1. Easy (1,15 stars, 77 notes)
2. Hard (2,35 stars, 162 notes)
3. Normal (1,64 stars, 122 notes)

-Pootis- wrote:

Easy

00:24:684 (2,3) - timing between these 2 notes are awkward for new players, as they are in 3/4, consider creating a reverse to look like this http://imgur.com/a/pbsn4 or use circles every full beat FIXED, 3 revers at now
00:27:351 (5,6) - same problem, but you can use http://imgur.com/a/TWVEX FIXED, changed like this ^^^
00:30:017 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:32:684 (2,3) - ^^
00:35:351 (2,3) - ^^
by the time they pass that, players should know the gap and adjust to it
00:48:684 (4,5) - ^ but in a different section, use one of the fixes above Yet, I leave it as it is
00:48:684 (4,5) - ^ ^
after you apply fixed to those spots, players will adapt to the gap
add more variety, repeating the same patterns over and over again is boring for a whole minute I'll try to change it

Normal

00:24:684 (3,4) - same 3/4 gap, fix using one of the methods in Easy I don't think so
00:27:351 (6,7) - ^ ^
00:32:684 (6,7) - ^ ^
by the time they pass that, players at that skill range should know the gap
00:46:017 (2,3) - ^ but in a different section ^
00:48:684 (2,3) - ^ ^
just fix those 2 and players will adjust

Hard

00:58:684 (5,1) - 3/4 gap no
01:09:351 (1,2,3) - don't overlap unless 1/4, create a triangle or something else why ?
01:12:017 (5,6,7) - ^ ^
01:14:684 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:17:351 (5,6,7) - ^ ^
01:20:017 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:22:684 (5,6,7) - ^ ^
01:25:351 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:28:017 (5,6,7) - ^ ^

This is all my opinion

Mjenk5150 wrote:

Hard
00:10:684 (9) - should be new combo No, because it brake this section
00:12:684 (12) - curve slider to be in line with following circle Fixed
00:14:017 (2) - ^ ^
00:16:684 (6) - ^ ^
00:24:017 - 00:45:017 - add a clap on beats 2 and 4 to emphasize the snare. also do the same especially for kiai time part too I'll think about it
since this is supposed to be a hard difficulty, try spacing the small 'jump' sections a little more Fixed
Normal
01:08:017 (8) - maybe place this a little higher up, around a two o' clock position Sure
01:26:017 (3) - move this up more to line up with the other notes, form a small arch ^
01:30:017 (9) - some new guys might not be able to read this part too well, idk. maybe a change in position Fixed
once again hitsounds in same spot as i said before
Easy
00:47:351 (2) - move this note away from the end point a little Fixed
00:52:684 (2) - ^ ^
00:58:017 (2) - ^ ^
cough hitsounds cough Can you recommend some custom hs ?
idk if you had plans for the end of the song too, it will sound good whether or not it is mapped or not, maybe even only doing it for one diff will be good No,it just outro of this song

baysman wrote:

Mjenk5150 wrote:

Hard
00:10:684 (9) - should be new combo No, because it brake this section
00:12:684 (12) - curve slider to be in line with following circle Fixed
00:14:017 (2) - ^ ^
00:16:684 (6) - ^ ^
00:24:017 - 00:45:017 - add a clap on beats 2 and 4 to emphasize the snare. also do the same especially for kiai time part too I'll think about it
since this is supposed to be a hard difficulty, try spacing the small 'jump' sections a little more Fixed
Normal
01:08:017 (8) - maybe place this a little higher up, around a two o' clock position Sure
01:26:017 (3) - move this up more to line up with the other notes, form a small arch ^
01:30:017 (9) - some new guys might not be able to read this part too well, idk. maybe a change in position Fixed
once again hitsounds in same spot as i said before
Easy
00:47:351 (2) - move this note away from the end point a little Fixed
00:52:684 (2) - ^ ^
00:58:017 (2) - ^ ^
cough hitsounds cough Can you recommend some custom hs ?
idk if you had plans for the end of the song too, it will sound good whether or not it is mapped or not, maybe even only doing it for one diff will be good No,it just outro of this song

Thanks

Mjenk5150 wrote:

noie i dont have any sutom hitsounds lol, sorry. But im pretty sure maps need SOME hitsounds in order to be ranked, so you should definately consider hitsounds in some parts, but other than the 2 and 4 like i suggested, you should ask others what they would do for hitsounds. still up to you what you want to do with the hitsounds

1. 
   00:05:357 (9) - NC
   00:10:690 (9) - NC
   00:13:356 (13) - NC
   00:16:023 (4) - NC
   00:21:357 (5) - NC
   00:25:356 - Place a note!
   00:26:690 (6) - NC
   00:29:356 (1) - NC
   00:30:690 (3) - Place a note here!
   00:32:023 (6) - NC
   00:37:357 (5) - NC
   00:39:690 - A note here wouldn't be bad, since you're following the drum sound and not the voice in other parts.
   00:45:021 - ^
   01:10:690 - ^
   01:10:690 - Place a note here! It's kiai mode and you're on the most intense part of the song, so consider mapping every strong sound you hear, not only because it's kiai time, but because this is a hard difficulty!
   01:11:690 - ^
   01:12:023 (7) - NC
   01:14:356 - Place a note here!
   01:16:023 - ^
   01:17:023 - ^
   01:19:690 - ^
   01:21:356 - ^
   01:22:356 - ^
   01:25:023 - ^
   01:26:690 - ^

BlanKo wrote:

Hello! M4M from your queue!

