To be honest, i was a bit scared of the mod because it's presentation, but i REALLY like your modding style, noticing "gimmicks" of the song that i just mapped to the pitch//itensity without noticing their "meanings" (if i can call them like this).
CrestRising wrote:from #modreqs00:07:671 (1,2) I don't know why you stopped overlapping sliders here. Also, the way it goes up and down looks symmetrical to 00:08:398 (1,2), which you were trying to emphasize by making the sliders a quarter-beat longer, but it kinda looses a bit of its emphasis if it looks identical to these sliders which you weren't applying as much emphasis towards. you're right. fixed
00:11:671 (2,3) Breaking the long-slider, short-slider pattern doesn't make sense in the middle of the measure, so I would suggest combining these into a slider to be consistent. mhh yea
00:33:853 (1) The red node on this slider makes it look aesthetically out of place since you mapped "L" at 00:33:126 (1) with a curve as well as with "Stop" at 00:28:762 (1). kinda makes sense yea
00:46:126 You seem to be following the synth heavily in this part of the song, so leaving this synth hit unmapped seems really odd imo. yea, i was asking myself this morning if i should or not
00:54:762 (6) You could stack this under 00:54:580 (5) so that 00:54:216 (4,5,6) looks identical to 00:53:489 (1,2,3) since the lyrics follow the same rhythm. it follows the same rythm yea but she goes higher in the pitch in the second pattern. tho i'll stick with your idea, seems cleaner
00:57:489 (5) You should make this a jump like you did with 00:56:762 (2) since they're both drum hits.
01:06:216 (1) This note is continuing the "B-A-B-A" lyric from 01:05:126 (1,2,3,4,5,6), so I don't think this should be NC since it blends in with that rather than indicates the start of a new section. damn i like how you're noticing things i would never thing to lOL
01:09:126 (5) Since you mapped "R" at 01:08:398 (2,3) with circles, it would make sense to map this with circles as well.
01:22:580 (1,2,1,2) Since 01:20:762 (1,2,1,2,1,2) has upwards of 2.47x spacing, having the most emphasized lyrics (at least to me) being only 2x spacing feels anticlimatic, so I would suggest increasing the intensity of these jumps. it's kinda misleading since the first jump section is set in x1 spacing and the second on 1.2x spacing. tho i reduced the first section to fit what you said
01:36:035 (3) This lyric is prety important, so I don't know why you would make the spacing between this and 2 so low. To me, 01:36:398 (1,2,3,4) captures the intensity of this section better by emphasizing the lyrics at 1 and 3 with jumps. yess
01:55:762 and 01:55:944 See 00:46:126
02:00:307 (8,1,2,3,4,5) The way the circles overlap the sliders looks kind of off and doesn't fit in with how you handle a circle into a slider a quarter-beat apart in the rest of the map (with simple stacking). fixed on 2 lasts but i'll keep 02:00:307 (8,1) - because it fit really well as a transition imo and mark the new section
02:01:489 (6,7) In this map, you usually map kick sliders facing the opposite direction for each other, so having this one pair of kick sliders go in the same direction in a line doesn't make sense and doesn't play as well as kick sliders going in opposite directions. changed their placement here
02:54:580 (2) This lyric sounds similar to 02:54:216 (1) and 02:54:944 (3), so I feel it should have a similar slider shape as those sliders. yea
03:21:126 (4,5) It doesn't make sense to space these out when all other pairs of half-beat apart circles in the first half of the bridge are stacked. you're right
04:06:944 (1,2,1,2) See 01:22:580 (1,2,1,2) yup
You should make your mods a bit cleaner visually
Thanks for the mod !