00:13:405 (2,4) - these should probably be overlapped partially by the previous slider ends. 1/4 jumps in a slow part of the song isnt very good to play, nor does it look good.
fixed00:14:343 (5,1,2,3) - this giant spacing is unnecessary, try keep spacing as uniform and neat as possible, only increase it when you are emphasising a loud sound. Because this particular part of the map is very slow, without many impactful sounds, i recommend you keep the jumps pretty small
fixed00:15:843 (3,4) - move 3 to overlap 4? just makes it neater and keeps spacing consistent
fixed00:18:702 (1,2) - overlap 1 on 2 fully
fixed00:20:249 (5) - this slider is way too curved
fixed00:20:061 (4,5) - fully overlap 4 on 5 and move them closer to the previous note to keep consistent with spacing
fixed00:20:999 (2,3) - spacing between these is too big. i reccommend moving 3 closer to 2 and also using ctrl + g on 3
fixed00:25:531 (2,3,4,5) - these would look a lot neater if the notes overlapped the sliders properly
fixed00:27:406 (2,3) - spacing is too big for a 1/4 gap, make it smaller, but leave the same spacing for the other notes in the blue combo there
fixed00:30:872 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - these would also look a lot neater if the notes overlapped the sliders properly
fixed00:32:518 (2,3) - spacing is too big again
fixed00:33:067 (3,4) - either overlap these properly or dont have them overlap at all, maybe blanket the start of 4 with 3?
fixed00:33:981 (4,5,6) - also the timing on all of these sliders is off, heres what i think they should be.
https://puu.sh/smXg7/2dad19262a.jpg theres a delay on one note (not a mp3 issue) which I don't really know if I need to make it like what you said, or delay the note (6). will gather more opinions about this before changing00:37:142 (1,2) - this can just be 1 slider, no need for the smal slider + note
fixed00:40:142 (1,2) - spacing is too big again
fixed 00:41:454 (6,1) - doesnt need to be like that, can just be 1 note instead of that weird small slider
fixed00:43:142 (1) - have the slider end of this one face the following note
fixed00:47:454 (1,2) - can just be 1 slider
fixed 00:49:892 (2,3) - spacing is too large. if you look in the timeline, 2 and 3 have half die distance between them when compared to 3 and 4. try making that the same with the spacing of the jumps, possibly less, since it is a relatively easy song
fixed00:51:392 (3,4) - can just be one slider
fixed00:53:079 (3,4) - spacing too large again
fixed00:54:392 (1,2) - same here
fixed 00:55:704 (4,5,6) - spacing for this set of jumps is inconsistent, maybe use the distance snap tool to get out evenly spaced jumps
fixed00:58:517 (6,7) - spacing is too big, if you make the spacing smaller for this one, the follwing note (8) will be emphasised more
fixed01:00:017 (1,3) - from 1 to 3 probably shouldn't be kiai, im pretty sure
fixed01:01:892 (2,3) - spacing is too large
fixed01:02:454 (4,5) - ^^
fixed01:03:392 (2,3,4) - the spacing from 2-3 is not the same as the spacing from 3-4, maybe even it out a bit
fixed01:07:704 (1,4) - the way 1 overlaps 4 doesnt look very good in my opinion
fixed01:08:267 (4,1) - spacing between these 2 should be larger, or there should be no spacing (it overlaps with the slider end.)
fixed01:25:845 (2,3) - maybe overlap these
fixed01:27:923 (1) - maybe have this end at 1:29:623
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