[Hard]

1. 
   00:05:357 (9) - NC Fixed
   00:10:690 (9) - NC ^^
   00:13:356 (13) - NC ^^
   00:16:023 (4) - NC No
   00:21:357 (5) - NC ^^
   00:25:356 - Place a note! Fixed
   00:26:690 (6) - NC No
   00:29:356 (1) - NC Already NC
   00:30:690 (3) - Place a note here! Shure
   00:32:023 (6) - NC No
   00:37:357 (5) - NC ^^
   00:39:690 - A note here wouldn't be bad, since you're following the drum sound and not the voice in other parts. Fixed
   00:45:021 - ^ No
   01:10:690 - ^ Fixed
   01:10:690 - Place a note here! It's kiai mode and you're on the most intense part of the song, so consider mapping every strong sound you hear, not only because it's kiai time, but because this is a hard difficulty! Shure
   01:11:690 - ^ ^^
   01:12:023 (7) - NC No
   01:14:356 - Place a note here! ^^
   01:16:023 - ^ Fixed
   01:17:023 - ^ ^^
   01:19:690 - ^ ^^
   01:21:356 - ^ ^^
   01:22:356 - ^ ^^
   01:25:023 - ^ No
   01:26:690 - ^ Fixed

Your easy and normal difficulty seems good, so good luck with your map!

TwillghtSparkle wrote:

M4M
Hard
00:05:357 (1) - What about change slider? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6633656 . Looks nice with 6 too. Fixed
00:06:690 (3) - Blanket?https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6633666 ^^
00:13:356 (1,2) - Those have same space like 00:14:689 (3,4) - .I think its too much spaced between 2 and 3 ^^

00:22:023 (6) - Make like these? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6633762 Nuh
00:27:357 (1) - Nc Ok
00:28:023 (3) - add a circle , x209 y183 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6633798 ^^
00:32:690 (8) - ^ same like last 2 ^^
01:00:357 (1) - This combo is lonely Already lonely
01:04:023 (1) - this one too Same ^
01:30:690 (1) - Place in center Yup

You can crop the mp3 , is a lot of unused song after that 01:30:690 (1) - I'll leave this part for scoreboard viewing

Just my opinions , if you find something useful you can help me with my map too , otherwise it's countinng a a NM
Normal and easy looks good for me ,sorry , can't help.


GL

onislaughter wrote:

offset 2680ms is better imo Fixed

01:09:357 (1) - place kiai on this note, thx ok
01:28:346 - circle here? ok
01:12:690 (8) - nc? no

gl

baysman wrote:

It's for Hard ?

YukiZura- wrote:

from mod queue -- Bye Bye 2016 ^^

Hard

00:38:023 - make this a curve slider .. since you already made it at 00:39:023 - Fixed
01:00:023 - feels like this missing a note Fixed
01:08:680 - try putting reverse slider here.. cuz there is a strong sound i here nice suggestion, fixed

01:10:023 (3,4) - blanket this .. look more nicer Changed a bit
01:28:690 (8,9) - blanket this too Same ^

Normal

00:15:347 (5,6) - and 00:16:680 (7,8) - can be better blanket .. just copy this that you made 00:14:013 (3,4) - and paste it
you might wanna check this back cuz i see a lot of random spaces that supposed to have a note in it Fixed

goodluck^^

Rendyindo wrote:

From my queue~

Strange song for me.. Not only for you

[General]
Are you sre its from Dota 2? (i don't even play dota 2 lol, but i still didn't believe its from Dota 2) It's not completely from dota 2, lyrics for this song made by one russian youtube blogger, when he played dota, I mean he make it for his channel. So I think it need to be added to source. Maybe just add it into tags ?
Put some spinners around the map, there isn't ane spinner around the map I didn't find moment when need to put spinner

[Easy]
00:48:680 (4) - you can change this to 1/1 slider Fixed
00:54:013 (4) - ^ ^
00:59:347 (4) - ^ ^
01:06:680 - I hear some drum (or snare) sound here, put a circle? Ok
01:14:680 (1,2) - Seems better to convert to a slider ^

[Normal]
00:07:346 - add a circle Ok
00:31:013 (3,5) - Stack these Already stacked
00:35:347 (2,3) - Please make it looks better, or like [url=https://puu.sh/sYt2r/7e53f062de.png]this[url] Fixed
00:40:680 (2,3) - ^ ^

[Hard]
00:42:347 (6) - making this a jump? it may couse a missreading. I don't think so. But maybe change it later
- Remove these, that's unused No, I left it cuz if don't change SV to 1 DS also be changed. (I left it for myself)
01:04:680 (1,3) - Stack these Ok

rating russian twenty one pilots heathens linnik sound musik keysi klimmy

baysman wrote:

Еще такой вопрос, а вот название "Azazin Kreet - рейтинг [21 pilots cover]" мне [21 pilots cover] только в title ставить или в Romanised title тоже? Или вообще не нужно его добавлять ?

Namki wrote:

Also, how do linnik, keysi klimmy, sound and musik refer to the song? It has nothing to do with it.