nevermind this
thanks for pointing that out man! i think of it an embarrassing mistakeChromoxx wrote:
01:07:594 - you're missing very strong kicks here which is easily noticable because there aren't really any other prominent sounds (goes for the whole part)
01:10:306 - density picks up here even though there isn't any noticable change in the music
i revamp some repetitive song part..... (AGAIN T_T)Chromoxx wrote:
few things i noticed when asked to testplay
05:35:391 - density going down here so strongly is kinda weird cos the music gets more intense, i'd suggest just keeping up the same density as before with the higher SV
also a more general thing, the stream patterning is kinda inconsistent using many different types of streams (simple ones, complex ones, kkkdk type stuff etc.) for similar sounds which is kinda weird when playing. i'd suggest trying to go for streams that are at least a bit more similar on the surface for better allround consistency
Surono wrote:
Guardistack-
00:59:374 - ini kenapa disini? seharusnya 00:59:713 - biar sama kek part pertamanya. ga perlu variasi kalau cuman ngulang 2 kali loopnya apa lagi sampe ngubah struktur demi variasi ga kepikiran pindah... padahal udah jeli bgt...
01:05:899 - teken kat biar ga monotone notesnya done
01:36:747 - ~ 01:58:103 - part lu yg bagian sini kliatannya ga nerapin konsistensi struktur tapi okelah, rapi menurut gw. perlukah saya revamp lagi untuk part ini?
kiai pertama lu rapiin, soalnya da beberapa yg rada ngawur densitynya. bagian kddkddk gitulah warnanya. tapi benah2in semua aja biar ga kliatan randomness. done.... for now... di press agak repetitive jadinya cuma di kasih variasi
up to you, tapi lebih baik dirapiin strukturnya tapi mnurutku dah kliatan rapi walau strukturnya beda-beda.Guardistack- wrote:
01:36:747 - ~ 01:58:103 - part lu yg bagian sini kliatannya ga nerapin konsistensi struktur tapi okelah, rapi menurut gw. perlukah saya revamp lagi untuk part ini?
Surono wrote:
steven
00:27:933 (35,36,37,38,39) - kdkkd lebih alus, ga ada sounds yg noticeable buat jadi kdkdk dan itu cuma sekedar flow accepted
00:28:526 (41,43) - drum yg noticeable, kat ini doang biar keteken. 00:28:442 - jadi ini di don biar ga berlbihan accepted
00:35:899 - dari sini struktur kok xxx x x x xxx? kiri2nya aja xxx x x xxx. 00:36:831 - pindah ke 00:36:662 - sudah sy pindah, sekalian triplet depannya saya bikin mirip kyk sebelumnya biar konsisten
01:31:916 - tuker ke 01:32:425 - , 01:33:357 - ke 01:33:526 - biar konsisten di stream ini awalnya mau dibikin agak variasi sih, tapi kayak gini pun kayaknya ga apa2
04:18:103 - sampe 04:20:137 - strukturnya aneh, padhal similar soundsnya jelas2 begitu tapi kok dibuat gini? mending samain kek dari 04:28:950 - accepted
04:33:865 - geser ke tick biru kanan 04:33:950 - , teken drumnya biar ga kebuang. nada nada masih bisa jadi pengecualian, tapi drum kalau di ignore itu sayang banget dan berasa kek undermapped suaranya lebih kenceng drpd drum nya sih menurut saya, kalo dibikin triplet ddd gimana?
05:15:984 - kat biar ga monotone, sekalian ngikut flow nada utama kdkdkdkdk lebih kedengeran natural, mending dibiarin supaya suara musiknya lebih ke emphasis soalnya di bagian depan2nya gak monoton kok patternnya
05:26:831 - ya sama kek sebelumnya ^
Re: Lebay telah diperbaiki!Surono wrote:
shirai-
02:00:984 - sampe 02:01:492 - hadeh.. nada penting malah dibuat gini. strukturnya jadiin x xxxxx, contoh k dkddk/dkdkd/kdkdk
02:04:374 - masih ada beat, taruh don
02:12:086 - di isi biar sama kek poin pertama
02:15:560 - hapus biar konsisten, sebelumnya aja 2plet
cieg setengahnya kiai, terinspiritid nax tatzucieg ya xixixiixixixixi xd
03:58:442 - kat, ccd dkd bkin canggung penekanan suara penting.
04:01:323 - pindah 04:01:408 -
04:03:865 - kek sebelumnya, di kat
04:09:289 - kat, 04:09:882 - don
04:12:170 - ke 04:12:255 -
05:08:865 - pasang don biar sama kek ddkkd sebelumnya 05:07:509 -
05:59:459 - ga ada suara....
