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pishifat
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, September 29, 2017 at 6:20:50 PM

Artist: android52
Title: super anime groove 3d world
Tags: _83 presents welcome new galaxy Recover Decoration リカバーデコレーション Kosaki Onodera Kana Hanazawa Nisekoi ニセコイ
BPM: 124
Filesize: 3302kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. bor's Insane (3.64 stars, 278 notes)
  2. Easy (1.53 stars, 78 notes)
  3. Hard (2.74 stars, 188 notes)
  4. Insane (4.23 stars, 278 notes)
  5. Normal (1.74 stars, 122 notes)
Download: android52 - super anime groove 3d world
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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https://baq5.bandcamp.com/track/super-a ... e-3d-world
Alexia-
gud cs
laura-
01:23:251 (1) - can u plz make a circle at the end of this reverse slider? sounds better imo
anna apple
hi im bor \o/
fieryrage
surprise mod because i have 2 mod maps for february Lol.

widescreen support is on in everything but top diff fix ur shit

cs7
  • ar 6 so i can hrdt it and be #1 precision fuck osuskills
    also od 8 would probably be better for the triple stacks so people don't notelock tbh (or just slightly higher ar idk take ur pick)

    00:04:199 (1,1) - doin this at low ar is pretty stupid especially cuz its so close to each other, id say space it out more from the sliderhead but ur fucking gimmicks dont make sense worth shit to me so D
    00:13:574 (2) - this should prob have more repeats and be 1/12 or smth to fit with the 1/6 garbage
    00:21:558 (4,1) - pretty dramatic spacing change here compared to the rest of the song thus far, reduce this a bit maybe? idk caught me off guard playtesting it a bit and was hard to hit so
    00:41:155 (1,2) - i wouldn't stack cuz u do the same thing 00:42:606 (1,2) - here with different rhythm
    00:49:139 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - budget hollow wings
    00:58:574 (1,2) - stack follows different rhythm than 00:50:832 (1,2) - this one, i get the rhythm is different but with the ar so low i was expecting it to be 1/2 again
    01:14:542 (2) - 1/12 here too Lol (if not just make this 1/8 like the other ones tho)
    01:23:251 (1) - same as 00:13:574 (2) - for main slider, also i'd make this end on a circle instead of a slider repeat, lot more emphasis on it than the whatever the fuck piano
bor: 00:12:526 (1) - this rhythms pretty weird and is exasperated by low ar so id space 00:12:848 (1) - this out more from the sliderend
00:44:058 (2) - also would nc this and 01:00:510 (1,2) - pretty weird stack, i get the reasoning for it but the spacing from 01:00:026 (7,8,1) - makes it feel like its gonna be another jump if that makes literally any sense whatsoever, another fix would be stacking 7 and 8 but then u miss clap emphasis so idk

ok
anna apple

fieryrage wrote:

bor: 00:12:526 (1) - this rhythms pretty weird and is exasperated by low ar so id space 00:12:848 (1) - this out more from the sliderend I very much agree that this rhythm is weird, which is why I chose to stack the head of 00:12:848 (1) - under the tail of 00:12:526 (1) - . This on top of the NC on 00:12:848 (1) - allow the player to have a better time reading the approach circle so they can most accurately hit the clickable rhythm.

00:44:058 (2) - also would nc this as of now I will leave it as is, the intention behind this not being NC'd is because its part of the pickup to the kiai and i want to keep that very well known so the player is less likely to misread 00:44:784 (4) -

and 01:00:510 (1,2) - pretty weird stack, i get the reasoning for it but the spacing from 01:00:026 (7,8,1) - makes it feel like its gonna be another jump if that makes literally any sense whatsoever, another fix would be stacking 7 and 8 but then u miss clap emphasis so idk I'm not really sure what you mean when you say "makes it feel like its gonna be another jump." if you could be more specific that would help. but no change for now we pm'd and no change for now


Thanks for mod !
ALL NO CHANGE
Sonnyc
Easy.
00:16:477 (3,4,5,1,2) - I'm not really sure what made this a 5 consecutive circles. Since 00:14:058 (1) was mapped as a slider, mind making 00:17:929 also as a 1/1 slider? I think that way would form a better structure along a beginner friendly difficulty.
00:37:284 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'd like you to strongly reconsider about this mapping concept on this difficulty. This is 8 consecutive circles along a gradual spacing increase concept applied. While I believe players would be able to deal the spacing increase concept, the pressure of an 8 circle feels way too much to get considered as a beginner material for me.

