Another:
00:22:550 (22550|0) - this note should be placed on 00:22:637 - because the sound is actually on this line
similarly 00:23:938 (23938|2) - on 00:24:024 - and 00:25:325 (25325|0) - on 00:25:412 -
00:32:001 (32001|3,32001|2) - no need to double since no drum is here
00:32:348 - 00:33:042 - double note on these instead to represent the drum, u do emphasize such sound before
00:33:389 - from this line i think u may catch something wrong, or maybe we have different ideas. The picture shows my idea of catching sound here:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7726951 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772695301:13:013 (73013|2,73013|0,73013|3) - ctrl+h because of same pitch as the previous one
01:15:787 (75787|3,75787|0,75787|1) - ctrl+h ^
01:21:337 (81337|3,81337|0,81337|2) - ctrl+h ^
01:18:042 (78042|2,78042|0,78042|1,78302|1,78302|3,78302|2) - ctrl+h ^
01:22:030 - delete, no actual sound here
01:22:464 - miss a note
01:22:897 - ^
01:29:920 - make this like
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772698001:33:649 - ^
01:58:013 - from here i will do it like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7726994 if u think mine is not good, can u tell me how u catch sound here?
Hyper:
00:52:550 - miss a note, u catch this in the later part
00:52:984 (52984|2,53071|1,53157|3,53157|0,53244|2,53331|0,53418|1,53504|3,53504|2) - u did not catch this before, why note here? following the trend like before is nice. apply this to parts like from 00:58:360 - , from 01:03:909 -
01:21:944 - it is the same problem as the another diff, if u don't accept that mod in another just leave this
01:29:920 (89920|1,90007|0,90094|1,90181|2,90267|3) - same problem in another
01:26:799 (86799|1,86886|2,86972|3,87059|2,87146|1) - u did not catch these in another, why catch in hyper? make this part the same in both diff plz
Ok that's enough for this. Some repeating problems i don't want to mention again so simply change those part if u apply some of my mods. As a whole this map is nice. Streams in the kiai part in another are really good to play.
Don't forget to mod my map plz :3 Hope my mods will help u