Easy: General: Could use some more hitsounds, try playing with some hit-normal patterns or something with some soft whistles
00:08:776 (5,6) - This rhytmn sounds/plays weird. Maybe try something like this (move the spinner up to the white tick too):
00:10:285 (1) - Why not silence this spinner like in [H2O] diff?
[H2O] Beginning feels rather empty, could use some hitsounds. Also, I think the map is a bit overmapped, IMO. Maybe follow the vocals a bit more rather than so much 1/2 spam? Try to use some different rhythms at different parts. Its fine as is right now, but my suggestion would to try to remap some parts with different rhythm and adding some hitsounds
Other diffs look okay though ^^' good luck! Nice song
TS@Taiko Beatmap Rescue Team Taiko BG request from KanaRin. Original BG is not in correct size & format. Please change the original BG with the link (cropped and beautified by me) (BG source: http://konachan.com/post/show/3541) link: http://puu.sh/2rxQ Please add the TaikoBG made by me (please read the instructions in my signature) link: http://puu.sh/2rxR
your BG is a very odd size, and it really makes it have ugly black lines when playing, we Really advise to have a BG in a 4:3 ratio which is 800x600 or 1024x768
Easy 00:06:095 (3) - i would advise a new combo here to help it follow the song 00:30:229 (5) - i would advise a new combo again to help split the vocals up 00:40:955 (5) - same 00:48:329 (2) - this note plays really bad because it goes against the rhythm of the song, i would REALLY advise to unstack this and move the timing back to 00:48:162 00:51:011 (1) - same for this, move back to 00:50:843 00:54:363 (5) - maybe a new combo here again to help break it up, the long combos feel extremely odd in this map 01:05:089 (3,4) - the timing here again goes against the map, also if you go forward to 01:15:648 at this point you have followed the vocals properly, this makes the first one feel even more odd by not following the vocals, i really do advise to make the 01:05:089 part follow the vocals as well
i understand that you have most likely made it go against the rhythm to try and keep on the white ticks and keep it easy, but really it does make the map harder because the brain auto wants to follow the songs beat, thats why i am really advising to make this follow the rhythm more
Andrea's Normal 00:32:240 (2,3) - i have to say the timing pattern at this point did not really feel good, im not sure though i just felt that the 1/2 was not called for 00:44:977 - pretty pointless break, i say remove ;p 5item's Nisemusume 01:11:625 (2) - maybe replace this slider with one note? you will notice how much better it flows with the song H2O looks great
5item's Nisemusume 01:11:625 (2) - maybe replace this slider with one note? you will notice how much better it flows with the song
ok although doesn't follow your advice completely but you said right xD so change to this by my thought >< it should be better than before I think :3 Sorry and thanks for mod ></