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T & Sugah x NCT - Stardust (feat. Miyoki)

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[Kamiya]
637 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
[Kamiya]
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2019年8月29日 at 15:59:16

Artist: T & Sugah x NCT
Title: Stardust (feat. Miyoki)
Tags: English REMIX dnb drum&bass marathon
BPM: 174
Filesize: 8577kb
Play Time: 05:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. Smoke lingers after fire (5.39 stars, 998 notes)
Download: T & Sugah x NCT - Stardust (feat. Miyoki)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Lyrics
Blind devotion, empty notions

Like a roaring ocean, slowing motion

Lay down your troubled mind

We are only kind

And its cosmic symphony

Smoke lingers after fire

Smoke lingers after fire

Blind devotion, empty notions

Like a roaring ocean, slowing motion

Smoke lingers after fire

Lay down your troubled mind

We are only kind

And we'll kindly cease to be

As we intertwine with the universe

And its cosmic symphony

'Cause smoke lingers after fire

'Cause somke lingers after fire
Last edited by [Kamiya] , edited 27 times in total.
onislaughter
onislaughter
hi

01:28:030 (1,2,3) - make here the same spacing
01:36:306 (4,5,6,7) - strange spacing
01:38:720 (1,2,3,4) - make a square with anti-clockwise circular flow here?
01:40:961 (4,5,6) - what about this?
01:56:134 (6) - rotate on ~25 make blanket with 01:55:789 (4) - and make here the same spacing 01:56:478 (7) - as here 01:55:961 (5,6) -
02:12:340 - place a circle here


01:11:651 (3,5) - you can make blankets in places like that if you wish to

don't give kudosu if my mod was too useless
good luck!
[Kamiya]
637 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
[Kamiya]

onislaughter wrote:

hi

01:28:030 (1,2,3) - make here the same spacinglisten to BGM you can knew that was I mean
01:36:306 (4,5,6,7) - strange spacingno
01:38:720 (1,2,3,4) - make a square with anti-clockwise circular flow here?no
01:40:961 (4,5,6) - what about this?
01:56:134 (6) - rotate on ~25 make blanket with 01:55:789 (4) - and make here the same spacing 01:56:478 (7) - as here 01:55:961 (5,6) -
02:12:340 - place a circle hereclear. i really approval this


01:11:651 (3,5) - you can make blankets in places like that if you wish to

you are so like to make blankets right? lol ^^

don't give kudosu if my mod was too useless
good luck!
no. I think that very useful

