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Nokashi wrote:

Hello there! - Sup

[ Magic Girl's Salad]
  1. 00:00:562 (1) - You can make this fully horizontal, kinda like 00:01:214 (2) -, and place it on x:256 for extra movement retention, since they are similar sounds and should be expressed in a similar manner- I prefer keeping this as it is, since they aren't the exact same sound I don't see why I should have the exact same pattern to it. I like to emphasize the higher pitch of the (2) slider by making it horizontal.
  2. 00:05:127 (3) - Could have been a 1/2 slider instead to better express this beat 00:05:453 - here. Up to this point you took advantage of all these melodies so it feels a bit off to have this one unmapped - Fair enough, fixed
  3. 00:08:388 (1,2) - I feel like this should be toned down as spacing is a bit too much here for a dash so early into the map, maybe something like 3.60x DS or something similar. The dash will still be apparent but easier to catch
  4. 00:09:693 (3,4) - You could make this a walk so the player can cool off after the intense dash. Instead, 00:10:345 (4,1) - this could be made into a dash, since the downbeat here 00:10:997 (1) - is pretty strong - I'd rather not make it a walk, the piano sounds are very audible and strong here and I don't want to blandly ignore them. I'll keep everything as it is on this one.
  5. 00:15:888 - Circle here and create a dash here to here 00:16:214 (1) - ? There hasnt been a dash for a while so it would be a bit fitting here - Eh it's not a matter of dashing, but more of density to me. I don't wanna keep adding notes where I purposefully left them blank and make the salad denser than it should be.
  6. 00:18:823 (1,2,3,4,1) - Salads are meant to introduce the dashing mechanic to the player in logical measures. Here having 4 dashes in a row, so early into the song, in a non-kiai section is too much for a salad in my eyes. I would drop the 1/2 dash structure here and have a 1/1 dash structure instead, making some of these jumps walkable and some of them dashable, not all of them dashable. Similar point here 01:52:736 (1,2,3,4) - - I understand, but again, I don't wanna ignore very clear and audible sounds. So I brought (4) closer to (3) to make it walkable since the sounds there is a lot lless powerful. I also decreased the distance of the jumps because 4x distance wtf
  7. 00:24:040 (1,1) - You could try to give them a 1.50x DS with previous object instead since the sound isnt that strong to imply a dash and you have shown that you place dashes on snares here 00:25:019 (2,3) - for example. 00:29:258 (1) - Were there to have been a 2.00x DS 1/1 gap in this rhythm you are making, it should have been this cause of the stronger flute note.- Changed the first, kept the second. Mainly because it's kind of difficult for me to do this while still keeping the pattern I want, another reason is that the second one has a clear piano in the back too.
  8. 00:30:236 (2,3) - compared to the graduality of the spacing the dashes in this section have, this is way too spiky on its spacing. all the previous jumps have a ~0.30x DS difference or even less ( 00:25:019 (2,3) - compared to 00:27:627 (2,3) - ) this one spikes 0.50x DS spacing increase. Should be decreased a bit to be consistent - Gotcha
  9. 00:31:866 (1,2,1,2,3) - I Wouldnt really drop the nice rhythm i had going in previous measures. This new rhythm kills all the emphasis that you had on the snares ( to the point that the snares are on a slider end here 00:35:780 - , meaning almost no movement to get to it even though in the previous measure it was a clear dash, like all snares) and the overall dash consistency. The song doesnt really call for such a drastic underwhelming rhythm switch.- o k f r i e n d o
  10. 00:40:997 (3,4) - Would play better as 2 1/2 sliders instead of 2 1/1 circles and, if positioned correctly, they can make the transition to the kiai really noticable and neat :D- "Positioned correctly" you're talking to the shittiest salad mapper placement wise but I tried.
  11. 00:43:606 - Since you played so much around these snares in the previous sections it feels weird to me that you didnt take advantage of this snare beat here. Similar point here 00:54:040 - - ok
  12. 00:46:866 (4,5) - Maybe lower this spacing so the walk is more apparent, and the following dash here 00:47:193 (5,1) - more noticable - :thumbsup:
  13. 00:52:573 (2,1) - Make this jump more noticable, the music really calls for it - fixed
  14. 01:05:780 (1,2,3) - theres graduality in the instrument pitch going from highter to lower pitch, however the spacing goes the other way around, ranging from lower to higher spacing. 01:06:269 (2,3) - this sudden 0.50x DS spacing spike isnt so justified and it should be made consistent with the previous similar rhythms. It would be for the best since placing dashes on such irregular rhythms might be off-putting for newer players. 01:16:214 (1,2,3) - Similar point here - o true fixed
  15. 01:12:953 (6,1) - maybe a 0.20x DS decrease here for consistency - fixed
Good Luck~
Thanks for modding, wasn't in the applying mindset for this one so quality is probably affected.

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Metadata
  1. Good!


