Camellia feat. Nanahira - PAPAYAPA BASS

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zev
too tired
Renumi
:thinking:
DustMoon
1|2|3|4
00:08:170 (8170|0) - move to 4(Highlight the drums)
00:08:170 (8170|0) - add more (reference CommandoBlack's Insane - 4Key)
00:26:946 - add more(you didn't double this clap noise?)
00:13:578 - add (i her a sound)
MomoHD
One of the best 4* maps I have seen in a long time
Loctav
Loved as per mapper's request.
pishifat
un-

Loctav wrote:

Loved as per mapper's request.
Nozhomi
This seems as stupid as a saradisk song XD
-Shintarou

Nozhomi wrote:

This seems as stupid as a saradisk song XD
¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Enon
papapa
MaridiuS
017-07-27 01:11 MaridiuS: papayapa remap hyep
2017-07-28 00:32 Mir: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1123616 Camellia feat. Nanahira - PAPAYAPA BASS]
2017-07-28 00:32 Mir: done
2017-07-28 00:32 MaridiuS: hyeep
2017-07-28 00:32 MaridiuS: wow sick 5.16*
2017-07-28 00:33 MaridiuS: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1123616 Camellia feat. Nanahira - PAPAYAPA BASS [Papayapa!]]
2017-07-28 00:33 MaridiuS: i such but w/e
2017-07-28 00:33 Mir: its not 5.16
2017-07-28 00:33 MaridiuS: how did i die
2017-07-28 00:33 Mir: i think you missed
2017-07-28 00:36 MaridiuS: spicy
2017-07-28 00:36 MaridiuS: brtw
2017-07-28 00:36 MaridiuS: this is extremely stressful
2017-07-28 00:36 MaridiuS: 00:12:558 (8,1,2) -
2017-07-28 00:36 Mir: yes
2017-07-28 00:36 MaridiuS: streamjump
2017-07-28 00:36 MaridiuS: into sliderstreams
2017-07-28 00:36 MaridiuS: the most stressful thing i've experienced in osu
2017-07-28 00:37 Mir: fun.jp
2017-07-28 00:37 Mir: g
2017-07-28 00:38 MaridiuS: 01:18:783 (1,2,3,4,5) -
2017-07-28 00:38 MaridiuS: change of flow
2017-07-28 00:38 MaridiuS: made me want to end my life
2017-07-28 00:38 Mir: HAHA
2017-07-28 00:38 Mir: i love that
2017-07-28 00:38 MaridiuS: i was like
2017-07-28 00:38 MaridiuS: yea boi
2017-07-28 00:38 Mir: it just reverses direction xD
2017-07-28 00:39 MaridiuS: imma spin this shit like i spin my revolver in schools
2017-07-28 00:39 MaridiuS: and then wham, malfunction
2017-07-28 00:42 MaridiuS: also u could consider reducing hp to 5.5 or something
2017-07-28 00:42 MaridiuS: so people wont get too rekt by the 1-2's
2017-07-28 00:42 Mir: 5 is ok
2017-07-28 00:42 MaridiuS: and
2017-07-28 00:42 MaridiuS: one more thing
2017-07-28 00:43 Mir: hm?
2017-07-28 00:43 MaridiuS: wait lemme find
2017-07-28 00:43 MaridiuS: 01:02:456 (1,2,1,2,1) -
2017-07-28 00:43 MaridiuS: this is completely unreadable
2017-07-28 00:43 MaridiuS: people will have to play this map a lot, and to memorize the exact spot that it happens
2017-07-28 00:43 MaridiuS: reason being every third note is placed in such way in the map
2017-07-28 00:43 MaridiuS: to be in 1/4 hit
2017-07-28 00:43 Mir: adjusted
2017-07-28 00:43 MaridiuS: good xd
2017-07-28 00:44 MaridiuS: http://i.imgur.com/d8f8qvH.jpg some bigger spacing would do
2017-07-28 00:44 MaridiuS: or somethin
2017-07-28 00:44 Mir: nah
2017-07-28 00:44 Mir: just moving the 1 over
2017-07-28 00:44 Mir: to where the other 1's are
2017-07-28 00:44 MaridiuS: wew
2017-07-28 00:44 Mir: would be fine
2017-07-28 00:44 MaridiuS: lets see xd
2017-07-28 00:44 MaridiuS: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1123616 Camellia feat. Nanahira - PAPAYAPA BASS [Papayapa!]]
2017-07-28 00:46 MaridiuS: oh yeah
2017-07-28 00:46 MaridiuS: gotta memorize
2017-07-28 00:46 MaridiuS: this shit xd
2017-07-28 00:46 MaridiuS: its so unusual
2017-07-28 00:46 Mir: xd
2017-07-28 00:46 Mir: it's really weird yea
2017-07-28 00:46 Mir: but fits imo
2017-07-28 00:49 MaridiuS: hm
2017-07-28 00:49 MaridiuS: 01:04:701 (3,4,1,1) - i get lost here
2017-07-28 00:49 MaridiuS: i tihnk its a bit overtuned
2017-07-28 00:49 MaridiuS: i didnt even notice them being 1/8 lol
2017-07-28 00:49 MaridiuS: since its huge spacing
2017-07-28 00:49 MaridiuS: huge stream jump
2017-07-28 00:49 MaridiuS: and weird stuff
2017-07-28 00:49 MaridiuS: consider nerfing
2017-07-28 00:50 Mir: unstacking both 1's might help
2017-07-28 00:50 MaridiuS: 01:43:272 (4,5,6,7,8) - i cant read this
2017-07-28 00:50 MaridiuS: at all
2017-07-28 00:50 Mir: buffed spacing of the red things
2017-07-28 00:50 Mir: i think it makes more sense now
2017-07-28 00:51 Mir: stacked 8 with 6,7
2017-07-28 00:51 MaridiuS: 01:45:721 (1) - blankted xdddddd
2017-07-28 00:51 Mir: pls no hurt
2017-07-28 00:52 MaridiuS: dis is d quick check / playtest thingy
2017-07-28 00:52 MaridiuS: if you dont mind imma post dis
2017-07-28 00:52 Mir: sure
2017-07-28 00:52 MaridiuS: map is soo fkin nice
2017-07-28 00:52 MaridiuS: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1123616 Camellia feat. Nanahira - PAPAYAPA BASS [Papayapa!]]
2017-07-28 00:53 Mir: :D
2017-07-28 00:53 Mir: i think it's a lot better than before
2017-07-28 00:53 MaridiuS: yeah
2017-07-28 00:53 Mir: good idea to unlove
2017-07-28 00:53 Mir: aha

