Zing wrote:

Your mod, sir.

DISCLAIMER: Wherever I said that I did something in your map, I mean that I did it while modding, which doesn't affect the online copy of the map.

TIMING
Decrease the offset by 1,308 ms to match your timing's on-beat with the song's on-beat.


GROUND GOAL
Easy/Normal modes should have consistent spacing throughout, meaning that the distance should always be 1.00x, +-5%. The following points have inconsistent spacing:
00:05:126 (2,1)
00:35:671 (4,1)

00:39:489 (2,3,1) - I would avoid overlaying any notes in an Easy mode. Remember, the beginner is going to have a very basic reading ability, and they can very well fail to see (3).

00:44:808 (1) - Place this on-beat. This is okay for higher modes but for easy/normal modes this causes it to be unrankable in two ways. First that no 1/4 snaps should be used in lower modes, and second that the spinner starts too short after the last object.


DRIBBLE

I would say no to the 1/4 beats here, if the song wasn't so low BPM.

00:09:907 - change the inheriting point to 00:09:898 to keep it clean.
00:38:944 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern seems a bit too tricky for an intermediate player. Make this stream on a bezier curve like the rest of the streams in the map. (If you have troubles, try slider-to-stream)


DASHING

HP, OD seem low, and CS seems high. I hope Pootis has a good reason for this...

2.00 SV is a no go, especially since it seems very random where the SV increases. This isn't at all beneficial, it's just disorienting. Lower the SV for every case where it's increased, and if you are going to change the SV, limit it to 1.50 and have it make sense with the song.

00:18:353 (1) - This is just a very, very pointless slider. Nix it altogether. And perhaps replace it with a circle at 00:18:762 (1)

00:21:081 (2,3,4) - Make each one of these reverse once and space them closer together. Perhaps change the hitsound on the head of each slider to where it can be heard.

00:22:990 (2,3,4,5) - Something must be done about this pattern, it is chronologically illogical. Perhaps trade (3) off to make it a horizontal couplet with (2) as 00:22:990 (2,3)

00:40:717 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - It doesn't make sense to start these sliders on the blue tick. See also my comments about SV

00:43:512 (2,3,4) - Even more illogical is starting these flutters on yellow ticks. Is Pootis even trying...?


AERIAL

Again, don't double the SV when making it increase; try 1.50x instead. At least where you did this makes sense.

00:02:944 (5,6,1) - Try moving (5) to stack on the reverse arrow of (1).

00:08:944 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is hard to read. Try adjusting slider (7) or make (5) land on the head or tail of another object in the series. I made (5) land on the head of (9) and (6) land on its tail, and it seemed better.

00:16:853 (2) - Move this closer to 00:16:581 (1) so that the beat marked by the next jump is more emphasized.

00:17:671 (1,2,3,4,5) - I moved (3) and (4) to be a perfect triangle with (2) at 0.8 DS - this also makes the transition between (4) and (5) a bit smoother since it's not a complete 180 degree reversal.

00:17:808 (2) - Move this so that 00:16:990 (1) blankets it, which improves readability.

00:19:581 (4,5,6,7,8) - Distance (6) a little more from (5) to emphasize the beat, and change (7) and (8) to be a little more spaced out from (6), and the same distance away as each other.

00:31:717 (10,1,2,3) - There's an opportunity here to stack (3) on top of (10) or vice-versa. I would recommend moving (2,3) as a cohesive unit until (3) is on top of (10), and move (1) until it looks right with the new arrangement.

00:34:035 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Too much of a jump in difficulty from the rest of the map. Tone it down slightly, or jump the rest of the map up in intensity to be closer to it. See also 00:25:308 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)

00:39:762 (5,6,7,8) - Adjust (8) so that it appears to the right of (5,6,7), or manually stack the latter so that it marches left and meets the former. As it stands, it looks weird.

00:43:308 (5,6,7,8,1,2) - Move (1,2) as a unit to stack the head of (1) with (6).


That's about all. Let me know what you do decide to do with this mod, and don't forget the kudosu if you liked the advice!

1. Preview timing in Dribble Goal is different from other difficulties

1. As someone already suggested, the 1x --> 2x SV changes feel very drastic while playing. I get the idea behind increasing the SV and I'd do the same, but not by that much.