Spread/Other
  1. Why are the Salad and Platter hp5, but the Rain is hp7?
  2. Made a better version of your bg for you! http://i.imgur.com/DFpjny3.jpg


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  1. Good!
Cup


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  1. 00:13:586 (1,2) - This is mapped as a slider and then repeat slider, while the exact same thing at the start is mapped as a slider and two circles:
    00:03:151 (1,2,3) - . Please fix the consistency
  2. 00:29:238 (3) - NC here?
  3. 01:00:216 (4,1) - Every other time you had one these sliders, you put a space between (4) and (1). Why not this time?
  4. 01:08:368 (1) - NC here?
  5. 01:12:281 (1,2,3,4,1) - This flow is pretty difficult to grasp for a new player. Make a more flow-friendly pattern?
  6. 01:18:803 (4) - NC here?
  7. 01:36:412 (3,1,2) - Not a good flow for new players.
Magic Girl's Salad


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  1. 00:17:193 (2,3) - This jump is too small compared to the other jumps you've used in this section.
  2. 00:18:823 (1,2,3) - I don't think it's good to have three large jumps right after another. Very difficult for new players to execute.
  3. 00:26:649 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This section is basically the same pattern repeating itself :( Maybe think of something more creative, even if it's just changing some directions here and there.
  4. 00:51:432 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - This is too dense for a salad.
  5. 01:01:866 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - Same as above.
  6. 01:10:997 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Again, too dense :(
  7. 01:22:736 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - At least it's the last dense stream :/
  8. 01:50:127 (1) - Make the angle more shallow. The sharp angle makes the effect of the repeat almost pointless
Collab Platter


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  1. 00:16:194 (1,2) - The sharp angle on both of these sliders makes them very awkward to play
  2. 00:16:846 (2,3) - To keep consistency, you would need to add a hyperdash between these two notes.
  3. 00:19:455 (2,3,4) - afaik, a hyper into an anti-flow pattern is unrankable in a platter.
  4. 00:25:325 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Consider cleaning up this stream and making it look more pretty :)
  5. 00:52:553 (4,1) - Anti-flow hyper pattern again :(
  6. 01:37:064 (1,2) - Awkward sharp angles on the sliders again too!
Midnight


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  1. 00:20:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hmm... this pattern is a bit awkward to jump into. I wouldn't consider doing anything with it yet, just wait until you get a few more opinions.
  2. 00:33:151 (4) - Not a fan of this slider. It's a bit weird to hit.
  3. 00:54:510 (5,5,5) - Random completely vertical sliders! These are not cool at all...
  4. 01:16:194 (1,2,3) - The distances here are not all the same, unlike when you last used this pattern. Please fix.
Good luck!
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fixed set inconsistencies for now, going to wait till roseus applies platter to start my end but thanks
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  1. 00:16:194 (1,2) - The sharp angle on both of these sliders makes them very awkward to play Sharp angle? they're almost vertical.
    I dont understand how it plays awkwardly.
  2. 00:16:846 (2,3) - To keep consistency, you would need to add a hyperdash between these two notes. I tried but it plays weird now
  3. 00:19:455 (2,3,4) - afaik, a hyper into an anti-flow pattern is unrankable in a platter. I tried to fix
  4. 00:25:325 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Consider cleaning up this stream and making it look more pretty :) Increased distances
  5. 00:52:553 (4,1) - Anti-flow hyper pattern again :(
  6. 01:37:064 (1,2) - Awkward sharp angles on the sliders again too!
Good luck!
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General


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  1. There is a tag conflict within the set. Please address.


Metadata
  1. Good!


Spread/Other
  1. Why are the Salad and Platter hp5, but the Rain is hp7?
  2. Made a better version of your bg for you! http://i.imgur.com/DFpjny3.jpg


Hitsounds

  • General Hitsounding
  1. Good!
Cup


General



  1. 00:13:586 (1,2) - This is mapped as a slider and then repeat slider, while the exact same thing at the start is mapped as a slider and two circles:
    00:03:151 (1,2,3) - . Please fix the consistency although they are different, they are not the same thing as the later one have a louder ding noise that i think fit mapping the noise.
  2. 00:29:238 (3) - NC here? ok
  3. 01:00:216 (4,1) - Every other time you had one these sliders, you put a space between (4) and (1). Why not this time? increased distance
  4. 01:08:368 (1) - NC here? ok
  5. 01:12:281 (1,2,3,4,1) - This flow is pretty difficult to grasp for a new player. Make a more flow-friendly pattern? ye
  6. 01:18:803 (4) - NC here? ok
  7. 01:36:412 (3,1,2) - Not a good flow for new players. made better
Collab Platter


General



  1. 00:52:553 (4,1) - Anti-flow hyper pattern again :(
  2. 01:37:064 (1,2) - Awkward sharp angles on the sliders again too!
    fixed both
Midnight


