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Beren
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akrolsmir
I can't see Chungskale's difficulty... try adding it and resubmitting? And I'll be back sometime to give it a mod.
chungskale
akrolsmir
I decided that yes, I do have time to mod this. + Touhou.

Normal:
00:07:787 (4) - One grid up, to get 2,3,4 to be equidistant. Also to make it look less like 3 wraps around it.
00:09:643 (3) - Personal preference, but I don't like how it overlaps with 2 and 4.

Oh wait, it's not complete... and you plan on redoing Hard? Guess I'll skip to Lunatic right now and be back later (again)

Chungskale's Lunatic:
00:08:715 (1,2,3) - Adjust so it makes an equilateral triangle?
00:09:952 (1) - Remove this note; doesn't fit music
00:47:993 (6,7,8) - make this like 00:47:375 (3,4,5) - ?

This was a bit out of my comfort zone in terms of difficulty so the mod wasn't as in-depth as I would have liked it to be. Anyways, I enjoyed the music and mapping, starred!
chungskale
Chungskale's Lunatic:
00:08:715 (1,2,3) - Adjust so it makes an equilateral triangle?
00:09:952 (1) - Remove this note; doesn't fit music
00:47:993 (6,7,8) - make this like 00:47:375 (3,4,5) - ? all fixed

This was a bit out of my comfort zone in terms of difficulty so the mod wasn't as in-depth as I would have liked it to be. Anyways, I enjoyed the music and mapping, starred!
hello :) thanks mod~
the spacing in this BPM are a bit far, maybe difficult to mouse players :lol:
maybe you can try to give me some opinions on those nooby hitsounds if you wants to :oops:
Download: Memoria - Haruka Tooki Gensoukyo - Dream of fantasy (Kanon) [Chung's Lunatic].osu
lkp
lkp
K o h a k u
very fan :) star~♪
fanzhen0019
我艹屯了快半个小时的MOD被弹窗刷掉了尼玛以后开记事本然后复制FFUU

好歌o.o
just suggestions
[Hard]
00:09:334 (3) - whistle
00:09:643 (5) - remove whistle
00:10:261 (7) - new combo?
00:24:179 - clap
00:25:416 - ^
00:26:653 - ^
00:28:355 - clap?
00:29:127 - clap
00:30:365 - ^
00:30:828 - 这段用soft大丈夫?
如果一定要用
绿线移到这里 - 00:31:292 (4) - new combo & 00:30:828 (1) - remove new combo+remove whistle
00:30:984 (8) - clap
00:31:602 (1) - whistle
00:32:221 (3) - 没叠好 请把DS调成0然后按住shift重新叠一次.also add whistle
00:32:530 (4) - 变spacing了 new combo&add finish?
↑↑
如果不用,改成NC2然后把上面提到的whistle改成clap
00:33:767 - 这段不用NC2? 用的话先移掉00:33:767到00:43:663所有的whistle
00:34:076 - clap
00:34:694 (3) - ^
00:35:313 (5) - ^
00:35:932 (7) - ^
00:36:550 - ^
00:37:169 - ^
00:37:633 - ^
00:38:096 - ^
00:39:024 - ^
00:39:643 (2) - ^
00:40:261 - ^
00:40:880 (6) - ^
00:41:499 - ^
00:42:118 (9) - ^
00:51:395 - clap
00:52:633 - ^
00:54:643 (4) - slider开头去掉clap
00:55:725 (1) - clap
00:57:272 - 莫名的哨音? (艹..原来是歌里的)
00:58:200 (1) - clap
00:58:509 - remove clap
00:58:818 (3) - clap
00:59:127 (4) - remove clap
00:59:437 (5) - remove finish&add clap
01:00:055 - clap
01:00:674 (3) - clap
01:01:292 (5) - remove clap
01:01:911 - clap
01:02:220 (3,4) - spacing
01:02:684 (5,6) - remove clap
01:03:148 (1) - slider开头加clap
01:03:767 (3) - ^
01:04:386 (1) - clap
01:05:390 (6,7) - clap
01:05:622 - 突然变哨声了?改回来?
这段感觉很乱..怎么办你自己定吧
01:13:823 - remove clap
01:13:973 (3) - clap
01:14:437 - 不加note吗?
01:30:983 (5) - clap
01:31:447 (7) - clap
01:34:077 - 和前面一样..
这一段就不看了

