Hi, sorry for being late!
00:01:073 (4,1) - Just like there's a "jump" here to seperate these groupings, why not have one 00:01:931 (4,1) ? you seem to have one everywhere else. Maybe stack 00:02:145 (1,2,3,4) - so that 00:02:573 (3) - stacks on 00:01:288 (1) -
00:08:788 (4,1) - ^ as a note, this isn't necessary at all, just a minor suggestion.
00:27:216 (2,3,4) - I know this isn't necessarily following the vocals but the fact that the vocal starts before 00:27:216 (2) - does really throws me off here. Not sure what the solution is, just figured I'd mention this.
00:29:573 (1,2,3) - Better flow if you position it something like this -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/678003700:31:716 (3,1) - Fix blanket, 00:32:359 (2) - and im not a big fan of how this is overlapped by 00:31:716 (3), maybe you can try something like this instead? -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6780047 (ignore the timeline)
00:42:859 (1) - should just be a single repeat, making it a double repeat removes emphasis from 00:43:073 -
00:44:145 (4,6) - maybe put more space between these? They're almost touching which looks kinda ugly. Applies to most of the sliders in this area.
00:49:716 (2) - This slider's kinda ugly lol, something like this perhaps? -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/678005800:59:573 (4) - missing clap I think
01:02:145 (3) - NC for the SV change? It's pretty drastic
01:07:931 (4,1) - this jump is huge, maybe you want it like that but it's frustrating to play due to the 1/8 gap (since you haven't used many of them for the player to get used to that timing)
01:12:216 - this is 1/8, there are 4 beats until the next slider, not 3
01:11:573 (1,2) - this is spaced like 1/4 but its only 1/2, so could cause some reading issues
01:12:752 (2,3) - use 1.1 spacing? Looks better if they dont touch. wont mention this more, but keep that in mind
01:21:645 (4,1) - same as before
01:26:038 - I can BARELY hear a tick here, let along these other notes. This is overmapping. At best, you could map this blue tick.
01:29:573 (1,2) - Blanket? would look nice
01:32:716 (2,3,4,5) - this should be 1/8
rest of this kiai is pretty neat.
02:17:895 (1) - is this NC intentional?
02:22:073 - There's a sound here you could map
02:31:288 (1,3) - make these not touch, looks ugly
02:32:145 (1,3) - ^ you get the idea
02:48:431 (1,2) - 02:49:288 (1,2) - these as well, use a DS so that these don't touch and it would look way better.
03:40:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - idk if you can really expect the target audience to be able to not only read this as 1/3 but then also tap it properly.
03:46:716 (2) - this SV increase isn't really justified by the music
03:48:216 (3,4,5) - should be 1/8
rest of this mod would just be me repeating stuff, so yeah
hope I could help, I like this map, it has some cool ideas.
Good luck!