Saiya - Remote Control [Taiko|Osu]

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polka


[General:]
  • no breaks? @- @!;;;

[Insane:]
  • 00:09:132 (1,2) - Excessive. Bring these closer together.
    [list:1337]00:20:404 (2,3) - ^
    00:38:586 (1,1) - Especially due to the slow SV
    00:41:132 (6,7) - Move these closer
    01:56:404 (2,3) - ^
    02:00:041 (3,4) - ^
    03:05:041 (3,4) - ^
    03:06:222 (2,3) - ^

00:57:677 (6,1) - Flow isn't playing well for me here. Move (1) to the left.
03:00:768 (6,8) - Even if the slider isn't positioned the same way, it's still confusing, especially on HD. I would move it out from under the other slider entirely.
03:36:768 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - NCs are not needed, as this isn't an insanely difficult area where extra chances for HP are important.
04:59:313 (1,2,3,4) - Plays better as 1/2 sliders.
[Afterword:]
  • Just watch your spacing on triplets. They looked like duplets. love the jumps tho those are fun. GL
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PolkaMocha wrote:



[General:]
  • no breaks? @- @!;;; i think it's ok xD

[Insane:]
  • 00:09:132 (1,2) - Excessive. Bring these closer together. nah, i'll keep this one
    [list:1337]00:20:404 (2,3) - ^ changed pattern
    00:38:586 (1,1) - Especially due to the slow SV nah, it's meanth to emphasize
    00:41:132 (6,7) - Move these closer fixed
    01:56:404 (2,3) - ^ i think theses are ok
    02:00:041 (3,4) - ^ removed
    03:05:041 (3,4) - ^ changed
    03:06:222 (2,3) - ^ same

00:57:677 (6,1) - Flow isn't playing well for me here. Move (1) to the left. i flipped the patterning to follow vocal more here
03:00:768 (6,8) - Even if the slider isn't positioned the same way, it's still confusing, especially on HD. I would move it out from under the other slider entirely. moved slighty to make it more readable but kept under the slider
03:36:768 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - NCs are not needed, as this isn't an insanely difficult area where extra chances for HP are important. but it's not meant for HP recovery, but to follow each vocal, and make reading easier
04:59:313 (1,2,3,4) - Plays better as 1/2 sliders. i'll consider, i like it both ways
[Afterword:]
  • Just watch your spacing on triplets. They looked like duplets. love the jumps tho those are fun. GL
Thanks for the mod !!
Cubzy
naisu mapu owo
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Cubzy wrote:

naisu mapu owo
thanks :3
Deppyforce
take control
brain power
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Deppyforce wrote:

take control
brain power
Let the bass kick ...

nope
PoNo

NM from my queue


Take Control!


00:47:586 (4) - Idk overmap ?

00:58:041 (2) - Hitclap, déplace le sur 00:58:041 (2) -

01:28:768 (2) - tu peut stack la fin du slider sur 01:29:495 (6) - ça réduit le spacing qui est assez élevé en plus

01:39:859 (2) - c'est assez chaud à read, la meme shape quasiment en même endroit

03:14:586 (1) - la shape est ultra différente des autres, je pense pas que ce soit une bonne idée idk

03:33:677 (2) - ça se confond faclement avec un 1/4 comme tu en à fait un juste avant 03:33:041 (2) -

03:52:586 (2) - Un peu compliqué à follow comme shape lol
Je peut rien trouver d'autre :'( gg pour les deux diffs en tout cas ^^
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Ponoyoshi wrote:


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00:47:586 (4) - Idk overmap ? fix

00:58:041 (2) - Hitclap, déplace le sur 00:58:041 (2) - fix

01:28:768 (2) - tu peut stack la fin du slider sur 01:29:495 (6) - ça réduit le spacing qui est assez élevé en plus j'ai pas stack mais j'ai reduce spacing

01:39:859 (2) - c'est assez chaud à read, la meme shape quasiment en même endroit j'ai changé la shape du coup

03:14:586 (1) - la shape est ultra différente des autres, je pense pas que ce soit une bonne idée idk tout le pattern me triggerais du coup j'ai changé

03:33:677 (2) - ça se confond faclement avec un 1/4 comme tu en à fait un juste avant 03:33:041 (2) - en effet, j'ai stack sur 1 du coup

03:52:586 (2) - Un peu compliqué à follow comme shape lol yep le pire xD
Je peut rien trouver d'autre :'( gg pour les deux diffs en tout cas ^^
thanks !!!!!!!!!
Cubzy
Heh, like the game said, gotta mod this to get this ranked :D

Overall: Map's pretty great, you seem to use the tone of the voice on the kiai to difference the spacing(like the normal voice to the "robot" voice). Good job!

