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Check incoming (Sorry im gonna use INGLISHHH)
I will continue the rest of the diff check tonight, you can fix above things first and pick ur bg poison <3
Check incoming (Sorry im gonna use INGLISHHH)
General
WOW everything looks good BUT BG still sux :< this girl looks like she just pickpocket 50 different guys' in 1 day and bulge sell those phones
As for background I recommend some of this LMAO (might take a bit to load?)
https://konachan.com/post/show/268065/barefoot-blue_eyes-braids-chinomaron-dress-kizuna_
http://konachan.net/post/show/264660/black_hair-blonde_hair-breasts-building-camera-che
http://konachan.net/post/show/259783/bed-blue_eyes-blue_hair-loli-long_hair-original-pa
http://konachan.net/post/show/259383/ameto_yuki-blush-breasts-game_cg-giga-hanatsuka_ai
http://konachan.net/post/show/254095/animal_ears-bed-blush-bow-bunny-catgirl-loli-long_
http://konachan.net/post/show/251530/blush-naitou_kirara-original-phone-purple_eyes-pur
http://konachan.net/post/show/251427/bed-narynn-orange_hair-original-phone-ponytail-red
http://konachan.net/post/show/248625/annin_doufu-bed-book-dress-idolmaster-idolmaster_c
http://konachan.net/post/show/246236/blush-ek_masato-eromanga-sensei-phone-takasago_tom
As for background I recommend some of this LMAO (might take a bit to load?)
https://konachan.com/post/show/268065/barefoot-blue_eyes-braids-chinomaron-dress-kizuna_
http://konachan.net/post/show/264660/black_hair-blonde_hair-breasts-building-camera-che
http://konachan.net/post/show/259783/bed-blue_eyes-blue_hair-loli-long_hair-original-pa
http://konachan.net/post/show/259383/ameto_yuki-blush-breasts-game_cg-giga-hanatsuka_ai
http://konachan.net/post/show/254095/animal_ears-bed-blush-bow-bunny-catgirl-loli-long_
http://konachan.net/post/show/251530/blush-naitou_kirara-original-phone-purple_eyes-pur
http://konachan.net/post/show/251427/bed-narynn-orange_hair-original-phone-ponytail-red
http://konachan.net/post/show/248625/annin_doufu-bed-book-dress-idolmaster-idolmaster_c
http://konachan.net/post/show/246236/blush-ek_masato-eromanga-sensei-phone-takasago_tom
Hitsounds
Since I pm-ed you on facebook about consistency, I will talk about the relevance only here (apply to ALL DIFF consistently)
00:14:157 (14157|1) - Add C
00:14:510 (14510|1) - Remove C
00:15:216 (15216|0) - Remove W
00:17:157 (17157|3) - The biggest issue here. Add W here and 00:17:333 (17333|0) - Remove W here and apply to all section (of the same type such as 00:18:569 (18569|1,18745|3,46098|1) - and so on) till 00:35:686 (35686|0) - here for ALL diff
00:39:216 (39216|0) - Remove C
00:41:333 (41333|3) - Also here Remove W of this type until 00:49:804 (49804|1) - here
00:46:098 (46098|1) - Change to W or add 1 more W in another column is optional here but has to choose one
00:51:039 (51039|3) - Add W
00:51:216 (51216|1) - Add LR_clap
01:01:804 (61804|3) - Remove the LR_clap
01:14:333 (74333|3) - Remove C and replace with W or add 1 more W is also optional here and 01:14:510 (74510|3) - Remove W here
01:24:392 (84392|0) - Remove W here
00:14:157 (14157|1) - Add C
00:14:510 (14510|1) - Remove C
00:15:216 (15216|0) - Remove W
00:17:157 (17157|3) - The biggest issue here. Add W here and 00:17:333 (17333|0) - Remove W here and apply to all section (of the same type such as 00:18:569 (18569|1,18745|3,46098|1) - and so on) till 00:35:686 (35686|0) - here for ALL diff
00:39:216 (39216|0) - Remove C
00:41:333 (41333|3) - Also here Remove W of this type until 00:49:804 (49804|1) - here
00:46:098 (46098|1) - Change to W or add 1 more W in another column is optional here but has to choose one
00:51:039 (51039|3) - Add W
00:51:216 (51216|1) - Add LR_clap
01:01:804 (61804|3) - Remove the LR_clap
01:14:333 (74333|3) - Remove C and replace with W or add 1 more W is also optional here and 01:14:510 (74510|3) - Remove W here
01:24:392 (84392|0) - Remove W here
GREGET
Nothing much to say here as it is already really neat and enjoyable to play for accuracy. Some suggestions;
00:15:569 (15569|2,15922|2) - Both of these notes would be more sensible if were put in column 1 as it has the same pitch tone as 00:15:216 (15216|0) - This one and also indicates the low pitch relevancy towards the left hand side
00:24:039 (24039|2,24039|3,24216|3,24392|2,24569|2,24569|3,24745|2) - A litttttttle bit too heavy on the right hand side here, I think a little adjustment here could make this more enjoyable. My suggestion is 00:24:392 (24392|2) - Move this to column 1
00:32:863 (32863|1) - Same issue with this. Could be moved to column 4 for more spread out pattern with this type of map
00:37:628 (37628|0,37628|1) - Since you started mapping it alternately from 00:36:569 - Here to indicate the snares, the actual snare stopped at 00:37:451 - here thus you may have to revert this 00:37:628 (37628|0,37628|1) - notes to another column. my suggestion is back to column |23| to make the same interpretation of Kick sound at the beginning of the buildup 00:36:392 (36392|2,36392|1) - here
00:40:981 - LOVELY
00:45:657 - There is actually an extra kick here you may want to layer since most of the map structure uses the percussion layering. Suggestion is to add at |3| and move the next jump to column |12|. If you apply this dont forget to readjust 00:46:098 - this mini trill here
00:55:981 (55981|2) - Move to |2| is much better to avoid unnecessary stacking notes there
00:57:039 - Add |4| for that percussion sound because it feels empty and kinda break the flow of the rest
00:15:569 (15569|2,15922|2) - Both of these notes would be more sensible if were put in column 1 as it has the same pitch tone as 00:15:216 (15216|0) - This one and also indicates the low pitch relevancy towards the left hand side
00:24:039 (24039|2,24039|3,24216|3,24392|2,24569|2,24569|3,24745|2) - A litttttttle bit too heavy on the right hand side here, I think a little adjustment here could make this more enjoyable. My suggestion is 00:24:392 (24392|2) - Move this to column 1
00:32:863 (32863|1) - Same issue with this. Could be moved to column 4 for more spread out pattern with this type of map
00:37:628 (37628|0,37628|1) - Since you started mapping it alternately from 00:36:569 - Here to indicate the snares, the actual snare stopped at 00:37:451 - here thus you may have to revert this 00:37:628 (37628|0,37628|1) - notes to another column. my suggestion is back to column |23| to make the same interpretation of Kick sound at the beginning of the buildup 00:36:392 (36392|2,36392|1) - here
00:40:981 - LOVELY
00:45:657 - There is actually an extra kick here you may want to layer since most of the map structure uses the percussion layering. Suggestion is to add at |3| and move the next jump to column |12|. If you apply this dont forget to readjust 00:46:098 - this mini trill here
00:55:981 (55981|2) - Move to |2| is much better to avoid unnecessary stacking notes there
00:57:039 - Add |4| for that percussion sound because it feels empty and kinda break the flow of the rest
I will continue the rest of the diff check tonight, you can fix above things first and pick ur bg poison <3