edit: tfw only 1 kudosu for a mod after half a year, fix system pepi pls.
CutEddie
interesting
Bargeld
Noooo, why did you kill off all those other difficulties?! :cry:
Topic Starter
Mir

Bargeld wrote:

Noooo, why did you kill off all those other difficulties?! :cry:
because they sucked
J_8579
screw you for getting rid of my fc

but nice remap though
Nao Tomori
[papayapa]
this diffname is garbage, get a better one

00:02:252 (6,7,8) - tbh the hitsounds on the end of this are kinda lame and stick out a lot and sounds like shit so basically just get rid f them and make it circles thx.

00:09:701 (2) - think a 1/2 slider works better, the repeat is just kinda cluttered, you arent following the kicks anyway and having one on a repeat doesnt do anything.

00:10:211 (4) - should definitely be a double.

00:13:476 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this entire thing kinda destroys the build up that you did with the 1/8th sliders imo. i think just simpler vocal 1/2 circles is better for contrast.

00:20:007 (4) - this circle kinda sucks cuz it isnt on the melody thing. extending 00:19:803 (3) - makes more sense here imo.
01:26:741 (3,4) - 01:39:803 (3,4) -

00:39:599 (1) - smh would have been cute to map this as circles to fuck people over

00:52:660 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - following the kick rhythm would be cute imo

01:14:089 (6,8) - to be honest these feel like complete ass to play to me. there isnt even a sound on the blue tick lol just make them all the 1/8th snapped sliders

01:31:640 (4,5) - sounds better as a slider

01:33:885 (2,3) - raise sv over time?

01:56:742 (1) - laaaaaaaaaameeeeeee

01:19:599 (1,1) - u should totally follow that random thing you did at 01:02:456 (1,2,1,2,1) - !!!

[lasse]
00:08:476 (5,1,2,3,4) - this was a bit weird cuz 1 clearly switches over to the kicks (instead of 00:08:476 (5) - being an extended slider for the vocals) but then 00:08:783 (2) - isnt clickable.

