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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 12 декабря 2017 г. at 0:52:24

Artist: Azazin Kreet
Title: reyting [21 pilots cover]
Tags: азазин дота dota 2 rating russian twenty one pilots heathens linnik sound musik keysi klimmy cover
BPM: 90
Filesize: 19432kb
Play Time: 01:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,15 stars, 77 notes)
  2. Hard (2,35 stars, 162 notes)
  3. Normal (1,64 stars, 122 notes)


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00:24:684 (2,3) - timing between these 2 notes are awkward for new players, as they are in 3/4, consider creating a reverse to look like this http://imgur.com/a/pbsn4 or use circles every full beat
00:27:351 (5,6) - same problem, but you can use http://imgur.com/a/TWVEX
00:30:017 (2,3) - ^
00:32:684 (2,3) - ^
00:35:351 (2,3) - ^
by the time they pass that, players should know the gap and adjust to it
00:48:684 (4,5) - ^ but in a different section, use one of the fixes above
00:48:684 (4,5) - ^
after you apply fixed to those spots, players will adapt to the gap
add more variety, repeating the same patterns over and over again is boring for a whole minute
00:24:684 (3,4) - same 3/4 gap, fix using one of the methods in Easy
00:27:351 (6,7) - ^
00:32:684 (6,7) - ^
by the time they pass that, players at that skill range should know the gap
00:46:017 (2,3) - ^ but in a different section
00:48:684 (2,3) - ^
just fix those 2 and players will adjust
00:58:684 (5,1) - 3/4 gap
01:09:351 (1,2,3) - don't overlap unless 1/4, create a triangle or something else
01:12:017 (5,6,7) - ^
01:14:684 (1,2,3) - ^
01:17:351 (5,6,7) - ^
01:20:017 (1,2,3) - ^
01:22:684 (5,6,7) - ^
01:25:351 (1,2,3) - ^
01:28:017 (5,6,7) - ^

This is all my opinion
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-Pootis- wrote:

00:24:684 (2,3) - timing between these 2 notes are awkward for new players, as they are in 3/4, consider creating a reverse to look like this http://imgur.com/a/pbsn4 or use circles every full beat FIXED, 3 revers at now
00:27:351 (5,6) - same problem, but you can use http://imgur.com/a/TWVEX FIXED, changed like this ^^^
00:30:017 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:32:684 (2,3) - ^^
00:35:351 (2,3) - ^^
by the time they pass that, players should know the gap and adjust to it
00:48:684 (4,5) - ^ but in a different section, use one of the fixes above Yet, I leave it as it is
00:48:684 (4,5) - ^ ^
after you apply fixed to those spots, players will adapt to the gap
add more variety, repeating the same patterns over and over again is boring for a whole minute I'll try to change it
00:24:684 (3,4) - same 3/4 gap, fix using one of the methods in Easy I don't think so
00:27:351 (6,7) - ^ ^
00:32:684 (6,7) - ^ ^
by the time they pass that, players at that skill range should know the gap
00:46:017 (2,3) - ^ but in a different section ^
00:48:684 (2,3) - ^ ^
just fix those 2 and players will adjust
00:58:684 (5,1) - 3/4 gap no
01:09:351 (1,2,3) - don't overlap unless 1/4, create a triangle or something else why ?
01:12:017 (5,6,7) - ^ ^
01:14:684 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:17:351 (5,6,7) - ^ ^
01:20:017 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:22:684 (5,6,7) - ^ ^
01:25:351 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:28:017 (5,6,7) - ^ ^

This is all my opinion
Thanks for modding ;)
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Hard
00:10:684 (9) - should be new combo
00:12:684 (12) - curve slider to be in line with following circle
00:14:017 (2) - ^
00:16:684 (6) - ^
00:24:017 - 00:45:017 - add a clap on beats 2 and 4 to emphasize the snare. also do the same especially for kiai time part too
since this is supposed to be a hard difficulty, try spacing the small 'jump' sections a little more
Normal
01:08:017 (8) - maybe place this a little higher up, around a two o' clock position
01:26:017 (3) - move this up more to line up with the other notes, form a small arch
01:30:017 (9) - some new guys might not be able to read this part too well, idk. maybe a change in position
once again hitsounds in same spot as i said before
Easy
00:47:351 (2) - move this note away from the end point a little
00:52:684 (2) - ^
00:58:017 (2) - ^
cough hitsounds cough
idk if you had plans for the end of the song too, it will sound good whether or not it is mapped or not, maybe even only doing it for one diff will be good
posted

