Rukarioman wrote:

General:
- Hau "German" aus den Tags raus. Isst beim ranken dann schon als Sprache drin. Nich vergessen in jeder Diff. ~ done
- Bitte mach die Combo Colours in jeder Diff gleich. Am besten öffnest du die .osu files in Notepad und machst sie exakt gleich. ~ done

Easy:
00:41:360 - Ich wär dafür die Break zu killen. Mein Vorschlag. ~ kay
01:33:097 (4) - Bin kein Fan von kurzen Repeat Slider mit mehr als einem Repeat in einer Easy Diff. ~ ich lass es erstmal so
01:56:450 (5) - ^
03:45:672 (2,3,4) - Ich würde dies nicht unbedingt empfehlen. Erstens weil dieser lange Repeat slider sehr langweilig ist und weil man ihn, weils eine Easy ist nicht aufsplitten kann. Vielleicht so was? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/103262 Ist aber dir überlassen ob du es ändern willst. ~ wollts eigentlich doch schon so haben, wenn es jetzt kein sehr großes Problem darstellt
03:58:246 (3) - Kurzer Repeat Slider. Wie gesagt^^

Insane:
00:11:899 (1,2) - Dieser Anti-Jump tut meinen Augen weh. Wenigstens mach bei (2) eine Neue Combo. Erst recht wenn ich sehe wie die weitere Combo verläuft. ~ Neuer Combo nur für einen Circle? Hab den Abstand vergrößert.
00:49:444 (9,10) - (9) weg und (10) an die Stelle von (9) ~ done mit nem neuen slider
02:11:719 (6) - Ohohohoho, Wave : P ~ ai ^^

NotShinta wrote:

General:
Tick rate 2 and all that jazz. ~ pls give me a reason why I should do that
(Insane and Tenshi's Normal) I would say the last 2 combo colours are too close. I suggest using Larto's/Easy's for all difficulties. ~ those are the default colors, I won't use them... 3 and 4 are different types of blue, but you can clearly set 3 apart from 4. Took Insane colors.

Insane:
00:11:899 (1) - The way this is spaced makes the rest of the combo confusing at first. I would move it so it's sensibly spaced, like here. ~ done
00:37:948 (4) - Awkward spacing. ~ Will wait for more mods
01:00:941 (5) - I would prefer if you reversed/flipped this horizontally vertically for the pattern to flow better. ~ Ok
03:17:109 (5) - Not a bad elbow in the slightest, but a white point would improve it that slight bit. (nitpick) ~ ok I tried my best

Easy:
00:41:360 - Teehee, lazy inconsistent Easy break ~ ok ok
01:01:300 (4) - I would say you should rarely stack hitcircles on the end of sliders in an Easy difficulty. ~ come one you can see this circle like a mile away x.x
01:13:516 (5) - New combo? ~ hm I don't know, maybe not...

KillerRind wrote:

[Easy]
01:13:516 (5) - New Combo?
01:25:731 (3) - ^
02:59:324 (1) - ^
03:10:642 (4) - ^

[Insane]
00:42:797 (6) - New Combo

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[Easy]
01:18:725 (5) - I'd make this long, extend it to the next white tick. ~ no
01:46:031 (1) - Add finish. ~ ok
02:29:145 (5) - Same as 01:18:725 (5) ~ no

ziin wrote:

[tenshi nyan]
Boring rhythm. But I love it. I wish easy were more like it.

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

ziin wrote:

[tenshi nyan]
Boring rhythm. But I love it. I wish easy were more like it.

Is it really that boring?`._.

I could've made it more complex, but that might've blown the Star rating up, so here ya go, semi-easy Normal. Just play it with HR+DT. Makes it interesting enough. :<

Slowmotion wrote:

Easy

00:14:055 - it's should be better?http://puu.sh/3yt2 ( with a clap on the last circle of slider ) ~Hm I don't think so atm
01:21:959 - u can put a clap here? ~Ok
01:22:678 (4) - ^ ~No
03:05:073 (4) - ^ ~On the reverse arrow? Ok
03:47:827 (3) - A finish ? :3 ~Finish + Clap ^^

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Easy]
00:37:408 (x) - Add a Hit Circle here ~no
01:14:234 (3) - Make it a little curvy ~ok
02:16:749 (3) - Make it a Slider that end in 02:17:288, so you complete the slider formation ~remapped
02:17:648 (1,2,3) - Fix like this maybe?