General



  1. 00:20:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hmm... this pattern is a bit awkward to jump into. I wouldn't consider doing anything with it yet, just wait until you get a few more opinions.
  2. 00:33:151 (4) - Not a fan of this slider. It's a bit weird to hit.
  3. 00:54:510 (5,5,5) - Random completely vertical sliders! These are not cool at all...horizontal
  4. 01:16:194 (1,2,3) - The distances here are not all the same, unlike when you last used this pattern. Please fix.

fixed rest also
Good luck!
posted

-wwwww wrote:

Magic Girl's Salad


  1. 00:17:193 (2,3) - This jump is too small compared to the other jumps you've used in this section. - Fixed
  2. 00:18:823 (1,2,3) - I don't think it's good to have three large jumps right after another. Very difficult for new players to execute. - I don't want to blantly ignore the clear increase in sound and volume here. I've decreased the distance though to help new players perform the jumps.
  3. 00:26:649 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This section is basically the same pattern repeating itself :( Maybe think of something more creative, even if it's just changing some directions here and there. - SHIT I THOUGHT I PUT A DIRECTION CHANGE FUCK ME
  4. 00:51:432 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - This is too dense for a salad. - Fixed
  5. 01:01:866 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - Same as above. - Keeping this one as a pre-kiai kinda thing
  6. 01:10:997 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Again, too dense :(- Kinda fixed?
  7. 01:22:736 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - At least it's the last dense stream :/ - Keeping again, the bpm and song is quite slow so I think I'd be fine keeping this as a final stream.
  8. 01:50:127 (1) - Make the angle more shallow. The sharp angle makes the effect of the repeat almost pointless - Gotcha, fixed
Thanks for modding.
Magic Girl's Salad
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posted
random mod, actually I expected the diff names to be all low caps because of the title/artist name
cup
  1. 00:03:151 (1) - would be cool beans as 1/1 slider, also stay consistent with rhythm usage here 00:00:542 (1,2) -
  2. 00:10:977 (1) - aand again rhythm change, try this as a single note instead as the beat on the red tick isn't that strong
  3. 00:18:477 (1) - actually I don't feel there is a strong enough beat here for a note, also put nc on 2 instead cause downbeat
  4. 00:21:086 - I feel as if a note is missing here, the music is pretty intense
  5. 00:27:607 - here as well for consistency
  6. 00:34:455 (1,2,3,4,1) - why is this differently mapped to 00:24:020 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - when the music is the exact same?
  7. 00:39:673 (4,1) - swap nc
  8. 01:03:151 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I think a timeline like this is better suited but up to you. I feel the doubles is kind of too dense for a cup diff, same here 01:13:586 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) -
  9. 01:08:368 (1,2) - same for these sliders as the screenshot above and all similar sliders xd
  10. 01:31:194 (1) - you can extend this slider by 1/2 because the bpm is so low
  11. 01:34:455 - The outro is mapped way more densely than the intro, like here 01:37:064 (1,2,3) - vs 00:03:151 (1,2,3) - so maybe try fixing up so the rhythm/density stays the same in the intro as the outro since the music is basically the same
Magic Girl's salad
  1. 00:10:977 (1,2,3) - why sudden rhythm change from 00:00:542 (1,2,3,4) - ? owo
  2. 00:38:368 (3) - aaa downbeat on sliderend, please remove one repeat and add a note there instead for better emphasising mwm also 00:38:368 (3,1,2) - all these notes are placed on almost the same grid so if you choose not to apply the first I'd still recommend putting some distance between these notes as 3/1 standstill is quite boring
  3. 00:41:629 (4,1) - this is such a long distance with a very sharp directonchange owo consider lowering the distance
  4. 00:43:586 (2,3,4) - I don't see a dash here very fitting, I'd rather like to see a dash between 00:44:238 (4,1) -
  5. 00:46:194 (2,3) - ehm why follow piano suddenly? uwu I like the idea but it's kind of meh when other places there are very strong piano that remains unmapped and tbh, I think it's good to keep the density low, especially when these piano sounds are unmapped in Platter, even if it is a gd xd
  6. 00:47:499 (1,2) - maybe lower the distance here a tiny bit if it's supposed to be walkable owo
  7. 00:52:553 (2,1) - I'd increase the distance here a bit to make it clear it's a dash uwu
  8. 00:56:629 (1,2) - Same as I mentioned before about density and stuff owo
  9. 00:57:933 (1,2) - and here, I guess it's supposed to be walkable so consider lowering the distance to make it clearer it's a walk UWU
  10. 01:02:988 (2,1) - Consider increasing the distance a bit to make it clear it's a dash
  11. 01:04:455 (2,1) - Here also, I assume it's supposed to be a dash so increase the distance a tiny bit
  12. 01:11:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Since the pitch is lowering on 1 to 4, maybe make those 1/2's instead and make 6 1/4's? Or actually, I'd like if you used the same rhythm as you did here 01:21:412 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - owo