1. 00:18:762 - I think you should add a circle here as it's pretty significant beat.
2. 00:19:308 - I feel like this beat should be emphasized too. I'd suggest this to fix this + the above one.
3. 00:20:808 (1) - I get you're trying to map the lyrics over the beat, but it feels wrong just skipping the white tick in middle of the slider. I'd suggest the same thing as above, turn it into a circle + 1/4 slider. That way you still keep mapping the lyrics while also including a major beat.
4. 00:22:444 (1) - Same as above.
5. 00:22:444 (1,2,3,4) - Same issue as above, but would be awkward to apply the same fix due to previous combo ending with 1/4s, maybe try something like this?

1. Also, maybe put in some more effort into blanketing. For example: 00:12:217 (1,2,3,4,5) - curve of 2 could match the approach circle of 5, same with 3 and 4 maybe? (Very similar as you did with 2 and 4 of the next combo, that one looks way better, doesn't it?)

1. Fix snapping of some sliders after SV changes. 00:08:944 (1,2) - and 00:17:126 (1) - as examples.
2. I feel like 00:11:126 (5) - and 00:13:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - are mapped way too differently while sounding very similar. That was something that threw me off pretty hard the first time playing the map. The first slider kind of indicates you prioritize mapping the beat over lyrics, but then right after you skip this here 00:12:217 - pretty significant beat. But the next combos seem more lyrics oriented. Keeping consistency in your mapping is very key, especially so in lower end difficulties. I'd suggest something like this
3. 00:15:081 - feel like this should be mapped, but more importantly - I'd advise trying to start 1/4 sliders on white ticks and ending on blue ticks, not the other way around. In this case moving the slider to white tick and adding a circle where it started previously takes care of a) unmapped beat, b) emphasizes the white tick instead of the blue one, and c) doesn't change the concept of how you intend the part to be played. So something like this instead of this
4. If you agree with the above one, 00:15:217 (4) - need the same thing. I'd break it into two circles on red and blue and a slider starting on white tick and ending on the unmapped blue tick making the whole combo look like this. I feel like it plays way better, can be blanketed to look nice too.
5. 00:16:581 - should be mapped too, try playing around this and the following combo in a similar fashion as the one before.
6. 00:17:535 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Try making 7 and 8 into a slider maybe? Could position 2 through 6 in a straight line, with the slider curving off and thee note after a little further away in the direction slider curves off to. Either way, this part should be made very similar to the first combo I talked on the 2nd point ( 00:11:126 (5) - this one). I'd honestly just copy the objects from the earlier and paste them in whenever music repeats itself, just adjust the positioning on the playfield.
7. 00:18:899 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Feel like this combo skips many beats too. While you're prioritizing the lyrics, I think you should map both. Just try placing objects like this and see if you like it any better. If not, try to play around until you find a compromise you find better, but you should include at least the first white tick you have a timing point on.
8. 0:20:535 (1,2,3,4,5) - What is going on in here? I like the idea you had here with the reverse sliders, trying to switch things up. But you're skipping the bigger beats on white ticks.. to focus on lyrics? Well thn, the word "critics" starts on the white tick, and the blue tick after the slider(3) has a distinct sound of voice on it too. Again, try playing around and find a compromise that'd keep the slider-oriented theme while including both - the major beats and flow of thee lyrics. A random solution I'd go for maybe, but see what you like for yourself c:
9. 00:22:581 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, I like the idea you had going into this, but it's a bit off imo. Like, 5 isn't representing any sound, really. Even the blue tick between 3 and 4 has something there. Not to talk about the word "work" starting on the red tick. Try something like this. Keeps the same flow, emphasizing the little pause there, but fits the music a lot better imo.
10. 00:23:808 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This one's a bit better, but I feel like it should start on the white tick. You can simply add a circle on it before the reverse slider and you're good. Other than that it's fine. I'd only suggest making (2) a slider ending on the next blue tick.
11. 00:25:444 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - Other than fixing slider length after SV changes (1st point), I'd reconsider which beats you want to emphasize more (start sliders on them) and which are less important (slider ends, or reversing point). This part should be made similar than the other slider-centered combo earlier (one I talked about undr the point of 0:20:535 (1,2,3,4,5) - )
12. 00:28:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think like this combo should start on the white tick too. I would also make (5) a slider that ends on the next blue tick, and make (6) into a 1/4 slider and a circle on the white tick it ended.
13. 00:30:081 (1,2,3,4,5) - The only thing that feels a bit off is (3) and (4). The word "Running" being spelled through the next blue tick after (3), and (4) ending on a white tick that should bee clicked instead. Try something like this?
14. 00:34:035 - Don't ignore this beat, please.
15. In Kiai time, try to have a bit more consistent spacing. Not saying to turn on DS, but there are few that feel a bit too close or too far apart compared to the rest of it. 00:39:490 (5,6) - Example of two feeling a bit too far apart. 00:40:581 (1,2,1) - Could be a bit further apart? Pretty neat job on blanketing the sliders tho!
16. I'm also a bit concerned about having a 220bpm stream at the end of a 3.75 star. Maybe it isn't much of a problem, but people who'd usually play the difficulty over others rarely can stream that fast. You could try to increase spacing elsewhere to get it to like lower 4 star range or just have the stream as reverse slider(s) too? That won't hurt either.