[Insane]
00:23:755 (3,4,5,6,7) - like this was better ~ok, thx for the tip :3

EEeee wrote:

Easy
01:18:366 (4) - add new combo? ~ok
02:28:785 (4) - ^ ~ok

Insane
03:06:330 (8) - new combo? ~ok and removed next

1. AR+1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AR7 is terrible with this fast pacing, makes the map really boring too. When I first played this I got a B cause I couldn't read half the map due to low AR (well I'm kinda bad when it comes to sightreading anyway ;x;), but changing to AR8 I SSd it first try lol. ;x;
2. 00:11:719 - Since you already started the map with a "pre-melody", why not place a circle here as well to follow the melody even more accurately? You could stack this and the next one. Sounds good.
3. 00:37:049 (2,3,4) - This isn't a good idea. I see that you wanted a pattern to shape the slider, however the distance between 3 and 4 is half compared to the other stuff in the combo (slider end of 5 and the next note as well btw). This isn't critical and you can just leave it like that if you want it, but I suggest to make the distance a bit more clear, you could move the note 2 closer to the slider 1. Or you can reshape the slider 2 (which is probably the best idea) so it uses ~0.5x distance snap with the next note. Pardon this going all around to get to the point thing. It's late and I have no idea what I'm talking about anymore. ;x;
4. 00:45:672 - This timing section changes the volume during a spin. Not a good idea cause it sounds weird. Place it either at the start or the end of the spinner instead.
5. 02:06:689 (2) - There are too little indications that this slider is slowed. Felt fine for me, but you should probably set tick rate to 2, just so stuff like this is obvious to everyone. (it's kinda obvious already though, cause it's linear compared to other ones, but for some that might not be enough, but then again for something even pointers and SB stuff isn't enough ;x;) Up to you I guess, just a suggestion.
6. 03:40:103 - This part confused me more than once. I expected a note on the red tick. Add a note here and stack it with the next ones? It's much less confusing and still sounds just as good, if not better.
7. 03:57:438 (3,4) - These could be difficult to notice for some due to the hitburst of 03:56:809 (1). You should probably reposition this combo a little so it's more clear.

1. AR+1? This is only a suggestion though, played okay with 6 as well.
2. 00:56:630 (1) - Remove this NC and place it at 00:57:169 (3) instead. This looks much better and it matches the music better.
3. 03:37:049 - You could probably go without this timing section. Nothing critical though, if you're lazy just leave it there I suppose. The same goes for the upcoming part which has lots of them (those that sit in empty space atleast).

1. 00:21:420 (3) - This isn't a good idea. This is the only double repeater on the map, and even single repeaters used this shape later on. After this spot, a player would ask himself, will the slider repeat twice or only once? By default, if would think once if he didn't see such a slider beforehand. You should probably think of a single repeat+circle combo, or make it's shape more unique (by this I mean like something which doesn't look like other repeating sliders).
2. 00:55:731 (6) - This slider is a little unclear for a normal diff. Both start and end are hidden by hitbursts (although the start is barely visible cause the hitburst started to fade). You should reposition this.
3. 01:34:534 (6) - Hmm, I wonder why didn't you use a new combo here. For example, you used it here at 00:24:115 (1). You should probably either add a new combo here or remove it from that note to make it more consistent.
4. 02:44:953 (5) - ^
5. 03:36:690 (5) - ^
6. 03:48:546 (1) - It's debatable that this note comes too soon after a spinner. To avoid this, you could finish the spinner at 03:47:468 and start mapping at 03:48:186.
7. 03:55:732 (4) - Maybe make this a new combo instead of 03:56:450 (1)? Makes more sense to me, but it's up to you.

1. HPdrain +1. HPdrain 0 is just lazy. You can miss half the map haha (well not really, but you get my point).
2. 01:33:097 (4) - This slider is terrible. Just like I said in tenshi's diff, if you want a double repeater, make it more distinctive than the others. To us, it's kinda obvious it's a double repeater, for a new player it's not.
3. 01:56:450 (5) - ^
4. 03:27:348 (1) - Remove this NC?
5. 03:47:827 (1) - This new combo makes much more sense if you place it at 03:48:186 (2) instead.
6. 03:58:246 (3) - Same slider thingy as the above.