  13. 01:14:890 (2,1,2,3) - hmm consider making spacing equal to 01:04:455 (2,1,2,3) - as it is now, it's kinda jumpy and antiflowy/directionchangy at the same time which doesn't suit the music or this difficulty imo
  14. 01:31:846 (1) - You can extend the spinner 1/2 to the red tick because the bpm is so low, but up to you mwm
  15. 01:44:890 (1,2,3) - same as before, why suddenly change rhythm usage? uwu
  16. 01:55:325 (1) - same here, you can either add a note to the red tick before the spinner or move the spinner start 1/2 after the last note because the bpm is so low, it's allowed owo
collab platter
  1. 00:08:042 - Add a note here for consistency with 00:18:477 (4) -
  2. 00:20:760 (5,6,7,8,9) - like i understand you wanna keep a hyper here but imo this just sounds silly with the 1/3 break in the music so I would just keep it 1/2 rhythm or remove 00:21:194 (9) - cause 1/2 break sounds a million times better than 1/3
  3. 00:21:412 (1,2) - Feels weird with a dash to 2 when the beat standing out is on slider end of 2, could try doing something like you did here 00:31:846 (1,2,3) -
  4. 00:24:020 (4,1) - swap nc
  5. 00:25:325 (1,2,3) - 00:35:760 (3,4,5) - I'd change 1 to a 1/2 slider as that's how this part is mapped in Rain and it feels weird Platter is higher densed, even if it's a gd/collab
  6. 00:46:031 (2) - I'd remove this cause it's snapped to barely audible piano and you're obviously not focusing on piano in the kiai so
  7. 00:44:075 (3) - On basically all sliders like this, you could try moving it 1/4 forward and adding a repeat to it, I feel it covers the background piano a lot better
  8. 00:52:064 (6,7,8,9,1) - Movement is very snappy to the slider, try making the notes before end further to the right so you can make the slider a bit more like 00:47:499 (1) - only on the other side ofc
  9. 00:54:020 (1) - Remove nc
  10. 01:00:542 (5) - nc
    01:02:988 (4,1) - okay so i would like to see 1 more horisontal as the boost from the hyperdash makes it easy to overdash and miss a lot of droplets
  11. 01:10:977 (3) - nc here, remove here 01:11:629 (1,1) - and add here again 01:12:281 (5) -
  12. 01:24:020 (8,1,2,3) - Either swap nc on 8 and 1 or nc all notes for hp, they're pretty far away so hp goes down pretty fast if you miss a lot before this part also I'm not sure about the movement here 01:23:368 (4,5,6,7,8) - the antiflow right before the hyper
midnight
  1. 00:07:064 (3,4) - I feel a note is missing on the white tick here, maybe try making 3 a 1/1 slider?
  2. 00:13:586 (1,2,3) - It seems you're emphasising the piano mostly and the higher pitched sound is on slider end of 2, you could try adding a repeat on 1 and having a dash to a 1/2 slider on 2, I don't feel like a hyper is fitting
  3. 00:38:368 (3) - a this curve is pretty ugly in gameplay xd maybe try rotating it like -60 degrees clockwise
  4. 00:39:673 (4,1) - swap nc
  5. 00:41:629 (2) - There are pretty distinct 1/4 drums here you could map
  6. okay my main issue with the first part of this kiai is that you're ignoring very distinct piano sounds where you've previously focused your mapping on the piano but suddenly in kiai you start focusing on pretty low background sounds. So I'd try mapping some 1/4's where you can hear the piano building up, example is like here 00:47:499 (1,2,3) - you can hear very very strong piano on the white tick on the slider of 2 there and there are a lot of similar cases like here 00:49:129 - also very strong piano.
  7. 00:44:564 (5,1) - I'd like to see at least a dash here for the downbeat, if you agree to my point above, you can add a note on the blue tick there as well for piano
  8. 00:47:173 (5,1) - here also is pretty strong beat, should at least have a stronger dash if not a hyperdash
  9. 01:10:977 (1,2,1) - all these have whistles in Platter, would also fit with a whistle here 01:13:260 (6) -
  10. 01:21:412 (1,2) - Same as above, also nc 01:22:879 (3) -
  11. 01:26:629 (2,3,4) - could nc all these notes because of hp drain
  12. 01:35:107 (3) - Try removing one repeat and add a note with dash to it for pitch change
  13. 01:36:412 (1,2) - swap nc
  14. 01:40:977 (3,4) - same as previously, i feel like a note is missing on the white tick so maybe make 3 a 1/1 slider
  15. 01:47:499 (1,2,3) - Also same as before, the higher pitched piano is on slider end of 2 so maybe try adding a repeat to 1 and a dash to 2 or something
that's all from me yo, gl~
posted
00:08:042- Add a note here for consistency with 00:18:477 (4)- (Okay)
00:20:760 (5,6,7,8,9)- like i understand you wanna keep a hyper here but imo this just sounds silly with the 1/3 break in the music so I would just keep it 1/2 rhythm or remove 00:21:194 (9)- cause 1/2 break sounds a million times better than 1/3 ( I strongly disagree. Ending on a 1 /2 sound betrays the 1/3 sound here. So if the player hears that 1/3 sound but no note is there, it will cause a lot of misjudging hitting that hyper. Plus, modders complained before about it being 1 /2 so I opted for the 1/3 instead )
00:21:412 (1,2)- Feels weird with a dash to 2 when the beat standing out is on slider end of 2, could try doing something like you did here 00:31:846 (1,2,3)- (Had to repattern to apply)
00:24:020 (4,1)- swap nc ( fine )
00:25:325 (1,2,3)- 00:35:760 (3,4,5)- I'd change 1 to a 1/2 slider as that's how this part is mapped in Rain and it feels weird Platter is higher densed, even if it's a gd/collab (I think it's fine, I don't like how Grapes mapped the part in rain because it doesnt' follow the sound)
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posted