Mregoo wrote:

-Pootis-'s Dashing Goal

Took the eddited .osu file posted in the replay above.

Fix snapping of some sliders after SV changes. 00:08:944 (1,2) - and 00:17:126 (1) - as examples.
I feel like 00:11:126 (5) - and 00:13:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - are mapped way too differently while sounding very similar. That was something that threw me off pretty hard the first time playing the map. The first slider kind of indicates you prioritize mapping the beat over lyrics, but then right after you skip this here 00:12:217 - pretty significant beat. But the next combos seem more lyrics oriented. Keeping consistency in your mapping is very key, especially so in lower end difficulties. I'd suggest something like this
00:15:081 - feel like this should be mapped, but more importantly - I'd advise trying to start 1/4 sliders on white ticks and ending on blue ticks, not the other way around. In this case moving the slider to white tick and adding a circle where it started previously takes care of a) unmapped beat, b) emphasizes the white tick instead of the blue one, and c) doesn't change the concept of how you intend the part to be played. So something like this instead of this
If you agree with the above one, 00:15:217 (4) - need the same thing. I'd break it into two circles on red and blue and a slider starting on white tick and ending on the unmapped blue tick making the whole combo look like this. I feel like it plays way better, can be blanketed to look nice too.
00:16:581 - should be mapped too, try playing around this and the following combo in a similar fashion as the one before.
00:17:535 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Try making 7 and 8 into a slider maybe? Could position 2 through 6 in a straight line, with the slider curving off and thee note after a little further away in the direction slider curves off to. Either way, this part should be made very similar to the first combo I talked on the 2nd point ( 00:11:126 (5) - this one). I'd honestly just copy the objects from the earlier and paste them in whenever music repeats itself, just adjust the positioning on the playfield.
00:18:899 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Feel like this combo skips many beats too. While you're prioritizing the lyrics, I think you should map both. Just try placing objects like this and see if you like it any better. If not, try to play around until you find a compromise you find better, but you should include at least the first white tick you have a timing point on.
0:20:535 (1,2,3,4,5) - What is going on in here? I like the idea you had here with the reverse sliders, trying to switch things up. But you're skipping the bigger beats on white ticks.. to focus on lyrics? Well thn, the word "critics" starts on the white tick, and the blue tick after the slider(3) has a distinct sound of voice on it too. Again, try playing around and find a compromise that'd keep the slider-oriented theme while including both - the major beats and flow of thee lyrics. A random solution I'd go for maybe, but see what you like for yourself c:
00:22:581 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, I like the idea you had going into this, but it's a bit off imo. Like, 5 isn't representing any sound, really. Even the blue tick between 3 and 4 has something there. Not to talk about the word "work" starting on the red tick. Try something like this. Keeps the same flow, emphasizing the little pause there, but fits the music a lot better imo.
00:23:808 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This one's a bit better, but I feel like it should start on the white tick. You can simply add a circle on it before the reverse slider and you're good. Other than that it's fine. I'd only suggest making (2) a slider ending on the next blue tick.
00:25:444 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - Other than fixing slider length after SV changes (1st point), I'd reconsider which beats you want to emphasize more (start sliders on them) and which are less important (slider ends, or reversing point). This part should be made similar than the other slider-centered combo earlier (one I talked about undr the point of 0:20:535 (1,2,3,4,5) - )
00:28:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think like this combo should start on the white tick too. I would also make (5) a slider that ends on the next blue tick, and make (6) into a 1/4 slider and a circle on the white tick it ended.
00:30:081 (1,2,3,4,5) - The only thing that feels a bit off is (3) and (4). The word "Running" being spelled through the next blue tick after (3), and (4) ending on a white tick that should bee clicked instead. Try something like this?
00:34:035 - Don't ignore this beat, please.
In Kiai time, try to have a bit more consistent spacing. Not saying to turn on DS, but there are few that feel a bit too close or too far apart compared to the rest of it. 00:39:490 (5,6) - Example of two feeling a bit too far apart. 00:40:581 (1,2,1) - Could be a bit further apart? Pretty neat job on blanketing the sliders tho!
I'm also a bit concerned about having a 220bpm stream at the end of a 3.75 star. Maybe it isn't much of a problem, but people who'd usually play the difficulty over others rarely can stream that fast. You could try to increase spacing elsewhere to get it to like lower 4 star range or just have the stream as reverse slider(s) too? That won't hurt either.

