
2016-12-14 00:07 campa97: ho sempre usato la 2
2016-12-14 00:07 -Bumblebee-: premi G
2016-12-14 00:07 -Bumblebee-: 3 volte
2016-12-14 00:07 campa97: ora non lo uso più il grid
2016-12-14 00:07 -Bumblebee-: questa è utile per le figure, quella un po' più grande per fare gli slider che fai tu :]
2016-12-14 00:07 -Bumblebee-: quella piccolissima è di precisione
2016-12-14 00:08 -Bumblebee-: io lo uso quasi sempre, ma uso quella di precisione
2016-12-14 00:08 campa97: quali slider faccio in particolare?
2016-12-14 00:08 -Bumblebee-: quelli tutti specchiati
2016-12-14 00:08 campa97: ahhh
2016-12-14 00:08 -Bumblebee-: roba da dire 'oh my sweet Jesus'
2016-12-14 00:08 campa97: perchè? ahahah
2016-12-14 00:08 -Bumblebee-: perchè boh sono fighi
2016-12-14 00:09 -Bumblebee-: comunque, non andiamo off-topic ahaha
2016-12-14 00:09 campa97: na chi l'ha detto?
2016-12-14 00:09 -Bumblebee-: 01:03:126 (3,4) - se vuoi, fixalo, non deve essere per forza tutto blankettato
2016-12-14 00:09 -Bumblebee-: l'ho detto io :]
2016-12-14 00:10 campa97: l'ho circa blankettato
2016-12-14 00:10 campa97: XD
2016-12-14 00:10 campa97: ah ok ahahahah
2016-12-14 00:10 -Bumblebee-: circa ahahaha
2016-12-14 00:10 -Bumblebee-: 01:50:440 (1,2) - pleaseeee
2016-12-14 00:10 campa97: ahahahaha
2016-12-14 00:11 -Bumblebee-: 01:58:668 (2,3,4) - triangolo
2016-12-14 00:11 -Bumblebee-: no, niente, cazzata
2016-12-14 00:11 -Bumblebee-: va bene anche così
2016-12-14 00:11 campa97: uh ottimo
2016-12-14 00:11 -Bumblebee-: 02:23:354 (1,2) - please pt.2
2016-12-14 00:12 -Bumblebee-: 02:37:068 (4,1) - stack
2016-12-14 00:12 campa97: 01:50:440 (1,2) - sembrano due pesci
2016-12-14 00:12 -Bumblebee-: 02:39:811 - e ci si inizia a gasare tutti
2016-12-14 00:12 -Bumblebee-: sembrano 2 vermi a me lol
2016-12-14 00:13 campa97: ahahahahaha
2016-12-14 00:13 campa97: prospettive diverse XD
2016-12-14 00:13 -Bumblebee-: vero
2016-12-14 00:13 -Bumblebee-: 02:44:611 (4) - troppo vicino però
2016-12-14 00:13 campa97: 02:39:811 (1) - si, questo sembra un verme
2016-12-14 00:13 -Bumblebee-: ahahaha
2016-12-14 00:14 campa97: oh già
2016-12-14 00:14 -Bumblebee-: 02:50:097 (6) - questo può andare
2016-12-14 00:14 -Bumblebee-: in quanto il player deve tornare indietro, e un po' di tempo lo perde senza dubbio
2016-12-14 00:14 campa97: stavo giusto vedendo adesso... pensavo al blanket
2016-12-14 00:14 campa97: ah ok
2016-12-14 00:15 -Bumblebee-: si, può anche andare un bel blanket
2016-12-14 00:15 campa97: no bon, lo lascio così allora, ovviamente è voluto
2016-12-14 00:15 -Bumblebee-: "ovviamente"
2016-12-14 00:15 campa97: ormai l'ho blankettato XD
2016-12-14 00:15 -Bumblebee-: okay, apposto
2016-12-14 00:16 -Bumblebee-: rimane solo una cosa da fare