Normal.
00:38:251 (3) - Check if the sliderend snaps at the appropriate spot.
00:40:186 (3) - Ai-mod says unsnap.
00:45:026 (1,2,3,4) - 00:46:961 (1,2,3,4) - Seeming from your easy and hard, I think the slider concept being curve -> linear order would assure more consistency for your mapset imo.

bor.
Why is "insane" in a lowercase? While it could fit the song's title, only this diff having such setting doesn't really feel consistent to happen.
01:11:074 - You can consider adding an object here since a beat exist in the song.

Insane.
01:03:897 (7,8) - 01:05:832 (5,6) - These were 2 1/6 objects that were the ones being spaced without an overlap. While the visual aspect support this placement nicely, since the song wasn't really much different and no other 1/6 spacing concept like this was spotted, do you mind changing these placement as an overlapped one?
Topic Starter
pishifat
SPOILER

fieryrage wrote:

surprise mod because i have 2 mod maps for february Lol.

widescreen support is on in everything but top diff fix ur shit

cs7
  • ar 6 so i can hrdt it and be #1 precision fuck osuskills
    also od 8 would probably be better for the triple stacks so people don't notelock tbh (or just slightly higher ar idk take ur pick)

    00:04:199 (1,1) - doin this at low ar is pretty stupid especially cuz its so close to each other, id say space it out more from the sliderhead but ur fucking gimmicks dont make sense worth shit to me so D is this a gimmick lol
    idk how ar makes standard rhythms hard to read so g

    00:13:574 (2) - this should prob have more repeats and be 1/12 or smth to fit with the 1/6 garbage 1/12d
    00:21:558 (4,1) - pretty dramatic spacing change here compared to the rest of the song thus far, reduce this a bit maybe? idk caught me off guard playtesting it a bit and was hard to hit so thatsthepointtho new section in new quadrant
    00:41:155 (1,2) - i wouldn't stack cuz u do the same thing 00:42:606 (1,2) - here with different rhythm rhythms are so not dense tho how misread
    00:49:139 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - budget hollow wings
    00:58:574 (1,2) - stack follows different rhythm than 00:50:832 (1,2) - this one, i get the rhythm is different but with the ar so low i was expecting it to be 1/2 again
    01:14:542 (2) - 1/12 here too Lol (if not just make this 1/8 like the other ones tho)
    01:23:251 (1) - same as 00:13:574 (2) - for main slider, also i'd make this end on a circle instead of a slider repeat, lot more emphasis on it than the whatever the fuck piano release onto final strong sound is the new cool
    also 1/12'd all the things
bor: 00:12:526 (1) - this rhythms pretty weird and is exasperated by low ar so id space 00:12:848 (1) - this out more from the sliderend
00:44:058 (2) - also would nc this and 01:00:510 (1,2) - pretty weird stack, i get the reasoning for it but the spacing from 01:00:026 (7,8,1) - makes it feel like its gonna be another jump if that makes literally any sense whatsoever, another fix would be stacking 7 and 8 but then u miss clap emphasis so idk

ok

Sonnyc wrote:

Easy.
00:16:477 (3,4,5,1,2) - I'm not really sure what made this a 5 consecutive circles. Since 00:14:058 (1) was mapped as a slider, mind making 00:17:929 also as a 1/1 slider? I think that way would form a better structure along a beginner friendly difficulty.
00:37:284 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'd like you to strongly reconsider about this mapping concept on this difficulty. This is 8 consecutive circles along a gradual spacing increase concept applied. While I believe players would be able to deal the spacing increase concept, the pressure of an 8 circle feels way too much to get considered as a beginner material for me.

