[ Lilu ] wrote:Incoming wall of text! :3
00:11:250 (4,9) - personally, i don't like the way 4 and 9 overlap, maybe just blanket the streams around eachother like https://puu.sh/sjPui/f478b17fb6.jpg
00:18:450 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Do these streams have to be all wonky like that, it seems a bit out of place and confusing to play, especially with high ar
00:23:250 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - same with these
00:33:600 (1) - all the previous blue sliders are overlapped completely, but this one isn't, maybe move it a bit.
00:54:450 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - more wonky streams, i might be being really nazi with this, but i just think they look really messy and confususing to play, imagine someone with hr trying to read those with ar10.
01:09:600 (4) - i know these kinds of sliders are all throughout your map, but this ones shape just looks kind of eh. you don't need to change it i just think it might do better as a different shape.
01:12:900 (1,2,3,4) - woah these sliders are really off, i would explain why... but i wrote a 5 line paragraph and it didn't make any sense. here's a puush of what i think the sliders should be mapped like https://puu.sh/sjQt4/1d9cff5abf.jpg
01:21:000 (1,2,3,4) - Do these all need to be stacked like that? wouldn't doing something like this achieve the same effect as well as keep it easily readable https://puu.sh/sjQyy/d3ba67c735.jpg
01:28:800 (1) - the red tick after this note has a sound on it, wouldn't it be better to put a note there?
01:32:400 (1,2) - its a bit jarring to have that overlap there, since while you stream you kind of want to keep moving your cursor smoothly, but just stopping and waiting for a whole bar in the same spot is just uncomfortable
01:51:600 (1) - just thought i'd say, i love this jump section :3
02:21:300 (4,1) - These are really weird to read with hd, maybe blanket them instead?
02:22:499 (4,1) - ^^^
02:23:700 (4,1) - ^^^
this is all the ramblings of a madman, good luck figuring out what it means.02:27:600 (1,1) - I'm about to nazi this section (also most of the suggestions i make in this next section arent the greatest, but this part of the song seems incredibly difficult to map well, so forgive me, you did a good job with it for the most part )
02:27:900 (3,1,1) - This is kind of weird to play, not too bad, just a little weird. what i did to fix it was 02:27:600 (1,2,3) - ctrl + g for all of these, then something like this https://puu.sh/sjRoq/34a0c229cd.jpg
02:29:100 (3,1,2,3) - this is absolutely impossible to read with hd, let alone play it. God its a tough pattern to map... uh.. well, this is by NO means a good fix, but it does play a lot better than what it was https://puu.sh/sjRPP/d0ecc4f42d.jpg
again with these ones 02:32:400 (1,2,3) - i used Ctrl + g and then did this https://puu.sh/sjS6g/b2bd4532f6.jpg with the following green notes.
After that i kind of went full remap mode, and redid the rest of that section, sorry, but it i just could not read that section without hd, let alone with it.
heres what i did https://puu.sh/sjSsF/cb0a7decc5.jpg and https://puu.sh/sjSt5/017138375d.jpg
02:36:450 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - wobbly looking streams again? maybe lidy them up a bit?
02:52:650 (3) - move the start of this slider to underneath 2 and then reshape it so it doesnt overlap with the previous slider, it just feels a bit weird out the 2 is just out there when you jump to it.
03:03:675 (1) - break after this?
03:10:800 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - these sre some funky sliders, maybe don't overlap them?
03:27:600 (1) - break time after this?
04:35:250 (4,5,6,7,8) - wonky stream again
04:40:500 (4,1) - from 4 to 1 doesn't flow very well, since the slider end of 4 points away from 1.
04:43:650 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - these 2 streams also overlap at their starts, again maybe if you blanketed them it might be better to play and look at
Uh i think that's all, my mods are kind of bad since i point out really weird problems. i hope its helpful though
Thanks! ill give reponse when i get home later.