00:27:354 (1) - this is so ugly

00:52:864 (2,1,2,3,4,5) - again could be cute to follow the kick rhythm

01:06:538 (1) - just why is there a red point in the middle
remove it to save me the 3 bytes of hd space >:(

01:55:721 (1,2,3) - this one is pretty clearly different, how about kicksliders or something?

01:59:905 (1) - think what mir did is a lot better, there isnt any support for 1/16th hitsounds ._.

[lmt]
00:26:129 (1,2) - as u can see this blanket is slightly off which means that this map is unrankable.

00:46:027 (3) - wats this overmap for o.o

01:46:742 (6) - tbh u should move this to the blue tick before...

[normal]
00:06:129 (4,5) - gun emoji

00:13:476 - u can end the spinner here tbh

00:40:007 (4,1) - gun emoji

01:07:354 (3,4) - this kinda stuff seems a bit dense, why not just do circles

01:46:129 - u can end the spinner here tbh

ok get like 3 mods and we can go
Topic Starter
Mir

Naotoshi wrote:

[papayapa]
this diffname is garbage, get a better one

00:02:252 (6,7,8) - tbh the hitsounds on the end of this are kinda lame and stick out a lot and sounds like shit so basically just get rid f them and make it circles thx.

00:09:701 (2) - think a 1/2 slider works better, the repeat is just kinda cluttered, you arent following the kicks anyway and having one on a repeat doesnt do anything. - am following kicks for 00:10:211 (4,5,6) -

00:10:211 (4) - should definitely be a double.

00:13:476 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this entire thing kinda destroys the build up that you did with the 1/8th sliders imo. i think just simpler vocal 1/2 circles is better for contrast.

00:20:007 (4) - this circle kinda sucks cuz it isnt on the melody thing. extending 00:19:803 (3) - makes more sense here imo.
01:26:741 (3,4) - 01:39:803 (3,4) -

00:39:599 (1) - smh would have been cute to map this as circles to fuck people over - too extreme, already fucking people with 1/8 bursts

00:52:660 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - following the kick rhythm would be cute imo

01:14:089 (6,8) - to be honest these feel like complete ass to play to me. there isnt even a sound on the blue tick lol just make them all the 1/8th snapped sliders

01:31:640 (4,5) - sounds better as a slider

01:33:885 (2,3) - raise sv over time?

01:56:742 (1) - laaaaaaaaaameeeeeee

01:19:599 (1,1) - u should totally follow that random thing you did at 01:02:456 (1,2,1,2,1) - !!! - I like the chu more

[normal]
00:06:129 (4,5) - gun emoji - not intended

00:13:476 - u can end the spinner here tbh

00:40:007 (4,1) - gun emoji

01:07:354 (3,4) - this kinda stuff seems a bit dense, why not just do circles - there's 1/2 vocals and i dont wanna skip them :(

01:46:129 - u can end the spinner here tbh

ok get like 3 mods and we can go
thanks naotoshi!!~
Lasse
00:08:476 (5,1,2,3,4) - doubles like this are used to make it more like an extension of the vocal, due to how people play them 00:08:476 (5,1) - feel "connected" if that makes sense

00:27:354 (1) - thank

00:52:864 (2,1,2,3,4,5) - i had the kick clickable before, but it made the transition to the sliderstream really unnatural and gross to play, no matter if it was just a circle or 1/8 slider

01:06:538 (1) - lol fine

01:55:721 (1,2,3) - no idea how you see that as clearly different? at 100% it seems really similar to other spots that use the same pattern

01:59:905 (1) - agree
thanks nao, you're my favorite bn!

https://0paste.com/14054.txt
LMT

Naotoshi wrote:

[lmt]
00:26:129 (1,2) - as u can see this blanket is slightly off which means that this map is unrankable. i tried!!!