-Pootis- wrote:

Mregoo wrote:

(..)

I appreciate the time you took to mod my map! I fixed almost all of the mistakes. I was probably tired that day. I was just placing circles everywhere. I suck at prioritizing sounds. I changed the CS to 4.5 to increase the difficulty of the 1/4 slider part. Anyway, here's the link to the new .osu file. https://puu.sh/sfYDk/e0dc0df3a3.osu

Mregoo wrote:

-Pootis- wrote:

I appreciate the time you took to mod my map! I fixed almost all of the mistakes. I was probably tired that day. I was just placing circles everywhere. I suck at prioritizing sounds. I changed the CS to 4.5 to increase the difficulty of the 1/4 slider part. Anyway, here's the link to the new .osu file. https://puu.sh/sfYDk/e0dc0df3a3.osu

No problem, glad it helped! I think you seem to have some potential for someone who hasn't mapped much. Every time you play a map and find it at least above average, try to notice how it's built, how an instrument (or vocals) is emphasized more than others etc. and keep reviewing your own maps and see where you can improve. I'm not experienced at all myself, but map by map, I (and people I give to test play them) start to like what I'm making more and more. Just keep going! c:

P.S. 00:34:308 (1,3,4,5) - forgot to fix the sliders after changing the SV on this combo. I also agree that CS larger than 4 fits pretty well, but 5 was a bit too much; 4.5 seems like a nice compromise.

-Pootis- wrote:

Mregoo wrote:

(..)

Good call! I seem to rush maps and push them out as quickly as possible, it's just in my personality. Here's the new new new new new .osu file. https://puu.sh/sggom/5103bb73de.osu

-Vert- wrote:

Keep in mind that you're free to accept/deny these mods at your own leisure, everything here is my opinion on how I think it should be. Nothing I say is objective.

-Pootis-'s Dashing Goal
00:04:036 (2,3,4,5) - These should really be spread out further. If you're making a "hard" difficulty, most players at that level will attempt to alternate or will just get confused and unnecessarily miss. The way it is right now is most likely very confusing. Done!
00:11:127 (5,6,7,8,9) - Pretty much the same as above. Done!
00:13:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Yup, you guessed it. Done!
00:17:399 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - The spacing here is good, but it's incosistent (ending notes are further away than usual). Clean that up, please. Done!
00:38:945 (3,4) - Move 4 closer to 3. Done!
00:39:490 (5) - Ctrl+G here. Done!
00:39:763 (6) - Here as well. Done!
00:41:808 (3) - And here. Done!
00:44:263 (5) - And here too. Done!

Xayler wrote:

Woah nice to see a Rocket League song. I've mapped some also but never really completed anything. Good luck!

Underdogs wrote:

00:18:081 (7) - Odd placement. Fix? Made it look like the other 1/4 spacing before!

00:03:217 (1) - 1/4 slider didn't fit here. I think 1/2 would be better It was a 1/8 reverse, I think you mean 1/8 into 1/4 instead of reverse.

00:27:763 Strong beat here. If this is Hard/Hyper, i suggest mapping this part. Done!

00:38:399 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - This is poorly mapped. No flow, no aesthetic. I agree! I made that last minute. I moved the placement around to make it have some circular flow to it so players can jump easier.