Benny- wrote:

random mod, actually I expected the diff names to be all low caps because of the title/artist name ill probably do that later
cup
  1. 00:03:151 (1) - would be cool beans as 1/1 slider, also stay consistent with rhythm usage here 00:00:542 (1,2) - added a note instead
  2. 00:10:977 (1) - aand again rhythm change, try this as a single note instead as the beat on the red tick isn't that strong hard to emphasise.
  3. 00:18:477 (1) - actually I don't feel there is a strong enough beat here for a note, also put nc on 2 instead cause downbeat changed new combo but i think the note here is fine.
  4. 00:21:086 - I feel as if a note is missing here, the music is pretty intense i think its fine since the player here has to move to a decent amount imo to catch the n ext fruit
  5. 00:27:607 - here as well for consistency ok
  6. 00:34:455 (1,2,3,4,1) - why is this differently mapped to 00:24:020 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - when the music is the exact same? i wanted the beginning of this part of the song to have less note density and slowly increase the density as the song went on longer. imo that gives new players a good way to adapt to the music but i see ur point.
  7. 00:39:673 (4,1) - swap nc ok
  8. 01:03:151 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I think a timeline like this is better suited but up to you. I feel the doubles is kind of too dense for a cup diff, same here 01:13:586 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - i like the doubles and i dont plan on changing it for the time being.
  9. 01:08:368 (1,2) - same for these sliders as the screenshot above and all similar sliders xd ok
  10. 01:31:194 (1) - you can extend this slider by 1/2 because the bpm is so low i trust u
  11. 01:34:455 - The outro is mapped way more densely than the intro, like here 01:37:064 (1,2,3) - vs 00:03:151 (1,2,3) - so maybe try fixing up so the rhythm/density stays the same in the intro as the outro since the music is basically the samei changed like 1 pattern.
collab platter
  1. 00:46:031 (2) - I'd remove this cause it's snapped to barely audible piano and you're obviously not focusing on piano in the kiai so i added this to help setup the dash and to emphasize that this part had a piano noise that the other pattern before didnt have
  2. 00:44:075 (3) - On basically all sliders like this, you could try moving it 1/4 forward and adding a repeat to it, I feel it covers the background piano a lot better made it a repeat
  3. 00:52:064 (6,7,8,9,1) - Movement is very snappy to the slider, try making the notes before end further to the right so you can make the slider a bit more like 00:47:499 (1) - only on the other side ofc i think i smoothed it out a little
  4. 00:54:020 (1) - Remove nc
  5. 01:00:542 (5) - nc did both ncs
    01:02:988 (4,1) - okay so i would like to see 1 more horisontal as the boost from the hyperdash makes it easy to overdash and miss a lot of droplets uhh i changed the slider a bit i think.
  6. 01:10:977 (3) - nc here, remove here 01:11:629 (1,1) - and add here again 01:12:281 (5) - ok
  7. 01:24:020 (8,1,2,3) - Either swap nc on 8 and 1 or nc all notes for hp, they're pretty far away so hp goes down pretty fast if you miss a lot before this part also I'm not sure about the movement here 01:23:368 (4,5,6,7,8) - the antiflow right before the hyper did the nc things. i also fixed the antiflow just incase.
midnight
  1. 00:07:064 (3,4) - I feel a note is missing on the white tick here, maybe try making 3 a 1/1 slider? okay
  2. 00:13:586 (1,2,3) - It seems you're emphasising the piano mostly and the higher pitched sound is on slider end of 2, you could try adding a repeat on 1 and having a dash to a 1/2 slider on 2, I don't feel like a hyper is fitting did it but added a hyper to 2
  3. 00:38:368 (3) - a this curve is pretty ugly in gameplay xd maybe try rotating it like -60 degrees clockwise rotating it is still ugly so i just changed shape
  4. 00:39:673 (4,1) - swap nc ok
  5. 00:41:629 (2) - There are pretty distinct 1/4 drums here you could map fuk drumms
  6. okay my main issue with the first part of this kiai is that you're ignoring very distinct piano sounds where you've previously focused your mapping on the piano but suddenly in kiai you start focusing on pretty low background sounds. So I'd try mapping some 1/4's where you can hear the piano building up, example is like here 00:47:499 (1,2,3) - you can hear very very strong piano on the white tick on the slider of 2 there and there are a lot of similar cases like here 00:49:129 - also very strong piano. i dont want to deter from the main pattern that i keep on repeating in the first half of the kiai but i did add more notes for emphasize other piano sounds.
  7. 00:44:564 (5,1) - I'd like to see at least a dash here for the downbeat, if you agree to my point above, you can add a note on the blue tick there as well for piano ok
  8. 00:47:173 (5,1) - here also is pretty strong beat, should at least have a stronger dash if not a hyperdash changed the pattern a bit
  9. 01:10:977 (1,2,1) - all these have whistles in Platter, would also fit with a whistle here 01:13:260 (6) -
  10. 01:21:412 (1,2) - Same as above, also nc 01:22:879 (3) - did both hitsounding and nc
  11. 01:26:629 (2,3,4) - could nc all these notes because of hp drain ok
  12. 01:35:107 (3) - Try removing one repeat and add a note with dash to it for pitch change
  13. 01:36:412 (1,2) - swap nc
  14. 01:40:977 (3,4) - same as previously, i feel like a note is missing on the white tick so maybe make 3 a 1/1 slider
  15. 01:47:499 (1,2,3) - Also same as before, the higher pitched piano is on slider end of 2 so maybe try adding a repeat to 1 and a dash to 2 or something applied all 3 in some way or another
that's all from me yo, gl~
revive

