1. Hard (2.77 stars, 448 notes)
2. Normal (1.99 stars, 304 notes)

General

Normal

Looks nice to be honest

Like this

this

My small suggestion

Look

Hard

:3

Maybe like this?

deadpon3 wrote:

Hello, m4m :3

EDIT: Don't mod my map yet, it's waiting for BN recheck. I'll get a ticket please :3
Ok, I selected in my page

General

Everything looks well and rankable.

Normal

I think there should be a note on 00:14:291 - followed by vocals. It fits really well and might correct the design.
hmm... will it be little difficult with 1/4 in Normal? (cuz the map was only 2 diff)
I used slider instead of note to follow the vocal
00:24:438 (2,3) - Fix aethestics it's symmetrical, i don't know what you mean

00:35:026 (3,4) - I don't like how the flow is going here, how about
it's a common flow, not a big problem so keep it
00:47:379 (1,2,3) - Honestly it doesn't look pretty, why not use symmetry?
it will be a bad flow and crowded in the right side when I make them symmetry

01:17:968 (3,4) - They don't blanket, you can easily check it by using ctrl+g on 01:17:968 (3) - and moving it in timeline so you can adapt the approach circle to check the blanket.
good method, fixed.

01:23:262 (2,3) - I don't know if a stack is a good decision here, it feels to break the flow a little bit.
ok, I adjusted the placement of slider
02:59:144 (3,4,5,6) - The space between them has to be equal, it will automatically make it a high quality pattern
ok, fixed~
Overall, nice diff :3 But I feel like some parts are kinda breaking the beat consistency making the map less intuitive but that is because of the song's construction so it's okay. yes... thank you!

Hard

Should not 00:08:850 (1) - be placed on 00:08:752 ? It really feels like 1/6, just check it
you're right! it's 1/6 I ignored it
00:18:262 (7,8) - I don't like how the spacing here suddenly decreases. 00:18:262 (7) - The spacing difference is 0,9x and the music does not really get that drastic change. I suggest to keep the spacing clear here :3
yes.. it's not fit the music with a little DS, fixed

00:37:968 (1,2,3) - Make the gaps between them equal please, this is the same situation as I mentioned in Normal :3
ok~

00:49:144 (4,5,1) - Honestly I would separate the double note and slider, really improves aethestics, and feels better to play. You can also stack 00:49:585 (5,1) - to make it more clear to read if you separated them.
good method to fix this ugly placement

01:57:968 (1) - I suggest to move it above to avoid repeating similiar Y: value.
ok

03:29:438 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - You spaced the 03:29:438 (5,6,7) - triple a bit, why nerf it by stacking the next triple? Try to make a mirror pattern here.


That's it, I'm done :3 Nice song though, pretty relaxing.
I hope I didn't wake up da background girl while modding it, tried to be really quiet ;-;

Good luck! c:
thank you very much!

1. Well I realized that this diff has an unnecessary difficulty and some unrankeable things, on a map with 2 difficulties, the lowest difficulty should not exceed 2 stars
2. 00:22:673 (6) - 00:27:379 (8) - I think this 1/4 somewhat unnecessary because her voice ends at 00:23:164 - So, use 1/2 please
3. 00:42:085 - Dont ignore this please
4. 00:58:556 (4) - That's a bit unnecessary and overmapped
5. 01:40:909 (4,7) - This stack can confuse beginners
6. 02:41:791 (2) - I think this hitsound was not very good here
7. 03:30:909 (3,4) - The flow does not run very well and may confuse beginners
8. 03:37:673 (6) - A NC would be very good here
   
   Well I advise you to withdraw all 1/4 because she sings off beat and this can be unrankeable

1. AR is very distant from normal AR, perhaps 6.5 ~ 7
2. 01:06:203 (1) - I think as an NC it should have a space just for him
3. 01:07:379 (5,1) - 01:16:791 (5,1) - That overlap
4. 02:41:791 (2) - Same as in the normal diff
5. 03:37:673 (1) - Nc please
   
   So in this diff there are too many overmaps, it's not harmful I think, but it's a bit bad to play music with both overmap