2016-12-14 00:16 -Bumblebee-: oltre ad uccidermi, ofc
2016-12-14 00:16 -Bumblebee-: da dove hai scaricato la canzone? YT?
2016-12-14 00:16 campa97: no
2016-12-14 00:16 campa97: da soundfree mi pare
2016-12-14 00:17 -Bumblebee-: ce l'hai il link?
2016-12-14 00:17 campa97: lo ritrovo
2016-12-14 00:17 -Bumblebee-: grand3
2016-12-14 00:17 -Bumblebee-: ..
2016-12-14 00:17 campa97: ahahahah
2016-12-14 00:18 campa97: ecco, freesound cazz
2016-12-14 00:18 campa97: http://freedsound.com/it?q=sakura-lifetheory
2016-12-14 00:19 campa97: è il campionamento troppo alto?
2016-12-14 00:19 -Bumblebee-: una specie
2016-12-14 00:20 -Bumblebee-: non me lo fa convertire
2016-12-14 00:20 campa97: cazz
2016-12-14 00:20 -Bumblebee-: provo a criptare sto robo un attimo
2016-12-14 00:20 campa97: super
2016-12-14 00:22 campa97: volendo sto un attimo con audacity
2016-12-14 00:22 campa97: se potessi farlo
2016-12-14 00:22 campa97: cazz
2016-12-14 00:23 -Bumblebee-: ho il file, ma non so come mandartelo
2016-12-14 00:23 -Bumblebee-: lo metto su mediafire
2016-12-14 00:23 campa97: ok fatto
2016-12-14 00:23 campa97: ah
2016-12-14 00:23 campa97: come vuoi
2016-12-14 00:23 campa97: volendo ce l'ho
2016-12-14 00:24 campa97: boh
2016-12-14 00:24 campa97: non funzia
2016-12-14 00:24 -Bumblebee-: http://www.mediafire.com/file/rvk1bk89f ... Sakura.mp3
2016-12-14 00:25 -Bumblebee-: ecco a lei
2016-12-14 00:25 -Bumblebee-: dovrebbe essere apposto questa versione
2016-12-14 00:25 campa97: grazie :D
2016-12-14 00:26 -Bumblebee-: occhio che probabilmente dovrai cambiare l'offset
2016-12-14 00:26 campa97: mi da sempre l'errore del bitrate
2016-12-14 00:26 -Bumblebee-: impossibile
2016-12-14 00:26 -Bumblebee-: hai eliminato l'altro file audio?
2016-12-14 00:26 campa97: si
2016-12-14 00:26 campa97: ovvio
2016-12-14 00:26 campa97: rifaccio
2016-12-14 00:26 -Bumblebee-: mi sembra stranissimo
2016-12-14 00:26 -Bumblebee-: io l'ho sempre fatto e non mi ha mai dato l'errore
2016-12-14 00:27 -Bumblebee-: o.o
2016-12-14 00:27 campa97: niente...
2016-12-14 00:27 campa97: ho visto comunque che il bitrate è di 128
2016-12-14 00:27 -Bumblebee-: domani provo con Audacity
2016-12-14 00:27 campa97: avevo provato con audacity
2016-12-14 00:28 campa97: sempre errore
2016-12-14 00:28 campa97: mi trolla
2016-12-14 00:28 -Bumblebee-: ahahaha
2016-12-14 00:28 -Bumblebee-: beh guarda il lato positivo
2016-12-14 00:28 -Bumblebee-: almeno abbiamo finito la mod ahaha
2016-12-14 00:28 campa97: si ahahahahah
2016-12-14 00:28 campa97: ora ti faccio fare tutte le altre canzoni
2016-12-14 00:28 campa97: XD
2016-12-14 00:28 -Bumblebee-: ahahaha
Buona fortuna, se ti serve aiuto, sai a chi scrivere ;)
Nao Tomori
hi.