And thanks for your mod
Lobelia
858 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia
咕咕
[ 思谋可 ]
00:27:685 (4,1) - 这里最好不要叠住，首先00:27:168 (2,3) - 间距形式应该和这个类似，然后1的位置是个FINISH强音，重叠效果就显得比较差了。00:33:203 (3,1) - 像这样做，就很不错
00:45:099 (1) - NC去掉吧？后面好多重复这样的都没NC，这里有点多余了
00:56:651 (4,1) - 这个重音要强调把？感觉太近了一些
00:59:409 (4,1) - 类似的这里
01:10:789 (3,4) - 三连呀
01:20:272 (1,6) - 丑，想办法和滑条尾重叠吧
01:32:340 (4,1,2,3) - FLOW不好。。。01:32:513 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+j
01:38:547 (4,1,2,3,4) - 我觉得这里还在循环那个 “椰岛嗨。。椰岛嗨”这种声音，突然改节奏不好吧？(辣鸡空耳不要在意
01:42:168 (2,3) - 三连
01:43:547 (9,1) - ↑
01:54:409 (6,1) - 这里的NC我看的不是很懂
01:54:754 - 这里NC吧？
01:55:272 (1) - NC取消？01:55:789 (4) - 这里NC？
01:59:409 (1) - NC取消？
02:01:306 (1) - NC取消？
02:01:651 (4) - NC
02:02:340 (1) - NC取消
02:03:030 (5) - NC
02:03:720 - NC去掉
02:05:099 - 去掉NC
02:06:478 (7,8) - 换成两个1/2滑条组合比较合曲，反正我个人觉得这里来回效果比较差
QWQ就水这么多好不好，我觉得你貌似NC问题比较严重啊这个，好多NC看不懂原因。但是排列看着还可以的
因为觉得NC有点不好。。我就把我主要说了一段的NC自己弄了一次，你可以看看ORZ当然只是看看，改不改随你
160,32,113375,6,0,P|116:28|72:44,1,87,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,148,113720,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,264,113892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,264,113978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,264,114065,2,0,P|204:280|244:268,1,87,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,216,114409,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,76,114582,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,76,114754,6,0,P|400:128|416:164,1,87,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,248,115099,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,136,115272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,136,115358,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,136,115444,2,0,P|272:92|260:52,1,87,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,324,115789,5,8,0:0:0:0:
152,296,115961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,240,116134,2,0,P|300:216|352:220,1,87,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,304,116478,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,108,116651,5,0,0:0:0:0:
312,108,116737,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,108,116823,2,0,P|300:60|308:24,1,87,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,128,117168,2,0,P|452:172|444:212,1,87,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,336,117513,5,2,0:0:0:0:
476,344,117685,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,220,117858,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,316,118030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,316,118116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,316,118203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,360,118375,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,192,118547,5,8,0:0:0:0:
64,124,118720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,68,118892,2,0,P|188:60|232:72,1,87,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,144,119237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,24,119409,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,24,119496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,24,119582,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,119754,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,226,119927,2,0,P|296:178|312:142,1,87,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,144,120272,2,0,P|488:188|480:232,1,87,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,308,120616,5,8,0:0:0:0:
348,360,120789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,256,120961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,320,121134,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,76,121306,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,84,121478,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,84,121565,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,84,121651,6,0,P|128:136|136:172,1,87,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,268,121996,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,176,122168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,88,122340,2,0,P|464:128|464:172,1,87,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,256,122685,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,176,122858,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,176,122944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,176,123030,6,0,P|268:136|268:92,1,87,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,280,123375,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,320,123547,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,228,123720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,224,123892,2,0,P|472:268|464:320,2,87,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,156,124409,37,2,0:0:0:0:
308,140,124582,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,268,124754,1,8,0:0:0:0:
67,303,124927,1,0,0:0:0:0:
67,303,125013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
67,303,125099,2,0,P|53:263|56:220,1,87,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,132,125444,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,76,125616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,76,125789,5,2,0:0:0:0:
352,156,125961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,156,126134,2,0,P|320:188|268:200,1,87,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,352,126478,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,352,126651,1,0,0:0:0:0:
255,327,126823,38,0,L|352:322,1,87
148,352,127168,5,2,0:0:0:0:
200,280,127340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,100,127513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,180,127685,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,352,127858,2,0,P|100:348|56:320,1,87,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,128203,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,64,128375,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,64,128461,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,64,128547,6,0,P|120:56|168:40,1,87,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,104,128892,2,0,P|292:108|248:120,1,87,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,232,129237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,316,129409,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,316,129582,2,0,P|196:284|208:240,1,87,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,28,129927,53,0,0:0:0:0:
Last edited by Lobelia , edited 2 times in total.
Lulu-
398 posts
Joined March 2014
Lulu-
Hi, m4m from #modreqs

[Smoke lingers after fire]
00:02:685 (2,1) - You don't have to do it, but you can blanket these
00:05:444 (2) - Not correctly stacked
00:07:858 (5) - Either stack with 2 or don't overlap
00:08:547 (1) - ^
00:14:065 (1) - The last hook of this slider is a bit too curvy, make it flatter
00:33:375 (1,1) - Blanket?
01:03:030 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part of the stream looks a bit weird
01:28:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Change the spacing more consistently
01:41:651 (6) - Fix overlap with 4
01:50:272 (5,6,7,8,1) - Smoother curve would be nice
02:03:547 (7,1) - Irritating spacing, place 1 further away. You can make a nice and sharp triangle with this
02:09:927 - Turn off kiai
02:12:685 - Turn on kiai here
03:37:513 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as mentioned above
04:01:651 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - This can be polished a bit more
04:52:685 (1) - Extend this spinner to 04:58:203 (1) - and delete the one that starts there

