[ Lilu ] wrote:Incoming wall of text! :3
00:11:250 (4,9) - personally, i don't like the way 4 and 9 overlap, maybe just blanket the streams around eachother like https://puu.sh/sjPui/f478b17fb6.jpg I dont think this is a problem, its something i consciously put in there
00:18:450 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Do these streams have to be all wonky like that, it seems a bit out of place and confusing to play, especially with high ar They are not a problem to read, even with HR imo. The problem that could be posed is the aesthetic. Currently, all wonky streams are made that way to stack with earliear and later notes which i intended as an overarching theme of the map
00:23:250 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - same with these
00:33:600 (1) - all the previous blue sliders are overlapped completely, but this one isn't, maybe move it a bit. Fix
00:54:450 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - more wonky streams, i might be being really nazi with this, but i just think they look really messy and confususing to play, imagine someone with hr trying to read those with ar10.
01:09:600 (4) - i know these kinds of sliders are all throughout your map, but this ones shape just looks kind of eh. you don't need to change it i just think it might do better as a different shape. Fixed
01:12:900 (1,2,3,4) - woah these sliders are really off, i would explain why... but i wrote a 5 line paragraph and it didn't make any sense. here's a puush of what i think the sliders should be mapped like https://puu.sh/sjQt4/1d9cff5abf.jpg Ive tried to get them just right but failed, this is a very good suggestion, thanks
01:21:000 (1,2,3,4) - Do these all need to be stacked like that? wouldn't doing something like this achieve the same effect as well as keep it easily readable https://puu.sh/sjQyy/d3ba67c735.jpg I dont think we should worry too much about reading difficulties, it is a 6,45* map and reading is a skill that you would expect to be tested of a player in maps like that.
01:28:800 (1) - the red tick after this note has a sound on it, wouldn't it be better to put a note there? No, the white tick is way stronger.
01:32:400 (1,2) - its a bit jarring to have that overlap there, since while you stream you kind of want to keep moving your cursor smoothly, but just stopping and waiting for a whole bar in the same spot is just uncomfortable Yeah but so does the music
01:51:600 (1) - just thought i'd say, i love this jump section :3 Thanks ^^
02:21:300 (4,1) - These are really weird to read with hd, maybe blanket them instead? Yeah ill try to change these
02:22:499 (4,1) - ^^^
02:23:700 (4,1) - ^^^
this is all the ramblings of a madman, good luck figuring out what it means.02:27:600 (1,1) - I'm about to nazi this section (also most of the suggestions i make in this next section arent the greatest, but this part of the song seems incredibly difficult to map well, so forgive me, you did a good job with it for the most part )
02:27:900 (3,1,1) - This is kind of weird to play, not too bad, just a little weird. what i did to fix it was 02:27:600 (1,2,3) - ctrl + g for all of these, then something like this https://puu.sh/sjRoq/34a0c229cd.jpg
02:29:100 (3,1,2,3) - this is absolutely impossible to read with hd, let alone play it. God its a tough pattern to map... uh.. well, this is by NO means a good fix, but it does play a lot better than what it was https://puu.sh/sjRPP/d0ecc4f42d.jpg
again with these ones 02:32:400 (1,2,3) - i used Ctrl + g and then did this https://puu.sh/sjS6g/b2bd4532f6.jpg with the following green notes.
After that i kind of went full remap mode, and redid the rest of that section, sorry, but it i just could not read that section without hd, let alone with it.
heres what i did https://puu.sh/sjSsF/cb0a7decc5.jpg and https://puu.sh/sjSt5/017138375d.jpg
02:36:450 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - wobbly looking streams again? maybe lidy them up a bit? These ones i actually did tidy up as yuou said ^^
02:52:650 (3) - move the start of this slider to underneath 2 and then reshape it so it doesnt overlap with the previous slider, it just feels a bit weird out the 2 is just out there when you jump to it.
03:03:675 (1) - break after this? added
03:10:800 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - these sre some funky sliders, maybe don't overlap them? Dont see a reason not to, i want to test the players reading.
03:27:600 (1) - break time after this? added
04:35:250 (4,5,6,7,8) - wonky stream again
04:40:500 (4,1) - from 4 to 1 doesn't flow very well, since the slider end of 4 points away from 1. Intended to be a flow break from the previous 4 sliders. (same to a certain extent of all the instances of that particular part of the song)
04:43:650 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - these 2 streams also overlap at their starts, again maybe if you blanketed them it might be better to play and look at
Uh i think that's all, my mods are kind of bad since i point out really weird problems. Dw man, you pointed out relevant concerns with the map i hope its helpful though