gonna talk about insane mostly here.

well before anything i'm pretty sure having a blank sliderfollowcircle (the yellow thing around a slider ball) in your custom map skin is not allowed.
also technically speaking you need a custom section-pass as well lol
also your hit circle select is blank for some reason which makes modding ridiculously annoying, please fix this as well...

[insane]

so, in my opinion, the biggest issue here is the inconsistency of the spacing and rhythm choice. i'll go over some stuff regarding that.

00:04:840 (5) - up until now, you always put a jump on the loud piano. but this time, it is the same distance as the jump from 00:03:811 (2,3) - 2 to 3. this means that the slider does not have correct emphasis, since you want it to have more emphasis ( therefore bigger jump ) than the other stuff.

00:08:954 (1) - same thing here. the spacing being equalized just removes any emphasis on a note

00:11:611 (6) - this isn't on anything. map circles on things that actually have sounds.

for the intro, you use very varied spacing. ex.00:22:326 (7) - .8 spacing here, 00:29:183 (3) - 1.0x spacing here.
the issue with this is that, the spacing does not follow the music.


i recommend you watch this series of helpful videos, here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oL3az8FhlB4

basically, it will help you form a foundation on which you can build better maps.


the intro is so lacking in musical elements that i recommend you skip mapping it entirely
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assuming you watched the videos now, i'll go on with the mod.

00:59:011 - this was a good idea, following piano with sliders and using circles for the gaps in between! that's one of the most important things about mapping, keeping a good rhythmic structure and following similar sounds in similar ways.

01:19:172 - why is there a break here?

01:44:268 - this kind of movement is incredibly awkward to play, from 5-6-7, because it's a wide angle. i recommend changing the placement of the notes here to be a sharper angle.

i disagree heavily with the extensive use of distance snapping here. it lowers the overall intensity of the map while also increasing it at certain places where sharper angles are used. for example: 01:55:068 - has a kick on it, as did 3. but it's the same spacing as 5, which is just an ordinary note in the song. yet 5 also has the emphasis of a sharp angle.

02:09:099 - why break here?

02:35:255 - the extremely extended use of distance snapping, again, makes the map feel rather boring and lazily created. in your future maps, please make an effort to branch out into jump patterns and the like.

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the largest issue, though, is with rhythm. i'm pretty sure there's a 1/2 note on every. single. beat.

just because there is a sound, doesn't mean you need to put a note there. instead, focus on the most interesting melodies and instruments the song has to offer and map around those.

for example:
01:44:268 - is an extended note in the synth. you could highlight that by putting a 1/1 or a 3/2 slider like this: http://puu.sh/sSusk/389a9675c5.jpg
02:28:754 - an extended note in the violin starts here, a new piano note as well. you could highlight those by placing a 1/1 slider here.

basically, i don't think the map follows the song very well. you have circles basically everywhere, so you could stick this map on some random song from the same genre and it would line up. what that means, is that the map is not unique to the song. if it had sliders that highlighted interesting sounds, or focused heavily on the melody presented by the violin, it would be more closely in tune with the rhythm of the song. as it is now, it needs a full overhaul, and you need more mapping experience in regards to emphasis and use of spacing.

If you have questions, or want a more in-depth discussion, feel free to PM me in-game. this might sound pretty brutal, but almost everyone goes through this process at least once. don't be afraid to ask questions.
PandaHero
Hello.
My side of m4m

General

Your hit0 picture is too big, please make it smaller.
Also check difficulty specific, I think it will be useful for you.
General advices: make new combos more ofthen, make more blankets, keep the structure.