EDIT: Correct Metadata:
Artist:T & Sugah x NCT
Title: Stardust (feat. Miyoki)
Delete the source
Solid map, Good luck!
[Kamiya]
637 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
[Kamiya]

[ Abhor ] wrote:

咕咕
[ 思谋可 ]
00:27:685 (4,1) - 这里最好不要叠住，首先00:27:168 (2,3) - 间距形式应该和这个类似，然后1的位置是个FINISH强音，重叠效果就显得比较差了。00:33:203 (3,1) - 像这样做，就很不错
00:45:099 (1) - NC去掉吧？后面好多重复这样的都没NC，这里有点多余了
00:56:651 (4,1) - 这个重音要强调把？感觉太近了一些
00:59:409 (4,1) - 类似的这里
01:10:789 (3,4) - 三连呀
01:20:272 (1,6) - 丑，想办法和滑条尾重叠吧
01:32:340 (4,1,2,3) - FLOW不好。。。01:32:513 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+j
01:38:547 (4,1,2,3,4) - 我觉得这里还在循环那个 “椰岛嗨。。椰岛嗨”这种声音，突然改节奏不好吧？(辣鸡空耳不要在意
01:42:168 (2,3) - 三连
01:43:547 (9,1) - ↑
01:54:409 (6,1) - 这里的NC我看的不是很懂
01:54:754 - 这里NC吧？
01:55:272 (1) - NC取消？01:55:789 (4) - 这里NC？
01:59:409 (1) - NC取消？
02:01:306 (1) - NC取消？
02:01:651 (4) - NC
02:02:340 (1) - NC取消
02:03:030 (5) - NC
02:03:720 - NC去掉
02:05:099 - 去掉NC
02:06:478 (7,8) - 换成两个1/2滑条组合比较合曲，反正我个人觉得这里来回效果比较差
QWQ就水这么多好不好，我觉得你貌似NC问题比较严重啊这个，好多NC看不懂原因。但是排列看着还可以的
因为觉得NC有点不好。。我就把我主要说了一段的NC自己弄了一次，你可以看看ORZ当然只是看看，改不改随你
160,32,113375,6,0,P|116:28|72:44,1,87,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,148,113720,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,264,113892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,264,113978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,264,114065,2,0,P|204:280|244:268,1,87,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,216,114409,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,76,114582,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,76,114754,6,0,P|400:128|416:164,1,87,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,248,115099,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,136,115272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,136,115358,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,136,115444,2,0,P|272:92|260:52,1,87,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,324,115789,5,8,0:0:0:0:
152,296,115961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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312,108,116651,5,0,0:0:0:0:
312,108,116737,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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360,336,117513,5,2,0:0:0:0:
476,344,117685,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,220,117858,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,316,118030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,316,118116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,316,118203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,360,118375,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,192,118547,5,8,0:0:0:0:
64,124,118720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,68,118892,2,0,P|188:60|232:72,1,87,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,144,119237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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372,24,119496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,24,119582,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,119754,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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472,144,120272,2,0,P|488:188|480:232,1,87,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,308,120616,5,8,0:0:0:0:
348,360,120789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,256,120961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,76,121306,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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140,84,121565,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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284,176,122168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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432,256,122685,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,176,122858,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,176,122944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,176,123030,6,0,P|268:136|268:92,1,87,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,280,123375,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,320,123547,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,228,123720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,224,123892,2,0,P|472:268|464:320,2,87,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,156,124409,37,2,0:0:0:0:
308,140,124582,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,268,124754,1,8,0:0:0:0:
67,303,124927,1,0,0:0:0:0:
67,303,125013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
67,303,125099,2,0,P|53:263|56:220,1,87,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,132,125444,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,76,125616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,76,125789,5,2,0:0:0:0:
352,156,125961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,156,126134,2,0,P|320:188|268:200,1,87,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,352,126478,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,352,126651,1,0,0:0:0:0:
255,327,126823,38,0,L|352:322,1,87
148,352,127168,5,2,0:0:0:0:
200,280,127340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,100,127513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,180,127685,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,352,127858,2,0,P|100:348|56:320,1,87,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,128203,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,64,128375,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,64,128461,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,64,128547,6,0,P|120:56|168:40,1,87,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,104,128892,2,0,P|292:108|248:120,1,87,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,232,129237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,316,129409,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,316,129582,2,0,P|196:284|208:240,1,87,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,28,129927,53,0,0:0:0:0:

