23:14 <spboxer3> : 其實我很希望這有SB阿...實在很電音...:OOOO
23:14 <bakabaka> : lol
23:14 <bakabaka> : 你要幫偶做嗎lol
23:14 <spboxer3> : 不了...
23:14 <bakabaka> : ;_;
spboxer3 wrote:
喔靠~這首泡了D:
248,200,23200,2,0,B|288:256|360:256|400:208|392:160,1,179.999994635582
Ok , all fixedBreeze wrote:
Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestionsGeneral
- Consider adding Hokkien as tag since it's a Hokkien song
Dis
- 01:18:648 (1) - Remove clap of slider tail, it sounds odd. Clap should at 01:18:441, since there's no note there, just keep it blank here
- 01:20:303 (1) - ^
- 01:21:338 (1) - Consider adding finish sound here?
Dcar
- 00:23:200 (4) - Try this so that it has a better shape with previous 00:20:924 (3)
248,200,23200,2,0,B|288:256|360:256|400:208|392:160,1,179.999994635582[attachment=0:d0c4f]0.jpg[/attachment:d0c4f]- 00:28:372 (x) - Add a note with finish?
- 00:53:200 (7) - Add finish?
- 01:01:476 (1) - ^
- 01:06:235 (1) - ^
- 01:14:717 (1) - ^
- 01:21:338 (1) - ^
- 01:41:200 (1) - ^
- 01:46:269 (1) - ^
- 01:54:441 (1) - ^
- 02:01:062 (1) - ^
- 02:06:028 (1) - ^
- 02:35:821 (1) - ^
- 02:49:062 (1) - ^
- 02:53:821 (1) - ^
- 03:02:303 (4) - ^, slider tail
Insane
- 02:37:683 (2,3,4,1,2) - Those notes are kinda messed up, try put them in another way. Totally stack is fine, but half stack is bad here
- 00:08:510 (1) - Add finish?
- 01:01:476 (1) - ^
- 01:14:717 (3) - ^, slider tail
- 01:54:441 (1) - ^, slider head
- 02:20:924 (1) - ^
- 02:35:821 (1) - ^
- 02:49:062 (1) - ^, slider head
Almost all finish sound suggestions lol, just pick what you want to fix
And call me back when you done changes
Thank you! >3</Breeze wrote:
Added some finish sound and a tag, and some tiny design prettify
RANKED!
I guess this is the 1st ranked Hokkien song in osu