1. Kindle (5.25 stars, 832 notes)

[ Pika ] wrote:

owo tropical house mod for tropical house mod

[Burn!]
00:10:282 (4) - move this up and make it curved, more relaxed flow. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6937828 fixed and kept original spacing
There's no difference between the spacing of 00:21:082 (7,8) - and 00:21:607 (9,1) - , but they're timed the same. confused by what you mean D:
00:36:682 (2) - move this a little farther out because it's too close to (1) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6937839 agreed
00:38:482 (1,2,3) - too large spacing for 40 seconds into the song, nerf a little i disagree, the map is bound to pick up difficulty at some point, plus that distance jump is used frequently at other parts of the map as well
00:40:732 (9,10,1) - ^ ^
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00:47:482 (7,8) - flip this because it flows a little better. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6937863 throws spacing off, plus i think it flows fine as is
00:48:082 (1,2,3) - nerf this just the slightest amount because song intensity doesnt match disagree, thats the spacing i use for all parts of the same intensity
00:50:332 (9,10,1) - ^ ^
01:31:732 (4) - move this a little up and to the right because 2 blocks it fixed, so that it isnt a 100% overlap
02:12:682 (3) - maybe Ctrl + G this because it flows better to (4) i wouldnt be able to do the same aesthetic pattern with the same spacing
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02:29:032 (2) - move this a little further down and to the left because the big slider before it blocks it a lot it doesnt block it completely, plus i thought it looks nice
02:29:482 (5) - move this a little further up and to the left because it aesthetics better with (1) and (3) yep, fixed
02:36:682 (3) - why do this again? could just clone (1) and move it a little unsure about this, idk if it looks as nice
02:53:482 (4) - a little more up and right so (1) doesnt block it out as much okay
03:30:382 (6,7,8) - this flows weird, can't really fix without remapping a little i dont think it flows weird tbh
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04:00:082 (1,2) - missed a few notes there, could replace (2) with a kickslider or smth i fixed, but didnt take ur suggestion, instead changed (3) to reverse slider
04:22:282 (3,4) - weird flow change, can't really fix without remapping unless you want to Ctrl + G (4) and reposition (5) idk i think its okay
04:40:132 (9) - move this to 250, 110 because better triangle however, messes up spacing
05:10:882 (3,4,5) - make this a reverse slider or different combo colors; space them out a little bit. spaced out and different combo colours
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Damn that's a good map. Nice Job! You did hiccup here and there but I'm sure you'll fix them ^^

1. 00:28:282 (4,5) - stack correctly
2. 00:31:207 (1) - move this back maybe so gameplay would be better
3. 00:38:482 - why kiai here i dont get it. here isnt necessary kiai the rythm just changed a bit
4. 00:38:857 (2,3) - why super strange mini-spaced stream? change it plz
5. 00:41:782 (1) - lol this slider change it plz
6. 00:45:082 (3,4) - stack correctly
7. 00:45:082 (3,4,4,5) - ^
8. 00:48:457 (2,3) - this another time not pls
9. 00:54:682 (3,4) - stack corretly
10. 01:43:282 (1,2) - ^
11. 02:18:682 (3,4) - ^
12. 02:25:882 (3,4) - ^
13. 02:35:482 (3,4) - ^
14. 02:43:657 (2,3) - pls stop it. its a fucking penis LOL
15. 02:47:482 (5,6) - staaaaaaaaaaaaack
16. 02:50:482 (1,3) - kinda blanket
17. 02:52:282 (4,5) - stack pls =w=
18. 02:52:282 (4,5) - change this stream ppplsplsplpslpllps
19. 02:59:482 (4,5) - stack
20. 02:59:482 (4,5) - not moreeeee
21. 03:36:457 (2,3) - ^
22. 04:10:057 (2,3) - ^

[A L P H A] wrote:

hi xd. from #modreqs

[Burn in water or whatever you like but burn pls ok die]