Mjenk5150 wrote:

Hard
00:10:684 (9) - should be new combo No, because it brake this section
00:12:684 (12) - curve slider to be in line with following circle Fixed
00:14:017 (2) - ^ ^
00:16:684 (6) - ^ ^
00:24:017 - 00:45:017 - add a clap on beats 2 and 4 to emphasize the snare. also do the same especially for kiai time part too I'll think about it
since this is supposed to be a hard difficulty, try spacing the small 'jump' sections a little more Fixed
Normal
01:08:017 (8) - maybe place this a little higher up, around a two o' clock position Sure
01:26:017 (3) - move this up more to line up with the other notes, form a small arch ^
01:30:017 (9) - some new guys might not be able to read this part too well, idk. maybe a change in position Fixed
once again hitsounds in same spot as i said before
Easy
00:47:351 (2) - move this note away from the end point a little Fixed
00:52:684 (2) - ^ ^
00:58:017 (2) - ^ ^
cough hitsounds cough Can you recommend some custom hs ?
idk if you had plans for the end of the song too, it will sound good whether or not it is mapped or not, maybe even only doing it for one diff will be good No,it just outro of this song
Thanks ;)
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baysman wrote:

Mjenk5150 wrote:

Hard
00:10:684 (9) - should be new combo No, because it brake this section
00:12:684 (12) - curve slider to be in line with following circle Fixed
00:14:017 (2) - ^ ^
00:16:684 (6) - ^ ^
00:24:017 - 00:45:017 - add a clap on beats 2 and 4 to emphasize the snare. also do the same especially for kiai time part too I'll think about it
since this is supposed to be a hard difficulty, try spacing the small 'jump' sections a little more Fixed
Normal
01:08:017 (8) - maybe place this a little higher up, around a two o' clock position Sure
01:26:017 (3) - move this up more to line up with the other notes, form a small arch ^
01:30:017 (9) - some new guys might not be able to read this part too well, idk. maybe a change in position Fixed
once again hitsounds in same spot as i said before
Easy
00:47:351 (2) - move this note away from the end point a little Fixed
00:52:684 (2) - ^ ^
00:58:017 (2) - ^ ^
cough hitsounds cough Can you recommend some custom hs ?
idk if you had plans for the end of the song too, it will sound good whether or not it is mapped or not, maybe even only doing it for one diff will be good No,it just outro of this song
Thanks ;)
noie i dont have any sutom hitsounds lol, sorry. But im pretty sure maps need SOME hitsounds in order to be ranked, so you should definately consider hitsounds in some parts, but other than the 2 and 4 like i suggested, you should ask others what they would do for hitsounds. still up to you what you want to do with the hitsounds
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Mjenk5150 wrote:

noie i dont have any sutom hitsounds lol, sorry. But im pretty sure maps need SOME hitsounds in order to be ranked, so you should definately consider hitsounds in some parts, but other than the 2 and 4 like i suggested, you should ask others what they would do for hitsounds. still up to you what you want to do with the hitsounds
idk what i want to do, but i'll try to find some hs.

Thanks, again.
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Hello! M4M from your queue!

[Hard]

  1. 00:05:357 (9) - NC
    00:10:690 (9) - NC
    00:13:356 (13) - NC
    00:16:023 (4) - NC
    00:21:357 (5) - NC
    00:25:356 - Place a note!
    00:26:690 (6) - NC
    00:29:356 (1) - NC
    00:30:690 (3) - Place a note here!
    00:32:023 (6) - NC
    00:37:357 (5) - NC
    00:39:690 - A note here wouldn't be bad, since you're following the drum sound and not the voice in other parts.
    00:45:021 - ^
    01:10:690 - ^
    01:10:690 - Place a note here! It's kiai mode and you're on the most intense part of the song, so consider mapping every strong sound you hear, not only because it's kiai time, but because this is a hard difficulty!
    01:11:690 - ^
    01:12:023 (7) - NC
    01:14:356 - Place a note here!
    01:16:023 - ^
    01:17:023 - ^
    01:19:690 - ^
    01:21:356 - ^
    01:22:356 - ^
    01:25:023 - ^
    01:26:690 - ^


Your easy and normal difficulty seems good, so good luck with your map!
posted

BlanKo wrote:

Hello! M4M from your queue!