i blame californian for applying mods :p
posted

Paranoid Grapes wrote:

i blame californian for applying mods :p
time to keep my end of the bargain by the end of tomorrow, until then oyasumi
posted
Nightfall more like Night(this set is never going to get ranked)fall
posted

Benny- wrote:

random mod, actually I expected the diff names to be all low caps because of the title/artist name
Magic Girl's salad[/color]
  1. 00:10:977 (1,2,3) - why sudden rhythm change from 00:00:542 (1,2,3,4) - ? owo - for the extra jingle sound i guess uwu
  2. 00:38:368 (3) - aaa downbeat on sliderend, please remove one repeat and add a note there instead for better emphasising mwm also 00:38:368 (3,1,2) - all these notes are placed on almost the same grid so if you choose not to apply the first I'd still recommend putting some distance between these notes as 3/1 standstill is quite boring - i worked with it owo
  3. 00:41:629 (4,1) - this is such a long distance with a very sharp directonchange owo consider lowering the distance - oki uwu
  4. 00:43:586 (2,3,4) - I don't see a dash here very fitting, I'd rather like to see a dash between 00:44:238 (4,1) - - ovo
  5. 00:46:194 (2,3) - ehm why follow piano suddenly? uwu I like the idea but it's kind of meh when other places there are very strong piano that remains unmapped and tbh, I think it's good to keep the density low, especially when these piano sounds are unmapped in Platter, even if it is a gd xd - look im really sorry but ive come too far to change this now and i need to sleep so i'll consider it but im keeping it for now.
  6. 00:47:499 (1,2) - maybe lower the distance here a tiny bit if it's supposed to be walkable owo - rawr owo!
  7. 00:52:553 (2,1) - I'd increase the distance here a bit to make it clear it's a dash uwu - it'll be against the wall henny uvu
  8. 00:56:629 (1,2) - Same as I mentioned before about density and stuff owo - same response owo
  9. 00:57:933 (1,2) - and here, I guess it's supposed to be walkable so consider lowering the distance to make it clearer it's a walk UWU - OWO
  10. 01:02:988 (2,1) - Consider increasing the distance a bit to make it clear it's a dash- ok
  11. 01:04:455 (2,1) - Here also, I assume it's supposed to be a dash so increase the distance a tiny bit - wall me harder
  12. 01:11:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Since the pitch is lowering on 1 to 4, maybe make those 1/2's instead and make 6 1/4's? Or actually, I'd like if you used the same rhythm as you did here 01:21:412 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - owo - i did a thing
  13. 01:14:890 (2,1,2,3) - hmm consider making spacing equal to 01:04:455 (2,1,2,3) - as it is now, it's kinda jumpy and antiflowy/directionchangy at the same time which doesn't suit the music or this difficulty imo - done
  14. 01:31:846 (1) - You can extend the spinner 1/2 to the red tick because the bpm is so low, but up to you mwm - umu
  15. 01:44:890 (1,2,3) - same as before, why suddenly change rhythm usage? uwu - same answer as before uwu
  16. 01:55:325 (1) - same here, you can either add a note to the red tick before the spinner or move the spinner start 1/2 after the last note because the bpm is so low, it's allowed owo - tbh i changed the spinner at first to be consistent with the other diffs but now i dont evne know what the other diffs are doing so sure.
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that's all from me yo, gl~ - my passionate flame of hatred will not be snuffed out until i fucking kill you for this
here u fuckin go
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posted
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posted
upddated set names to be lowercase in hopes of keeping this alive.
posted
aight I'll mod first for ya grapes xd
Platter collabbbb
Hmmm pretty interesting when i first played this was that there isnt any mini fruits a