00:05:495 (1,2) - You could move this a bit more down and make the second slider a little bit more sharp Like this, on x:252 y:272

00:37:859 (3) - moving this slider a little more to the top, to gradually increase with the next jump

01:12:222 (6) - maybe(?) rotate this 35º and move to x:424 y:152

01:41:495 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - you could increase the spacing a little bit on this to difference from those jumps : 01:40:222 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

01:50:949 (1,2,3) - and 01:52:404 (1,2,3) - You could increase those a little bit, though it wouldn't really change a thing

02:28:586 (4) - move this a little bit further to the top right?

02:48:404 (1,2,3,4,5) - you could move the triplet x:333 y:149

03:36:768 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - maybe increase the spacing a little bit(?)

03:52:586 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - maybe decrease the spacing, because it's a bit sudden how the spacing on the stream got larger

04:09:677 (1) - increase the slider velocity a bit?

That's all for today, didn't find anything on the two last kiais, they were pretty good, if I may say so :D
Aetwuns
Maakali's Insane
00:27:313 - hitsounds need to get louder from here on out
01:26:586 (3) - just make this a 1/2 slider
01:32:404 (3) - ^
01:38:222 (5) - ^
01:57:132 (1) - ^
02:02:950 (1) - ^
02:06:222 to 02:17:859 - Too many stacks
02:40:768 (1) - Replace this with a 1/2 slider
03:14:586 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - I would simplify this section, maybe something like this?
03:28:313 (4) - Stack doesn't fit
03:38:495 (3) - Sounds better without this note
04:32:313 (4) - ^

Good luck with ranking ;)
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Cubzy wrote:

Heh, like the game said, gotta mod this to get this ranked :D

Overall: Map's pretty great, you seem to use the tone of the voice on the kiai to difference the spacing(like the normal voice to the "robot" voice). Good job!

00:05:495 (1,2) - You could move this a bit more down and make the second slider a little bit more sharp Like this, on x:252 y:272 yea why not

00:37:859 (3) - moving this slider a little more to the top, to gradually increase with the next jump fix

01:12:222 (6) - maybe(?) rotate this 35º and move to x:424 y:152 sound cool !

01:41:495 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - you could increase the spacing a little bit on this to difference from those jumps : 01:40:222 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - no, i think it'll be really too much there

01:50:949 (1,2,3) - and 01:52:404 (1,2,3) - You could increase those a little bit, though it wouldn't really change a thing yep

02:28:586 (4) - move this a little bit further to the top right? changed angle

02:48:404 (1,2,3,4,5) - you could move the triplet x:333 y:149 nah, it'll kill the blanket

03:36:768 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - maybe increase the spacing a little bit(?) nah

03:52:586 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - maybe decrease the spacing, because it's a bit sudden how the spacing on the stream got larger reduced just a little bit, because i want it to be intense

04:09:677 (1) - increase the slider velocity a bit? nope but changed the shape :D

That's all for today, didn't find anything on the two last kiais, they were pretty good, if I may say so :Dthanks :3
Thanks for the mod !!
-Arche
Bonne map, j'aime beaucoup :D Make this ranked pls :D
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Arche-kun wrote:

Bonne map, j'aime beaucoup :D Make this ranked pls :D
Merci :3 soon™
Cubzy
oh shet, just saw the new diff. if I have time and remember, I'll mod (don't quote on me, I'm lazy af =w="
ikorza
from mod reqs hope it helps :)