Kotori-Chan wrote:

from da m4m~

Easy

00:01:854 - after that spinner there has to be at least two or 3 white ticks rest in an easy diff,so i think you better remove the spinner and put some slider instead Ehh? There should be enough time imo.

00:25:308 (1) - ^^^^Have to disagree again. If a BN says it's bad, then I'll change it

00:13:308 (5,1) - avoid overlaps like this in an easy It is an overlap, but the whole slider except the start point is visible! That is a pass in my book

00:31:308 (5) - make this one centered and then make sexy symmetry with these two ? 00:31:853 (1,2) - Yum yum. Did that

Normal

00:01:328 - at least one or two white ticks after spinner rest ;w; Removed slider entirely

00:04:581 (6,7,1,2) - this looks kinda messy and unpolished,make it more clean~ I think I did it right

00:11:672 - slider here,suits better Done~

00:22:854 (8,1) - i'm pretty sure you can make this blanket even better ! Doneeeee!

uh....00:38:399 (6,1) - what is this timing ;w; ??????? I saw. Fixed

Hard

00:13:854 (8,1) - pls stack correctly oops!

00:16:581 (1,2,3,4) - i would maybe increase spacing a bit more because rhyhtm increased it a bit!

00:34:036 (1,2,3) - ^^^^ ^

Pootis, look over ur diff pls

Light insane

hitsounds are quite loud imo D:

maybe reduce to ~60

00:08:945 (1,2) - having to jump in a different spot where the slider is pointing too feel very weird here and easy to miss

00:14:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - why that spacing ??

00:22:717 (1,2,3,4) - pls fix that overlap with 00:23:672 (5,1,2) - YOU HAVE A TON OF SPACE TO USE :3

Extra

00:03:490 (1) - make this slider some normal curved one...that one rn looks kinda unpolished and meh ;w; Okay!

00:07:581 (7,1,2) - you could make some sexy symmetry with these two~ yum!

zig zag something something

i tbh dont really know what to say about this.....but well well~

even if i hate rocket league......nice song :3
good luck with it <3

Lulu- wrote:

Hi, M4M from modreqs!

[notice][Dashing Goal]
00:01:581 (5) - Space this further out, the player will think this is a 1/4 gap, because you've already stacked 00:00:627 (2,3) - similar to that Done!
00:02:672 (5) - Shorten the slider and place a circle on the white tick? Done!
00:08:672 (5,6,1) - Rotate by 40 or something and space accordingly Done!
00:10:036 (1,2) - Not perfectly parallelDone!
00:11:945 (10) - As mentioned above Done!
00:12:490 (1,2) - Bad overlap, consider placing these parallel to each other. This would also make the distance to 00:13:036 (1) - less extreme, keep in mind this is just a Light Insane Done!
00:14:672 (1,2) - Switch these 2 to correct the rhythm Done!
00:14:808 (2) - Too curvy Done!
00:15:081 (3,4,5,6) - This isn't a perfect line if you look at it closely Done!
00:15:763 (7) - Spacing too high Done!
00:18:490 (9) - Replace with slider Done!
00:18:899 (9,1,2) - Bad overlaps Done!
00:21:490 (3,4,5,6) - This doesn't look very nice Done!
00:22:854 (2,3) - Fix overlaps Done!
00:23:808 (1) - ^ Done!
00:24:763 (4,5,6,7) - Rotate this by 30° (selection centre) Done!
00:25:172 (7) - Wrong rhythm again Done!
00:25:717 (1,2) - Blankets would be better than overlaps here Done!
00:26:945 (4) - Overdone edge Done!
00:28:036 - Missed beat Done!
00:28:172 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this look nicer, it's like 2008 all over again xd xd done
00:29:399 (6) - Make the white tick clickable again, you can't end sliders on these in 95% of caseslol im bad at mapping xd done
00:30:081 (1) - ^ ^
00:30:763 (3,4,5,6,7) - This shouldn't overlap with 1 but you have to fix it anyway Done!
00:31:581 (8,1) - This doesn't flow well Fixed!
00:32:945 (4) - A slider would fit much better here Fixed!
00:34:070 - What's with the unsnapped timing point near this? Fixed!
00:34:308 (1,3) - Please don't use slider shapes whenever you want to use a new one, keep a few and stick to them. It makes this and the entire kiai just look like a 2008 unranked map lol this map is so inconsistant, fixed
00:36:217 - You should consider remapping the kiai. The jumps need to be structured more and the slider shapes just don't make any sense at all. You also have sliders ending on strong beats constantly, which is just very poor rhythm emphaszing. Judging from the beginning of the map, this looks very rushed and you could do much better here, if you'd put enough work into it! yeah, school has got me by the wrist, im going to be more active around mid december
00:44:672 (7) - Why is this silent? Fixed! Clap hitsound is there now
00:44:808 - I'd also put a spinner here like in every other diff[ ok fine /notice]

Good luck with your map!