Normal.
00:38:251 (3) - Check if the sliderend snaps at the appropriate spot.
00:40:186 (3) - Ai-mod says unsnap.
00:45:026 (1,2,3,4) - 00:46:961 (1,2,3,4) - Seeming from your easy and hard, I think the slider concept being curve -> linear order would assure more consistency for your mapset imo.

bor.
Why is "insane" in a lowercase? While it could fit the song's title, only this diff having such setting doesn't really feel consistent to happen.
01:11:074 - You can consider adding an object here since a beat exist in the song.

Insane.
01:03:897 (7,8) - 01:05:832 (5,6) - These were 2 1/6 objects that were the ones being spaced without an overlap. While the visual aspect support this placement nicely, since the song wasn't really much different and no other 1/6 spacing concept like this was spotted, do you mind changing these placement as an overlapped one? did all

-Tatsuo wrote:

01:23:251 (1) - can u plz make a circle at the end of this reverse slider? sounds better imo
releasing key is a cool when there's no objects immediately afterwards :( like same idea as 01:14:542 (2) -
anna apple

Sonnyc wrote:

bor.
Why is "insane" in a lowercase? While it could fit the song's title, only this diff having such setting doesn't really feel consistent to happen. Bor
01:11:074 - You can consider adding an object here since a beat exist in the song. agre
agre

Sad Cum
i really hope someone HR's this
pkhg
"Recover Decoration (リカバーデコレーション)" by Kosaki Onodera (Kana Hanazawa)
thats the weeb song used for this xd tags pl s
Syns_old_1
wow such fresh beatmap is
Syns_old_1

Jmannorway wrote:

i really hope someone HR's this
pixel clicker
Topic Starter
pishifat
added tags and hitsounds!!
Voxnola
bor linked me here, did someone say hitsounds?
BitCritterSpyro
Lol, I see you're going old-school with the gameplay design and the CS XD
Weriko
here is weriboo with some bad mod kek

insane

00:12:122 (1,2,1,2) - i think this might be a bit confusing, specially because AR7. Maybe you can change it a bit?

ok no i dont like hard to read low ar maps >:C




AND EVERY SINGLE DIFF IS PERFECT!!!! WHY DO YOU ASK NOOBS TO MOD PISHI MEPS WHYYYY :c

since mod shitte take free star ty
DeletedUser_423548
From Queue


  • [General]
  1. Add tag bor
  2. Why are you using soft Custom 1?

  • [Easy]
  1. 00:33:413 (3,4,5) - Easy ls Distance be within 1.2
  2. 00:38:251 (3,4) - ^
  3. 00:44:300 - Let's delete unnecessary Inherited Points

  • [Hard]
  1. 00:50:832 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Why is the way sound is taken differently?

  • [bor's Insane]
  1. 00:38:251 (5) - Add NC

  • [Insane]
  1. 00:27:606 - ~00:27:606 - The arrangement is concentrated on the bottom of the screen
  2. 00:51:074 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Same as Hrad
Good luck!
DeletedUser_423548
I double commented.

It is a mistake. :o
anna apple

Yasaija 714 wrote:

From Queue

  • [General]
  1. Add tag bor B O R
  2. Why are you using soft Custom 1?

  • [bor's Insane]
  1. 00:38:251 (5) - Add NC
this is ok with me
i don't need to send new thingy rite? XD
Izzz
From that queue.

GENREAL;;

You can add 'presents WELCOME NEW GALAXY' to the tags since this shows up on the album called 'android52 presents WELCOME NEW GALAXY'

EASY

00:28:574 (2) - Maybe ctrl+h? Not a big fan of how it looks now I guess but there isn't really anything wrong w/ it

00:41:155 (1) - Blanket this better?? Looks off rn.

Hard

00:20:348 (2) - Since you're kinda mapping to the vocals through this part, why not make this a 1/3 slider? Since the vocals p clearly snap to the 1/3 here.

