: ok_hand :
[SPEKTRE]
well first, im pretty sure the beginning is 220 bpm, not 55 (unless you're going for loved that is) Same with most of the timing points in the map
00:15:305 (1,2,3,4) - this part should be exactly like 00:17:487 (1,2,3,4) - to follow the drum behind it
00:25:123 (1) - I think this should be a triple, since even though the 1/4 beat between the 2 notes is very quiet, it would feel better to tap a triple instead of a kickslider.
00:43:668 (1) - Sorry, but this whole part after this note is incredibly overmapped. I even failed this part once, where I should normally fail at the kiai and intense parts of the map, not the buildup. This might be better http://prntscr.com/fcgvvy
01:00:577 (1) - small, but long sliders should have their tail face down to look better
01:04:395 (2,3) - should be a 1/4 stream to emphasize the clickable beats in the back
01:07:123 (1,2) - overlap slider 2 tail with slider 1 head
02:18:031 (2,4) - something like this might look nicer for both sliders http://prntscr.com/fcgya2
02:29:485 (1,1,1,1) - why the NCs?
02:31:667 (1,1,1,1) - ^
02:34:939 (5) - this should be an NC for a downbeat
04:05:687 (1) - I really don't think you should NC these notes or anything similar to this pattern, it doesn't look neat at all, and nor does it flow with the music.
04:26:210 (1,1) - 1/3? The 1/3 sounds are barely audible
04:40:391 (1,2,3,1,1) - These are 3/4 notes, but 03:12:302 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - aren't? The music is still the same in both patterns.
Jeez, this map is hell to pass.
Good luck with it!
[SPEKTRE]
well first, im pretty sure the beginning is 220 bpm, not 55 (unless you're going for loved that is) Same with most of the timing points in the map
00:15:305 (1,2,3,4) - this part should be exactly like 00:17:487 (1,2,3,4) - to follow the drum behind it
00:25:123 (1) - I think this should be a triple, since even though the 1/4 beat between the 2 notes is very quiet, it would feel better to tap a triple instead of a kickslider.
00:43:668 (1) - Sorry, but this whole part after this note is incredibly overmapped. I even failed this part once, where I should normally fail at the kiai and intense parts of the map, not the buildup. This might be better http://prntscr.com/fcgvvy
01:00:577 (1) - small, but long sliders should have their tail face down to look better
01:04:395 (2,3) - should be a 1/4 stream to emphasize the clickable beats in the back
01:07:123 (1,2) - overlap slider 2 tail with slider 1 head
02:18:031 (2,4) - something like this might look nicer for both sliders http://prntscr.com/fcgya2
02:29:485 (1,1,1,1) - why the NCs?
02:31:667 (1,1,1,1) - ^
02:34:939 (5) - this should be an NC for a downbeat
04:05:687 (1) - I really don't think you should NC these notes or anything similar to this pattern, it doesn't look neat at all, and nor does it flow with the music.
04:26:210 (1,1) - 1/3? The 1/3 sounds are barely audible
04:40:391 (1,2,3,1,1) - These are 3/4 notes, but 03:12:302 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - aren't? The music is still the same in both patterns.
Jeez, this map is hell to pass.
Good luck with it!