[tofu]
00:43:611 (43611|1,43781|1) - Might move this to col 1 to even out the weight of all the stacks. From there, I'd also stack 00:44:122 (44122|1) - in 4 to continue on the pattern as the sound doesnt quite end until 00:44:293 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9326905
00:55:543 (55543|3) - I'd suggest removing this to avoid the 1/4 minijack with 00:55:457 (55457|3) - cause the BPM isn't slow enough to where a minijack of that sort is all that doable.
01:11:565 (71565|3,71906|0) - I would leave these as short notes since the guitar has a bit of a short break where it rests for one beat after the upbeat of 01:11:565 - and doesnt become entirely continuous until 01:12:077 -
01:15:827 - Add a note here in col 1 for the second repetition of the sound at 01:15:656 - ?
02:03:298 (123298|3,123384|1) - I'd suggest switching the columns here to avoid having a short note play on the middle finger while the index finger holds down a note as it's a bit more difficult to execute that way.
02:03:554 (123554|2,123724|1) - If above is accepted, control H this to avoid having too much weight on the right hand https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9326936
02:57:077 (177077|1,177247|3) - Move to col 3 and 1 respectively to avoid the three note stack at 02:56:736 (176736|1,176906|1,177077|1) - which I think is unnecessary due to there being a lack of any repeating sounds
03:41:735 - Rather than go for a simple jumptrill here, I think it'd be nice to jack these since they're the same sound repeating for a beat. Something easy like [12][12][34][34] would be fine since jacks aren't used at all so far in the song https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9326960
[antalf]
00:20:770 (20770|2,21111|1) - I would control H these LNs so that you don't have a 1/1 stack with 00:20:429 (20429|2,20770|2) - which feels a bit heavy on the right hand.
00:33:384 (33384|2,33554|1,33724|2,33895|1,34065|2) - I'd control H this and then extend the LN at 00:33:384 (33384|2) - to 00:33:724 - for a less abrupt cut off for the spring like sound
01:08:156 (68156|3,68327|2,68497|3,68668|2,68838|3,69009|2,69179|3,69349|2,69520|3) - I think it'd be better to break up this OH trill after a bit cause this feels kind of excessive. Maybe try splitting it around 01:09:009 - ?
01:25:884 (85884|2,86565|1) - Don't really see the point of these notes. I mean, the sound is a 2/1 build up and there doesn't appear to be anything else here in the music. I'd just use a 2/1 LN starting from the previous jump to represent the building sound then, like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9353062
01:38:838 (98838|2,98838|1,99349|2) - I would control H here for symmetry and also hand balance cause you'll have one OH trill on the right hand and another on the left immediately after instead of the two on the right like you have now.
02:13:866 - 02:14:207 - there's two 1/4 triplets here that help to lead into the build up section that I think would be nice to add to differentiate this measure from the preceding ones.
02:23:327 (143327|1) - Shouldn't this be a 1/2 LN like 02:17:872 (137872|2) - was cause they're the same sound?
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00:43:611 (43611|1,43781|1) - Might move this to col 1 to even out the weight of all the stacks. From there, I'd also stack 00:44:122 (44122|1) - in 4 to continue on the pattern as the sound doesnt quite end until 00:44:293 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9326905
00:55:543 (55543|3) - I'd suggest removing this to avoid the 1/4 minijack with 00:55:457 (55457|3) - cause the BPM isn't slow enough to where a minijack of that sort is all that doable.
01:11:565 (71565|3,71906|0) - I would leave these as short notes since the guitar has a bit of a short break where it rests for one beat after the upbeat of 01:11:565 - and doesnt become entirely continuous until 01:12:077 -
01:15:827 - Add a note here in col 1 for the second repetition of the sound at 01:15:656 - ?
02:03:298 (123298|3,123384|1) - I'd suggest switching the columns here to avoid having a short note play on the middle finger while the index finger holds down a note as it's a bit more difficult to execute that way.
02:03:554 (123554|2,123724|1) - If above is accepted, control H this to avoid having too much weight on the right hand https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9326936
02:57:077 (177077|1,177247|3) - Move to col 3 and 1 respectively to avoid the three note stack at 02:56:736 (176736|1,176906|1,177077|1) - which I think is unnecessary due to there being a lack of any repeating sounds
03:41:735 - Rather than go for a simple jumptrill here, I think it'd be nice to jack these since they're the same sound repeating for a beat. Something easy like [12][12][34][34] would be fine since jacks aren't used at all so far in the song https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9326960
[antalf]
00:20:770 (20770|2,21111|1) - I would control H these LNs so that you don't have a 1/1 stack with 00:20:429 (20429|2,20770|2) - which feels a bit heavy on the right hand.
00:33:384 (33384|2,33554|1,33724|2,33895|1,34065|2) - I'd control H this and then extend the LN at 00:33:384 (33384|2) - to 00:33:724 - for a less abrupt cut off for the spring like sound
01:08:156 (68156|3,68327|2,68497|3,68668|2,68838|3,69009|2,69179|3,69349|2,69520|3) - I think it'd be better to break up this OH trill after a bit cause this feels kind of excessive. Maybe try splitting it around 01:09:009 - ?
01:25:884 (85884|2,86565|1) - Don't really see the point of these notes. I mean, the sound is a 2/1 build up and there doesn't appear to be anything else here in the music. I'd just use a 2/1 LN starting from the previous jump to represent the building sound then, like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9353062
01:38:838 (98838|2,98838|1,99349|2) - I would control H here for symmetry and also hand balance cause you'll have one OH trill on the right hand and another on the left immediately after instead of the two on the right like you have now.
02:13:866 - 02:14:207 - there's two 1/4 triplets here that help to lead into the build up section that I think would be nice to add to differentiate this measure from the preceding ones.
02:23:327 (143327|1) - Shouldn't this be a 1/2 LN like 02:17:872 (137872|2) - was cause they're the same sound?
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