00:40:187 (4,5,6,7) - Maybe ctrl+g,h,j this so it looks like this because otherwise it may look like 5 is the next note if you aren't focusing.

insane

I'm in CS7 AR7 heaven
Topic Starter
pishifat
SPOILER

Weriko wrote:

here is weriboo with some bad mod kek

insane

00:12:122 (1,2,1,2) - i think this might be a bit confusing, specially because AR7. Maybe you can change it a bit?

ok no i dont like hard to read low ar maps >:C o k




AND EVERY SINGLE DIFF IS PERFECT!!!! WHY DO YOU ASK NOOBS TO MOD PISHI MEPS WHYYYY :c

since mod shitte take free star ty

Yasaija 714 wrote:

From Queue


  • [General]
  1. Add tag bor yes yes
  2. Why are you using soft Custom 1? must have set it before i added hitsounds lol

  • [Easy]
  1. 00:33:413 (3,4,5) - Easy ls Distance be within 1.2
  2. 00:38:251 (3,4) - ^ perfect distance snap isn't a requirement when spacing is still easy to interpret :(
  3. 00:44:300 - Let's delete unnecessary Inherited Points sur e

  • [Hard]
  1. 00:50:832 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Why is the way sound is taken differently? vocals are on 1/1 for the first combo, then 1/2 for the second right

  • [bor's Insane]
  1. 00:38:251 (5) - Add NC a

  • [Insane]
  1. 00:27:606 - ~00:27:606 - The arrangement is concentrated on the bottom of the screen but that's the point :( song got quieter so placements are compact
  2. 00:51:074 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Same as Hrad
Good luck!

Joezapy wrote:

From that queue.

GENREAL;;

You can add 'presents WELCOME NEW GALAXY' to the tags since this shows up on the album called 'android52 presents WELCOME NEW GALAXY' ok

EASY

00:28:574 (2) - Maybe ctrl+h? Not a big fan of how it looks now I guess but there isn't really anything wrong w/ it i dont get what ctrlh does here :(

00:41:155 (1) - Blanket this better?? Looks off rn. tried

Hard

00:20:348 (2) - Since you're kinda mapping to the vocals through this part, why not make this a 1/3 slider? Since the vocals p clearly snap to the 1/3 here. would ratehr save the obscure rhythm for 00:20:832 (1) - so it standsout more

00:40:187 (4,5,6,7) - Maybe ctrl+g,h,j this so it looks like this because otherwise it may look like 5 is the next note if you aren't focusing.

insane


thanks guys!!
I'm in CS7 AR7 heaven
Rad-
00:46:961 - ''It goes it goes it goes it goes''

GUILLOTIIIIIIIIIINNNEEE

Also just wanna point out that thank you for making a cs7 map that doesnt have AR+8, as it doesnt really fit for tiny circles imo
Plaudible
i swear i've been listening to this on loop for so many days now this song is amazing, thanks for sharing it *o*

btw you should get rid of countdown
polka


[General:]
[Easy:]
  • That's some controversial slider velocity you got going on there. B)
    00:15:510 (2) - why not put a circle here, then a 1/1 slider on the next beat, and then delete the circle the new 1/1 slider would overlap? That way the downbeat remains clickable and you can still capture the vocals.
    [list:1337]00:23:251 (2) - If you do that, don't change it here, because it works better here
00:50:832 (3,4) - I like circles here better.
01:15:993 - The song is like a minute and a half why on earth did you copy paste lmao[Normal:]
  • 01:00:510 (6) - This would do better as a half slider to capture that last drum and help build up to that burst in the music better.
    01:04:380 (1,2,3) - Kinda shitty flow here. Maybe you could change the shape of (3) so it flows better with the direction (1) and (2) send you in? Perhaps more downward.
    [list:1337]01:07:284 (3) - ^ bop
01:20:832 (3) - Goes through hp bar. Not sure if you care or not but it kinda does take away from the quality of the map.
01:15:993 - Srsly this copy pasta is bland as fuck no matter how much cheese you top it with[Hard:]
  • 00:13:574 - Theres a lot of volume lines here that really aren't making an audible difference. Would be better without them imo
    00:20:832 (3) - Is more readable for your target audience
    00:26:558 - You're skipping a lot of drums here which you mapped before. Not a very good idea in terms of consistency.
    00:38:251 (4,5,6) - Wanna scoot these down a bit? They're really uncomfy all the way up there.
    00:46:961 - These are two very different noises and I feel you couldve mapped them with different patterns. Starting here, I think it would sound nice to do 1/2 repeat sliders followed by a circle.
    [list:1337]00:54:703 (1) - ^
01:07:284 (3) - Why not move this to the left a bit so (2) can flow into it better?
01:14:542 - Whatre these green lines up to
  • 01:23:332 - ^
01:20:832 (3,4) - No stack here?[Afteword:]
  • Those circle curve sliders are kinda unattractive but I suppose it's all up to style.
    Rootin' for u bb
Topic Starter
pishifat
SPOILER