[Hard]

  1. 00:05:357 (9) - NC Fixed
    00:10:690 (9) - NC ^^
    00:13:356 (13) - NC ^^
    00:16:023 (4) - NC No
    00:21:357 (5) - NC ^^
    00:25:356 - Place a note! Fixed
    00:26:690 (6) - NC No
    00:29:356 (1) - NC Already NC
    00:30:690 (3) - Place a note here! Shure
    00:32:023 (6) - NC No
    00:37:357 (5) - NC ^^
    00:39:690 - A note here wouldn't be bad, since you're following the drum sound and not the voice in other parts. Fixed
    00:45:021 - ^ No
    01:10:690 - ^ Fixed
    01:10:690 - Place a note here! It's kiai mode and you're on the most intense part of the song, so consider mapping every strong sound you hear, not only because it's kiai time, but because this is a hard difficulty! Shure
    01:11:690 - ^ ^^
    01:12:023 (7) - NC No
    01:14:356 - Place a note here! ^^
    01:16:023 - ^ Fixed
    01:17:023 - ^ ^^
    01:19:690 - ^ ^^
    01:21:356 - ^ ^^
    01:22:356 - ^ ^^
    01:25:023 - ^ No
    01:26:690 - ^ Fixed


Your easy and normal difficulty seems good, so good luck with your map!
Thanks for modding! ;)
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M4M
Hard
00:05:357 (1) - What about change slider? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6633656 . Looks nice with 6 too.
00:06:690 (3) - Blanket?https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6633666
00:13:356 (1,2) - Those have same space like 00:14:689 (3,4) - .I think its too much spaced between 2 and 3

00:22:023 (6) - Make like these? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6633762
00:27:357 (1) - Nc
00:28:023 (3) - add a circle , x209 y183 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6633798
00:32:690 (8) - ^ same like last 2
01:00:357 (1) - This combo is lonely
01:04:023 (1) - this one too
01:30:690 (1) - Place in center

You can crop the mp3 , is a lot of unused song after that 01:30:690 (1) - .

Just my opinions , if you find something useful you can help me with my map too , otherwise it's countinng a a NM
Normal and easy looks good for me ,sorry , can't help.


GL
posted

TwillghtSparkle wrote:

M4M
Hard
00:05:357 (1) - What about change slider? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6633656 . Looks nice with 6 too. Fixed
00:06:690 (3) - Blanket?https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6633666 ^^
00:13:356 (1,2) - Those have same space like 00:14:689 (3,4) - .I think its too much spaced between 2 and 3 ^^

00:22:023 (6) - Make like these? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6633762 Nuh
00:27:357 (1) - Nc Ok
00:28:023 (3) - add a circle , x209 y183 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6633798 ^^
00:32:690 (8) - ^ same like last 2 ^^
01:00:357 (1) - This combo is lonely Already lonely
01:04:023 (1) - this one too Same ^
01:30:690 (1) - Place in center Yup

You can crop the mp3 , is a lot of unused song after that 01:30:690 (1) - I'll leave this part for scoreboard viewing

Just my opinions , if you find something useful you can help me with my map too , otherwise it's countinng a a NM
Normal and easy looks good for me ,sorry , can't help.


GL
Thanks, it been very useful, I'll mod your map a bit later. ;)
posted
offset 2680ms is better imo

01:09:357 (1) - place kiai on this note, thx
01:28:346 - circle here?
01:12:690 (8) - nc?

gl
posted

onislaughter wrote:

offset 2680ms is better imo Fixed

01:09:357 (1) - place kiai on this note, thx ok
01:28:346 - circle here? ok
01:12:690 (8) - nc? no

gl
Thanks for check ;)
posted

baysman wrote:

It's for Hard ?
yeah
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from mod queue -- Bye Bye 2016 ^^

Hard

00:38:023 - make this a curve slider .. since you already made it at 00:39:023 -
01:00:023 - feels like this missing a note
01:08:680 - try putting reverse slider here.. cuz there is a strong sound i here

01:10:023 (3,4) - blanket this .. look more nicer
01:28:690 (8,9) - blanket this too

Normal

00:15:347 (5,6) - and 00:16:680 (7,8) - can be better blanket .. just copy this that you made 00:14:013 (3,4) - and paste it
you might wanna check this back cuz i see a lot of random spaces that supposed to have a note in it

goodluck^^
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YukiZura- wrote:

from mod queue -- Bye Bye 2016 ^^

Hard

00:38:023 - make this a curve slider .. since you already made it at 00:39:023 - Fixed
01:00:023 - feels like this missing a note Fixed
01:08:680 - try putting reverse slider here.. cuz there is a strong sound i here nice suggestion, fixed

01:10:023 (3,4) - blanket this .. look more nicer Changed a bit
01:28:690 (8,9) - blanket this too Same ^

Normal

00:15:347 (5,6) - and 00:16:680 (7,8) - can be better blanket .. just copy this that you made 00:14:013 (3,4) - and paste it
you might wanna check this back cuz i see a lot of random spaces that supposed to have a note in it Fixed

goodluck^^
Thanks for modding !! ;)
posted
From my queue~

Strange song for me..

