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Another Lie
Here's your req from my nameless queue.
I bet this is your first time mapping, right? No problem, everyone just started from zero.

Metadata: Are you being serious here? if you're going to follow ctb, you may keep your own metadata.
If you're going to follow mania, i suggest you this. https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/166983
Timing: Not really fine
Diff spread: Maybe fine for me
AiMod: Very very bad

General Mod
Uncheck Widescreen support
Uncheck "Enable countdown"
Please snap your all unsnapped notes
Lunatic
00:25:791 (25791|1,25791|0) - it should be placed at 1st col & 5th col
00:26:660 (26660|4,26660|3) - same
00:27:530 (27530|0,27530|1) - same
00:28:399 (28399|1,28399|0) - same
00:29:269 (29269|4,29269|3) - same
Speed Changes
Copy these code to your timing section
17530,-50,4,2,0,100,0,0
17747,-500,4,2,0,100,0,0
17965,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
31878,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,100,0,0
45791,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
61008,-50,4,2,0,100,0,0
61225,-500,4,2,0,100,0,0
61443,-100,4,2,0,100,0,1
74052,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
75356,-100,4,2,0,100,0,1
87530,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0

I'm very very sorry that i could not fully mod your map. Due of your basic mapping skill, you should learn more basic mapping skill here https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/439430
And for additional, you can learn the same map at here https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/166983 as reference of yours.
Good luck on your journey to learn mapping. :D :D
Sincerely, normal modder.
lenpai
going to ninja your metadata suggestion. That is an old map and every other map that is recently qualified that uses the same song has the more correct metadata. What mode the metadata is used, is irrelevant. Of course the GDer metadata shouldnt be copied.

look at:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/226789
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/392495

and the ctb version i provided

Recent maps have to use the romanized japanese names of songs soooo yeah :P

alacat wrote:

Hey You must fix the title before going qualify. I discussed with Satellite about it.

Romanised Title : Iro wa Nioedo Chirinuru o(OPver.)
Title : 色は匂へど 散りぬるを(OPver.)



official website : http://www.yuuhei-satellite.jp/?p=364

Then, Ranked ver is wrong :< So it's your pick to add the title of English ver to tags ;)

Good luck !
EDIT: @OP do change the artist to senya to avoid future issues
Virtue-


Hi there, from Ngeng Familiy Mania Queue!

General


- Metadata : OK!
- BPM/Offset : OK!
- BG/Video : OK!
- Hitsound : NO! try to use LordRaika's hitsounds pack, it's really usefull :D
- Files : OK!

col 1|2|3|4

before we go to the mod, i wanna give suggestion :
1. make the mapset into 4k (E N H I)
2. make the mapset into 5k (E N H I)
'cause i never see this kind of mapset before :/ and wtf is the kiai?? put the kiai part here 01:01:443 - until 01:25:791 -

[Easy]
  1. 00:03:182 (3182|2) -
  2. 00:06:225 (6225|2,6443|3,6660|0,6878|3) - make it like this? http://puu.sh/sUFyx/6e9b73259b.png
  3. 00:10:573 (10573|0,10573|2,10791|3,11008|2,11225|1,11443|2,11660|0) - try this http://puu.sh/sUFFn/cc58c4b34e.jpg
  4. 00:17:965 - until 00:31:878 - try something like this http://puu.sh/sUGjC/eebcc2788c.png
  5. 00:19:704 (19704|0,19704|3,21443|1,21443|2,23182|0,23182|2) - change to single, 'cause i don't hear any loud voice except this 00:17:965 (17965|3,17965|0) -
  6. 00:44:921 (44921|2) - make it longer until 00:45:791 -
  7. 00:45:791 - until 00:52:747 - i think the patterns a bit too hard, wanna try this? http://puu.sh/sUGIg/3394523b3c.png
  8. 00:53:182 (53182|2,53182|1,53617|0,53617|3,54052|2,54052|1) - change this into single
  9. 01:01:008 (61008|1,61008|2) - delete

    before we continue the mod, i wanna ask the kiai part (that i suggest u before). what's going on here? you put double for snares, double for kicks, and the other errors. i suggest you to re-map/re-arrange it like this :
    snares : single
    kicks : single
    hi hat : -
    crashes : double
    another instruments : LN or single
    in this diff, just focus on the beat