PolkaMocha wrote:



[General:]
[Easy:]
  • That's some controversial slider velocity you got going on there. B)
    00:15:510 (2) - why not put a circle here, then a 1/1 slider on the next beat, and then delete the circle the new 1/1 slider would overlap? That way the downbeat remains clickable and you can still capture the vocals.
    [list:1337]00:23:251 (2) - If you do that, don't change it here, because it works better here
they're liek the same thing tho :( better to start clicking on the vocal thingy
00:50:832 (3,4) - I like circles here better. wanted to avoid using the same rhythm as first 2 measurs
01:15:993 - The song is like a minute and a half why on earth did you copy paste lmao u dont want to see the new insane then
[Normal:]
  • 01:00:510 (6) - This would do better as a half slider to capture that last drum and help build up to that burst in the music better. 1/2 slider doesnt show stopping int he song very well
    01:04:380 (1,2,3) - Kinda shitty flow here. Maybe you could change the shape of (3) so it flows better with the direction (1) and (2) send you in? Perhaps more downward. not supposed to be super comfortable cuz the woh sound zz
    [list:1337]01:07:284 (3) - ^ bop
01:20:832 (3) - Goes through hp bar. Not sure if you care or not but it kinda does take away from the quality of the map. lwoerd
01:15:993 - Srsly this copy pasta is bland as fuck no matter how much cheese you top it with[Hard:]
  • 00:13:574 - Theres a lot of volume lines here that really aren't making an audible difference. Would be better without them imo but if they dont do anything why does it matter i dont getit
    00:20:832 (3) - Is more readable for your target audience i dunno clicking on 1/3 ticks seems more confusing than clicking only white ticks
    00:26:558 - You're skipping a lot of drums here which you mapped before. Not a very good idea in terms of consistency.consistency with what
    00:38:251 (4,5,6) - Wanna scoot these down a bit? They're really uncomfy all the way up there. did
    00:46:961 - These are two very different noises and I feel you couldve mapped them with different patterns. Starting here, I think it would sound nice to do 1/2 repeat sliders followed by a circle. visuals handle that with slidershapes already :(
    [list:1337]00:54:703 (1) - ^
01:07:284 (3) - Why not move this to the left a bit so (2) can flow into it better? same place as normal with bad flow tho
01:14:542 - Whatre these green lines up to
  • 01:23:332 - ^
01:20:832 (3,4) - No stack here? oops[Afteword:]
  • Those circle curve sliders are kinda unattractive but I suppose it's all up to style.
    Rootin' for u bb
insane is now good
polka
u should give me free kd thx ;*
Maxylan
Random Mod because fangirl of pishifat

[Insane]
00:31:719 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part is borderline unreadable, knowing you that's kind of the point but feels pretty, eh, to play
00:43:574 (2) - Do you really want to end this on a stronger sound than when you click it? Also, I feel like the song doesn't support this buzz-slider at all because it's just a held note, not a repeating one.
For example how you did it here: 00:13:574 (1,1) - 01:14:542 (2) - it's much better.
00:16:961 (3,5,1) - Why is distance so drastically different amongst these three sounds when they all are essentially just as important to emphasize?
00:50:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Pretty inconsistent with 00:58:574 (1,2,3,4) -