没回的我都改掉了;w;
再看吧 我自己弄啦。最后才发现这个NC问题没搞好。。
谢啦(｡･∀･)ﾉﾞ
[Kamiya]
637 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
[Kamiya]

Lulu- wrote:

Hi, m4m from #modreqs

[Smoke lingers after fire]
00:02:685 (2,1) - You don't have to do it, but you can blanket these
00:05:444 (2) - Not correctly stacked
00:07:858 (5) - Either stack with 2 or don't overlap
00:08:547 (1) - ^
00:14:065 (1) - The last hook of this slider is a bit too curvy, make it flatter
00:33:375 (1,1) - Blanket?
01:03:030 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part of the stream looks a bit weird
01:28:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Change the spacing more consistently
01:41:651 (6) - Fix overlap with 4
01:50:272 (5,6,7,8,1) - Smoother curve would be nice
02:03:547 (7,1) - Irritating spacing, place 1 further away. You can make a nice and sharp triangle with this
02:09:927 - Turn off kiai
02:12:685 - Turn on kiai here
03:37:513 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as mentioned above
04:01:651 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - This can be polished a bit more
04:52:685 (1) - Extend this spinner to 04:58:203 (1) - and delete the one that starts there

EDIT: Correct Metadata:
Artist:T & Sugah x NCT
Title: Stardust (feat. Miyoki)eh this is another song's name;;
Delete the source
Solid map, Good luck!
ok fixed all~
thank you so much~!
Binguo
308 posts
Joined April 2015
Binguo
[水膜]
首先做电音多插变速线强行脑补都是可以的但要让人有规律可循

00:44:409 (1,2,3,4,5) - 如果我是你 从这里开始一段我肯定不会都下一样的节奏

01:21:996 (3) - 这个停顿太突然 如果非要停顿 这一段音乐每一组都应该找到一个停顿点 01:54:582 (7,1) - 同样

我觉得你应该着重突出某些地方 03:29:927 (1,4) - 这个前后有两段 想办法突出这种音反正做的和03:30:099 (2,3,1) - 玩起来感觉不一样就好 不然的话看上去就像量产图无聊

01:25:789 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里多下点功夫不要做的和其他地方一样了 做这种节奏重复太多的歌应该多多利用Voice发挥脑洞吧

最后整洁问题 我不是反对你做CS5但是
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6755291
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6755309
你的 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6755293
都是CS5改成CS4 0ar 你自己感受一下
细节不提了 股的拉客
Fanteer
483 posts
Joined February 2016
Fanteer
M4M

Why HP 5 ? Set 6 and more
00:37:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make same spacing between notes
01:00:961 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ very different spacing
01:07:513 (1) - remove NC
01:07:858 (3) - NC
01:08:375 (1) - remove NC
01:11:306 (1) - remove NC
01:11:996 (9) - NC
01:12:340 (1) - remove NC
01:13:892 (1) - remove
01:15:444 (1) - remove
01:22:340 (1) - NC remove
01:23:892 (1) - remove
01:24:409 (7) - NC
01:25:099 (4) - remove etc
Each combo must have 4 white ticks
01:28:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - fix spacing on this stream
01:50:444 (7) - spacing
02:26:478 (3,5,6,1) - fix overlap
02:34:582 (8,1) - ^
02:59:237 - I hear 2 sound here, like here 02:50:961 (1,2) -
03:01:996 - ^ etc
02:56:593 (2) - 1/6
03:35:444 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - fix this stream

Good Luck
Lulu-
398 posts
Joined March 2014
Lulu-
oh god LOL i fucked up with the metadata, it's actually "T & Sugah - Stardust (ft. Miyoki) (T & Sugah & NCT Remix)", fix please!

(https://soundcloud.com/t-and-sugah/t-su ... -copyright)
[Kamiya]
637 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
[Kamiya]

Lulu- wrote:

oh god LOL i fucked up with the metadata, it's actually "T & Sugah - Stardust (ft. Miyoki) (T & Sugah & NCT Remix)", fix please!

