baysman wrote:

Hi, NM from my queue!

General

1. Change Romanised Title to: Bokura no Let-it-Be (cuz in romanised title need write how it's read an original language ) done fixed!Song Setup
2. And remove Bokura no from tags removed!

Normal

1. 02:03:985 (1) - don't make it reverse, change like this 02:05:008 (3) - possibly, it's make a bit harder
2. 02:12:167 (1) - make somthing like this 01:01:258 (1,2) - fixed
3. 02:14:723 (6) - delete this circle removed bcs i saw are stuck
4. 03:35:688 - put circle on that place i guess i won't bcs dat part are slow part. So, yeah, need slow pattern to rest for newbie players
5. 03:38:756 (2) - delete this circle and make slider from red tick to white sound strong beats should put here. no fix

Hard

1. Maybe you try to change AR to 7 cuz i think 8 too fast for this song changed to ar7.5. Comfortable for dt players
2. 00:13:530 (3) - try to make something like stream it sounds better fixed
3. 00:18:985 (4,5) - ^^ it's not suitable
4. 00:24:439 (3) - ^^ fixed
5. 00:27:167 (3) - ^^ and an other slider like this, if you want fixed
6. 01:12:848 (3,4) - change to slider no, dud
7. 04:12:165 (7) - that slider don't need 2 reverse change to 1 fixed since all part like this are sound small 1/6

It's just my opinion, so I hope my mod will be helpfull.

GL with your beatmap (nice song )

HootOwlStar wrote:

Lilyanna wrote:

NM

easy;


00:14:553 (3,4) - avoide stacked notes in easy
00:47:280 (3,4) - ^ why though


I hope i helped good luck!

donkat wrote:

Hard

In the intro (first ten seconds), don't use the clap hitsounds. There is no percussion whatsoever in the song at that point.
00:13:530 (3,4,5) - The triple circles in a line look really awkward at the top. Move down a bit more and change their position to a triangle, or make it look less line-looking. changed to stake triple
00:53:076 (1,2) - Placement is awkward. You could make it into one slider if you're not satisfied, changed to stack triple... dat easy
01:20:348 (1,2) - Better as a slider fixed
I like the notes in the chorus in general.
01:28:189 (7) - Don't stack this. Move it down fixed

Your use of hitsounds is super good, except in the intro, so is your note rhythm. Nice map!

Lilyanna wrote:

NM

General :

add ur gd name in tags added

Normal :

same the tags are conflicts with hard

00:16:258 (3,4,1) - the pattern doesnt look appealing why not symmetrcycal like this
http://puu.sh/snlNC/2a443d7633.jpg fixed
00:22:735 (5) - better avoid 1/4 snaps also i hear nothing on blue tick anyway removed note from blue tick
00:43:530 (3) - ds unconsistency fixed
00:44:894 (1) - what happen to ds here from 1.0 to 1.39 also it will look better if u blanket these 00:44:212 (4,1) - fixed ds
01:58:530 (1,2) - this overlap and flow doesnt look appealing at least do this
http://puu.sh/snm59/0a36ec8544.jpg fixed
02:04:155 - another overmaped blue tick just make it 1/2 slider imo it's fine bcs there's sound vocal here
02:18:644 (2) - check ur ds snaps no warning at here lol
02:24:098 (2) - ^ even visioly they look unconsistent fixed
03:23:928 - u know u are alowed to ignore those bg music in normal u dont have to emphasize everything specialy blue ticks are minor sounds aaaaaaahhhhh. i know you are not satisfied bout my style rhythm, but sound small are probally at blue ticks. So, dont mad. fixed
03:49:324 (2,3) - blanket fixed
04:02:961 (2) - ds already ds lol

Hard :

00:06:030 (4,5,1) - this spacing is annoying visioly they either overlap or no imo fixed to another pattern
00:22:905 (5,1) - same here why not stack it like u did here 00:25:633 (7,1) - fixed
01:08:417 (5,1) - stack 5 with the end of slider 1 fixed but it's make a bit harder at 6 slider lol
01:11:996 (8,3,4,7) - this overlap is not appealing removed 8 circle
04:26:143 (7,1) - can imporve blanket i think it's fine lol

I hope i helped good luck!

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[N]
00:05:008 (2,3) - No stack avoided stack
00:53:076 (1) - make into a circle? fixed
02:00:576 (4,5) - don't stack avoided stack
03:36:029 (2,1) - this stack could be,,,,hard to read 1's sliderhead? fixed

[H]
02:25:803 (1,2,3,4) - Hard to play than other patterns fixed patterns
02:49:496 (7,8) - avoid overlap fixed

GL

-NekoNya wrote:

-From my mod queue~ (CHANGE ONLY IF YOU WANT TO)

You can make a reference from this map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/374055

Hard

• 00:03:985 (1,2,3) - Make these three compatible... make a good image for sliders. fixed

• 00:10:462 (2,3) - Same here ^^ fixed

• 00:23:076 (1) - Try to make the end point face the circle. it's fine dud

• 00:47:621 (2,3) - Move this where the end point of the slider is ending. fixed

• 01:28:530 (1) - Move this a little to the right. fixed

• 02:42:508 (2,3) - A little warning before this thing comes out. fixed patterns

-Sorry~ that's the only difficulty i can map. I'm busy with studies~

Cerulean Veyron wrote:

Hello!