Pereira006 wrote:

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[easy]
00:12:618 (1,2) - I can see is incosiente spacing try fix spacing or try space these out more at 00:14:055 (2) if you change this don't forget fix at 00:15:492 (3) ~ yes, thank you
00:50:701 (1) - try space these out? (to fix spacing) ~ ok
00:53:576 (1,2,3) - Inconsiente spacing ~ thx
02:17:648 (1) - The end point i wanna grid 1 dowm like this http://puu.sh/54DT to make better symentrical with 02:18:546 (2) ~ ok

this is quiet play okay.jpg
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Insane

00:23:755 (3,4,5,6,7) - this stream I did put 25% slow if i feel have drums but only 00:23:845 (4,6) - I can't feel drums soft and strong this just nothing that the mean overmapped you should remove this notes but Imo ~ Have to admit that but I think in the consideration between perfect song emphazising and how I want the map to be, I will leave this because I like it. Also did you mean (3,5) because that's were I can hear the drumms.
00:42:528 (4) - ^ ~ Can't think of anything else here
00:43:965 (5) - ^ ~ ^
01:32:288 (3) - ^ ~ I like it
02:43:426 (2) - Overmapped ~ ^
02:44:145 (7) - ^ ~ ^
03:29:683 (6) - try another place because too hard see approachcircle on HP drain IMO ~ Put it somewhat lower
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ouranhshc wrote:

Insane - 0.40x timing section is unrankable ~ Changed to 0,5
00:58:965 (6,1) - why are these so close together? ~ fixed
01:17:288 (3) - tiny bit offscreen ~ fixed
03:56:809 (1,2) - this close spacing kills the pace of the map ~ hm I changed the spacing in this part a little but I don't think that this is a great problem here, I wanted the spacing to change here.

Easy
fine but feels cramped ~ ok ^^

Armin wrote:

[General]
I'd add in Tags "Nena feat. Nena" considering that this is the album's title ~ yep, it also came out as a single, but added ^^

[Easy]

02:01:121 (1) - I expected this 1/2 shorter, since you followed a similar rhythm here 01:58:246 (1) - (it ends on a white ticks if you see) ~ ok
02:03:995 (1,2) - confusing stack for an easier difficulty, considering that the stacked object starts on a red tick and that you followed another kind of rhythm previously; my suggestion is to follow a 1/1 rhythm or to unstack the (2). ~ unstacked
01:04:354 (1) - This new combo is a bit useless in my opinion, I suggest you to remove it ~ ok
03:00:402 (3) -Please keep following the clap pattern here! (In other words, add a clap) ~ yes, fixed
03:06:151 (x) I'd add a hicircle here (or I'd move the next (5) here by making it 1/2 longer) ~ I think it's ok
03:59:683 (1,2) - Try to replace those hitcircles with a slider? This would made the (2)'s position easier to read (maybe something like in the picture http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/146015) ~ done

[Insane]

00:19:085 (1) - I don't really understand the position of this jump... I'd make a reverse selection of this slider, in order to make the flow more consistent ~ yes this jump was weird, changed it
01:18:725 (6) - Good pattern, but in my opinion rhythms gets a bit off if it ends on a red tick... what if you add a hitcircle here too? 01:19:444 (x) ~ thank you, changed the pattern at the end a bit
01:33:456 (4,1) - Big jump you used here o.o Can you reduce it please? ~ hm I don't see the point in doing this, I think it's quite ok and playable

SapphireGhost wrote:

[General]
- Currently, you just have one red timing point at 11181, but I believe you might need two timing points at 222 and 11181 so that the main menu will pulse to the beginning of the song too. ~ made one at 1121, if you're making one at 222 it's not correct because "1" on the metronome would be "2,5", so this little prelude is ok I think
- Please use Tick Rate 2 so I can sleep well tonight. There's even a list of reasons here! Not all of them are the best but really I would love it if you could use Tick Rate 2. I trust you'll do the right thing. ~ Ok, if you all say it has to be done, changed on my diffs
- Something Inside My Head sort of makes me want you to do a storyboard, even a simple one. That's just a silly old thought, though. ~ no I'm way to lasy now, also I don't think a storyboard is necessary here