00:27:281 (2) - maybe move this to x:288 since i kinda feel like this kinda lacks to emphasize that flute sound
00:40:651 (3) - maybe also move this to x:382 since its a loud sound to give it more impact to dash at here
01:51:412 (3) - hmmm maybe put an h-dash here like what you did in 00:07:064 (3) -
01:54:999 (1,2) - might wanna fix that 2B or if thats allowed in ctb then i stand corrected xd

hmm since this is a platter i kinda think the diffs needs more sidedashes imo but overall this diff flows out nice xd
im ded at night
Just some personal stuff here:
You can honestly put some sweet slider art 01:24:020 - to 01:31:846 - (even tho it doesnt really show that much in gameplay but it could be nice to see for mappers like us to see for once xd)
but e up to you

00:04:129 (3) - maybe move this to x:253 for a side dash? since its sort of a loud piano sound i think it would it to put one here
00:20:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hmmm i kinda how you did the stream here it might be weird to look at first but it actually kinda flows well xd
00:26:629 (1) - hmmm can you move this to x:57 for an h-dash since its pretty much a downbeat and it can give some consistency on the h-dash you gave over here 00:21:412 (1,2,3,4) -
00:26:955 (2) - also move this to x:260 if you took the route i suggested above
00:40:977 (1,2) - maybe move 1 to x:251 for better flow here and 2 at x:412 for both of them to have side dashes here since these two sounds raises up volume and pretty much have loud sounds.
00:49:292 (4) - maybe ctrl g this since its better to have some antiflow here imo
01:51:412 (3) - hmmm maybe h-dash here like what you did on 01:40:977 (3) -

this diff also flows nice xddd


So far yeah this is a gud set
lookin forward seein this ranked by u senpai XD

Goodluk bud
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JeirYagtama wrote:

aight I'll mod first for ya grapes xd
Platter collabbbb
Hmmm pretty interesting when i first played this was that there isnt any mini fruits a

00:27:281 (2) - maybe move this to x:288 since i kinda feel like this kinda lacks to emphasize that flute sound
00:40:651 (3) - maybe also move this to x:382 since its a loud sound to give it more impact to dash at here
01:51:412 (3) - hmmm maybe put an h-dash here like what you did in 00:07:064 (3) - nah, me and roseus' parts are different so i dont thing think thats nessesary. if i get more opinions on it then maybe though
01:54:999 (1,2) - might wanna fix that 2B or if thats allowed in ctb then i stand corrected xd idk how that happened LOL

hmm since this is a platter i kinda think the diffs needs more sidedashes imo but overall this diff flows out nice xd
im ded at night
Just some personal stuff here:
You can honestly put some sweet slider art 01:24:020 - to 01:31:846 - (even tho it doesnt really show that much in gameplay but it could be nice to see for mappers like us to see for once xd) nah
but e up to you

00:04:129 (3) - maybe move this to x:253 for a side dash? since its sort of a loud piano sound i think it would it to put one here okay
00:20:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hmmm i kinda how you did the stream here it might be weird to look at first but it actually kinda flows well xd thanks?
00:26:629 (1) - hmmm can you move this to x:57 for an h-dash since its pretty much a downbeat and it can give some consistency on the h-dash you gave over here 00:21:412 (1,2,3,4) -
00:26:955 (2) - also move this to x:260 if you took the route i suggested above took both suggestions and changed some spacing
00:40:977 (1,2) - maybe move 1 to x:251 for better flow here and 2 at x:412 for both of them to have side dashes here since these two sounds raises up volume and pretty much have loud sounds. i just made 1 into a hyper.
00:49:292 (4) - maybe ctrl g this since its better to have some antiflow here imo
01:51:412 (3) - hmmm maybe h-dash here like what you did on 01:40:977 (3) - nah