[I can't believe pishifat is reading my mod <3]
Also, in response to Fieryrages mod, you said

pishifat wrote:

idk how ar makes standard rhythms hard to read so g
This may be obvious but if you've never heard the song before, and it's your first time playing a map, without thinking you look towards the approach circles and slider sizes for reading the rhythm. Majority of maps that are 4 stars use ar8 or above almost like an unwritten rule and so players are used to it, place them on a map they've never played before with that low of an AR and to add insult to injury, low CS, you can't be surprised why people find it hard to read haha

I wont be surprised if what I've said has already been said before or if it's downright obvious to you, but hope it helped a little!
Natsu
Insane

  1. 00:43:574 (2) - add a NC, to keep 00:41:155 (1,1,1) - separated from it, also here 01:14:542 (2) - , just like u did with 01:23:251 (1) -
  2. 00:45:026 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - oh this was really cool to play
  3. 00:50:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - vs 00:58:574 (1,2,3,4) - any special reason to have the rhythm being inconsistent?
  4. 01:07:284 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - the cursor movement here was super awkward to play, really uncomfortable atleast for me
bor

  1. 00:13:251 (1,2) - I don't understand your ncs, according to the music makes more sense to NC 2 instead of 1, just as pishifat did.
Normal

  1. 01:10:187 (3) - I feels that having this as circle kills the emphasis of 01:10:429 (4,5) - , there are other rhythm options that you can use imo
solid set, just call me back when bubbled
anna apple

Natsu wrote:

bor

  1. 00:13:251 (1,2) - I don't understand your ncs, according to the music makes more sense to NC 2 instead of 1, just as pishifat did.

00:12:122 (1,1,1) - because I nc spam like this, its kind of like I nc per instrument and I don't really see a difference of instruments between 00:13:251 (1,2) -
anna apple

Maxylan wrote:

This may be obvious but if you've never heard the song before, and it's your first time playing a map, without thinking you look towards the approach circles and slider sizes for reading the rhythm. Majority of maps that are 4 stars use ar8 or above almost like an unwritten rule and so players are used to it, place them on a map they've never played before with that low of an AR and to add insult to injury, low CS, you can't be surprised why people find it hard to read haha
actually small cs facilitates the player to be more cautious when reading because they already have to be cautious when aiming. Objects being closer together aligns their approach circles more making it easier to read. Lower AR gives more time for players to adjust to rhythm changes etc. Also most of the weird rhythms are either represented with sliders or stacks in this making it even easier to read overall.

not sure why someone would fine this hard to read lul
Topic Starter
pishifat
SPOILER

Maxylan wrote:

[Insane]
00:31:719 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part is borderline unreadable, knowing you that's kind of the point but feels pretty, eh, to play not sure how it's different from anything else here:(
00:43:574 (2) - Do you really want to end this on a stronger sound than when you click it? Also, I feel like the song doesn't support this buzz-slider at all because it's just a held note, not a repeating one. there's a snare drum roll, so i'd consider that deserving of a buzz thingy. also 00:44:300 (1) - seems more important than tail of 2, so i'd rather make it stand out more by not clicking before it
For example how you did it here: 00:13:574 (1,1) - 01:14:542 (2) - it's much better.
00:16:961 (3,5,1) - Why is distance so drastically different amongst these three sounds when they all are essentially just as important to emphasize? lowered 5
00:50:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Pretty inconsistent with 00:58:574 (1,2,3,4) - first one has kicks/snares and second doesnt, so tehy're using different rhythms

Natsu wrote:

Insane

  1. 00:43:574 (2) - add a NC, to keep 00:41:155 (1,1,1) - separated from it, also here 01:14:542 (2) - , just like u did with 01:23:251 (1) - did
  2. 00:45:026 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - oh this was really cool to play !!
  3. 00:50:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - vs 00:58:574 (1,2,3,4) - any special reason to have the rhythm being inconsistent? first one has kicks/snares and second doesnt, so tehy're using different rhythms
  4. 01:07:284 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - the cursor movement here was super awkward to play, really uncomfortable atleast for me
moved 3 and 4 so things are more circular

bor

  1. 00:13:251 (1,2) - I don't understand your ncs, according to the music makes more sense to NC 2 instead of 1, just as pishifat did.
Normal

  1. 01:10:187 (3) - I feels that having this as circle kills the emphasis of 01:10:429 (4,5) - , there are other rhythm options that you can use imo changed
solid set, just call me back when bubbled
thanks4mod
peaceGiant
Some suggestions for the insane,
00:43:574 (1) - I find this intuitive to play, i would just consider lowering it to 40%, kinda too loud now
01:07:929 (3,4,5,1) - This movement is a bit straining, I don't think the song suggests for that kind of movement, and i think that is done for the sake of the pattern, Maybe something like this?