[Insane]
01:23:755 (3,4,5) - Remove the little overlap here. It doesn't look very good and even though those two sliders are likely friends you might need to move them away from their lover, away from their lover. ~ yep thx

[Easy]
Same thing about overlaps, but this time between 1/1s. ~ where?
03:45:672 (2) - Well sir I don't know if this is a good idea. A long kickslider in a map otherwise devoid of kicksliders is probably not the best thing to do. Perhaps you could put 1/1 sliders 1/1 after each other and maybe that would work better. You'd still get a dramatic crescendo, just in a different way. ~ I think it's ok here

Good luck with ranking! less than three ~ <3

NotShinta wrote:

Tenshi's Normal:
- Sapphire's idea about tick rate may apply here, too. Although some sliders are very short. I don't like Tickrate 2. So no.
- 00:24:115 (1) - This hitcircle might trip some people up; slider end stacks can be very difficult to read, especially for a Normal player. Added a repeat to the previous slider instead.
-- Beautiful?

General:
- It took me a ridiculous amount of time to notice what parts in this song were actually English.
- You could give each of the breaks a little dragging if, as Sapphaha put it, you would like to be an RJ. Or at least do it on 03:37:049 of Easy and Normal for consistency with Lartwoah's difficulty. ~ I don't see a reason why we (me and tenshi) should change the breaks.

Insane:
- It's odd to have such a high AR for such a high circle size. Fine, I suppose, just not traditional.
- 01:04:354 (1) - I'm getting deja vu here, but I'd space this further away, so the fact this comes 1/1 after the slider is more obvious. Wouldn't hurt, anyway. ~ fixed
- 02:25:552 (1,2) - Considering the previous combo started with a jump, I expected this one to, too. If this antijump-but-not was unintended, you could space this further away, or add a hitcircle at 02:25:372 which falls into either combo. ~ fixed

Easy:
- 03:45:672 (2) - Indeed, I must admit I thought this might surprise Easy players. You've said you think it's fine, though, so I'll let you keep it as it's not toooo bad. ~ Think I changed this part a little bit, but I want to keep the slider

1. Nena feat. Nena aren't needed in the tags. If you search by that, your map will already be shown because those are in the song's artist. Duh
2. Except for that, everything looks pretty well overall!

1. Lol'd at the slider multiplier:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. I'd use some more finishes in the intro. If you agree, perhaps I could tell you were I think they should be via irc~
3. 00:23:755 (4) - Can you add a clap, please?
4. 00:41:180 (3) - (Nazi) This would look more consistent if it was one more grid to the right.
5. 00:52:678 (3) - A finish sounds more appropriate than a whistle here. What do you think?
6. 01:01:300 (4) - And here too. It sounds more consistent with the previous three combos this way.
7. 01:07:767 (2) - In case you want to center this more, you can activate grid level 4 and move it one grid to the left~ Or even deactivate grid snap, if you dare
8. 01:14:234 (3) - Uh, can you avoid unnecessary overlaps like this? You just have to move the previous circles around a bit...
9. 02:05:971 (2) - Even if the finish should go on the white line, it still sounds good here, instead of a whistle. Please try it!
10. 02:07:588 (1) - And you could use a finish here, too.
11. 02:23:216 (2) - (^)
12. 02:27:707 (3) - Perhaps you should move this one grid left. I pressume you wanted to make this symmetrical to (1)
13. 02:33:097 (4) - Clap, pretty please?
14. 02:39:204 (1) - And a finish here would be a good idea, too. The vocals suggest like, more "power" on the hitsounding.
15. 03:07:767 (1) - Finish. Definitely.
16. 03:19:444 (1) - (^)
17. 03:24:833 (4) - Aaaand clap, please.
18. 03:29:324 (5) - I think this should be on the next white tick, it seems a bit out of place where it is now.
19. 03:35:252 (2,3,4,5,6) - Can you make this more consistent? Like this:
    
    SPOILER

    
20. 03:45:671 - I suggest rising the volume of this section. 10% is way too low, I almost couldn't hear when it hits.
21. Sorry for the loong hitsound mod, it's just that they seem inconsistent at some points. With that, most of those inconsistencies should be covered.