(https://soundcloud.com/t-and-sugah/t-su ... -copyright)
oh ~ that's nice!@o@

thank you!
Beomsan
1,878 posts
Joined November 2013
Beomsan
Hi, M4M
*Unrankable(or noticable) issues *Highly Recommended *Suggestions
General
  1. About BG size, I just recommend 1366x768 or 1900x1200. https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/516427/start=0 current size (1600x1200) is ambiguous I guess.
  2. Unused hitsounds:
    soft-hitclap.mp3 (S:C1 00:20:961 (1) - )
    soft-hitclap26.wav (S:C26 x)
    soft-sliderslide.wav (S:C1 00:20:961 (1) - )
  3. Generally usage of mp3 and ogg as hitsounds is not recommended. consider converting to .wav (soft-hitclap.mp3)
Smoke lingers after fire
  1. 01:03:720 (1) - cut at 01:06:047 - here? I couldn't find a sound to express specifically. (01:50:616 (1) - )
  2. 01:33:892 (5) - remove clap or change to whistle. feels a bit awkward to me.
  3. 01:58:375 (7,8,9) - actually it isn't good flow imo. There are many cases here like http://puu.sh/sJcHv/097c6a1a98.png
  4. 03:01:306 (1) - needs a bit more rhythm I guess. ex)http://puu.sh/sJcVt/87c724afc6.png
  5. 04:58:203 (1) - This song definitely ends at 04:58:203 - this point. so I recommend change to a note.
overall cool, I really don't have much to say.
take my star instead of awesome mod lmao
good luck!
Hanazawa Kana
727 posts
Joined February 2013
Hanazawa Kana
卧槽电音 这种我摸不懂啊..
看半天实在是不知道怎么摸
设个星星跑了
_(:з」∠)_
[Kamiya]
637 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
[Kamiya]

Hanazawa Kana wrote:

卧槽电音 这种我摸不懂啊..
看半天实在是不知道怎么摸
设个星星跑了
_(:з」∠)_

卧槽卡娜别跑 快来个1页的论文压死我_(:з」∠)_
[Kamiya]
637 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
[Kamiya]

Binguo wrote:

[水膜]
首先做电音多插变速线强行脑补都是可以的但要让人有规律可循

00:44:409 (1,2,3,4,5) - 如果我是你 从这里开始一段我肯定不会都下一样的节奏

01:21:996 (3) - 这个停顿太突然 如果非要停顿 这一段音乐每一组都应该找到一个停顿点 01:54:582 (7,1) - 同样

我觉得你应该着重突出某些地方 03:29:927 (1,4) - 这个前后有两段 想办法突出这种音反正做的和03:30:099 (2,3,1) - 玩起来感觉不一样就好 不然的话看上去就像量产图无聊

01:25:789 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里多下点功夫不要做的和其他地方一样了 做这种节奏重复太多的歌应该多多利用Voice发挥脑洞吧

最后整洁问题 我不是反对你做CS5但是
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6755291
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6755309
你的 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6755293
都是CS5改成CS4 0ar 你自己感受一下
细节不提了 股的拉客
论文呢 这才500字不到
都改了 细节嘛lwl 嘛 我会想办法修改的啦
Lulu-
398 posts
Joined March 2014
Lulu-

[Kamiya] wrote:

Lulu- wrote:

oh god LOL i fucked up with the metadata, it's actually "T & Sugah - Stardust (ft. Miyoki) (T & Sugah & NCT Remix)", fix please!

(https://soundcloud.com/t-and-sugah/t-su ... -copyright)
oh ~ that's nice!@o@

thank you!
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa you put the entire thing in the title ;;
Artist: T & Sugah
Title: Stardust (ft. Miyoki) (T & Sugah & NCT Remix)

"Myoki" from the link is a typo actually

Let's try this one last time xd
Beomsan
1,878 posts
Joined November 2013
Beomsan
lol
[Kamiya]
637 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
[Kamiya]

Lulu- wrote:

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa you put the entire thing in the title ;;
Artist: T & Sugah
Title: Stardust (ft. Miyoki) (T & Sugah & NCT Remix)

