· The 20% volume sections at the end of the song might be a tad to soft. Make it 30% or something?
· 01:04:019 - Add a red timing section here just to fix the metronome.
01:58:725 (1,2) - This spacing is a tad too close imo.
Well, the SB pulsations like 00:53:369, 01:41:068 and 01:14:597 are kinda extreme fur the song, I mean, the maximum size and the time on the screen is too much imo. That's up to you though.
00:53:369 - Check kanpy's name, it has two layers from here and up to 01:14:597, and one is bigger than the other (making the SB look kinda awkward)
01:48:127 - Check Kana's name here and up to 02:05:774, it has two layers here too, one is bigger and also has a different fading.