01:56:010 (5,6,7,8) - i guess this is a mistake
some other things
01:50:963 (3,4,5) - this was extremely confusing to play with this low ar, also this overlap 01:50:963 (3,4,5,1) - looks really untidy
02:19:001 (6,1) - this is actually the only place in this part where you decided to emphasise the downbeat by stack, feels kinda inconsistent
02:42:832 (1) - why is this stacked under 02:42:552 (2) - this circle when the sound on 02:42:832 (1) - is way stronger than 02:42:552 (2) -? it was fine here 01:49:842 (6,1) - because seems like you did it to catch the vocals, but here 02:42:552 (2,1) - it just looks senseless
well, these are just suggestions, so feel free to ignore them
this song is awesome, good luck!!
(also im referring to the top diff lol)