"Myoki" from the link is a typo actually

Let's try this one last time xd

holy.. :? :? :? :?
[Kamiya]
637 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
[Kamiya]

Beomsan wrote:

Hi, M4M
*Unrankable(or noticable) issues *Highly Recommended *Suggestions
General
  1. About BG size, I just recommend 1366x768 or 1900x1200. https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/516427/start=0 current size (1600x1200) is ambiguous I guess.
  2. Unused hitsounds:
    soft-hitclap.mp3 (S:C1 00:20:961 (1) - )
    soft-hitclap26.wav (S:C26 x)
    soft-sliderslide.wav (S:C1 00:20:961 (1) - )
  3. Generally usage of mp3 and ogg as hitsounds is not recommended. consider converting to .wav (soft-hitclap.mp3)
Smoke lingers after fire
  1. 01:03:720 (1) - cut at 01:06:047 - here? I couldn't find a sound to express specifically. (01:50:616 (1) - )
  2. 01:33:892 (5) - remove clap or change to whistle. feels a bit awkward to me.
  3. 01:58:375 (7,8,9) - actually it isn't good flow imo. There are many cases here like http://puu.sh/sJcHv/097c6a1a98.png
  4. 03:01:306 (1) - needs a bit more rhythm I guess. ex)http://puu.sh/sJcVt/87c724afc6.png
  5. 04:58:203 (1) - This song definitely ends at 04:58:203 - this point. so I recommend change to a note.
overall cool, I really don't have much to say.
take my star instead of awesome mod lmao
good luck!
all fix~!
and thank you so much for your mod and your star :) :) :)

모드를 해주셔서 너무 감사합나당!
[Kamiya]
637 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
[Kamiya]

Fanteer wrote:

M4M

Why HP 5 ? Set 6 and more
00:37:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make same spacing between notes
01:00:961 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ very different spacing
01:07:513 (1) - remove NC
01:07:858 (3) - NC
01:08:375 (1) - remove NC
01:11:306 (1) - remove NC
01:11:996 (9) - NC
01:12:340 (1) - remove NC
01:13:892 (1) - remove
01:15:444 (1) - remove
01:22:340 (1) - NC remove
01:23:892 (1) - remove
01:24:409 (7) - NC
01:25:099 (4) - remove etc
Each combo must have 4 white ticks
01:28:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - fix spacing on this stream
01:50:444 (7) - spacing
02:26:478 (3,5,6,1) - fix overlap
02:34:582 (8,1) - ^
02:59:237 - I hear 2 sound here, like here 02:50:961 (1,2) -
03:01:996 - ^ etc
02:56:593 (2) - 1/6
03:35:444 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - fix this stream

Good Luck
NC problem was all fixed
thanks for your mod :)
kanor
924 posts
Joined August 2013
kanor
M4M~
00:44:409 - 从这里开始我会建议用，这样节奏的层次感强一点

后面那段也一样，本来这种类型的曲子节奏就是很容易腻的，不稍微变点花样就有点无聊了嘛><
00:55:444 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里的节奏是AAABBBAB，我觉得NC最好也这么NC就好了
01:08:547 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这种的话我一般都会建议直接拉个五角星出来
01:08:203 (2,3,4,1) - 你这里跳的那么大，但是01:13:720 (2,3,4,5) - 这里又这么小，然后01:19:237 (3,4,5,6) - 又这么大......如果不是特定的梗的话还是尽量统一一点吧
01:09:582 (2,3,4) - 因为你前面都塞了三连这里不塞听起来怪怪的，如果你真的不打算塞的话我推荐节奏ctrl+G去压琴
01:10:272 (5,6,1) - 这里DS突然缩小，有点不明所以
01:25:789 (1,2,3,4,5) - 因为重音在2上所以我觉得如果要放大跳也应该在1和2之间放而不是2和3之间
01:45:099 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里明显有一个串不打算去压嘛？
02:00:616 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这里变得太多了，难度差太大了，猝不及防。02:04:409 (1,2,3,4) - 这种也是，然后后面突然DS又降了，还是有点不太理解
03:10:099 (2) - 为什么把03:10:616 - 这个音漏掉了呢？
03:38:203 (1,1) - 这个切flow太突然了吧......你在01:03:720 (1,2) - 这里都没这么切
嗯，最大的感觉是没做开，既然曲子就这么奔放就放开了做嘛23333
基础DS还是要有的，最好是能一个part用一个相近的DS，这样段落感会强点也不会突然觉得哪一段就突兀了。有些地方你做的很奔放有些却又拉得很小，这两者本身应该没什么问题，但是放一起的话有点不太好揣测麻婆的思路......
slider art666666