00:50:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ♥♥♥ love this

bor
00:10:106 (9) - If i understand you concept correctly, this should be removed (refer to 00:06:235 - 00:08:171 -) where you didn't have a circle
01:14:542 - This deserves a slider imo (01:23:251 (6) - maybe something like this? so the random slider has a cousin)

Other diffs are well made, Good luck with the mapset, really fun to play! you haev my stars
anna apple

peaceGiant wrote:

bor
00:10:106 (9) - If i understand you concept correctly, this should be removed (refer to 00:06:235 - 00:08:171 -) where you didn't have a circle aaa
01:14:542 - This deserves a slider imo (01:23:251 (6) - maybe something like this? so the random slider has a cousin)naw the latter one has support from the instruments I was mapping so keeping this one unmapped is fitting cuz it doesn't have that support
also made some other edits that bothered me

https://bor.s-ul.eu/LvJAZaM5.osu
Plaudible
henlo i am here sorry for slow

degeneral
make diff name for borborygamos be _83's insane now, then put bor in tags meby?
would u consider adding a silenced sliderslide? the super swanky low part feels kinda weird having all the slide sounds on
01:00:026 - drum hitwhistle here would be cute, even if rhythm focuses on the drums more adding the hitsound would represent vocals nicely imo
01:08:251 - only top diff has a drum hitwhistle here, maybe delet on top diff. i also feel like the clap is a bit too strong here, kinda too loud for how quiet the song gets

copypasted endings smh reported

easy
01:00:026 (4,5) - slider here maybe? 01:00:510 (5) - is quite a lot weaker in terms of emphasis so i feel like putting it on a sliderend would make the melody/vocals reappearing in next kiai feel stronger

normal
00:33:413 (1) - the buildup in this section feels really weak as compared to how you developed this section in the easy/hard in terms of rhythm/spacing. i think you could do something nifty like that here too, even if it's something as simple as just adding a circle at 00:40:913
01:05:106 (2,2) - these feel like you could put them on 01:06:074 - and 01:08:010 - respectively, might be better for vocals. would have to add circles at 01:08:010 - and 01:04:139 - too tho

hard
00:05:832 (4,5) - feel like you could ctrl+g this rhythm tbh

borborygamos underscore eighty-three

stack leniency 2? :(
cool diff, only mild complaint i have is that you dont do anything with spacing in these repetitions: 00:46:961 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - even though you do before, could be cool to do something like that here
01:01:397 (4,5) - , 01:08:171 (9,1) - , 01:11:074 (5,6,7) - spacing at these felt a bit uncomfortable, these felt a bit harder to interpret for rhythm based on spacing, would suggest nerfing a bit

insane
stack leniency 2? :(
00:09:622 (6,7,8,1) - imo using a rhythm like 00:07:687 (6,7,8) - would be cuter, melody feels downplayed compared to other rhythms
cutest diff of 2017 for cutest song of 2017

im only bubbling this if u mutual me so i can brag that i have pishi hearted ok thx <3 call me back
Topic Starter
pishifat
SPOILER

peaceGiant wrote:

Some suggestions for the insane,
00:43:574 (1) - I find this intuitive to play, i would just consider lowering it to 40%, kinda too loud now
01:07:929 (3,4,5,1) - This movement is a bit straining, I don't think the song suggests for that kind of movement, and i think that is done for the sake of the pattern, Maybe something like this? placing 5 like that breaks the type of object placemnet im doing (selecting 01:00:993 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - should show what i mean)