[- - General - -]

• - Well, have you not start planning to adding just a few custom combo colors later on? Or is it intended to keep as default? It's just that I have an odd feeling when some map doesn't have those, so yeah. added. a brief word...
  - Didn't find anything more important here. Well done~

[- - Normal - -]

1. 00:05:008 (2,3,4) - I wonder what made you change the distance spacing pretty much before the new track, which is the longer white tick. So on that part, swapping the spacing (3)&(4) has should be 00:06:030 (4,1) - between (4)&(1) instead for some density. fixed based on your suggestion
2. 00:06:712 (1) - Optional Objective: This won't be very much of a suggestion, but it's something personal based on aesthetics. So how about flipping this slider horizontally for the follow-up structural flowing that's coming from the previous notes. And because of the arrow, It would also reverse back directly towards to the next circle more smoothly. That is all up to you. mayb change blanket are simple to fix
3. 00:29:894 (3) - I did feel something on the downbeats that should probably be paying more attention, like vocals for example. And I might think two 1/2 slider on this part should fit best while following that rather than one reversed slider. It'll provide better emphasis for sure. fxed
4. 00:44:894 (1,3,5) - Well, that kind of overlapping isn't really a big problem since it's barely noticeable when stack leniency is pretty balanced on the setting. But something like this seems pretty... "hairy"... If you know what I mean. I probably have this feeling the need of splitting those notes for visibility, but the flowing I've seen here looks okay. So about moving away the notes from each other a bit, that should be a thing I'm suggesting. fixed flow. damn, i didn't noticed dat part
5. 01:02:621 (4,5) - Nearly the same thing as for replacing these notes to 1/2 sliders for the emphasis. You've also done that on the second kiai 02:13:530 (5,6) - , so there should really be some rhythm composition and consistency. fixed
6. 01:11:826 - Why keeping this part a little empty though? I do believe this should at least have a circle or something to follow the metronome and hi-hats on the song track. So yeah... an "add a note" mod.added circle
7. 02:17:621 (1,2,3) - I guess that should be enough for all these linear slider. You're using it quite a lot more than any of the rest of the parts in the diff. So for the patterning and aesthetics sake, I think curving some structure here would probably make it less repetitive alike everything else. possibly it's doesnt make emphasize gross unless you want help me through your style
8. 02:38:758 (4,1) - 03:23:757 (3,1) - Ehh, the distance spacings on these two parts I mention seems pretty sudden. Since this is a normal difficulty, I don't really think this should be allowed. So yeah, I recommend checking the distance spacing here. fixed
9. 03:38:756 (2,3,1) - Well, nothing I should be against the spacing because it's already perfect. But in visual aspects on the patterning, or adjustment based by the slider velocity change, the space between these notes can be really distinguishable. I would prefer spacing a little bit and balance it by using visuals other than spacing for that, but try not to make a little too much. Or better yet, just move slider (3) a bit downward if you don't mind putting too much work over it. fixed

[- - Hard - -]

1. 00:13:871 (5,6,7) - 00:15:576 (2,3,4,5) - 00:24:098 (2,3,5,6) - 00:37:394 (2,3,4) - 00:40:803 (4,5,1) - Uhmm, You kinda varied the distance spacing quite too much on many parts like these while the song track isn't very potent that much. I've also seen further more later on the difficulty, so It's best you recheck all those and reconsider varying the spacing on random parts. Well, really. It doesn't look right to me, personally. fixed all parts except at 4 part cause it's make worst style
2. 00:23:076 (1) - You could try to polish this slider a little more rather than a sharp one. How about a curve on the second slide of the slider body? Or probably the first one, if you prefer one of them. But if you have another way than that, at least this would still count for buffing up the aesthetics. fixed slider
3. 01:14:723 (9) - I don't really think this circle follows something on this part. Not even the vocals, percussion, or hi-hats being landed there. So I kinda suggest deleting it to avoid any overmapping issues. But hey, maybe you could move it somewhere on the rhythm timeline above, if you don't really like deleting notes or something. But you might have it your own way after applying this mod. mayb as usual, deleted note cause i don't rrllly understand and those word are not in my brain lol
4. 01:49:496 (6,7) - The structural flowing seems to be a little more awkward, especially with that tiny overlap being pretty visible in both editor and gameplay. I might be able to help improving it with placements and slider positions over these two notes. How about you try something similar to this? It helps smoothen the movement that previously flowed from slider (5) and easier curved aiming. fixed
5. 02:11:485 (5,6,7) - Just before the kiai, or maybe so-called "chorus". This one spiked up a little bit higher than the next kiai notes. I would recommend the opposite of the current spike due the chorus is pretty much promising for a little more spacing. I think placing that spaced triplet shouldn't really be implemented, since you probably didn't even mapped another triplet with that kind of distance spacing on any parts. So that faces a small patterning inconsistency. Not unless you're trying to represent the guitar strings or whatever. But this is just my personal suggestion. redused spacing circle

This should conclude my mod, the song choice was really delightful btw~
Best of Luck!