01:54:488 - clap
01:55:107 (4) - slider开头clap
01:55:416 (5) - slider末clap
01:56:344 (8) - 开头clap
01:58:818 (1) - 去掉末的clap
01:59:282 (2) - 末clap
01:59:746 (4) - 去掉开头的clap
02:00:365 (6) - 去掉clap
02:00:674 (8) - 开头加clap
02:00:983 (9) - 去掉clap
02:01:293 (1,2) - clap
02:01:602 (3) - 去clap
02:01:756 (4) - 末clap
02:02:529 (7) - 开头clap
02:03:303 (10) - clap?
02:03:612 (1) - clap
02:05:004 (4) - clap
...
剩下的懒得看了..
音效你可以参考lkp的难度 这里给的仅仅是参考
声音有点小 适当加大吧

[P's Lunatic]
没设preview point
02:39:334 (3) - 挡住了大丈夫?

Chungskale's Lunatic没看见呢
接受Normal diff吗? o.o
go for rank!
Topic Starter
Kanon

fanzhen0019 wrote:

我艹屯了快半个小时的MOD被弹窗刷掉了尼玛以后开记事本然后复制FFUU

好歌o.o
just suggestions
[Hard]
00:09:334 (3) - whistle k
00:09:643 (5) - remove whistle k
00:10:261 (7) - new combo k
00:24:179 - clap k
00:25:416 - ^ k
00:26:653 - ^ k
00:28:355 - clap? k
00:29:127 - clap k
00:30:365 - ^ k
00:30:828 - 这段用soft大丈夫?
如果一定要用
绿线移到这里 - 00:31:292 (4) - new combo & 00:30:828 (1) - remove new combo+remove whistle kk
00:30:984 (8) - clap k
00:31:602 (1) - whistle k
00:32:221 (3) - 没叠好 请把DS调成0然后按住shift重新叠一次.also add whistle k
00:32:530 (4) - 变spacing了 new combo&add finish?
↑↑
如果不用,改成NC2然后把上面提到的whistle改成clap
00:33:767 - 这段不用NC2? 用的话先移掉00:33:767到00:43:663所有的whistle k
00:34:076 - clap k
00:34:694 (3) - ^ k
00:35:313 (5) - ^ k
00:35:932 (7) - ^ k
00:36:550 - ^ k
00:37:169 - ^ k
00:37:633 - ^ k
00:38:096 - ^ k
00:39:024 - ^ k
00:39:643 (2) - ^ k
00:40:261 - ^ k
00:40:880 (6) - ^ k
00:41:499 - ^ k
00:42:118 (9) - ^ k
00:51:395 - clap k
00:52:633 - ^ k
00:54:643 (4) - slider开头去掉clap k
00:55:725 (1) - clap k
00:57:272 - 莫名的哨音? (艹..原来是歌里的)
00:58:200 (1) - clap k
00:58:509 - remove clap k
00:58:818 (3) - clap k
00:59:127 (4) - remove clap k
00:59:437 (5) - remove finish&add clap
01:00:055 - clap k
01:00:674 (3) - clap k
01:01:292 (5) - remove clap k
01:01:911 - clap k
01:02:220 (3,4) - spacing ?
01:02:684 (5,6) - remove clap k
01:03:148 (1) - slider开头加clap k
01:03:767 (3) - ^ k
01:04:386 (1) - clap k
01:05:390 (6,7) - clap k
01:05:622 - 突然变哨声了?改回来?
这段感觉很乱..怎么办你自己定吧 fixed
01:13:823 - remove clap k
01:13:973 (3) - clap k
01:14:437 - 不加note吗? 感觉差不多
01:30:983 (5) - clap k
01:31:447 (7) - clap k
01:34:077 - 和前面一样..
这一段就不看了保持现在这样貌似也可以。。