[Normal]
  1. 00:09:482 (9482|2,9486|0) - delete 1
  2. 00:11:225 (11225|3,11225|1) - ^
  3. 00:12:312 (12312|0,13182|1,14052|2,15791|3) - hey, it's a normal diff. change to something easier, maybe like this http://puu.sh/sUHGI/9ff0cecf61.png
  4. 00:17:965 - 00:31:876 - pls, don't try to kill the beginners. try this http://puu.sh/sVeiQ/0638cbb973.png
  5. 00:29:921 - 00:30:791 - 00:31:660 - it's empty, make it single
  6. 00:39:052 (39052|1,39052|0,39269|2,39269|3,39486|0,39486|3,39921|1,39921|2,41008|0,41008|2,41660|1,41660|2) - make it single
  7. 00:45:791 (45791|1,45791|3,46008|1,46008|3,46225|2,46225|0,46443|2,46443|0,46878|0,46878|2,47095|1,47095|2,47530|0,47530|2,47747|0,47747|2,47965|1,47965|3,48182|0,48182|2,48617|0,48617|2,48834|3,48834|2,49269|0,49269|2,49486|1,49486|3,49704|0,49704|2,49921|2,49921|0,50356|1,50356|3,50573|2,50573|0,51008|0,51008|2,51225|1,51225|3,51443|0,51443|2,51660|1,51660|3,52095|1,52095|3,52312|0,52312|2) - make it single except the snares
  8. 00:52:747 (52747|1) - double
  9. 00:53:182 (53182|0,53182|2,53182|3,54052|0,54052|1,54052|3,54921|0,54921|2,54921|3) - ^
  10. 00:55:791 (55791|1,55791|2,55791|0,55791|3) - ^
  11. 00:56:008 - single here
  12. 00:56:225 (56225|0) - double
  13. 00:56:225 (56225|0,57095|1,57965|2) - try this, http://puu.sh/sVrS8/3f6380295b.jpg
  14. for the kiai part, try to avoid patterns like this 01:17:530 (77530|2,77747|2) - , http://puu.sh/sVs61/3472116af3.png. then 1. 01:01:443 - until 01:11:443 - and 2. 01:15:356 - until 01:25:356 - i think you should make it same pattern, 'cause the 2nd part it's too hard and you should keep the consistence
  15. 01:25:791 (85791|1,85791|3,86008|0,86008|2,86225|3,86225|1,86443|0,86443|2,86660|1,86660|3,86878|2,86878|0,87095|3,87095|1,87312|0,87312|2) - wtf is this? change that into something like this http://puu.sh/sVs33/04c762ba9c.jpg

[Hard]
  1. well, i think i gonna make a reference for you.
    here you go : REFERENCE

well then. good luck
Topic Starter
Ryon_Gaming
Hi there, from Ngeng Familiy Mania Queue!


I will apply this later....
I'm feel so tired now...bed time
:D

thank you in advance :oops:
Rivals_7
Lunatic is 5K?
pls. either made the Lunatic to 4K or made Easy, Normal, and Hard to 5K since its completely forbidden to get ranked

the other alternative is you made the entire spread for both 4K and 5K. so it'll be:

4K Easy / 4K Normal / 4K Hard / 4K Lunatic
5K Easy / 5K Normal / 5K Hard / 5K Lunatic

Dont kudos pls. Not a mod
Damaree

Rivals_7 wrote:

Lunatic is 5K?
pls. either made the Lunatic to 4K or made Easy, Normal, and Hard to 5K since its completely forbidden to get ranked

the other alternative is you made the entire spread for both 4K and 5K. so it'll be:

4K Easy / 4K Normal / 4K Hard / 4K Lunatic
5K Easy / 5K Normal / 5K Hard / 5K Lunatic

Dont kudos pls. Not a mod
Aand I'm here to check the map since u request in my queue, as what he said are you planning to map a 4-5k mapset? Then make also 5k easy & normal.
If not, convert ur "Lunatic" diff into 4k. I'll be back after fixing this, if not then I'll only mod the easy-hard diff.

NO KUDOS also.
Topic Starter
Ryon_Gaming
Already done two more 5Ks....

:D
Damaree
Ok now im back to accomplish your request

I'll make an exception to you, even though I cant mod 5k, i'll still try to look at it.

