Hi, noob modder from #modreqs here
01:00:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - sv is too high for the intensity of the song, maybe increase the sv gradually in line with the increasing intensity of the song.
02:28:188 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:05:902 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) -
this entire part has either too low of a sv in comparison to the spacing in the jumps, or too much spacing in between the jumps for the sv. I'd suggest spacing the jumps a bit less to both fit the sv and not to make it an overmapped jump practice map.
02:03:502 (2) - this slider slightly overlaps itself, maybe
make it like this, it looks nicer.
03:17:902 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - the hitsounds are too loud in comparison to the music, make the volume gradually decrease in line with the music
02:30:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this stream varies in spacing with little to no increasing intensity in the music, maybe make it fit the music a bit more.
02:33:674 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) -
again, this just plays like a 1/1 jump practice map, it doesn't really reflect what the music is doing, like in 02:35:388 (6) - you're missing a lot of the music, and in a lot of cases you can hear the drums no having a 1/1 rhythm, and instead doing a fill like
this, which you can find in a LOT of dnb maps, your map doesn't have this.
So all in all I'd suggest that you put more variation into the rhythm (like bursts and more triples) to fit your map more to the song instead of jumps only.
I hope this has been helpful