XK2238 wrote:

Rechecking a bit on KumaTaiko, and... (No, no kudosu plz, this is just a recheck)

01:39:747 (230) - where did the finish gone? o.o oops fixed

Also a little bonus: my replay

SPOILER

Well made, DeeN. o/

ztrot wrote:

It think it wouldn't kill you to reduce the drain by one tick on the highest diff. if possible please

wmfchris wrote:

[Taiko]
- remove letterbox during breaks

00:14:414 - just a vocal transition here but there's no accent on it so remove finish?
00:17:080 - Using 1/6 like this is discouraged. When you're trying to place a xx x pattern usually there would be enough space before the xx so that both notes before and after xx can be highlighted well. In terms of highlighting stuffs in the music, the idea of xx x is usually used on 1/4 like x--xx x. However, in this case it's x xx x which doesn't really fit anything in the music and sounds odd.
00:18:747 - 1/6 intentionally or snapping error? I can hear 1/4 drum sound clearly.

...no wait.
I have an older version of this map and they should be snapped on 1/4, so just fix them by snapping back to 1/4.

00:44:247 - the vocal actually start 1/2 later, so start this one 1/2 later?
00:54:080 - these two notes should be slower too.
01:38:914 - legit usage of 1/6 here but I'll prefer kkkkkkkkd more than kkkkkkk D here.

Proof: (This is the version I get, on 11 Sept 2011)

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Artist:DJ YOSHITAKA feat. A/I
Creator:DeeN
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1. Change '14thgold' to '14 gold' in the tags. Those who are looking for beatmania 14 gold will most often keep 'gold' separate.
2. The diff spread could definitely use some work. 2.78 stars to 4.89 is a huge jump. A difficulty in between would be better.
3. The clap hitsound doesn't really fit the music. The normal hits sound great, and the soft whistles are lovely, but the claps are just off.

1. 00:44:414 (1) - Short multiple repeat sliders like this one are hard for beginners to read because they have to guess the repeats. I recommend doing something else here.
2. 01:43:748 - 0% audio is an outdated sound setting. To save yourself some trouble, set this to 5%.

1. Tickrate 1. No need for 2, as the Another has 1.
2. 00:13:414 (6,7) - This jump feels random and is better off not being a jump at all.
3. 00:13:414 (6) - This slider end is unsnapped!
4. 00:18:747 (4,5) - Same as before, random jumps like that aren't that great for a Hyper.
5. 00:41:581 (7,8) - This antijump is unexpected. Don't have these stacked.
6. 00:45:414 - Map this break. There's no reason to have a break this long this soon on this difficulty.
7. 00:57:831 (4) - Overmapped. There isn't a beat at that part.
8. 00:58:664 - There isn't a beat here.
9. 01:06:414 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This 3/4 beat may not be immediately readable to players.
10. 01:08:497 (4) - Not on a beat.
11. 01:17:081 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Again, this 3/4 beat might mess up players who aren't expecting it.
12. 01:18:664 - This is an alright place for a break, but it's too long. Map more of this.
13. 01:30:414 (6,7) - This antijump is pretty unexpected. Don't stack these, space them out properly.
14. 01:35:747 (4,5) - Again, unexpected antijump.

1. 01:38:915 (220,221,222,223,224,225,226,227,228,229) - Everything was nice and good up until this part. Why the sudden 1/6? It's way harder than the rest of the map and quite frankly doesn't fit with what you have already done. Keep this 1/4, there's no good reason to screw the player like this.

1. AR +1. The overall speed and intensity of the map warrants AR 9.
2. Consider OD +1.
3. The spacing on this map is extremely varied for seemingly no reason. This makes the map very difficult to read when it shouldn't be. For instance, 00:07:747 (2,3) - is suddenly 3/2 beat spacing instead of 1/1, but the spacing is the same. 00:12:581 (4,5,1) - Is again same old spacing but 1/2 instead of 1/1. There are many more places where this occurs. Spacing variation is fine as long as it's keeping a steady 1/1 or 1/2 beat. In these cases, it's not.
4. The combos need work. They are extremely inconsistent, with some combos encompassing many measures and others only one. I suggest redoing them in the entire map making it one every big white tick.
5. 00:05:414 (1) - This doesn't end properly. I see you're trying to map to the 'twang' sound but the 'twang' actually ends on the 1/3 at 00:05:525. Either way it's silly to map such a strange beat.
6. 00:05:747 (1,2,3,4) - This offbeat part isn't immediately readable. 3/4 is difficult for players to sightread first try (and a lot of the reason why the ranked Sabaki has an 8.9). Converting 1,2,3 into a repeat slider will keep beat spacing 1/2 between objects, which is much easier.
7. 00:13:664 (5) - There is no beat here. This is overmapped.
8. 00:25:830 (5) - Again, no beat here.
9. 00:32:164 (2) - Once again, no beat here.
10. 00:38:497 (2) - No beat here.
11. 00:39:914 (7,8,9) - Space these out more. Because these objects are overlapping, it looks like a stream.
12. 00:41:330 - Beat here? Nope.
13. 00:42:414 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Again, this 3/4 beat may not be immediately readable to the player.
14. 00:43:831 (2,4) - These two aren't on any beats.
15. 00:55:081 (1,2,3,4,5) - Have these not touch each other. It looks like 1/3 right now when it's not.
16. 00:59:997 (4) - This is not on a beat.
17. 01:06:497 (2) - This is not on the correct beat. Move it to 01:06:580 instead.
18. 01:10:664 - This isn't on a beat.
19. 01:11:164 - Not on a beat.
20. 01:17:831 (10) - This isn't on a beat. It's still groups of 3 at this point.
21. 01:20:330 (11) - Not a beat. Overmapped.
22. 01:22:497 (2) - There is not a beat here.
23. 01:27:830 (9) - No beat.
24. 01:28:164 (12) - Not a beat.
25. 01:29:414 (3,4,1,2,1,2) - I already talked about the spacing but I need to point this particular bit out. It makes no sense at all for the spacing to be like this. It's completely backwards!
26. 01:35:497 (3) - This isn't on a beat. The previous stream matched the guitar, but this one doesn't.
27. 01:36:497 (7,8) - These two don't fit the beat. In fact it even skips the actual beat in between.