[General]
Are you sre its from Dota 2? (i don't even play dota 2 lol, but i still didn't believe its from Dota 2)
Put some spinners around the map, there isn't ane spinner around the map

[Easy]
00:48:680 (4) - you can change this to 1/1 slider :)
00:54:013 (4) - ^
00:59:347 (4) - ^
01:06:680 - I hear some drum (or snare) sound here, put a circle?
01:14:680 (1,2) - Seems better to convert to a slider

[Normal]
00:07:346 - add a circle
00:31:013 (3,5) - Stack these
00:35:347 (2,3) - Please make it looks better, or like [url=https://puu.sh/sYt2r/7e53f062de.png]this[url]
00:40:680 (2,3) - ^

[Hard]
00:42:347 (6) - making this a jump? it may couse a missreading.
- Remove these, that's unused
01:04:680 (1,3) - Stack these
posted

Rendyindo wrote:

From my queue~

Strange song for me.. Not only for you :lol:

[General]
Are you sre its from Dota 2? (i don't even play dota 2 lol, but i still didn't believe its from Dota 2) It's not completely from dota 2, lyrics for this song made by one russian youtube blogger, when he played dota, I mean he make it for his channel. So I think it need to be added to source. Maybe just add it into tags ?
Put some spinners around the map, there isn't ane spinner around the map I didn't find moment when need to put spinner

[Easy]
00:48:680 (4) - you can change this to 1/1 slider :)Fixed
00:54:013 (4) - ^ ^
00:59:347 (4) - ^ ^
01:06:680 - I hear some drum (or snare) sound here, put a circle? Ok
01:14:680 (1,2) - Seems better to convert to a slider ^

[Normal]
00:07:346 - add a circle Ok
00:31:013 (3,5) - Stack these Already stacked
00:35:347 (2,3) - Please make it looks better, or like [url=https://puu.sh/sYt2r/7e53f062de.png]this[url] Fixed
00:40:680 (2,3) - ^ ^

[Hard]
00:42:347 (6) - making this a jump? it may couse a missreading. I don't think so. But maybe change it later
- Remove these, that's unused No, I left it cuz if don't change SV to 1 DS also be changed. (I left it for myself)
01:04:680 (1,3) - Stack these Ok
Thanks for modding :)
posted
Metadata proof: Youtube

Кудосу не давай.
Если ты действительно хочешь ранкнуть это, то надо поработать над тем, что к картам не относится.
Во-первых, метадата. Она правильная, по сути, но есть несколько замечаний. Во-первых, "рейтинг" пишется с маленькой буквы. Во-вторых, правильной романизацией будет "rejting", если обращаться к этому сайту. В-третьих, необходимо добавить в тэги следующие слова: "rating" - английская версия слова "рейтинг", "russian" - язык, на котором идёт трек, так как официально в игре не предполагалось русских треков, "twenty one pilots heathens" - название оригинального трека, о чём также говорится в видео кавера, "linnik sound musik" - имя студии, которая помогла с кавером данного трека (о чём тоже говорилось в видео). В итоге в тэги нужно добавить следующее:
rating russian twenty one pilots heathens linnik sound musik keysi klimmy
.
Во-вторых, Widescreen Support. Он находится по пути Song Setup -> Design. Его следует отключить во всех диффах, так как у тебя нет сториборда.
В-третьих, в описание следует вставить, что в треке есть 18+ части (к ним относятся сцены насилия и мат). Эта картинка будет вполне себе. Альтернатива - прописать в описание NSFW lyrics.
В-четвёртых, видео. Его можно скачать с Youtube и вставить в карту. Но помни, что максимальное разрешение - 1280x720, и в видео не должно быть аудиодорожки.
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Спасибо огромное за помощь с метадатой, серьезно я прост немного не шарю что к чему.
Все изменил как ты написал, но видео может по позже как нибудь залью, потому что у меня немного проблемы с интернетом.

Еще такой вопрос, а вот название "Azazin Kreet - рейтинг [21 pilots cover]" мне [21 pilots cover] только в title ставить или в Romanised title тоже? Или вообще не нужно его добавлять ?
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