1. AR -1 works fine, imo. 5 seems a liittle too high. Just a little, you can keep it if you don't agree.
2. Again, the intro could use one or two more finishes, but I guess you don't have to add them if you don't want to.
3. 00:57:887 (2) - I don't know if it's just me, but I would hit this at 00:57:707 (the previous red tick). Perhaps it's more natural to follow the music that way - and if that's the case, you should move some stuff here, or make some sliders, boy (or girl, I don't really know).
   Also, if you do that, there should be an object at 00:58:246, too. A slider isn't a bad idea!
4. You hitsounded this in a very different way from the Easy. I really have to say that I felt the absence of many finishes. They really fit the song, and you used very few. Check that, you might want to add some (or not, who knows...)

1. Impressive as always, sir.

1. You can raise HP Drain by one if you want!
2. 00:23:576 (2) - Perhaps this jump is too sudden before the stream... I suggest using normal spacing.
3. 00:42:438 (3,4,5,4,5,6) - What's the point of these triplets? They don't seem to follow anything in the music... I'd say it's pure overmapping :/
4. 01:33:636 (1) - I didn't have any problems while playing this jump... But still, it's a little too big. I suggest reducing the spacing by arranging this pattern in some other way.
5. 02:36:689 (4,5) - I highly recommend you to move (4) to another position, since it's hitburst covers the end of (5). This, also counting that the SV is high, makes it really hard to see whether if there is a repeat or not. It can almost be considered unrankable, since (6) isn't very visible for being so similar to this.
6. 02:37:408 (6,7) - (^) Please avoid this kind of stacks from now on.
7. 02:56:450 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I was hoping for a slowdown, to be honest. You could try adding one~
8. 03:12:977 (1) - The player will surely wait for this to be here:
   
   SPOILER

   
   The reason is that you passed two times through that point, and in both cases you made a stop there. I suggest having that there and arranging the next circles in a different way, such as:
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 03:24:833 (3) - Clap, please :3
10. 03:35:792 (1) - Similar to 01:33:636 (1) (or equal, since you copy & pasted).
11. Hitsounds seem more consistent here. I still missed some finishes in a similar way to Easy... Can you check that?
    Would have hitsounded it differently, but that's another story

narakucrimson wrote:

Hello there!

[General]

1. Nena feat. Nena aren't needed in the tags. If you search by that, your map will already be shown because those are in the song's artist. Duh ~ I did that on request, I do think this is unnecessary too. Removed.
2. Except for that, everything looks pretty well overall!

[Easy]

1. Lol'd at the slider multiplier ~ Lol yes, changed it, but as it is parsed as a float I think, it's the same as 0.7 ^^
2. I'd use some more finishes in the intro. If you agree, perhaps I could tell you were I think they should be via irc ~ Ok I will contact you. I don't miss finish sounds that much though
3. 00:23:755 (4) - Can you add a clap, please? ~ I sure can
4. 00:41:180 (3) - (Nazi) This would look more consistent if it was one more grid to the right. ~ Yea, the spacing looks better now
5. 00:52:678 (3) - A finish sounds more appropriate than a whistle here. What do you think? ~ I think I should change a few hitsounds in that part :3
6. 01:01:300 (4) - And here too. It sounds more consistent with the previous three combos this way. ~ Yep
7. 01:07:767 (2) - In case you want to center this more, you can activate grid level 4 and move it one grid to the left~ Or even deactivate grid snap, if you dare ~ Activated .osu editing power
8. 01:14:234 (3) - Uh, can you avoid unnecessary overlaps like this? You just have to move the previous circles around a bit... ~ Thought it was a good idea back then, but... yea...
9. 02:05:971 (2) - Even if the finish should go on the white line, it still sounds good here, instead of a whistle. Please try it! ~ Ok, changed it here and in insane
10. 02:07:588 (1) - And you could use a finish here, too. ~ Sry, I won't
11. 02:23:216 (2) - (^) ~ Ok
12. 02:27:707 (3) - Perhaps you should move this one grid left. I pressume you wanted to make this symmetrical to (1) ~ Thx
13. 02:33:097 (4) - Clap, pretty please? ~ No, see insane
14. 02:39:204 (1) - And a finish here would be a good idea, too. The vocals suggest like, more "power" on the hitsounding. ~ Yes, also added one on 02:40:641 (4)
15. 03:07:767 (1) - Finish. Definitely. ~ Ok changed this part, also the intro and also in insane
16. 03:19:444 (1) - (^) ~ Nope
17. 03:24:833 (4) - Aaaand clap, please. ~ No, see insane
18. 03:29:324 (5) - I think this should be on the next white tick, it seems a bit out of place where it is now. ~ Ok
19. 03:35:252 (2,3,4,5,6) - Can you make this more consistent? [...] ~ It was not ment to be consistent, it should go from "low angle" to "wide angle" - I think it doesn't look too bad
20. 03:45:671 - I suggest rising the volume of this section. 10% is way too low, I almost couldn't hear when it hits. ~ Yes, but is it necessary? Can't you just have a nice quitet -> normal volume there? But turned up the volume by 10% (won't help much, I know). Lol orange ~
21. Sorry for the loong hitsound mod, it's just that they seem inconsistent at some points. With that, most of those inconsistencies should be covered ~ I have no problem with own opinions (for hitsounds) in mods ;3

