[A river]
- DELETE COMBO COLORS HEATHEN.
- 01:07:138 (324,325,326) - Triplet better placed around 01:12:501 - so that the second happening is tougher, no?
- 01:25:319 (418) - Kill, and make previous not K for OH! emphasis? Drums don't even hit here, so double k seems odd.
- 01:38:047 - Kinda just wondering why the break, nothing else has had it and it makes less sense in the middle of kiai.
- 02:51:865 (971,972,973,974,975,976) - d kkddk? Some emphasis on what vocals do here would be nice.
- 03:37:683 (1230,1231) - Swap these, I think it seperates the vocals better.
- 03:52:138 (1296) - d? kdddk makes the kat heavy streams a bit nicer.
- 03:58:228 - This is a copy of the first happening at 01:13:865 - , which is lame because 02:29:501 - is harder etc.
- 04:09:531 - SV anything? Underwhelming to keep this the same.
- 04:15:683 - 04:18:410 (1458,1459) - Swap these, the vocal emphasis switches up here.
- 04:21:501 - Can't help but feel that this part is mapped cooler in 2nd kiai.