00:50:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ♥♥♥ love this

bor
00:10:106 (9) - If i understand you concept correctly, this should be removed (refer to 00:06:235 - 00:08:171 -) where you didn't have a circle
01:14:542 - This deserves a slider imo (01:23:251 (6) - maybe something like this? so the random slider has a cousin)

Other diffs are well made, Good luck with the mapset, really fun to play! you haev my stars

Plaudible wrote:

henlo i am here sorry for slow

degeneral
make diff name for borborygamos be _83's insane now, then put bor in tags meby? will see what name he prefers
would u consider adding a silenced sliderslide? the super swanky low part feels kinda weird having all the slide sounds on
01:00:026 - drum hitwhistle here would be cute, even if rhythm focuses on the drums more adding the hitsound would represent vocals nicely imo
01:08:251 - only top diff has a drum hitwhistle here, maybe delet on top diff. i also feel like the clap is a bit too strong here, kinda too loud for how quiet the song gets

copypasted endings smh reported

easy
01:00:026 (4,5) - slider here maybe? 01:00:510 (5) - is quite a lot weaker in terms of emphasis so i feel like putting it on a sliderend would make the melody/vocals reappearing in next kiai feel stronger

normal
00:33:413 (1) - the buildup in this section feels really weak as compared to how you developed this section in the easy/hard in terms of rhythm/spacing. i think you could do something nifty like that here too, even if it's something as simple as just adding a circle at 00:40:913
01:05:106 (2,2) - these feel like you could put them on 01:06:074 - and 01:08:010 - respectively, might be better for vocals. would have to add circles at 01:08:010 - and 01:04:139 - too tho

hard
00:05:832 (4,5) - feel like you could ctrl+g this rhythm tbh prefer to click on the melody things only

borborygamos underscore eighty-three

stack leniency 2? :(
cool diff, only mild complaint i have is that you dont do anything with spacing in these repetitions: 00:46:961 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - even though you do before, could be cool to do something like that here
01:01:397 (4,5) - , 01:08:171 (9,1) - , 01:11:074 (5,6,7) - spacing at these felt a bit uncomfortable, these felt a bit harder to interpret for rhythm based on spacing, would suggest nerfing a bit

insane
stack leniency 2? :( patternsbreakzzz
00:09:622 (6,7,8,1) - imo using a rhythm like 00:07:687 (6,7,8) - would be cuter, melody feels downplayed compared to other rhythms
cutest diff of 2017 for cutest song of 2017

im only bubbling this if u mutual me so i can brag that i have pishi hearted ok thx <3 call me back

fixed the stuff without comments ty!!!
anna apple

Plaudible wrote:

degeneral
make diff name for borborygamos be _83's insane now, then put bor in tags meby? I made this as bor so should be bor imo
copypasted endings smh reported hahahaha


borborygamos underscore eighty-three

stack leniency 2? :( bor and _83 are different mappers don't ask me to explain this one XD
cool diff, only mild complaint i have is that you dont do anything with spacing in these repetitions: 00:46:961 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - even though you do before, could be cool to do something like that here I thought that a distinction between the sounds of 00:45:026 - and 00:46:961 - were best shown by this kind of difference, Also didn't want to take the spacing to be too high :(
01:01:397 (4,5) - , 01:08:171 (9,1) - , 01:11:074 (5,6,7) - spacing at these felt a bit uncomfortable, these felt a bit harder to interpret for rhythm based on spacing, would suggest nerfing a bit you need to explain this one more to me I don't know if I understand what you mean
Plaudible
super anime bubble groove 3d world

@bor nbd, i meant that some of the 2/6 gaps might feel like it's 1/2, but yeah its fine given how you incorporate em throughout the map, i just modded this at 3 in the morning and was tired out of my mind

good luckies! cmon natsu
Nao Tomori
bor's insane
Natsu
o
Shmiklak
ios is better tbh
Monstrata
bor isn't in tags?
Topic Starter
pishifat
now it is
mmatt
Topic Starter
pishifat
mmatt

pishifat wrote:

oh. changed it to https://baq5.bandcamp.com/track/super-a ... e-3d-world

thanks dad
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