01:54:488 - clap k
01:55:107 (4) - slider开头clap k
01:55:416 (5) - slider末clap k
01:56:344 (8) - 开头clap k
01:58:818 (1) - 去掉末的clap k
01:59:282 (2) - 末clap k
01:59:746 (4) - 去掉开头的clap k
02:00:365 (6) - 去掉clap k
02:00:674 (8) - 开头加clap k
02:00:983 (9) - 去掉clap k
02:01:293 (1,2) - clap k
02:01:602 (3) - 去clap k
02:01:756 (4) - 末clap k
02:02:529 (7) - 开头clap k
02:03:303 (10) - clap? k
02:03:612 (1) - clap k
02:05:004 (4) - clap k
...
剩下的懒得看了..
音效你可以参考lkp的难度 这里给的仅仅是参考
声音有点小 适当加大吧 k

Chungskale's Lunatic没看见呢 嘛,,这个不提了。。
接受Normal diff吗? o.o
go for rank!
。。音效苦手。。。
这么仔细的MOD帮大忙了,十分感谢

你要做NORMAL DIFF是么? 还等什么 :)
hez
我来扔星的
fanzhen0019
可能会拖.
在学校基本没时间做 x_x
note:我比较喜欢用对称
fanzhen0019
换新风格不小心做成了Normal+大丈夫?
x_x

Download: Memoria - Haruka Tooki Gensoukyo - Dream of fantasy (Kanon) [fz's Normal+].osu
Mercurius
8-)
S o r d a
thanks reqs~

[overall]:
  1. why Works In Progress? Change Pending map
  2. BG 1024x768 better change Please
  3. why two osb? Delete and Full submission
  4. Difficulty P's Lunatic ?? Change lkp or lkp's Lunatic
  5. add tags fanzhen0019


[P's Lunatic]:
Fine nice map
Enable count down Remove
why Volume 49? change 50 better


[Hard]:
  • 00:52:787 (6) - move 00:52:942 - sound better?
  1. 02:12:272 (4) - 1grid up
  2. 02:48:020 - unused timing section
  3. 03:00:983 (1) - Short spinner ._. Auto Play spinner 2000Bonus↑ better


[fz's Normal+]:
  1. 00:29:746 (2) - 1gird up
  2. 00:48:535 - unused timing section


[Easy]:
HP,AR,OD-1

nice first map~
go go ranked 8-)
fanzhen0019

S o r d a wrote:

[fz's Normal+]:
  1. 00:29:746 (2) - 1gird up :O fixed
  2. 00:48:535 - unused timing section deleted
thank you!

Download: Memoria - Haruka Tooki Gensoukyo - Dream of fantasy (Kanon) [fz's Normal+].osu
Topic Starter
Kanon

S o r d a wrote:

thanks reqs~

[overall]:
  1. why Works In Progress? Change Pending map i am planing to make sb for the map,so...
  2. BG 1024x768 better change Please i'll deal with it when i make sb
  3. why two osb? Delete and Full submission fixed
  4. Difficulty P's Lunatic ?? Change lkp or lkp's Lunatic it's his decision to use the name XD
  5. add tags fanzhen0019fixed

[Hard]:
  • 00:52:787 (6) - move 00:52:942 - sound better?
  1. 02:12:272 (4) - 1grid up
  2. 02:48:020 - unused timing section
  3. 03:00:983 (1) - Short spinner ._. Auto Play spinner 2000Bonus↑ better

[Easy]:
HP,AR,OD-1
HARD AND EASY ALL FIXED :)
Thanks very much for your mod~!
Nymph
我来打酱油 0 0

Lunatic:
nice~ didn't find anything and I learned something~

Hard:
01:34:077 (1) - 这里开始变soft-hitsound感觉不太好 01:34:385 (3) - 从这里开始试试?并且1去掉whistle加CLAP
01:36:859 (1) - 从这里开始为什么还是soft 跟开头一样后面转回normal比较好
02:07:633 (8) - 这里建议加一个NOTE
02:33:767 (1) - SLIDER头WHISTLE
02:34:385 (3) - 同上
02:35:004 (5) - 同上
02:35:931 (2) - 同上
02:36:705 (4) - whistle (这5个加法配合你原来已经有加到的2个WHISTLE 这里节奏比较连贯 这样加我认为比较配合节奏)
02:47:375 (3) - 再折一次
02:48:612 (4) - 然后结尾加个NOTE 加FINISH(其实FINISH不太明显了..跟NORMALHIT差别听不出来)
03:00:442 (1) - SPINNER确定是蓝线起?
03:11:189 (3) - 再折一次吧?这里是2段小节奏的接点 似乎我个人比较喜欢这里不空着