Feel free to reject


5K Hard
same as I did in 4k, put it whereever you want as long as its balanced.

Seems I can't continue to mod this further coz of those distracting hit sounds, cant distinguish where's the sound coming from coz of it. And those hitsounds didnt even match to the song(for me). So I recommend you to remove the hitsound for now and push this map to improve. I you think your map looks good, you can ask in the queue to hitsound your map. After you remove the "disturbing" hitsound, you can contact me by PM or in-game and i'll continue my mod right away. . . .
Topic Starter
Ryon_Gaming

JooF12 wrote:

Ok now im back to accomplish your request

I'll make an exception to you, even though I cant mod 5k, i'll still try to look at it.

Feel free to reject

O.O

Oww No. I didn't see this post recently. Waaahh!!!

I change some keys in Hard diff. O.O
I just updated it without seeing your post. -I edit it offline-
Oh my I'm so sorry, really I'm. :(
Yeah I rushed the Hard diff. so I can post it quickly, back on November :|

And yes,the hitsounds also annoy me. It's kinda loud, and I cant hear the song clearly.
Okay I'll find appropriate hitsound for this beatmap.

Anyways, thank you for your help. I'm really sorry if didn't see your post earlier. It's my fault :|




As of now I updated the hard diff. and I also add Lunatic (I can't make it insane :| ) difficulty for 4k.
And I'm planning to add ctb on it since I also like that mode....hmmmmm or maybe taiko.

Thanks for all your help guys.
lenpai
NO KUDOS NO KUDOS NO KUDOS NO KUDOS

so uh yeah w/e

general
Having two different keycounts mean you need to make a distinction on which is which, that said, the 4k diffs should be renamed to:
4k Easy (or Normal or Hard or Lunatic)

You need to have a 5k Lunatic

Turn off widescreen support (found in song setup) in each diff manually.

Go to song setup > audio > and lower to volume to 30 in the meanwhile to not have super annoyingly loud hitsounds

Difficulties within the same difficulty (ex. 5k hard and 4k hard) should have the same HP OD settings

Suggested HP OD alterations:
Easy: OD/HP 6
Nornal: OD/HP 7
Hard: OD/HP 8
Lunatic: OD/HP 8 or OD/HP 8.5

aimod is going nuts about missing files but idk how to fix those

if you havent started, i suggest not making diffs for taiko and ctb as there are existing ranked maps for them. If you think you can pull off a better chart than what is currently ranked, then go ahead.

apparently, lunatic doesnt show a BG while being played via test, this might be the reason why aimod is going nuts. If you only plan to use one wallpaper throughout the map, i suggest reapplying the wallpaper to each of the diffs.

4k Lunatic
00:06:443 (6443|1,6660|0) - though the shield is kinda ok, moving to 1 and 4 respectively is a possible alternative
00:09:052 (9052|1) - i know you're going for a [12][23][34] here but moving this to 4 is a better alternative
00:14:052 - this is a bit too dumpy for my tastes. Do go for something simpler because this could be a huge hindrance to this getting ranked if kept.

MAJOR PROBLEM WITH THE MAP:
Look at the density graph, see what's wrong? The early section is denser and apparently, much harder than the kiai section. Bad difficulty curving. You would want to have the most exciting stuff at the climax of the song, that is, the kiai section of your map. Do watch out if other diffs of yours also have this problem.

With that said, any mods wont be of use from that point because a major redo needs to be made.

I'll stalk the thread and mod both 4k and 5k lunatic once the set gets a tasty amount of mods.

Don't give this post kudos though you might want to give JooF12 kudos unless he (i assume) told you that you shouldn't
Damaree

Lenfried- wrote:

Don't give this post kudos though you might want to give JooF12 kudos unless he (i assume) told you that you shouldn't
Ahh that depends on him. . . Its not like I farm kudos, Im only willing to help him. I remember my days when im still a beginner mapper.
Envory
Hi Ryon~ Just a Little Mod...~

4K Hard
00:04:921 (4921|0,5138|1) - If follow a music instrument .. better you delete that note (Ghost Note)
00:06:878 At that pattern better you change that into like that > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6900838 (Hear carefuly the piano sound)
00:07:095 change like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6894181

And my Tips:
Better place 3 note if the drum sound is like "Tak" and 2 note if drum sound is like "Dum"
dont use stair pattern if the sound is drum
just use Long Note to the vocal sound/hyper at Normal and easy Diff
and dont use hyper 1/8 at hard diff..