00:03:468 (3) - maybe nc?
00:14:440 (3) - ^
00:19:926 (3) - ^
00:30:897 (4) - ^
00:37:068 (4) - ^
00:41:868 (3) - ^
00:46:668 (4) - ^
01:03:811 (4) - ^
00:04:840 (5) - this slider is not looking very beautiful for me, You can make it like this slider 00:02:097 (2) -
Also I would like to remove reverse and put note here - 00:06:211, because piano sound is strong here.
00:15:811 (5) - ^
00:18:554 (2,3) - you can make blanket here
00:23:354 (2,3) - and here
01:06:554 (1,2) - are wistle sounds here correct? It sounds strange.
01:12:040 (1) - put finish here
01:24:383 - remove finish sound from here, it's unconsistent.
01:23:011 (1) - also reverse sliders, that repeating more than 2 times not allowed in easy diff.
01:23:011 (1,2,3) - make this place more beautiful by making this slider 01:25:754 (2) - with the same curve like this slider 01:27:126 (3) -
01:27:126 (1) - remove nc
01:31:240 (5) - add nc
01:53:183 (1,2,3) - maybe will be better if you decrease sharp here? 90 degress jumps a little bit hard imo.
01:55:925 (1,1) - this pause confusing me.
02:01:411 (1,2) - make a blanket here.
02:04:154 (3) - nc
02:26:097 (3) - ^
02:50:097 (6) - maybe will be better make two note instead of the beginning and end of this slider?
02:55:583 (5,1) - - ^
02:59:011 (3) - make a reverse slider here and remove this slider 03:00:040 (4) -
General advices: keep the structure. SV changes is not allowed in Normal diff, remove it.

00:16:497 (6) - remove reverse and put a note here - 00:17:183
00:26:783 (3) - ^
00:43:240 (3,4,5) - - spacing between this objects are too small.
00:45:640 (2) - strange slider, Maybe will be better, if you start it from here - 00:45:983 and put note here - 00:45:640.
01:23:011 (1,2,3,4) - looks like overmapping for me.
02:22:325 (2,3) - remove stack, I think this kind of stacks are confusing novice players.
02:38:440 (3,4,5) - ^
03:00:725 (3,4,5) - ^
02:26:783 (2) - whistle here sounds pretty random.
02:33:640 (6) - ctrl+g?
03:12:040 (3,4,5) - stack these notes?
General advices: keep the structure.

00:19:240 (5) - ctrl+g?
00:26:097 (4) - ^
00:43:240 (4,5) - make these two notes as a slider for keeping structure?
00:45:297 (2) - remove one of this white anchors and put another one in the middle of slider, it will be look nicely
00:52:840 (1,2) - fix blanket here.
01:00:383 (6) - remove reverse, put note here - 01:01:068.
01:16:497 (1) - make this "mustache" slider more symmetrical
01:29:868 (5) - put nc here
01:31:240 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - overmapped place, put one 1/1 slider here, please.
01:49:068 (2) - ctrl+g?
01:49:754 (4) - ^
01:54:897 (2,3) - make this as a slider?
02:20:611 (2,3,4,5) - make this place like this 02:23:354 (1,2,3,4) - ?
02:28:154 (2) - ctrl+g?
02:28:840 (3) - nc?
02:39:125 (4,5) - make this as a slider?
02:58:325 (5) - stack end of this slider with the end of this - 02:59:525 (1) -
02:59:525 (1,2) - make a blanket here.
03:20:611 (6,1) - ^
The beginning is too boring imo.

00:02:783 (4) - ctrl+g?
00:11:611 (6) - overmap for me, I would like to remove this note.
00:15:126 (3,4) - unstack these notes, please.
01:54:383 (4,5,1) - stack these notes?
02:22:154 (2,3) - spacing here is too small
02:26:097 (1,2) - make a blanket here.
02:34:325 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - singletap intensifies, lol.
02:35:011 (5,6,7,8) - you can make it as a sliders, for making this part easier.
02:36:383 (5,6,7,8) - ^
02:39:811 - this and the next part is too boring, you can make it with spacing changes, as a kiai time was.
03:11:611 (2) - overmapping, there is no sound for this note

My mod is over, good luck :)
Topic Starter
campa97
Thanks a lot for your mods ^^
Seijiro
please reply appropriately to mods.
Modders took their time trying to help you improve your map, help them improve their modding back by replying.
polka
campa, I think it would help you to look for someone to mod your hitsounds.
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