this diff also flows nice xddd


So far yeah this is a gud set
lookin forward seein this ranked by u senpai XD

Goodluk bud
thx
posted
rank nightfall
[General]
  1. magic girl's salad has widescreen storyboard enabled, pls disable as there is no sb on the map
  2. collab platter's last spinner finishes half a beat earlier than all other diffs' spinners. Consider making it a beat longer for consistency.
  3. such high HPs for all diffs, maybe lower all of them by one?
[cup]
  1. 00:42:281 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - aaaa the same shape repeated so many times it's not even fun anymore. Please consider varying either the orientation or the shape of these sliders before I get my ocd triggered ;_; (should be easy enough if you only decide to change the orientation of some, since they are repeats and don't require being moved over the x axis at all, just moving the tail of the slider works too)
  2. 01:12:607 (2,3) - I'd rather move these to x:56 so that the curve isn't so sharp/edgy.
  3. 00:51:738 (3,4) - ^ but to x:104
[magic girl's salad]
  1. 00:09:673 (3,4) - Is the distance between these supposed to be a dash? If so, move 00:10:325 (4) - to x:188 to make it clear, if not I'd suggest to reduce distancing a bit since it's unclear whether it's a dash or not.
  2. 00:19:455 (2) - Tilt this slider a bit more horizontally, I can still catch 00:20:107 (3) - with a walk and not with a dash like it's supposed to be o.O
  3. 00:27:933 (3) - Move to x:496 instead? Same as before, distance is kinda ambiguous here.
  4. 00:30:542 (3) - x:396? Same as before.
  5. 00:29:238 (1,2,3) - and 00:34:455 (1,2,3) - look exactly the same, try varying the patterns here a bit, maybe you could do this with the latter selection, it really works nicely: HUZZAH
  6. 00:38:368 (3) - Move to x:380, ambiguous spacing, you know the drill
  7. 00:49:781 (4) - Move to x:188 (2,0x spacing) and then move 00:50:107 (1) - to x:472 to keep consistency with previous dashing emphasis.
  8. 00:52:064 (1,2) - Move to x:392 so that the next 3/4 slider is emphasized correctly.
  9. 00:55:325 (1) - stack with 00:56:303 (3) - ? Also for distancing consistency
  10. 00:56:629 (1,2,3) - aaaa pls copypaste 00:46:194 (2,3,4) - and place it on the place of this curve please, seeing such a beautiful curve and then seeing this breaks my heart and gives me mixed feelings *runs*
  11. 01:03:151 (1) - Move to x:228 for better emphasis
  12. 01:05:760 (1) - x:128, ^ :^)
  13. 01:08:368 (1) - x:400, ^ hue
  14. 01:09:673 (2) - x:96, the violin is really highly pitched here so yea, emphasis
  15. 01:10:977 (1,2) - x:364 to compensate for previous change I guess (if you apply it that is)
  16. 01:20:107 (2) - x:412, high violin :>
  17. 01:40:977 (3) - x:496?
  18. 01:44:238 (4) - x:336 for clear dash distance
  19. 01:53:368 (2) - x:220, same as before.
[collab platter]
  1. 00:44:890 (1,2,3) - Move to x:72? rn the distancing between 00:44:564 (4,1) - these too is kinda too much, borderline hyper IMO
  2. 00:54:510 (3,4,4,5) - These look exactly like the ones from the previous section (00:44:075 (3,4,4,5) - , I'd suggest varying the shapes of the sliders a bit,
    say, by 00:49:292 (3,4) - copypasting these and ctrl+h'ing them and placing them where 00:54:510 (3,4) - these are and perhaps you could 00:44:075 (3,4) - copypaste these and 00:57:118 (4,5) - replace these with them for more variety.
[the dead of night]
  1. what is that grammatically incorrect diffname wh


There was not much I could point out about the rain diff, it's pretty well made and there are no detectable issues on it whatsoever to me, so yeah.
There we go, good luck!
posted

Hareimu wrote:

rank nightfall
[General]
  1. magic girl's salad has widescreen storyboard enabled, pls disable as there is no sb on the map fixed
  2. collab platter's last spinner finishes half a beat earlier than all other diffs' spinners. Consider making it a beat longer for consistency. fixed
  3. such high HPs for all diffs, maybe lower all of them by one? decreased by .5 for now, ill change if i get more opinions on this.
[cup]
  1. 00:42:281 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - aaaa the same shape repeated so many times it's not even fun anymore. Please consider varying either the orientation or the shape of these sliders before I get my ocd triggered ;_; (should be easy enough if you only decide to change the orientation of some, since they are repeats and don't require being moved over the x axis at all, just moving the tail of the slider works too)
  2. 01:12:607 (2,3) - I'd rather move these to x:56 so that the curve isn't so sharp/edgy. okay
  3. 00:51:738 (3,4) - ^ but to x:104 ^
[collab platter]
  1. 00:44:890 (1,2,3) - Move to x:72? rn the distancing between 00:44:564 (4,1) - these too is kinda too much, borderline hyper IMO ok
  2. 00:54:510 (3,4,4,5) - These look exactly like the ones from the previous section (00:44:075 (3,4,4,5) - , I'd suggest varying the shapes of the sliders a bit,
    say, by 00:49:292 (3,4) - copypasting these and ctrl+h'ing them and placing them where 00:54:510 (3,4) - these are and perhaps you could 00:44:075 (3,4) - copypaste these and 00:57:118 (4,5) - replace these with them for more variety. to be honest, i was just trying to go for consistency here for this part and i dont want to change the map too drastically. i will consider it if other people tell me to change it though.
[the dead of night]
  1. what is that grammatically incorrect diffname wh
    http://www.thesaurus.com/browse/dead%20of%20night?s=t


There was not much I could point out about the rain diff, it's pretty well made and there are no detectable issues on it whatsoever to me, so yeah.
There we go, good luck!
thanks
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