00:46:027 (3) - wats this overmap for o.o not really an overmap but fixed anw

01:46:742 (6) - tbh u should move this to the blue tick before... fixed
tytyty

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144,148,110619,6,0,B|115:131|115:131|135:90|129:45,1,120,6|8,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
202,14,111231,2,0,B|218:30|218:30|268:23,1,60,2|0,0:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
284,20,111538,1,2,0:2:0:0:
319,100,111742,1,2,0:2:0:0:
283,102,111845,2,0,B|243:109|243:109|231:136,1,60,8|2,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
294,235,112252,6,0,B|278:207|278:207|214:216,1,90,2|0,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
196,219,112660,2,0,L|134:227,1,60,10|0,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
235,296,113068,2,0,B|248:324|248:324|312:321,1,90,2|0,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
330,319,113476,2,0,L|392:315,1,60,10|0,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
136,226,113885,6,0,B|145:265|145:265|132:300|132:300|147:340,1,120,0|8,0:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
64,261,114497,2,0,L|50:190,1,60,2|8,0:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
46,177,114803,1,2,0:2:0:0:
117,146,115007,2,0,L|94:56,1,90,10|8,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
193,158,115517,6,0,B|205:198|205:198|270:207,1,90,8|2,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
277,207,115925,1,10,3:2:0:0:
310,211,116027,1,0,0:2:0:0:
303,131,116231,1,2,0:2:0:0:
266,125,116334,1,8,3:2:0:0:
375,164,116538,1,2,0:2:0:0:
368,87,116742,6,0,L|368:53,3,30,2|2|2|2,0:2|0:2|0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
386,178,117150,6,0,B|387:201|387:201|422:215,1,60,6|2,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
442,223,117456,1,2,0:2:0:0:
473,237,117558,2,0,B|498:248|498:248|513:287,1,60,10|2,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
429,312,117966,1,2,3:2:0:0:
422,308,118068,1,2,0:2:0:0:
415,305,118170,1,2,0:2:0:0:
409,301,118272,1,2,0:2:0:0:
402,299,118374,2,0,L|342:272,1,60,10|0,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
269,244,118783,5,10,3:2:0:0:
251,258,118885,1,10,3:2:0:0:
181,206,119089,1,10,3:2:0:0:
110,156,119293,1,10,3:2:0:0:
39,198,119497,1,0,0:2:0:0:
25,213,119599,1,6,3:2:0:0:
164,55,119905,6,0,L|340:46,1,150,6|0,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:

edit: was an error in the code, fixed
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m4m from your queue ~

[papayapa]
  1. 00:13:578 - I think you should continue the stream. Its hard to notice that there's a rhythm gap because there's not much difference is space between 00:13:476 (1,1) - , unless you stack them, but I still think it would be best to not have that gap.
  2. 00:13:885 (2,3) - maybe swap these? Plays better and emphasizes 00:14:293 (1) - more
  3. 00:33:476 - Strong sound mapped on slider end. Maybe try something like this http://prntscr.com/g2qw69
  4. 01:00:517 (3,4,1) - should increase spacing and 01:01:129 (2,3,4) - decrease spacing
  5. 01:18:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - might be difficult to predict, previous stream was 16 notes long, I think it would be better to have it stream anti-clockwise.

[Lasse's Another]
  1. 00:19:803 (1) - why not extend to the next blue tick?
  2. 01:09:395 (2) - i think it'll play better with ctrl g

    Welp, tbh can't find anything, this diff is very clean.

[LMT's Hyper]
  1. 00:24:395 (3,4) - I don't think there's anything here that supports this double
  2. 00:23:476 (1) - shoulds like a missing note
  3. 00:43:068 (1,2,3) - I don't think you need new combo for this, also creates inconsistency.
  4. 00:46:334 (1,2,3) - ^
  5. 01:24:089 (2,1) - quite a small one but still overlap

[Normal]
Diff is pretty clean, nothing to say here

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Mir

Kujinn wrote:

m4m from your queue ~

[papayapa]
  1. 00:13:578 - I think you should continue the stream. Its hard to notice that there's a rhythm gap because there's not much difference is space between 00:13:476 (1,1) - , unless you stack them, but I still think it would be best to not have that gap.
  2. 00:13:885 (2,3) - maybe swap these? Plays better and emphasizes 00:14:293 (1) - more
  3. 00:33:476 - Strong sound mapped on slider end. Maybe try something like this http://prntscr.com/g2qw69 - intentional because i did 00:26:129 (1) -
  4. 01:00:517 (3,4,1) - should increase spacing and 01:01:129 (2,3,4) - decrease spacing
  5. 01:18:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - might be difficult to predict, previous stream was 16 notes long, I think it would be better to have it stream anti-clockwise. -getting opinions on this one
Thanks!!
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