GL
有时间的话来看看呀，正好我也是APP :)
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/530704
EncoreW
833 posts
Joined June 2013
EncoreW
[Smoke lingers after fire]

drain time不够，这个图里面是4：57：931，还差两秒多才够5分钟，否则你就要做满所有难度了

tags太空了，dnb drum&bass marathon这种都可以塞进去

00:00:272 (1) - 不太清楚为什么这种地方要长滑条，00:00:961 - 00:01:651 - 很明显的几个节点都被刻意忽略了，虽然说vocal的优先级不算高，但是也不要完全不去管，感觉 2/1的 reverse会更加适合，长滑条在02:34:754 (1) - 这种没有vocal的地方用一下就好了

01:50:616 (1) - 这里也是，如果你一定要放一个长滑条的话我觉得滑条的速度还可以再慢一点

00:08:203 (6) - 00:19:237 (7) - 这几个地方都应该是1/2滑条

01:19:237 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 类似这种地方的形状拉的标准一点

01:27:168 (1) - 1/1 reverse

01:28:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这种串的间距最好逐个 note往上加，现在的这种样子不好看

01:40:961 (1,2,3) - blanket，否则看上去感觉有点乱

02:03:892 (5) - 02:06:651 (5) - clap怎么出现在 reverse上面，讲道理 dnb的曲子里面 clap出现的位置还是挺重要的，最好不要出现在滑条尾和 reverse这种地方，出现在circle或者滑条头上的打击感强10倍，在我看来优先级应该是 circle>滑条头>滑条尾>reverse

02:09:927 (1,2,3,4) - 02:11:996 (5) - 试试看都改成1/1滑条，滑条尾消音

02:45:789 (3) - 拉成对称，进txt改坐标

03:05:099 (1,2) - 这几个复制粘贴太明显了，至少上下左右翻转一下好一点

03:51:306 (1) - 这个NC有点迷

04:02:340 (5) - NC，因为你变了串的间距

打着没什么问题，这图感觉挺可以的
[Kamiya]
637 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
[Kamiya]

kanor wrote:

M4M~
00:44:409 - 从这里开始我会建议用，这样节奏的层次感强一点

后面那段也一样，本来这种类型的曲子节奏就是很容易腻的，不稍微变点花样就有点无聊了嘛><
00:55:444 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里的节奏是AAABBBAB，我觉得NC最好也这么NC就好了
01:08:547 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这种的话我一般都会建议直接拉个五角星出来
01:08:203 (2,3,4,1) - 你这里跳的那么大，但是01:13:720 (2,3,4,5) - 这里又这么小，然后01:19:237 (3,4,5,6) - 又这么大......如果不是特定的梗的话还是尽量统一一点吧
01:09:582 (2,3,4) - 因为你前面都塞了三连这里不塞听起来怪怪的，如果你真的不打算塞的话我推荐节奏ctrl+G去压琴
01:10:272 (5,6,1) - 这里DS突然缩小，有点不明所以
01:25:789 (1,2,3,4,5) - 因为重音在2上所以我觉得如果要放大跳也应该在1和2之间放而不是2和3之间
01:45:099 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里明显有一个串不打算去压嘛？
02:00:616 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这里变得太多了，难度差太大了，猝不及防。02:04:409 (1,2,3,4) - 这种也是，然后后面突然DS又降了，还是有点不太理解
03:10:099 (2) - 为什么把03:10:616 - 这个音漏掉了呢？
03:38:203 (1,1) - 这个切flow太突然了吧......你在01:03:720 (1,2) - 这里都没这么切
嗯，最大的感觉是没做开，既然曲子就这么奔放就放开了做嘛23333
基础DS还是要有的，最好是能一个part用一个相近的DS，这样段落感会强点也不会突然觉得哪一段就突兀了。有些地方你做的很奔放有些却又拉得很小，这两者本身应该没什么问题，但是放一起的话有点不太好揣测麻婆的思路......
slider art666666

