Aleks719 wrote:

Easy
00:06:853 (3,4) - spacing fixed
00:21:559 (3) - 1 grid right
00:28:030 (1) - add whistles to the start and to the end end only
00:56:265 (2) - add whistle to the end
01:00:383 (3) - add whistle
01:00:971 (1) - remove whistle from the start and add whistles to the end
01:02:148 (2) - add whistle to the end
01:10:971 (1) - add whistle to the end
01:12:736 (2) - remove whistle

Aleks719 wrote:

Aoi's Insane
- Add "Letterbox during breaks" =no the beatmap with video shouldn't use this
- Try to avoid long combos (over 10). Cut it, where that possible. As example:
00:00:383 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I guess you could add new combo at 00:02:736 (5) . As for me, this is nazi suggestion, you can ignore it =max combo under 14 is all fine
01:21:559 (5) - add whistle to the start =ignore
01:22:736 (6) - ^ =done
01:23:912 (8) - add whistle to the start, remove whistle from the end =done
01:24:942 (9) - add whistle =done

Sakura Hana wrote:

[yongtw123's Easy]
00:33:912 (2) - The current combo appears to be following the lyrics but this note feels off, is this following anything in the lyrics? it's a white tick beat i add myself. fits well IMO
00:38:912 (2,3,4,5,6) - 5 note stream for an Easy? sorry, remove the middle notes here or make an slider. allright
00:57:148 (1) - This spinner feels off, if it's following the lyrics it should be moved 1/2 back, however that's where the slider ends, so maybe remove the repeat on the slider?. nope, if listened carefully the spinner should start at the previous blue tick, but i don't think that's a good idea for an easy diff, so I move it to the position as of now. and besides, removing the repeat on the slider won't be following the vocal anymore. so...retained.

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Aoi's Insane]
Note density is a bit high, and hp regain is pretty easy to do, i'd recommend hp drain +1 to increase the difficulty a bit.
00:16:853 (3) - I'm pretty sure you could try something prettier with this slider, if it totally must end there to avoid spacing issues this will have to do: http://puu.sh/2IBp, otherwise try using a better arc like this: http://puu.sh/2IBt
01:24:942 (9) - Pretty hard to hit note, as the previous slider ended on a white tick and it's 3/4 on to this note, maybe remove it? (or move it 1/8 later like it was done in [Hard])
Fix by xykbear (all Done)

[Jameskong1's Hard]
01:16:265 (5) - Hard to spot repeat, considering the angle of the previous stream and the next slider.
Fix by spboxer3 (all Done)

[Taiko Oni]
Increase hitsound volume, notes are pretty hard to read.
Try slider velocity 1.4x
Fix by spboxer3 (all Done)

[Normal]
Why is there no kiai here?
00:08:618 (2,1) - A pretty big anti-jump, i recommend you put (1) farther away.
01:17:442 (1,2) - Separate these a bit more?
Fix by spboxer3 (all Done)

[yongtw123's Easy]
00:33:912 (2) - The current combo appears to be following the lyrics but this note feels off, is this following anything in the lyrics?
00:38:912 (2,3,4,5,6) - 5 note stream for an Easy? sorry, remove the middle notes here or make an slider.
00:57:148 (1) - This spinner feels off, if it's following the lyrics it should be moved 1/2 back, however that's where the slider ends, so maybe remove the repeat on the slider?.
Fix by yongtw123 (all Done)

Sakura Hana wrote:

Recheck~
[General]
There's 2 spaces between Photograph and ending on the tags, alternatively i'd recommend you remove ending from the tags, it's too general and unnecessary.
Set slider tick rate to 2, fits the song better

[Taiko Oni]
01:24:991 (4,5) - I think the timing works better like this:


[yongtw123's Easy]
The slider tick rate 2 suggestion is strongly recommended in this difficulty since it has the longest sliders.

Good job, almost there~

James2250 wrote:

-There should be a space between " Photos " and "TV Size" on the title in-game (only minor but still should be fixed)

Normal:
00:16:853 (3) - extend to blue tick? fix
01:19:206 (2,1) - could look slightly nicer if not overlappingm fix

Hard:
00:16:853 (1) - extend to blue tick? (Same for the other diffculties) fix
01:08:912 (3) - silenced slider end doesn't fit fix
01:08:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add some hitsounds to this part? fix

Jameskong1's Hard:
00:05:089 (7,1) - switch new combo to follow the music more fix

Aoi's Insane:
-I really wouldn't suggest HP Drain 9 for a song as calm as this fix HP Drain=8?

Everything else looks good~ Thanks>"<

Sakura Hana wrote:

Download is broken!

No kudosu

Edit: Well ok seems like all the stuff James mentioned has been fixed so

Cherry Rebubble~

James2250 wrote:

Oops, I didn't notice this before but the metronome is not set to the correct beat. I would just make it 383 on every difficulty as that fixes the problem and stops any notes being before it. (You shouldn't need to resnap anything but double check anyway)

PM me after that quick fix and I will rank~

xykbear wrote:

哦～竟然rank了。恭喜～

PSPDS Eddie wrote:

Congrats spboxer3 !

yongtw123 wrote:

恭喜啊~

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