Jaye wrote:
Yo, the NM request from my queue.[General]
- d = don & k = kat, Caps on either for a Finisher.
- Apologies in advance to any k nitpicks (we need more k's in maps tbh).
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- 01:01:323 (88) - Not necessary, but I'd recommend changing this to a d just to emphasise the next note. I prefer k because both on the high pitch
- 01:37:764 (9,20) - Change to k for clapping sounds (which was done at 01:37:086 (4)). added... seems more suits
- 01:41:153 (37,38,39,40,41) - In line with my comment above, changing (37) to k would make sense but having this 5-plet in particular as kdkdk would sound unusual. I'd recommend changing to kdkkd to show the rise and fall of the main melody.YEP you right
- 02:46:238 (26,31) - Change to k to emphasise the strongest instrument.changed
- 02:58:103 (132,133,134,135,136,137,138) - Again this kddkk sort of thing feels a little awkward and unfitting, consider changing this. kkddkdk sounded good Imo.Changed
Anyway I thought the map was pretty fun, I'll shoot you some kudosu for it WOW....TYSM♥
TY.... semoga di ricek lagi sama om nishiNishizumi wrote:
[General]
a lot of unused greenlines, mending delete aja yg greenlinenya ga perlu (kaya misalnya 1.00x volume 100%, tapi greenline berikutnya juga sama. itu ga perlu, harus didelete). kalopun mau bikin pembeda part, bookmarkpun cukup blame shirai- for this .... nanti gw organisir untuk ini
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decrease hp obv, marathon ngapain gede2 hpnya. jadi 4.5 aja karena ini diff yg susah dan terlebih untuk ukuran marathon. changed
00:48:865 - add d di sini ? ada suara gitar di sini added
00:49:459 - rasanya agak aneh kalo ini kosong, mending tambahin d ? added
00:50:984 - mending mulai dari sini ikutin drum dibanding melody pianonya sampe 00:52:679 - menurut gw lebih asik di drum aja Revamped (untuk sementara)
00:59:713 - sama kaya 00:48:865 changed
01:00:306 - sama kaya 00:49:459 changed
01:01:831 - sampe 01:03:526 - sama kaya 00:50:984 revamped
01:47:425 (84,85) - swap ini, (85)nya kan sama kek 01:36:747 - napa jadi kat lebih prefer d D dibanding k D
01:58:103 - add d ? ada suara di sini, disayangkan bgt kalo kosong added
02:48:442 - ganti ke k ? kontras ke (43,45) udah k
03:48:272 - sampe 03:50:814 - remove finisher di kat, annoying bgt menurut gw. musik ga terlalu emphasis tapi bakal lebih susah buat dimainin bagi gw cocok2 aja karena penanda akan stream juga
03:50:984 - mending ganti strimnya jadi lebih bervariasi dibanding kdkdkdk yg lebih susah dihit dan ngebosenin ? revamped
03:55:899 (16,17,18) - bisa diemphasis di sini Maksud?
05:52:086 - bad flows, ga masuk dgn lagunya imo. mending d lebih baik changed
05:52:764 - sama kaya di atas
05:54:374 - sampe 05:55:730 - mending ganti yg lebih simple pattern streamnya, kek misalnya kkddkkddkkddk atau kkddkdkdddkkd etc. ini agak ribet dan ngebingungin, lagian offbeat juga =.= Revamped... tapi beberapa ane modif sih...
05:56:408 - wtf this 1/6, pantesan ganjas gk pass. ga ada musik 1/6 di sono, kaenapa ini 1/6. hadeh AGAK EMPET DELETE INI SIH TAPI removed... gw lebih ngikutin itu sebagai finisher dari stream aslinya
intinya sih, mending ngikutin drumnya aja dibanding melodynya. soalnya ada yg kecampur2 pattern drum sama melody piano instrumen dll
gl om sesol, hope it helps