06:00:814 - yg ini boleh keknya, masih ada flow lewat
even einstein couldnt read it rightSurono wrote:
di gw ga kepotong masnya, karna emang pengen pake yg lebar segini juga wsnya dah aktif dan itu dah di tes pake perbandingan ss di game sama si mapper tapi tergantung dianya aja mau gimana dan kalau ada green line yang ga kepake sbnernya ga ngefek buat gameplay kecuali kalau berantakan ada banyak ya kudu di point out, ty dah deep check. mending jadi bn situ xd oh ya yang sv gitu ga usah main sindir-sindir nyebut nama gituan lah, gw juga sebagai modder ga mungkin bagus tapi gw masih bisa judge sama punya sikit cukup knowledge entah dari arahan grup ini atau pengalaman selama ini. tapi gw jujur cuman noob doang, gw kan bukan super atau expert modder atau apalah.. cuma ada titel nominatornya, bisanya ngenominasi map. kalau pengen orang kek gw kudu improve ya balik aja ke jaman nama ungu sama merah, ungu yang kerja terus merah yang nentuin. tapi buat sekarang ampun mastah otw sungkem mode, gw bakal ngati-ngati kedepannya.
poke ingame if you done with nishi things
sv part nya nanti dipertimbangkan lagi//inb4 pake 1.00 tetap cocokNishizumi wrote:
yo, just came here to improve this a bit (no kds)
- wtf da bg lonjong amat, mending ori size imo. jadi aneh diliatnya. kepala yg cewe blonde juga kepotong pula.
- 01:06:916 - unused greenline.
- 01:23:187 - ^
- 01:34:035 - inconsistent sv changes. yg pertama 1.4x yg ini 1.5x. tapi menurut gw lebih bagus 1.4x cepetnya masih bisa dinikmatin. i mean cepetnya ga ngagetin, relaxed and fun
- 01:58:442 - mending ini jadiin slow part aja, tambahin slow sv 0.85x
- 02:20:137 - kalo apply atas, ini balik jadi normal sv lagi
- 03:31:662 - sv changesnya ancur amat tbh, how come bn leaves this issue x_x mending coba sv ini, much smoother :
- 03:31:492 - 0.88x
- 03:31:662 - 0.90x
- 03:31:747 - 0.92x
- 03:31:831 - 0.94x
- 03:32:001 - 1.00x- 03:53:865 - sama kaya 01:34:035
- 05:33:865 - menurut gw ini jgn dikasih sv up, ga terlalu menekan ke lagunya. lebih baik mulai dari stream kkddkkD tambahin per 0.01x jadi 1.01x sampe 1.07x trus tambahin greenline 1.10x di 05:35:476
- 06:03:865 - unused greenline.
because its native language duud xd unless beliau itu orang indonesia.. albert entong keksShirai- wrote:
even einstein couldnt read it right
gara2 map gw jadi "sedikit" berantem ..... tapi semua di fix biar lebih nyamanNishizumi wrote:
yo, just came here to improve this a bit (no kds)
- wtf da bg lonjong amat, mending ori size imo. jadi aneh diliatnya. kepala yg cewe blonde juga kepotong pula.
- 01:06:916 - unused greenline.
- 01:23:187 - ^
- 01:34:035 - inconsistent sv changes. yg pertama 1.4x yg ini 1.5x. tapi menurut gw lebih bagus 1.4x cepetnya masih bisa dinikmatin. i mean cepetnya ga ngagetin, relaxed and fun
- 01:58:442 - mending ini jadiin slow part aja, tambahin slow sv 0.85x
- 02:20:137 - kalo apply atas, ini balik jadi normal sv lagi
- 03:31:662 - sv changesnya ancur amat tbh, how come bn leaves this issue x_x mending coba sv ini, much smoother :
- 03:31:492 - 0.88x
- 03:31:662 - 0.90x
- 03:31:747 - 0.92x
- 03:31:831 - 0.94x
- 03:32:001 - 1.00x- 03:53:865 - sama kaya 01:34:035
- 05:33:865 - menurut gw ini jgn dikasih sv up, ga terlalu menekan ke lagunya. lebih baik mulai dari stream kkddkkD tambahin per 0.01x jadi 1.01x sampe 1.07x trus tambahin greenline 1.10x di 05:35:476
- 06:03:865 - unused greenline.
well... about this... i know we already talk about it like around 2-3 months ago...Niko-nyan wrote:
04:50:645 - remove finisher, there is no drum sound here
05:39:459 - kkdkddkdkkd k d k ato kkdkddkdkkd kkd k
05:42:848 - dkkkd
05:43:272 - ; 05:43:442 - remove note
05:45:730 - kkk ?
05:46:153 - remove, a little awkward but can be usefull to nerf a little
05:46:238 - this long stream is too hard to nerf need a little help :'(
05:51:577 - remove
05:54:204 - prefer like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8355692 with 1/1 finishers
a little bit nerf will be good tho
no kds
edit : for steven1's part nerf
05:16:153 - ; 05:16:323 - remove
05:27:001 - ; 05:27:170 - remove
for steven1's part nerf, it has a good rest 1/2 instead of overusing 1/4
Raiden wrote:
smol things
satan
01:36:238 (2,3,4) - stuff like those probably deserve finishers for the potent crashes
03:55:899 (16,17,18) -
00:45:221 - do sv transition please no sudden 0,85x
04:18:103 - too
ye
hmm maybe i can change if this is really necessary... also about the refrence, i dont have any... might to help it so i can put it?IamKwaN wrote:
Why is the artist dBu instead of dBu music?
http://www.dobuusagi.com/dBu21st/
http://www.dobuusagi.com/
https://soundcloud.com/dobuusagi/nightmare-canon
also, please also provide reference for the romanised title, if there's any, thanks!
BN are cant do Disqualification :joy:Guardistack- wrote:
poke surono and raiden to break it maybe if this is really needed to break it