Charles445 wrote:

Look at all the pretty stars O_O

Well anyway, this needs to be popped.

General

1. Change '14thgold' to '14 gold' in the tags. Those who are looking for beatmania 14 gold will most often keep 'gold' separate. k
2. The diff spread could definitely use some work. 2.78 stars to 4.89 is a huge jump. A difficulty in between would be better. ..........
3. The clap hitsound doesn't really fit the music. The normal hits sound great, and the soft whistles are lovely, but the claps are just off. that's my style

Normal

1. 00:44:414 (1) - Short multiple repeat sliders like this one are hard for beginners to read because they have to guess the repeats. I recommend doing something else here.
2. 01:43:748 - 0% audio is an outdated sound setting. To save yourself some trouble, set this to 5%. k

Hyper

1. Tickrate 1. No need for 2, as the Another has 1.
2. 00:13:414 (6,7) - This jump feels random and is better off not being a jump at all.
3. 00:13:414 (6) - This slider end is unsnapped! k
4. 00:18:747 (4,5) - Same as before, random jumps like that aren't that great for a Hyper.
5. 00:41:581 (7,8) - This antijump is unexpected. Don't have these stacked.
6. 00:45:414 - Map this break. There's no reason to have a break this long this soon on this difficulty.
7. 00:57:831 (4) - Overmapped. There isn't a beat at that part.
8. 00:58:664 - There isn't a beat here.
9. 01:06:414 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This 3/4 beat may not be immediately readable to players.
10. 01:08:497 (4) - Not on a beat.
11. 01:17:081 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Again, this 3/4 beat might mess up players who aren't expecting it.
12. 01:18:664 - This is an alright place for a break, but it's too long. Map more of this.
13. 01:30:414 (6,7) - This antijump is pretty unexpected. Don't stack these, space them out properly.
14. 01:35:747 (4,5) - Again, unexpected antijump.

KumaTaiko

1. 01:38:915 (220,221,222,223,224,225,226,227,228,229) - Everything was nice and good up until this part. Why the sudden 1/6? It's way harder than the rest of the map and quite frankly doesn't fit with what you have already done. Keep this 1/4, there's no good reason to screw the player like this. WMF MODED IT

Another

1. AR +1. The overall speed and intensity of the map warrants AR 9. u should ask SFG
2. Consider OD +1.
3. The spacing on this map is extremely varied for seemingly no reason. This makes the map very difficult to read when it shouldn't be. For instance, 00:07:747 (2,3) - is suddenly 3/2 beat spacing instead of 1/1, but the spacing is the same. 00:12:581 (4,5,1) - Is again same old spacing but 1/2 instead of 1/1. There are many more places where this occurs. Spacing variation is fine as long as it's keeping a steady 1/1 or 1/2 beat. In these cases, it's not. u weak
4. The combos need work. They are extremely inconsistent, with some combos encompassing many measures and others only one. I suggest redoing them in the entire map making it one every big white tick. u weak
5. 00:05:414 (1) - This doesn't end properly. I see you're trying to map to the 'twang' sound but the 'twang' actually ends on the 1/3 at 00:05:525. Either way it's silly to map such a strange beat.
6. 00:05:747 (1,2,3,4) - This offbeat part isn't immediately readable. 3/4 is difficult for players to sightread first try (and a lot of the reason why the ranked Sabaki has an 8.9). Converting 1,2,3 into a repeat slider will keep beat spacing 1/2 between objects, which is much easier.
7. 00:13:664 (5) - There is no beat here. This is overmapped.
8. 00:25:830 (5) - Again, no beat here.
9. 00:32:164 (2) - Once again, no beat here.
10. 00:38:497 (2) - No beat here.
11. 00:39:914 (7,8,9) - Space these out more. Because these objects are overlapping, it looks like a stream.
12. 00:41:330 - Beat here? Nope.
13. 00:42:414 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Again, this 3/4 beat may not be immediately readable to the player.
14. 00:43:831 (2,4) - These two aren't on any beats.
15. 00:55:081 (1,2,3,4,5) - Have these not touch each other. It looks like 1/3 right now when it's not. k
16. 00:59:997 (4) - This is not on a beat.
17. 01:06:497 (2) - This is not on the correct beat. Move it to 01:06:580 instead.
18. 01:10:664 - This isn't on a beat.
19. 01:11:164 - Not on a beat.
20. 01:17:831 (10) - This isn't on a beat. It's still groups of 3 at this point.
21. 01:20:330 (11) - Not a beat. Overmapped.
22. 01:22:497 (2) - There is not a beat here.
23. 01:27:830 (9) - No beat.
24. 01:28:164 (12) - Not a beat.
25. 01:29:414 (3,4,1,2,1,2) - I already talked about the spacing but I need to point this particular bit out. It makes no sense at all for the spacing to be like this. It's completely backwards!
26. 01:35:497 (3) - This isn't on a beat. The previous stream matched the guitar, but this one doesn't.
27. 01:36:497 (7,8) - These two don't fit the beat. In fact it even skips the actual beat in between.

After this it would be wise to get more mods.