late hehe
[Inner Oni]
00:20:020 (45,46,47,48,49,50,51) - how about change to d-k-k-d-k-dd? seems more interesting and fits better to vocal to me
00:23:170 (52,53,54,55,56,57) - d-k-d-d-kk same as^
00:33:081 (72,73) - swap? ^
00:51:493 - maybe move to 00:51:140 - for consistency with 00:48:317 - ?
01:00:758 - change to d to follow the drum which is going down?
01:13:905 - how about add d here and 01:14:434 - and k here to keep the piano build-up?
01:47:346 - i think changing this to d could make a good pattern variation. try?
01:50:522 - change to d plays better imo
01:50:875 (1,2,3) - maybe change the triplet to ddk or kdk? it would reflect strong snare at 01:51:052 - better
01:51:934 - consider to change it to d? consecutive kdk with 01:52:464 - feels too boring for me
02:22:905 - moving this to 02:22:728 - would emphasis the vocal at 02:22:817 - and make better build up to the longer pattern
02:48:140 (1,2) - maybe switch color to emphasis snare at 02:48:140 - ?
02:48:405 - and change to k, same as ^
02:56:875 - change to k? guitar sound is higher
03:48:052 - , 03:48:405 - , 03:48:758 - change all to d and 03:48:934 - change to k would fits the guitar better and create an emphasis at the end
03:55:993 - it can also work without finisher and more comfortable to play
04:13:640 - hmm i feels weird if it's empty because the tension is loss. try to add d? guitar sound can support it
04:32:699 (14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - invert all color? (blue-->red and red--> blue) because since start of this session you've been following snare with k and kick with d, it just feels unmatched here imo
you may call me back after that~