Kotori-Chan wrote:

hitsounds are quite loud imo D:

maybe reduce to ~60

00:08:945 (1,2) - having to jump in a different spot where the slider is pointing too feel very weird here and easy to miss Fixed!

00:14:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - why that spacing ?? Fixed!

00:22:717 (1,2,3,4) - pls fix that overlap with 00:23:672 (5,1,2) - YOU HAVE A TON OF SPACE TO USE :3 Done!

Stingy wrote:

00:02:399 (2,3,4,1) - Move (1) down to go with the curve of the triplet Done!

I like the rhythm o3o

1. First, a replay (HT, sorry): https://puu.sh/sDfsB/71cc41f652.osr
2. About stats, I feel AR9 a bit fast, consider AR8.5 or so please. And HP6 is a high too, because you have streams here, HP5 will be better imo.
3. man.. idk.. Flow was not very comfortable to play in many places (like in 00:08:263 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 00:17:672 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:25:308 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - by example, asdasd), and as well you are following voice in many sections, you are ignoring some strong beats (like in 00:22:581 - by example).
4. This will need more testplays, and polish the flow!!! and validate the rhythm (I felt some overmapping). Little circles need a very very good flow to be funny (Otherwise, they will be annoying).

1. A testplay too: https://puu.sh/sDhRI/dc3820025f.osr
2. 00:04:172 - following the rhythm you chose, add a circle here then.
3. 00:05:672 - Avoid to ignore notes in the big white tick please!
4. 00:07:854 (1,2) - Care about aesthetics, those sliders have different curve, try copying and rotating: https://puu.sh/sDgms/e68341e850.png
   
   Hint

   Remember, you have some tools for this in the Edit menu:
   
5. 00:25:036 - if you are following the voice, add a circle here please.
6. 00:25:717 (3,4) - Rhythmically, a Crtl+G feels better, in fact, Slider-circle-circle is a better rhythm for this section:
   
7. 00:27:899 (3,4) - They looks a bit ugly. You made many similar sliders. try to use the tools I said before to improve aesthetics, this will make look your maps more professional
8. 00:31:581 - This space feels strange
9. 00:34:581 (1,2) - Rhythmically, a Crtl+G feels better.
10. Personally, I feel this map looks unclean yet, and rhythm need a lot of improvements too. Your mapping skills are very basic yet, so try to improve those before fix this diff! :3 (I mean, improving mapping skill with low diffs help more that try with high diffs).

1. Replay!: https://puu.sh/sDhSM/75720555c1.osr
2. 00:12:763 (4,5) - Rhythmically, a Crtl+G feels better. (WTF, 00:12:899 (5,6) - why man xD change red nodes for common nodes pls)
3. 00:13:172 (6,7) - Crtl+G too:
   
4. 00:16:990 (4) - Avoid start sliders in blue ticks pls! (except if some strong beat is there -not this case-)
5. You did use too many sliders in blue ticks :S
6. 00:31:308 - mm.. this beat is very strong to be ignored :S
7. Spacing is very strange too, even if some will read this, using a consistent Distance will help to make this solid! (With "consistent" I mean, using same DS for common spacing, and same DS in Jumps -and not random DS in jumps-)
8. ~_~

1. 00:02:945 (6) - 00:07:308 - Not hitsound?
2. 00:05:399 (1,1) - This rhythm will be better:
   
   Don't ignore big white ticks if its possible, usually they are strong notes.
3. 00:13:854 (7) - please, remove repeat and add a circle or something in 00:14:399 -
4. 00:14:808 (2,3) - Rhythmically, a Crtl+G feels better.
5. 00:18:763 - 00:20:399 - 00:20:945 - 00:22:581 - 00:25:308 - I cant more, sorry
6. Its not very bad, but I think this will improve a lot yet ^^U

1. Idk, I feel aesthetics will improve too.
2. 00:36:217 (1) - emm... if its a error, just extend slider to 00:36:490 - . If it was intentional, please, nope. A circle is better idea here.
3. This will need more work!

