Sakakibara Yui - Katayoku no Ikaros (TV Size)

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lolcubes
Hey there Rucker!
Some modding action.

[General]:
  1. Your backgrounds are .png and they are too large (about 2MB each). You should convert them into .jpg to save some space (if you could reduce your folder size by 3.5MB without losing anything, why not?).
    edit: Well I had some extra time so I did it for you. Here you go.
  2. Source: Afaik, the correct japanese name is H2O ~FOOTPRINTS IN THE SAND~. Notice the "~" instead of "-". Maybe double check this with someone and change?


[H2O]:
  1. 00:09:949 (6) - Just a suggestion: Maybe place it after the slider instead of stacking it? Looks better.
  2. 00:57:044 (10) - Finish? It's in the music as well. (You also used it in the Easy diff at this spot)
  3. 01:02:407 (7) - Make this one a new combo instead of 01:02:743 (1). Makes more sense because it starts the kiai, there is a change in the music and you don't have any patterns with odd spacing.


[5item's Nisemusume]:
  1. Kiai is not required if it's a guest diff, but why not add it like it is in other diffs? Looks good with it.
  2. 00:57:380 (1) - Start this spinner at 00:57:212 instead? Like it is now, it kinda feels odd if you listen to the voice, like there is a hole before you start spinning.
  3. 01:00:061 (1) - Same thing. Start it at 00:59:894?


[Andrea's Normal]:
  1. 00:36:765 (2) - This note is terribly misleading because it's 3/2 after the slider, where you were stacking 1/2's before. If possible you should unstack it.


[Easy]:
  1. Difficulty settings: You have everything at 0. That is a terrible idea. You can go afk for the first part before the break and still be barely alive. I know it's Easy we're talking about, but this is just ridiculous hehe. Try these settings: HPD 2, AR3, OD2. It's still easy like it's supposed to be, and the higher AR fits the slider speed much better.
  2. 00:06:095 (1,2,3,4) - You have inconsistent spacing in this combo. Generally in lowest diffs, you should be using same distance snap at all times if you can, atleast in the same combos. First 2 sliders are 1.05x apart while others are ~0.8x. Just make them the same.
  3. 00:46:653 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pretty much the same thing. Some stuff is using different spacing which could confuse the newbies.


Yeah, a rather short mod. I didn't want to be nazi and do all the spacings, but you should check out your Easy diff once more. Some spacings are still inconsistent but nothing terrible (+-0.1x at times, but that's not that critical).
Pretty solid mapset as well. Star and good luck. :D
Andrea

lolcubes wrote:

[Andrea's Normal]:
  1. 00:36:765 (2) - This note is terribly misleading because it's 3/2 after the slider, where you were stacking 1/2's before. If possible you should unstack it.
Fixed.
Thank you~
Topic Starter
Rucker

lolcubes wrote:

[General]:
  1. Your backgrounds are .png and they are too large (about 2MB each). You should convert them into .jpg to save some space (if you could reduce your folder size by 3.5MB without losing anything, why not?).
    edit: Well I had some extra time so I did it for you. Here you go.
  2. Source: Afaik, the correct japanese name is H2O ~FOOTPRINTS IN THE SAND~. Notice the "~" instead of "-". Maybe double check this with someone and change?

Fixed.

[H2O]:
  1. 00:09:949 (6) - Just a suggestion: Maybe place it after the slider instead of stacking it? Looks better.
    No x)
  2. 00:57:044 (10) - Finish? It's in the music as well. (You also used it in the Easy diff at this spot)
  3. 01:02:407 (7) - Make this one a new combo instead of 01:02:743 (1). Makes more sense because it starts the kiai, there is a change in the music and you don't have any patterns with odd spacing.

Fixed.

[5item's Nisemusume]:
  1. 00:57:380 (1) - Start this spinner at 00:57:212 instead? Like it is now, it kinda feels odd if you listen to the voice, like there is a hole before you start spinning.
  2. 01:00:061 (1) - Same thing. Start it at 00:59:894?

Fixed.

[Easy]:
  1. Difficulty settings: You have everything at 0. That is a terrible idea. You can go afk for the first part before the break and still be barely alive. I know it's Easy we're talking about, but this is just ridiculous hehe. Try these settings: HPD 2, AR3, OD2. It's still easy like it's supposed to be, and the higher AR fits the slider speed much better.
  2. 00:06:095 (1,2,3,4) - You have inconsistent spacing in this combo. Generally in lowest diffs, you should be using same distance snap at all times if you can, atleast in the same combos. First 2 sliders are 1.05x apart while others are ~0.8x. Just make them the same.
  3. 00:46:653 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pretty much the same thing. Some stuff is using different spacing which could confuse the newbies.

I did my best to fixed x_X
Thanks your mod!
Gaba yvis
Really good map, keep on. :)

Also, footsprints on the sand <3
xierbaliti
-H2O-
KIAI前音效偏少 再适当加一些whistle会更好 或许需要1个custom clap?
mapset还好

-Andrea's-
00:43:469 (6) - a bit hard to read. how about remove a repeat and add a circle at 00:43:972? or add a circle at 00:43:469 and start the slider at 00:43:637?
00:56:542 (6) - ^remove a repeat and start the spinner at 00:57:044?

:3
Andrea

xierbaliti wrote:

-Andrea's-
00:43:469 (6) - a bit hard to read. how about remove a repeat and add a circle at 00:43:972? or add a circle at 00:43:469 and start the slider at 00:43:637? Fixed.
00:56:542 (6) - ^remove a repeat and start the spinner at 00:57:044? Also fixed but in a different way than your suggestion.
Thanks for modding :)
Topic Starter
Rucker
我覺得前面還是舊保持原樣吧
中段加了一些whistle,custom clap還是算了xD

Thx mod ! :)
xierbaliti

Rucker wrote:

我覺得前面還是舊保持原樣吧
中段加了一些whistle,custom clap還是算了xD

Thx mod ! :)
no problem! and here is your bubble :3
jericho2442
Easy
01:05:089 (3) - new combo to follow your combo pattern
01:15:648 (3) - same reason

also fixed a small combo on andrea's diff

well only tiny stuff, so i'll rank after these fixes sooo yea
Andrea
Here's the tiny fix~

My message is too short.
Topic Starter
Rucker
> jericho2442
thx, fixed ! :)
Raging Bull
Last star before rank =3=
jericho2442
oook rechecked everything and it all looks fine now,

sooooooo ranked, enjoy your heart 8-)
Topic Starter
Rucker
> Raging Bull
thanks your star!

> jericho2442
thank you very much! :)
Hinacle
Nice map!!

Congratulations!! :)
M A I D
Congratulation
Topic Starter
Rucker
thanks guys ! :)
Anticloud
Gratz for ranked :)
Darksonic
Sakakibara Yui ♥

Gratz Ruc ^^
IkkiMinami
congrats :):)
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