Neoskylove wrote:

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[Regou]
01:06:358 - I wish this beat could be added for fun rhythm. ok
01:21:272 (1) - 01:21:962 (1) - should be emphasized like 01:23:686 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - , Imo. I think mine pattern works as well so I guess I'd keep it for now might consider changing it to another one.
03:14:376 (3,5) - stack? fixed
04:27:134 (1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Is this SV and pattern okay? I can't sure. I am not sure as well lol I think I need to get BN's opinion (btw I think this is very COOL)
05:21:445 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - avoid overlap nah I think this pattern looks pretty good in terms of aesthetics so I don't want to change it ;w;

Help me

Desperate-kun wrote:

Cool map :3 This is one of the few Camellia songs I really like, and your map fits it so well!

I would mod it if I had the time (exams, duh), but one little thing: 02:35:410 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think jumps would fit better here, because the drum sounds are very strong so no movement feels awkward to me. Also, 02:35:582 (2,3,4) - are significantly different sounds to 02:36:100 (5,6) - and the current pattern doesn't show the difference.

02:35:410 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I actually think anti-jump would work at here as well as it's just the beginning of the part. I don't want to give too many pressure to players at this point. Since their sound isn't really identical, I tried to do some small variation here instead of simply overlapping them =w=


Good luck!

My Angel Azusa wrote:

音效什么的下次再看

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1. 这个图我觉得明显小点的cs会好一些吧？算是排列图不是跳图，比如00:51:272 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这样的overlap很尴尬 cs再高一點的話真的會很難打,算了
2. 01:04:376 (3) - 拆成滑条和圈，因为01:04:548 - 音你一直没无视 ok
3. 01:06:100 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - 跟音略怪，前面01:06:272 (2,3) - 跟了蓝线后面只有红白，如果按照前面的话01:07:048 - 也要 看來這個還是有點不太好=w=|| 弄掉藍線的圈圈了
4. 01:46:445 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 不和前面那样变ds了吗？好了
5. 01:51:703 (2,1) - 01:51:962 (2,1) - ds是否大了点 [color=#FF000]還好吧,滑條玩家們基本上都不會拉到尾,這個就當做是單點看待吧[/color]
6. 01:57:479 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 全程偏大，前面1:46那边ds就够了，你最多加个间距，后四个跟这边ds一样 ok
7. 02:03:341 (1,1) - ds偏大，此外02:03:341 (1) - 不考虑4个圈？这边明显1/4连打 這個部分都在跟電音,我就不突然跟1/4音了 ds方面嘛...應該還能玩的吧?
8. 02:08:513 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,3,1,2) - ds一个道理，后面可能也有类似的不说了 (其實是這圖太長我做到後面忘梗了) 我改了
9. 02:39:376 - 不map？這裡留空比較能突出那兩個高音,不補note了
10. 02:44:548 - 滑条这边停就行了，留个1/2 好
11. 02:54:634 - 我觉得这边以后就没有1/8的音了，而且有些重音都被折返带过去了，建议改下。其他地方一样，不写了 改了
12. 02:59:807 - 03:05:324 - 03:10:841 - 03:16:358 (2) - delete 好
13. 03:19:117 (1,2) - 换个位置？ds大了些 我已經盡量了,再移會顯得很擠>_>
14. 04:05:755 - 不map吗？04:05:410 (1,2,3,1,2) - 这个排列和下的节奏和前面一样还是觉得怪 04:05:755 - 這個音我放哪裡都感覺打起來不舒服,感覺向前面一樣保持連貫性也挺好的? 藍線的圈圈我拿掉了
15. 04:19:548 (1,1,1) - 04:22:307 (1,1,1) - 为什么nc spam? 這裡應該是段落裡頭很明顯的重音吧(我還可以留空了來強調了這幾個音),下nc spam感覺比較合適
16. 04:29:203 (1) - sv太高了吧，这边我怎么觉得没那么激烈，反之04:29:548 (1,2,3,4,1) - 倒是可以1234和5做个间距 改成1.2了應該好一點了
17. 04:38:858 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 同学这个太难了。。。。。。/.\沒法子啊歌本來就是這樣的,2和3疊在一起應該有變比較好打了吧;w;
18. 05:00:410 - 滑条可以这边结束的 好
    神图啊，细节改一下，回头check其他的

