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Kyubey

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Kyubey 2016-11-13T20:33:50+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 12 декабря 2016 г. at 7:57:30

Artist: Triodust
Title: Rabi Rabi Park
Source: Rabi-Ribi
Tags: ost bgm ラビリビ
BPM: 105
Filesize: 2570kb
Play Time: 01:32
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1,38 stars, 109 notes)
Hard (2,69 stars, 245 notes)
Insane (3,93 stars, 303 notes)
Normal (2 stars, 157 notes)

Download: Triodust - Rabi Rabi Park
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Rabi-Ribi is a great game with awesome music, play it, or UPRPRC will never come to your home.

Last edited by Kyubey 2016-12-12T03:57:55+00:00, edited 10 times in total.

Ekoro

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Joined March 2010

Ekoro 2016-11-14T11:44:10+00:00

no

first post

some tiny changes applied, savelog here

eeeeeeeeeeee

12:26 Ekoro: 00:11:172 (4) - nice use of sliderslide noise
12:29 Ekoro: end is cute
12:29 Kyubey: it's the best part in the track
12:29 Kyubey: i love it so much
12:29 Kyubey: damn now i want to play rabi-ribi again
12:29 Ekoro: inb4 i map it for RC
12:29 Ekoro: :^)
12:29 Kyubey: o
12:29 Kyubey: go ahead
12:29 Ekoro: maybe if i don't have tracks
12:29 Ekoro: should be good for spring
12:30 Ekoro: well
12:30 Ekoro: the map looks good
12:30 Ekoro: although there are some issues but it just conflicts with my mapping style
12:30 Ekoro: it's just personal things 
12:30 Kyubey: well
12:30 Ekoro: i feel like i have ocd though lel
12:30 Kyubey: it's just random
12:30 Kyubey: because i didn't use any patterns
12:30 Kyubey: just mapped objects
12:31 Kyubey: play rabi-ribi
12:31 Kyubey: it's great af
12:32 Ekoro: 01:31:172 (1,2,1,2,1) - how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6566518
12:32 Ekoro: + decreasing every slider's speed instead of 2-2
12:33 Kyubey: thats a good idea
12:33 Ekoro: 00:42:601 (3) - how about rotating 00:42:029 (1) by 315° angle
12:33 Ekoro: (makes 45° counterclock but)
12:33 Ekoro: i think it looks better
12:34 Ekoro: osu.ppy.sh/ss/6566528
12:34 Ekoro: [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6566528 oops]
12:34 Kyubey: http
12:34 Kyubey: changed too
12:34 Ekoro: 00:46:601 (1) - that's purely my opinion but maybe a straight line would suit better
12:34 Ekoro: for next sliders
12:36 Ekoro: 00:28:315 (1,2,3,4) - was that irregular spacing intended
12:37 Kyubey: yup
12:37 Ekoro: fine then
12:38 Ekoro: 00:31:172 (2) - like earlier, how about rotating (1) by 300°
12:38 Ekoro: and place it at x:484 / y:228
12:38 Ekoro: 00:31:172 (2) -  imo it will look even cooler
12:38 Ekoro: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6566544 uh failed screen again
12:39 Ekoro: 00:35:744 (2) - same with (1), rotate by 270° and place it at x:176 y:200 so it looks [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6566548 this]
12:40 Kyubey: want to keep later one, i like current transition
12:41 Ekoro: sure
12:41 Ekoro: 01:01:172 (4) - pure suggestion, move it to 344/140? (so 1/2 and 3/4 look the same)
12:41 Ekoro: and adjust next sliders if you do it
12:42 Kyubey: next sliders?
12:42 Ekoro: spacing i mean
12:43 Kyubey: ah
12:43 Kyubey: it's fine as is after moving (4)
12:43 Ekoro: it's x1,10/x1,02
12:43 Kyubey: it's visually being different too and i like it
12:44 Ekoro: well that conflict with my mapping style so if you wanna keep it, do it
12:44 Ekoro: then the map looks ok
12:44 Kyubey: ekoro4bn
12:44 Ekoro:  pls