00:12:950 (2,2) - these sounds were here the whole time so why are they being mapped suddenly? 00:12:768 - actually you completely stop the 3/4 sliders from here on but i think its fine at 00:14:222 (1) - since the music sounds different.
00:16:768 (7,8,1) - 00:22:586 (1,2,3) - these are exactly the same musically but youve done things differently in the second example
00:18:132 - overmap for no clear reason is not ideal
00:15:677 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:21:495 (1,2,3,4,5) - one uses a 1/2 slider the other uses a circle and they should be the same i think the 1/2 slider is the better choice because it will differentiate it from the previous 2 circles at 00:15:313 (4,5,1) -
00:30:950 (5,4) - stacking these would look knicer aesthetically
00:37:132 (2,3,4,5,1) - 00:40:041 (6,7,1) - these are the same sounds and you are using different rhythms for each i relise the the music is in a new section but the sounds at 00:40:041 (6,7,1) - are of equal strength so not understanding the kick sliders here.
00:42:222 (3) - change to circles and 00:42:950 (6,7,8,1) - this should all be circles
00:45:859 (6,7,8,1) - ^ im done with the streams just choose something logical and consistant
00:48:768 (7,8,9,10,1) - what is this spacing change for im not seeing a reason
00:49:859 (5,1) - swap NC
00:52:586 - accidentally deleted stuff?
01:25:132 - suggestion: 3/4 slider here since the kiai doesnt start till 01:25:495 - the music supports it just fine
01:29:132 - 1/2 slider
01:49:132 - triple
03:14:859 - 03:15:132 - strong sounds on slider ends
03:22:586 (3,4,5,1) - random stacks? especially weird on the downbeat as you havent done that before. nothing entirely wrong with the other stack but its random because you didnt do it before
03:53:495 (12) - lower spacing would work better here as the repeated slider is too easy when its not that different
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ikorza wrote:

from mod reqs hope it helps :)

00:12:950 (2,2) - these sounds were here the whole time so why are they being mapped suddenly? 00:12:768 - actually you completely stop the 3/4 sliders from here on but i think its fine at 00:14:222 (1) - since the music sounds different. to mark the new section is coming
00:16:768 (7,8,1) - 00:22:586 (1,2,3) - these are exactly the same musically but youve done things differently in the second example yea but i keep mapping the same rythm anyways so it should be fine
00:18:132 - overmap for no clear reason is not ideal fixed
00:15:677 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:21:495 (1,2,3,4,5) - one uses a 1/2 slider the other uses a circle and they should be the same i think the 1/2 slider is the better choice because it will differentiate it from the previous 2 circles at 00:15:313 (4,5,1) - yea feel better now
00:30:950 (5,4) - stacking these would look knicer aesthetically woops
00:37:132 (2,3,4,5,1) - 00:40:041 (6,7,1) - these are the same sounds and you are using different rhythms for each i relise the the music is in a new section but the sounds at 00:40:041 (6,7,1) - are of equal strength so not understanding the kick sliders here. i used kicksliders because they're without vocal here, but they're fine here
00:42:222 (3) - change to circles and 00:42:950 (6,7,8,1) - this should all be circles it's ok to represent 1/4 as kicksliders, it help emphasizing the next object
00:45:859 (6,7,8,1) - ^ im done with the streams just choose something logical and consistant
00:48:768 (7,8,9,10,1) - what is this spacing change for im not seeing a reason to mark new strong section
00:49:859 (5,1) - swap NC i NC'd to park the back&forth pattern related to the 3 claps
00:52:586 - accidentally deleted stuff? wtf
01:25:132 - suggestion: 3/4 slider here since the kiai doesnt start till 01:25:495 - the music supports it just fine i see your point but i really want to mark the vocal here 01:25:313 (2) -
01:29:132 - 1/2 slider yep
01:49:132 - triple no, but i'll prob change rythm here
03:14:859 - 03:15:132 - strong sounds on slider ends i think it's fine
03:22:586 (3,4,5,1) - random stacks? especially weird on the downbeat as you havent done that before. nothing entirely wrong with the other stack but its random because you didnt do it before yea, i don't want to make this part boring
03:53:495 (12) - lower spacing would work better here as the repeated slider is too easy when its not that different fix
Thanks for the mod !!
Makeli

Smolboi wrote:

01:57:132 (1) - ^
02:02:950 (1) - ^ - no cause i want to emphasise the sudden sound you hear there
02:06:222 to 02:17:859 - Too many stacks - huh?
02:40:768 (1) - Replace this with a 1/2 slider - circle fits better imo
03:14:586 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - I would simplify this section, maybe something like this? - that doesn't fit the music. Also git gud
Kyuukai
Nyanpasu~ ta map el pu allé mrci jtm
Winnie
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I don't think you really need my help. Go talk to a BN I can gurantee you this will be ranked in one weeks time if the right person you contact will be willing to help you out. Chao!
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Kocari wrote:

I don't think you really need my help. Go talk to a BN I can gurantee you this will be ranked in one weeks time if the right person you contact will be willing to help you out. Chao!
owo thanks !! , but the GD as just been added so i don't think i can go with 0 mod xD
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