Thanks GoodLuck.... ;)
Envory
No Kudos..

just want tell you .. better end the Kiaimode for all diff at 01:27:530


Thanks~
Murumoo
halo :)

( 1 2 3 4 )

first i cant touch lunatic [I can not mapping long notes map]

Mai's Lunatic
00:02:530 - add 1 note
00:11:660 - add 1 note
00:12:530 - ^
00:12:747 - ^
00:13:834 - ^
00:20:682 (20682|1) - remove note
00:22:638 - add 1 note
00:24:160 (24160|2) - remove note
00:26:117 - add 1 note
00:27:747 -
00:46:443 - add 1 note
00:46:878 - add 1 note
00:48:617 - add 1 note
00:48:834 - ^

good luck
Topic Starter
Ryon_Gaming
halo :)

( 1 2 3 4 )

first i cant touch lunatic [I can not mapping long notes map]
I will apply this later..
thank you :)
laughingcomet
late mod

4k Lunatic
00:07:965 - Ghost note?
00:11:443 (11443|2,11443|3) - ^
00:23:454 (23454|1) - should be at 00:23:399 -
00:22:530 - missing note?
00:31:225 (31225|0,31443|3,31660|1) - maybe double these?
00:37:530 - missing?

other lunatic seemed fine

Good luck
No_sync
hi!

From my NM/M4M queue.

Columns 4K 0|1|2|3
Columns 5K 0|1| 2 |3|4



General
MP3: PASS
BG: MISS
  1. 900x558 isn't a good Background Size, try to increase to 1024x768, 1366x768 or 1280x720.
Video: PASS
BPM & Offset: MISS
  1. Try 1897 as offset value.
Diff.Spread: FAIL
  1. What is "Mai's Insane"? Is like an Osu!Std difficulty... is 4K too, and you already have one 4K Insane. Leave one or specify better for adding the '4K' label: "Mai's 4K Insane" to that difficulty. Also, add the Guest Difficulty name in the Tags...(Is a GD? Right?)
Diff.Name: FAIL
  1. Use uppercase 'K' instead of undercase 'k' in all difficulties.
HP & OD: MISS
  1. Some issues in my opinion:
    1. Mai's Lunatic: OD=7 -> OD=8 | HP=8 -> HP->8.2
    2. 4k Lunatic: OD=8 -> OD=8.2 | HP=8 -> HP=8.5
    3. 5k Hard: HP=9 -> HP=8
    4. 5k Lunatic: OD=8 -> OD=8.2 | HP=8 -> HP=8.5
Hitsound: MISS
  1. There's many notes what doesn't have any sound. Try to increase the amount of hitsounds.
Hitsound Volume: PASS
Kiai Time: PASS
Metadata: MISS
  1. Mai is Guest difficulty? Add to the tags his nickname. Or erase if not.
Widescreen Support: MISS?
  1. You are using storyboard or not? If not, Uncheck Widescreen Support on Mai' Lunatic, 5k Easy, 4k Lunatic, 5k Lunatic and 5k Normal.
Preview Point: PASS
AiMod Things: FAIL
  1. There some files left...(Storyboard?) http://puu.sh/tpn1e/6a664e73a5.png
  2. I don't know about the map using the storyboard... So go to the map folder and erase this files(and every .osb file you find): http://puu.sh/tpn6I/f13a8fd923.png
  3. The Map size might be an issue too.

Mod!
[4k Easy]
00:29:269 (29269|0) - Move to |2| is too empty.

00:42:747 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7081368

01:05:791 (65791|3) - Move to |1|

01:11:443 (71443|3) - Erase this note.

01:13:617 - Add a note in |0|

01:14:486 - ^

01:23:182 (83182|2,83182|1) - To |0| and |3| for that repetitive cymbal. And 01:23:617 (83617|0) - to |1|.

01:27:530 - Add a note in |1| for cymbal.

[4k Normal]
00:11:660 - Add a note in |1|

00:22:095 (22095|3) - to |0|

00:42:312 (42312|2,42312|0,44052|3,44052|1,44921|0,44921|2) - I don't understand why two LongNotes here, you can use one. And try to use my suggestion on 4k Easy ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7081368 )

00:45:791 - Cymbal add a note.