-Zel

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Joined September 2015

-Zel 2016-12-10T18:58:35+00:00

Easy

Check AiMod http://puu.sh/sKNlE/cc62f885a3.png

Normal

Nothing that really sticks out

Hard

00:02:458 (5,5) - these could fit better as doubles as the white tick has a sound that should have it's own hitobject
00:37:172 (4) - this could be interpreted as 1/4 rhythm like 00:37:886 (2) - I'd suggest stacking with 00:37:458 (1) -
00:40:029 (2) - there's a pretty important sound on the white tick here that should have a hitobject
00:42:458 (2) - important sound on white tick, should have it's own hitobject as the sound on the white tick is louder in comparison to the sound where the slider starts
00:47:029 (2) - ^
01:05:315 (2) - ^
01:07:601 (2) - ^
01:09:886 (2) - ^

Insane

The Insane difficulty has a pretty big jump in difficulty compared to the other difficulties:

SR 1,41 -> 2,00 -> 2,69 -> 3,93
HP 8 is really unnecessary and too unforgiving

Silverboxer

670 posts

Joined December 2012

Silverboxer 2016-12-10T19:41:02+00:00

here u go sir

Easy

check aimod
00:45:458 (2,3,1,2,3) - this whole thing is a bit clustered, and a note or two are off the screen (?). can suggest moving everything down by making a triangle between 00:43:172 (2,1,2) or something: http://i.imgur.com/bL4QOmQ.png
01:00:315 (1) - goes offscreen?

Normal

00:38:601 (4,5,1) - seems a bit awkward to play, and looks a bit weird because of ds? small thing but can move circle 5 to the right until ds is 1.3 again and it flows better to me
01:03:458 (3,4) - same thing with spacing looking weird because of slider shape + ds but does not have to change. just something I saw
01:14:029 - the section from here to the end, you use 1/1 sliders but they skip over strong notes? I guess it doesn't matter either because I still hear that it matches the music, but I expected this part to have a bit more objects because of the constant 1/4 notes from the (harp??) the same way this section in easy and hard have more clickable notes here than in other parts of the song

Hard

00:34:029 (4,5,1) - this does not look great

blanket might make the circle too close so not sure what to do here

Insane

fug it looks perfect to me, very cool diff too

hope this helps, pretty much nothing wrong with this set as I expected. good luck!

TicClick

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TicClick 2016-12-10T21:43:59+00:00

бабблд

Karen

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Joined August 2013

Karen 2016-12-11T04:57:55+00:00

I love this rabbit game so much

Insane

01:31:458 (2,3) - make them more closed to keep these slider heads with the same spacing? http://puu.sh/sLmIn/45805104fa.jpg
00:02:029 (4,5) - 00:04:315 (4,5) - inconsistent overlaps zz

Easy

aimod

everything looks reasonable and nice, call me back

Kyubey

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Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Kyubey 2016-12-11T07:00:14+00:00

-Zel

Easy

Check AiMod http://puu.sh/sKNlE/cc62f885a3.png weird, it wasn't like this before

Hard

00:02:458 (5,5) - these could fit better as doubles as the white tick has a sound that should have it's own hitobject changed to doubles here
00:37:172 (4) - this could be interpreted as 1/4 rhythm like 00:37:886 (2) - I'd suggest stacking with 00:37:458 (1) - i like this gimmick here, it looks interesting with this change in music
00:40:029 (2) - there's a pretty important sound on the white tick here that should have a hitobject every part has a big slider ending on clap so i don't see a problem in other sliders ending on clap too, also it gives diversity in rhythm. same answer to all sliders you pointed later
00:42:458 (2) - important sound on white tick, should have it's own hitobject as the sound on the white tick is louder in comparison to the sound where the slider starts
00:47:029 (2) - ^
01:05:315 (2) - ^
01:07:601 (2) - ^
01:09:886 (2) - ^

Insane

The Insane difficulty has a pretty big jump in difficulty compared to the other difficulties:

SR 1,41 -> 2,00 -> 2,69 -> 3,93 don't judge difficulty by stars please, judge it by gameplay elements
HP 8 is really unnecessary and too unforgiving i want to give challenge, also it felt fine for me, even with some misses i could pass it, and even with hr i was fine

Silverboxer

here u go sir

Easy

check aimod yes
00:45:458 (2,3,1,2,3) - this whole thing is a bit clustered, and a note or two are off the screen (?). can suggest moving everything down by making a triangle between 00:43:172 (2,1,2) or something: http://i.imgur.com/bL4QOmQ.png made it less clustered
01:00:315 (1) - goes offscreen? it doesn't