GL
有时间的话来看看呀，正好我也是APP :)
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/530704

没提到的基本上 我都改完了。但是对于没做开可能是一开始没想那么多。太久没打图了也许是这样原因。。

感谢摸图~！
Last edited by [Kamiya] , edited 1 time in total.
[Kamiya]
637 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
[Kamiya]

Speechless wrote:

[Smoke lingers after fire]

drain time不够，这个图里面是4：57：931，还差两秒多才够5分钟，否则你就要做满所有难度了

tags太空了，dnb drum&bass marathon这种都可以塞进去

00:00:272 (1) - 不太清楚为什么这种地方要长滑条，00:00:961 - 00:01:651 - 很明显的几个节点都被刻意忽略了，虽然说vocal的优先级不算高，但是也不要完全不去管，感觉 2/1的 reverse会更加适合，长滑条在02:34:754 (1) - 这种没有vocal的地方用一下就好了

01:50:616 (1) - 这里也是，如果你一定要放一个长滑条的话我觉得滑条的速度还可以再慢一点

00:08:203 (6) - 00:19:237 (7) - 这几个地方都应该是1/2滑条

01:19:237 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 类似这种地方的形状拉的标准一点

01:27:168 (1) - 1/1 reverse

01:28:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这种串的间距最好逐个 note往上加，现在的这种样子不好看

01:40:961 (1,2,3) - blanket，否则看上去感觉有点乱

02:03:892 (5) - 02:06:651 (5) - clap怎么出现在 reverse上面，讲道理 dnb的曲子里面 clap出现的位置还是挺重要的，最好不要出现在滑条尾和 reverse这种地方，出现在circle或者滑条头上的打击感强10倍，在我看来优先级应该是 circle>滑条头>滑条尾>reverse

02:09:927 (1,2,3,4) - 02:11:996 (5) - 试试看都改成1/1滑条，滑条尾消音

02:45:789 (3) - 拉成对称，进txt改坐标

03:05:099 (1,2) - 这几个复制粘贴太明显了，至少上下左右翻转一下好一点

03:51:306 (1) - 这个NC有点迷

04:02:340 (5) - NC，因为你变了串的间距

打着没什么问题，这图感觉挺可以的
狗币姥爷(｡･∀･)ﾉﾞ

关于滑条的问题我都没怎么去解决，我还得好好思考下我后面换滑条的问题，前面基本的我就不动了，因为我跟人声就用滑条。
03:51:306 (1) - 这个NC有点迷NC那个地方居然没看到
其余的我都改了改

再次谢谢~！
lazygirl
506 posts
Joined February 2016
lazygirl
Hey M4M as agreed on #modreqs :)

[General]

  1. BG size is good, audio quality too
  2. Combo colors 5 and 6 are too similar, consider making them somewhat more recognizable
  3. Not a fan of the snare HS, ithey're too heavy for liquid DnB. Try finding a softer one imo. Also you should reorganize your HS, the numbers seem way too wild.
[Mapping]

  1. Your slider design at the beginning is cool, I like how it changes angle on the voice instead of having new objects, it works well here.
  2. 00:10:616 (1) - this slider is actually 2/3 long ;) the voice is on a 1/3 rhythm there
  3. 01:00:961 - This stream has an odd shape. Try making it change spacing during the stream :) Also a small streamjump on the last note would be so fitting
  4. 01:03:720 (1) - This one should have lower SV imo, like extremely low (you could even go below 0.5 in the .osu) It'd be more fitting
    Both points above apply to the second stream too
  5. 01:27:168 (1) - cool shape, you have too many curved sliders in this section imo, try replacing some of them with angled ones for a bit of variety, like you did in the second kiai
  6. 03:15:789 - could map this note here
Overall, your kiai parts are fun to play, but the placing of the jumps and object in general feels a bit too random. Your spacing isn't too consistent, it doesn't fit the feeling of the track. The map is really nice though otherwise, I like it. You have also given me the motivation to find and map some dnb now x)
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