1. plz remove check wide screen support on Normal diff.
2. why don't you Artist name "伊東歌詞太郎" like Japanese? plz match to other ranked his songs. But i dont know detailed metadata, so plz ask with BNs or QAT about it
   
   metadata?

   https://www.amazon.co.jp/my-little-white-cat-%E4%BC%8A%E6%9D%B1%E6%AD%8C%E8%A9%9E%E5%A4%AA%E9%83%8E/dp/B00AQT3IOA
   
3. then, maybe add to album's name "my little white cat" to tag?

1. 00:26:826 (4) - umm...I feel better to take 00:27:167 - strong sound than 00:26:826 - so can you change 1/1 slider at 00:27:167 - ?
2. 00:50:348 (1) - can you change reverse 1/1 slider? i think you should take this downbeat sound. if you wouldn't like to be monotonous, plz ignore my suggestion
   if you agree with my opinion, 01:06:712 (1) - same as above 01:17:621 (1) - ^ 02:17:621 (1) - ^ 02:28:530 (1) - ^ 03:56:484 (1) - ^ 04:07:393 (1) - ^
3. 01:33:985 (1,2,1) - i know you take vocal sounds but i recommend to take white line's sounds
4. 02:01:258 (1) - vocal end is here(02:01:598 - ) so, can you chenge 1/2 slider + 1/1 slider?

1. Plz check Aimod on Distance snap
2. 00:44:553 - maybe you take on drum sound using 1/2 slider from 00:44:212 - imo
3. 01:18:303 (2) - the slider is weird for me, so can you change like below image?
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:41:485 (4) - same as above but if you fixed it, you have to change flow greatly...so if you hesitate to change it, plz ignore one lol
5. 02:30:576 (4,3) - this overlap is not clean
6. 03:36:029 (2,1) - you should be blanket here

1. 00:17:280 (5) - you don't need to use kick slider in here, i think should take sound is not at 00:17:451 -
2. 00:31:258 (1,3) - why dont you parallel them each other?
3. 00:55:803 (1) - slider art's suggestion, I hear guitar's sound at 00:56:485 - so i recommend to move red dot in here. plz look at image
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:10:462 (4,5,6) - can you put to be straight line?
5. 01:19:667 (6,2) - i dont feel good this slightly overlap
6. 04:02:620 (3,4) - why do you change only stack style? i think you should be unify on them
7. 04:26:143 (7,1) - blanket here so look more clean

CharmCaster wrote:

hii, im from my modding queue

Mod

HOS' Easy
- Nothing seems wrong here!

Normal
00:03:985 (1) - Flip this slider horizontally so that the flow of the direction is better! fixed
01:06:712 (1,2,3) - Idk if this is a must to change but, the overlap between (1,3) might be difficult for new players to handle..... fixed
01:16:258 (3,4) - Flip the slider (3) horizontally for better flow for the incoming circle (4) i think before you said like this already fixed. so, no fixed :#
02:28:534 (1,2) - ^ Do the same thing but flip it vertically (1) fixed
02:40:121 (2,3) - ^ Same thing, flip it horizontally (2) fixed
02:48:985 (5,6) - ^, flip it vertically this time (5) it's fine but your eyes kinda dat part weird lol
03:14:893 (2,3) - ^, flip it horizontally (2) fixed
04:01:938 (1,2) - ^ (1) no

Hard
00:18:303 (2,4) - Overlap the slider (4) with the circle (2)! fixed
00:40:803 (4,5) - Flip the slider (4) vertically for better flow for the incoming slider (5) fixed
00:48:303 (2,4) - Overlap the slider (4) with the circle (2) fixed
01:10:462 (4,5,6) - The structure of this is weird, maybe put the position of circle (5) into a better spot so that (4,5,6) will make a straight line! fixed another pattern!
01:13:530 (6) - Flip this slider horizontally for better flow for the incoming slider (7) fixed
01:54:269 (3,1,2,3) - This breaks the flow...... move the circle (3) closer to slider (1), same thing for (2,3) or unless its like that because you wanna express a certain sound from the song, you can ignore this suggestion.... man... i kinda deaf bcs sometimes there's strong beats, sometimes there's slow beats. so, in my opinion, like usually or basically, i can change use 1/2 slider
02:39:439 (1) - Flip this slider vertically fixed
02:40:121 (3,4,5,6) - This part looks messy, consider to change this part so that it doesn't cause a lot of overlaps fixed
03:18:303 (1) - Flip this slider vertically fixed
03:28:188 (2,4) - Overlap the circle (4) to the circle (2) fixed
04:21:711 (3) - Flip this slider vertically fixed

Thats all! Overall, this is a very good map! Keep it up Thanks for gave a words of encouragement (used google translate) lol