[Insane]

1. You can raise HP Drain by one if you want! ~ No, I don't want to
2. 00:23:576 (2) - Perhaps this jump is too sudden before the stream... I suggest using normal spacing. ~ Hm 1,0 will do it, I think
3. 00:42:438 (3,4,5,4,5,6) - What's the point of these triplets? They don't seem to follow anything in the music... I'd say it's pure overmapping :/ ~ That was done because I couldn't think of something else at this time, lol. Change this part.
4. 01:33:636 (1) - I didn't have any problems while playing this jump... But still, it's a little too big. I suggest reducing the spacing by arranging this pattern in some other way. ~ Ok
5. 02:36:689 (4,5) - I highly recommend you to move (4) to another position, since it's hitburst covers the end of (5). This, also counting that the SV is high, makes it really hard to see whether if there is a repeat or not. It can almost be considered unrankable, since (6) isn't very visible for being so similar to this. ~ You are right, changed this part.
6. 02:37:408 (6,7) - (^) Please avoid this kind of stacks from now on. ~ I will ^^
7. 02:56:450 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I was hoping for a slowdown, to be honest. You could try adding one ~ I like it the way it is
8. 03:12:977 (1) - The player will surely wait for this to be here [...] ~ Yes, good idea
9. 03:24:833 (3) - Clap, please :3 ~ I don't want to have a clap in this particular part, I think it sounds nicer and is a better built up for the following finish sound
10. 03:35:792 (1) - Similar to 01:33:636 (1) (or equal, since you copy & pasted). ~ c&p ftw - hope it's a little better now
11. Hitsounds seem more consistent here. I still missed some finishes in a similar way to Easy... Can you check that? ~ Well I checked your suggestions from Easy and made it consistend, when necessary, I guess.
    Would have hitsounded it differently, but that's another story

That's all for now, I guess! Good luck!

Rukarioman wrote:

General:
- Ich würd ja noch "german" zu den tags hinzufügen weil man bei den Metatags nur eine Sprache angeben kann und dies aber ungefähr 60-40% mit zwei Sprachen gemischt ist. Und es wird überraschenderweise mehr english als deutsch gesungen. ~jup ok

Easy:
Ach du heilige, bitte nimm Tick 2 da runter. 2 ist bei dieser Easy weitaus zu spammig. (Wegen der langsamen Slider Velocity) ~ ok, ich wollte es da eh nicht eig...

Insane:
03:43:336 (4) - Dieser Beat kommt mir leicht unnötig vor. Ich würd sagen das es besser wäre den zu streichen. ~kay
03:44:773 (6) - ^ ~kay

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Hello!
Normal:

• 00:13:875 (3,4) - This has an odd play to it. It would match the music better if you re-arranged it like this.
• 01:08:666 (1) - Unsilence this sliders end. Bring the volume up to at least 45%. Bonus points to you if you add a clap (This goes for the other sliders like this)
• 01:17:288 (2) - I don't see why you brought the volume down on this sliders start. It doesn't really match the music (This goes for the other sliders like this)
• 02:59:324 (1) - This would flow better if you moved it like this.