Spacing什么的我还很差 所以没资格指手画脚~

Normal+:
Personal advice: even thouth this is a normal+ I stll think Hp drain is a little high. maybe hp drain -1?
others fine to me~

Easy:
sv1.0我个人觉得还是有点快 因为BPM太高了..
01:01:292 (1,2,3,4) - 这几个长白线开始更舒服吧..
不打算MAP完嘛 可能后面会有人挑刺的 嘛 先这样吧~
Topic Starter
Kanon

Nymph_ wrote:

我来打酱油 0 0

Hard:
都改了
Normal+:
Personal advice: even thouth this is a normal+ I stll think Hp drain is a little high. maybe hp drain -1?
others fine to me~ 我就帮他改掉好了。。如果fanzhen兄看到了觉得不需要我在改回来,不然又要麻烦你重新POST了XD

Easy:
sv1.0我个人觉得还是有点快 因为BPM太高了..改成0.8了 重新排列了下
01:01:292 (1,2,3,4) - 这几个长白线开始更舒服吧..再有人提我在改 现在长白线节奏就有点紧张了
不打算MAP完嘛 可能后面会有人挑刺的 嘛 先这样吧~因为做完有3分钟 对新手来说194BPM 3分钟太辛苦了。参考其他图也有只做这么多的,所以。。。这个难度也只是听歌而已- - 其他DIFF都MAP完了
好机油 8-)
eldnl
[Easy]

  1. Please map this diff to 02:20:158 same Normal diff.
  1. 00:01:602 (1) Add Finish
  2. 00:06:550 (1) ^
  3. 00:09:334 (6) This slider don't follow the rhythm because is mapped in 1/6. Please fix.
  4. 00:43:663 (1) Finish
  5. 00:49:540 (6) Remove whistle don't sounds good.
  6. 00:51:086 (1,2,3,4) Stacked notes are hard to read for new players and more if they are not at the same distance of time.
  7. 00:52:323 (2) Remove finish
  8. 00:56:035 (1) Finish
  9. 01:01:292 (1) Clap at the start and end.
  10. 01:02:529 (2) ^.
  11. 01:05:004 (4) Remove finish
  12. 01:05:932 (2) Finish
  13. 01:11:189 (1) Clap at the start and end.
  14. 01:12:426 (2) ^
  15. 01:15:828 (1) Use a soft finish + whistle? I think sounds better.


[Normal]

  1. Approach Rate 5
  2. HP Drain Rate 4
  3. Slider Tick Rate 1
  1. 00:38:715 (1) Remove new combo
  2. 00:53:560 (1) ^
  1. If you change the mentioned change the "Normal+" for only "Normal" because the difficulty is due to high bpm. It's really easy.


[Hard]

  1. HP Drain Rate 5
  2. Approach Rate 7
  3. Use the same pattern of hitsounds of the easy diff.
  1. 00:08:406 (7) Fix this slider. looks bad.
  2. 00:28:200 (6,7,8) Spacing
  3. 00:36:241 (1,2,3,4) ^
  4. 00:44:901 (1) Remove new combo.
  5. 00:53:251 (8) 1 Grid Left.
  6. 01:01:292 (5,6,7) Spacing
  7. 01:02:529 (4,5,6) ^
  8. 01:34:385 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) ^
  9. 02:06:241 (1,2,3,4,5,6) ^
  10. 02:14:127 (1) Remove new combo.
  11. 02:15:365 (1) ^.
  12. 02:38:096 (3,4,5) Spacing
  13. 03:09:024 (1,2,3,4,5,6) ^
  14. 03:11:189 (3) Remove 1 Repeat.
  15. 03:16:447 (6) New combo
  16. 03:20:468 (1) Remove new combo.

  1. This is only a hard difficulty, please don't make a insanity pattern and follow the spread :d


[Lunatic]

  1. 03:27:117 (1) Extend the spinner to 03:31:911.



Great song. I hope to see this map ranked. Star.
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