1. 00:28:282 (4,5) - stack correctly its the same spacing as regular stack only different direction
2. 00:31:207 (1) - move this back maybe so gameplay would be better but then the player has to turn twice? imo flow is nice like it is
3. 00:38:482 - why kiai here i dont get it. here isnt necessary kiai the rythm just changed a bit kiai because its the most intense part of the beginning of the song
4. 00:38:857 (2,3) - why super strange mini-spaced stream? change it plz why? i think it fits the music really well
5. 00:41:782 (1) - lol this slider change it plz whats wrong with it
6. 00:45:082 (3,4) - stack correctly stack was made like that to follow direction of flow
7. 00:45:082 (3,4,4,5) - ^
8. 00:48:457 (2,3) - this another time not pls same as before
9. 00:54:682 (3,4) - stack corretly same as before
10. 01:43:282 (1,2) - ^ ^
11. 02:18:682 (3,4) - ^ ^
12. 02:25:882 (3,4) - ^ ^
13. 02:35:482 (3,4) - ^ ^
14. 02:43:657 (2,3) - pls stop it. its a fucking penis LOL has been edited
15. 02:47:482 (5,6) - staaaaaaaaaaaaack same as before
16. 02:50:482 (1,3) - kinda blanket should be better
17. 02:52:282 (4,5) - stack pls =w= same as before
18. 02:52:282 (4,5) - change this stream ppplsplsplpslpllps still idk why, same reason as before
19. 02:59:482 (4,5) - stack same as before
20. 02:59:482 (4,5) - not moreeeee lol
21. 03:36:457 (2,3) - ^ ^
22. 04:10:057 (2,3) - ^^

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nothing more nic map ok bye xdxd

Sotarks wrote:

hii

general
consider adding a muter sliderslide please.. alright
oh ok no hitsounds ? was going to get to it, but really idk how to hitsound this nicely :/
tbh your stacking 2pixel off, looks really messy imo really? i thought i looked good, but i guess since you are the second person to suggest this i will change all of them

burn
00:02:482 (1) - intentionnal stack? it was
00:21:082 (3,1) - stacks like that are confusing since it's not same rythmnn my suggestion is to 00:21:082 (3) - stack that one propely on the slider head okay
00:28:282 (4) - ^ ^
00:30:682 (3,4) - 'cause look you did it perfectly here xd
01:57:082 (3) - what about 192|40 to avoid this overlap did something slightly different, but took out overlap
02:43:132 (6) - kinda overmapped you can replace tis 02:42:982 (5,6) - by a 1/4 slider great idea
i like the flow tho!!

sorry for bad mod, but i like the map xd~~~
GL hope you'll rank that (don't forget to hs!)

Plaudible wrote:

ahh this was refreshing, i've had to mod quite a few interesting maps xD already can tell this is pretty solid, nice job~

Ed Sheeran - I See Fire (Kygo Remix)