1. ugg, man, this spacing will be very bad idea. How can a casual player read stuff like https://puu.sh/sDiTX/b510c06073.png with this spacing??
   please, change the basic space to 1.0x!!
2. 00:02:127 - adding a note here, the polarity issue will be fixed: (more details about polarity in this Charles video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws )
3. 00:06:899 (5,6) - a common stack is better
4. 00:10:581 - add a note here please
5. 00:16:854 (1) - is this spinner following something?? xD anyway, why finished this in a blue tick?? :S
6. 00:20:399 (4,1) - Crtl+G feels better
7. 00:22:036 (6,7) - Not sure if (7) is good idea in a normal diff u.u
8. 00:23:127 -
9. 00:24:217 (3,4) - Ctrl+G?
10. 00:28:172 (1) - ugg, man, no please... dont start in a blue tick. 00:28:036 - feels more strong, so people will fail in this circle!!
11. 00:30:081 (1) - (/w\)
12. etc.... Rhythms need work!!
13. Also, be careful where notes are placed
    
    There are out of screen!!

    00:08:672 -
    
14. ~_~

1. Nice!, but this feels veeeery generic.
2. 00:07:854 (4,5) - I want to suggest this:
   
3. 00:16:581 (4,5) - Same here
4. 00:13:308 (5,1) - Stacks like this will be bad idea for Easy diffs.
5. 00:42:762 (3,4) - for consistency:
   
   
   
   About aesthetics:
6. 00:02:944 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Doing a symmetric patter here will be nice:
   
   
7. 00:28:035 (1,2,3) - polish the symmetry:
   
   Steps

   Before
   
   
   After
   
   
   just delete 00:29:672 (3) - , copy 00:28:035 (1) - in 00:29:672 - (and remove new combo), then Ctrl+H and Ctrl+G.
8. You will improve blankets and patterns yet!

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Hello

[Light Insane]

1. 00:02:945 (6) - 00:07:308 - Not hitsound? There is a hitsound, is there? They are flnishes.
2. 00:05:399 (1,1) - This rhythm will be better:
   Done!
   Don't ignore big white ticks if its possible, usually they are strong notes.
3. 00:13:854 (7) - please, remove repeat and add a circle or something in 00:14:399 - Done!
4. 00:14:808 (2,3) - Rhythmically, a Crtl+G feels better. Fixed
5. 00:18:763 - 00:20:399 - 00:20:945 - 00:22:581 - 00:25:308 - I cant more, sorry I cannot slider, fixed!
6. Its not very bad, but I think this will improve a lot yet ^^U

Good luck with this mapset, will need more work!

_Meep_ wrote:

May I know why the recent modders have not been given kudosu? Just passing by

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Hello Hi. Will finish applying mods soon.

[Extra CS7]

1. First, a replay (HT, sorry): https://puu.sh/sDfsB/71cc41f652.osr
2. About stats, I feel AR9 a bit fast, consider AR8.5 or so please. And HP6 is a high too, because you have streams here, HP5 will be better imo.
3. man.. idk.. Flow was not very comfortable to play in many places (like in 00:08:263 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 00:17:672 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:25:308 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - by example, asdasd), and as well you are following voice in many sections, you are ignoring some strong beats (like in 00:22:581 - by example).
4. This will need more testplays, and polish the flow!!! and validate the rhythm (I felt some overmapping). Little circles need a very very good flow to be funny (Otherwise, they will be annoying).