1. 01:00:927 (4) - could probably remove the beat here to keep blue tick emphasis, like u have at 00:57:479 (1,2,3)
2. 01:07:996 (1) - would have a nicer effect imo if you used an extended slider, makes the transition to 01:08:513 (1) - feel more impactful
3. 01:48:513 (1) - having something clickable here seems a bit unnecessary, since the synth only comes in at 01:48:686 . should try doing something similar to 01:49:893 (1,1,2,3) - that groups together the synths 01:48:686 (2,1,2)
4. 02:00:582 (1) - remove nc, consistency with 01:38:513 (5)
5. 02:12:134 (2) - hmm feels a little undermapped since you have so many kicksliders following the synths 02:10:927 (1,2,3,3,4) - 02:13:686 (1,2) - while 02:12:307 - has a synth too but is passively mapped. could maybe try using two 1/4 sliders instead?
6. 02:37:048 - 02:42:565 - 02:48:082 - etc. normal samplesets could work here for kick drum
7. 02:39:289 (2,3) - maybe space more so people dont confuse this for 1/4 spacing 02:39:807 (1,2) . with the high intensity of this part people wont generally be watching approach circles
8. 02:43:341 (2) - 1/8 sounds too fast for the sounds provided here, 1/6 would be a much more accurate simplification. for the case at 02:54:376 - since 1/6 doesnt let you snap to the blue tick drum on 02:54:634 - u could try a rhythm like https://puu.sh/xahQ3/9ef705ad51.png
9. 03:19:289 (2) - needs hitsound on head
10. 04:50:582 (1) - should end this on the blue tick 04:51:531 - so ppl dont slider break on the transition to the stream
11. 05:06:272 - use the same hs as 05:06:013 - ?

Pentori wrote:

1. 01:00:927 (4) - could probably remove the beat here to keep blue tick emphasis, like u have at 00:57:479 (1,2,3) okay :3
2. 01:07:996 (1) - would have a nicer effect imo if you used an extended slider, makes the transition to 01:08:513 (1) - feel more impactful ok
3. 01:48:513 (1) - having something clickable here seems a bit unnecessary, since the synth only comes in at 01:48:686 . should try doing something similar to 01:49:893 (1,1,2,3) - that groups together the synths 01:48:686 (2,1,2)ok
4. 02:00:582 (1) - remove nc, consistency with 01:38:513 (5) ok
5. 02:12:134 (2) - hmm feels a little undermapped since you have so many kicksliders following the synths 02:10:927 (1,2,3,3,4) - 02:13:686 (1,2) - while 02:12:307 - has a synth too but is passively mapped. could maybe try using two 1/4 sliders instead? ok
6. 02:37:048 - 02:42:565 - 02:48:082 - etc. normal samplesets could work here for kick drum ok
7. 02:39:289 (2,3) - maybe space more so people dont confuse this for 1/4 spacing 02:39:807 (1,2) . with the high intensity of this part people wont generally be watching approach circles ok
8. 02:43:341 (2) - 1/8 sounds too fast for the sounds provided here, 1/6 would be a much more accurate simplification. for the case at 02:54:376 - since 1/6 doesnt let you snap to the blue tick drum on 02:54:634 - u could try a rhythm like https://puu.sh/xahQ3/9ef705ad51.png ok
9. 03:19:289 (2) - needs hitsound on head ok
10. 04:50:582 (1) - should end this on the blue tick 04:51:531 - so ppl dont slider break on the transition to the stream ok
11. 05:06:272 - use the same hs as 05:06:013 - ? ok

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