Burn

1. hitsounds pls b0ss. A mean snapclap or somethin for those long sliders would be AMAZING will get to it
2. Ehh, just to start, do you think Burn is the best difficulty name for this? Feels a bit too intense, especially since the song is a lot more calm in nature. I don't have any off the top of my head but you should definitely experiment a bit ;u goes to what pika said
3. 00:04:882 (1,2,3,4,5) - This would work fine, but my issue is how similar the spacing is to 00:03:382 (2,3). My initial reaction while playing this was to play this like they were 1/2s. Intensity wise, it should also reflect similarly to 00:09:682 (1,2,3), but you mapped it quite intensely. I'd suggest changing the rhythm a bit and making sure the spacing makes rhythm clear here - maybe 2 circles and a slider instead of 4 circles? My last complaint with this is that it just looks a bit awkward, so if you go for a hexgrid approach use ctrl+shift+d to make it more precise. (I think the song has shown to be more intense later so the iterations of this sound beyond the intro should be fine I say.) idk, i think it differentiates pretty clearly from the 1/2s, and that it matches the intensity of 00:09:682 since that one is 1/8... i did however make it more precise
4. 00:07:282 (1,2) - Good concept, make it more parallel though please. http://puu.sh/tKfZw/4a7771f26f.jpg fixed it up
5. 00:18:682 (4) - Random suggestion based on preference, ctrl+h this for a more sharp flow to represent the change in song better? It's a bit too soft as is IMO. Then the anti-flow into 1 will match the intensity and change in pace too, I say. ill keep as is, looks really odd to me with your suggestion
6. 00:24:232 (2,1) - Could you restack these? Just a bit off. actually spacing was supposed to be larger to (3) so i moved it further away
7. 00:33:682 (1,3,5) - Is this intended? lol. looks super odd. Here's what I see: http://puu.sh/tKgan/2b684916d7.jpg. Might I suggest this: http://puu.sh/tKgd6/19aa5bf506.jpg didnt do it exactly, but fixed it so it looks neater
8. 00:40:732 (1) - I don't agree with this note. It's on a very light hi-hat but is spaced with the triple very intensely. If anything I'd rather you ignore it and just map a double instead. Don't give the weak hi-hat the same spacing as the powerful melody here. unsure about it, but i changed to see how it goes
9. 00:50:332 (1) - Same thing here. ^
10. 01:31:582 (3,4,5,1) - Ahh dude this flow is all over the place! I suggest flow somewhat like this: http://puu.sh/tKgvv/6d3ebd9837.jpg. Right now yours just has like 3 instances of complete 180 degree flow changes in such a short time frame, it's too much and plays very awkwardly. disagree, i think it plays fine
11. 02:45:532 (1) - Alright, just gonna point this out one last time, but I'm guessing this rhythm will repeat itself quite a bit so I suggest you consider changing these. yep, same as before, fixed
12. 03:33:682 (1,2,3,1) - Can you make these overlaps consistent? :> i think it looks a lot nicer when the objects are distinguishable like this
13. 04:35:632 (5) - This goes just a bit too high in the playing field and is in the HP bar. should be good now
14. Overall, very nicely done! Plays extremely well. Just a bit nitpicky with some aesthetic choices though. I'd prefer to see you overlap more consistently and just fix some parallelism issues, some mentioned, but they do repeat. Cool song, good luck!

[[Pika]] wrote:

rename diff from Burn to Kindle or something calmer thx

MujouSekai wrote:

m4m

Kindle

• 00:15:082 (5,1) - could put long slider under short slider. idk, no reason to
  00:30:532 (2) - feel like this is an extra note. in the kiai section its fine though. disagree, there is a sound there
  00:43:732 (4,1) - nazi overlap xd ok i made a little better
  00:51:382 (1,3) - ^ ^
  00:56:182 (4) - for this specific slider, as the music changes pitch to a "do", i think the slider should have a different direction compared to the 00:55:882 (3) - already i made anti flow to incorporate this
  00:55:882 (3) - i don't know if these overlaps are intentional, but it will look much better if they are just separated or stacked. but for 00:33:682 (1,2,3,4) - i think its fine. nothing overlaps there
  00:59:332 (2,3) - suggestion:i feel like you could make a pattern so that the "echo" sound stands out to the player. :> would be cool. i think it does as it is
  01:04:132 (2,3) - ^ ^
  01:06:682 (3) - Are you sure you are not adding notes to the vocals? Maybe a 1/3 repeater would work. i follow vocals loosely here, so maybe this is a good idea
  01:28:732 - a note here. just like your previous sections. ooh good idea
  01:31:282 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is just too much now. clumped together, recommend changing idk i like the way it looks, and seems easy enough to read so ill keep
  01:33:682 (1) - maybe adding a triple or one 1/8 behind this to create the "brunggggg" effect. just suggesting if you listen slower there isnt anything there
  02:08:182 (1) - again, would be better if this is opposite direction to show emphasis. it might go the same direction, but the emphasis is in the fact that it does not flow from (3)
  02:43:732 (3,4) - spacing too large seemed too sudden for the spacing increase. nerfed a little bit
  03:00:082 (1) - ctrl-g plz, too awkward to play. imo its fine, plus ctrl+g messes up spacing
  03:00:982 (4) - off screen no it isnt
  02:56:932 (4) - move to x184y288? cant seem to get spacing back to normal =(
  04:10:582 (1) - crtl + j imo it loses its flow emphasis
  04:11:632 (4) - crtl +H messes up spacing
  04:58:282 (5) - too clumped imo.same reasoning as the other one, looks nice to me and no problem with playing

But Some patterns are a bit clumped together, maybe correct them might make it prettier.
Nice map Good luck!