[Extra CS4]

1. A testplay too: https://puu.sh/sDhRI/dc3820025f.osr
2. 00:04:172 - following the rhythm you chose, add a circle here then.
3. 00:05:672 - Avoid to ignore notes in the big white tick please!
4. 00:07:854 (1,2) - Care about aesthetics, those sliders have different curve, try copying and rotating: https://puu.sh/sDgms/e68341e850.png
   
   Hint

   Remember, you have some tools for this in the Edit menu:
   
5. 00:25:036 - if you are following the voice, add a circle here please.
6. 00:25:717 (3,4) - Rhythmically, a Crtl+G feels better, in fact, Slider-circle-circle is a better rhythm for this section:
   
7. 00:27:899 (3,4) - They looks a bit ugly. You made many similar sliders. try to use the tools I said before to improve aesthetics, this will make look your maps more professional
8. 00:31:581 - This space feels strange
9. 00:34:581 (1,2) - Rhythmically, a Crtl+G feels better.
10. Personally, I feel this map looks unclean yet, and rhythm need a lot of improvements too. Your mapping skills are very basic yet, so try to improve those before fix this diff! :3 (I mean, improving mapping skill with low diffs help more that try with high diffs).

[Insane]

1. Replay!: https://puu.sh/sDhSM/75720555c1.osr
2. 00:12:763 (4,5) - Rhythmically, a Crtl+G feels better. (WTF, 00:12:899 (5,6) - why man xD change red nodes for common nodes pls) I DUNNNOOOOOOO
3. 00:13:172 (6,7) - Crtl+G too:
   
4. 00:16:990 (4) - Avoid start sliders in blue ticks pls! (except if some strong beat is there -not this case-)
5. You did use too many sliders in blue ticks :S
6. 00:31:308 - mm.. this beat is very strong to be ignored :S
7. Spacing is very strange too, even if some will read this, using a consistent Distance will help to make this solid! (With "consistent" I mean, using same DS for common spacing, and same DS in Jumps -and not random DS in jumps-)
8. ~_~

[Light Insane]

1. 00:02:945 (6) - 00:07:308 - Not hitsound?
2. 00:05:399 (1,1) - This rhythm will be better:
   
   Don't ignore big white ticks if its possible, usually they are strong notes.
3. 00:13:854 (7) - please, remove repeat and add a circle or something in 00:14:399 -
4. 00:14:808 (2,3) - Rhythmically, a Crtl+G feels better.
5. 00:18:763 - 00:20:399 - 00:20:945 - 00:22:581 - 00:25:308 - I cant more, sorry
6. Its not very bad, but I think this will improve a lot yet ^^U

[Hard]

1. Idk, I feel aesthetics will improve too.
2. 00:36:217 (1) - emm... if its a error, just extend slider to 00:36:490 - . If it was intentional, please, nope. A circle is better idea here.
3. This will need more work!

[Normal]

1. ugg, man, this spacing will be very bad idea. How can a casual player read stuff like https://puu.sh/sDiTX/b510c06073.png with this spacing??
   please, change the basic space to 1.0x!!
2. 00:02:127 - adding a note here, the polarity issue will be fixed: (more details about polarity in this Charles video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws )
3. 00:06:899 (5,6) - a common stack is better
4. 00:10:581 - add a note here please
5. 00:16:854 (1) - is this spinner following something?? xD anyway, why finished this in a blue tick?? :S
6. 00:20:399 (4,1) - Crtl+G feels better
7. 00:22:036 (6,7) - Not sure if (7) is good idea in a normal diff u.u
8. 00:23:127 -
9. 00:24:217 (3,4) - Ctrl+G?
10. 00:28:172 (1) - ugg, man, no please... dont start in a blue tick. 00:28:036 - feels more strong, so people will fail in this circle!!
11. 00:30:081 (1) - (/w\)
12. etc.... Rhythms need work!!
13. Also, be careful where notes are placed
    
    There are out of screen!!

    00:08:672 -
    
14. ~_~

[Easy]

1. Nice!, but this feels veeeery generic.
2. 00:07:854 (4,5) - I want to suggest this:
   
3. 00:16:581 (4,5) - Same here
4. 00:13:308 (5,1) - Stacks like this will be bad idea for Easy diffs.
5. 00:42:762 (3,4) - for consistency:
   
   
   
   About aesthetics:
6. 00:02:944 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Doing a symmetric patter here will be nice:
   
   
7. 00:28:035 (1,2,3) - polish the symmetry:
   
   Steps

   Before
   
   
   After
   
   
   just delete 00:29:672 (3) - , copy 00:28:035 (1) - in 00:29:672 - (and remove new combo), then Ctrl+H and Ctrl+G.
8. You will improve blankets and patterns yet!

[]
Uff... very long xD
I'm sorry, I dont check AiMod, or hitsounds, or many slider shapes... u.u


Good luck with this mapset, will need more work!