Normal

00:38:601 (4,5,1) - seems a bit awkward to play, and looks a bit weird because of ds? small thing but can move circle 5 to the right until ds is 1.3 again and it flows better to me moved
01:03:458 (3,4) - same thing with spacing looking weird because of slider shape + ds but does not have to change. just something I saw changed
01:14:029 - the section from here to the end, you use 1/1 sliders but they skip over strong notes? I guess it doesn't matter either because I still hear that it matches the music, but I expected this part to have a bit more objects because of the constant 1/4 notes from the (harp??) the same way this section in easy and hard have more clickable notes here than in other parts of the song i wasn't really sure about making it harder here, i like more how it sounds currently. also yes, i used 1/1 sliders on those notes having the pitch going up, it just sounds interesting to me

Hard

00:34:029 (4,5,1) - this does not look great

blanket might make the circle too close so not sure what to do here figures, changed the slider

Insane

fug it looks perfect to me, very cool diff too ooooo

hope this helps, pretty much nothing wrong with this set as I expected. good luck!

Karen

I love this rabbit game so much so do i!

Insane

01:31:458 (2,3) - make them more closed to keep these slider heads with the same spacing? http://puu.sh/sLmIn/45805104fa.jpg done
00:02:029 (4,5) - 00:04:315 (4,5) - inconsistent overlaps zz i did it intentionally to make it look more interesting than just simple stacks, so i prefer to keep this pattern

Easy

aimod fixed

everything looks reasonable and nice, call me back

Thanks everyone for checking!

TicClick wrote:
бабблд

А ты быстрый!

Karen

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Karen 2016-12-11T07:09:33+00:00

bubble

yf_bmp

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yf_bmp 2016-12-11T17:01:50+00:00

wow
also map Starting Forest pls

Nozhomi

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Nozhomi 2016-12-11T22:46:09+00:00

Easy :

00:47:458 (2) - Almost on lifebar, could you move it lower pls ?
01:00:315 (1) - Completely on lifebar for a 4/3 resolution.
01:16:315 (1,2,3,4,1) - and 01:25:458 (1,2,3,4,1) - are quite long series of circles, more than in Normal, so it would be better to change some for sliders.

Normal :

00:07:172 (4,1) - and 00:08:886 (2,1) - have spacing issues.

Hard :

00:02:458 (5,6,5,6) - Why use same spacing than a 1/2 rhythm ? It don't really make sense. Also for a Hard I would recommand to not use such anti-spacing for double circles, and incoherent with 00:08:315 (2,3) - who use the same kind of rhythm.
00:13:458 (3) - Really close to lifebar.
00:36:315 (3,4,1) - Use a little larger spacing here, it still a little too hard to make difference between that and 1/4 rhythm like 00:37:458 (1,2,3) - .

Insane :

01:32:315 (1) - Remove NC or add one on Hard to be coherent between both diffs.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6786695

Mukyu~

Kyubey

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Topic Starter

Kyubey 2016-12-12T03:57:11+00:00

Nozhomi

Easy :

00:47:458 (2) - Almost on lifebar, could you move it lower pls ? moved a little
01:00:315 (1) - Completely on lifebar for a 4/3 resolution. moved a little too
01:16:315 (1,2,3,4,1) - and 01:25:458 (1,2,3,4,1) - are quite long series of circles, more than in Normal, so it would be better to change some for sliders. okay

Normal :

00:07:172 (4,1) - and 00:08:886 (2,1) - have spacing issues. fixed first one, about second one — it's not wrong, it just shows different distance because of changed SV there

Hard :

00:02:458 (5,6,5,6) - Why use same spacing than a 1/2 rhythm ? It don't really make sense. Also for a Hard I would recommand to not use such anti-spacing for double circles, and incoherent with 00:08:315 (2,3) - who use the same kind of rhythm. changed 00:08:315 (2,3) - . i think it's not a big problem for hard players, they can read it easily, ar helps them. and why i used it — it looks interesting with this kind of spacing, feels neat imo
00:13:458 (3) - Really close to lifebar. moved
00:36:315 (3,4,1) - Use a little larger spacing here, it still a little too hard to make difference between that and 1/4 rhythm like 00:37:458 (1,2,3) - . okay, changed a little

Insane :

01:32:315 (1) - Remove NC or add one on Hard to be coherent between both diffs. added on Hard
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6786695 when i testplayed it, offset felt fine, and even if i was wrong, ~3 ms difference shouldn't make a big issue

Mukyu~

Thank you!