01:11:008 (71008|2,71008|3) - to |0| and |1|.

[4k Hard]
00:08:182 (8182|0) - This ends on 00:08:399.

00:11:443 (11443|1,11443|0) - Why two?

00:11:225 (11225|2,11660|3) - Almost similar, but the second isn't a LongNote.

00:25:356 (25356|0,25356|2,25356|3) - Erase one.

00:44:052 (44052|1,44052|0,44921|2,44921|3) - With only one LongNote for each is good.

00:47:747 (47747|1) - to |0|

00:49:486 (49486|2) - to |1|

00:58:182 (58182|1) - to |2| and 00:58:508 (58508|2) - to |1|, I don't know about those jacks, a bit forced.

01:21:225 (81225|2,81443|2,81660|2,81878|2) - I don't like this stack. Rearrange better.

01:27:530 (87530|3,87530|0) - Ends on 01:33:617.

[Mai's Insane]
01:11:008 - Add a note for cymbal.

01:22:095 (82095|0) - to |1|

01:22:747 (82747|1) - to |2|

01:27:312 (87312|1,87312|0) - Move both one column to right.

Very good.

[4k Lunatic]
00:09:052 (9052|1) - to |3|

00:11:008 (11008|1) - ^

00:20:138 - Add a note, and 00:20:356 (20356|3) - move to |1|

00:23:454 (23454|1) - Bad snapped.

00:25:356 (25356|1,25791|1,26225|2,26660|0,27095|1,27530|1,28399|1,28834|1,29269|0,29704|2) - Erase these and Rearrange better.

01:13:725 (73725|1,73725|2) - Move both one column to the left.

01:26:443 (86443|3,86443|0,86443|2,86552|1,86552|0,86552|3,86660|1,86660|2,86660|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7081558

01:27:584 (87584|0) - Starts on 01:27:530.

01:33:617 (93617|1,93617|2) - Erase both. Isn't good to end it like that. Too exagerated.

[5k Easy]
01:04:486 (64486|4) - to |3|

01:05:356 (65356|0) - to |1|

01:06:225 (66225|1) - to |0|

01:08:834 (68834|2,68834|4,68834|0,69269|0,69269|2,69269|4,70573|1,70573|3,71008|1,71008|3) - Be consistent. Why there 3 first but not two after?

01:22:747 (82747|2,82747|0,82747|4,83182|4,83182|2,83182|0,84486|0,84486|4,84921|0,84921|4) - ^

[5k Normal]
From 00:17:965 to 00:29:704 - So all are exactly the same sound (kick)? Please rearrange better.

From 00:52:312 to 00:55:791 - ^

From 01:01:443 to 01:25:356 - ^

Many chords that in my opinion doesn't represent the song very good... For example, try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7081696

[5k Hard]
00:20:573 - Add a note for kick.

00:24:921 - Add a note for cymbal.

00:27:095 - Add a note.

01:22:312 (82312|0,82312|1,82312|2,82747|4,82747|3,83182|1,83182|0,84486|1,84486|3,84921|2,84921|4,84921|0) - What is a cymbal and what not? The amount used of notes used is unclear and somewhat confusing.

01:27:530 (87530|0,87530|2,90138|4) - Ends on 01:33:617.

[5k Lunatic]
From 00:24:921 to 00:29:704 - Same issue than 4k Lunatic about those jacks. Rearrange.

00:50:791 (50791|1,51008|1,51225|1,51443|1,51660|1) - Stack.

01:02:747 (62747|2,62965|2,63182|2,63399|2,63617|2,63834|2,64052|2) - ^

01:03:617 (63617|0,63834|0,64052|0,64269|0,64486|0) - ^

01:06:660 (66660|2,66878|2,67095|2,67312|2,67530|2,67747|2,67965|2) - ^

01:07:530 (67530|1,67747|1,67965|1,68182|1,68399|1,68617|1,68834|1) - ^

01:15:356 to 01:24:486 - Many jacks. Rearrange.

01:33:617 (93617|2) - Erase.

This difficulty have many jacks and stacks, making this difficulty very uncomfortable. Try to fix it, please.

Besides the technical issues (General), I think you need improve Layering.

Good Luck! :)
Topic Starter
Ryon_Gaming
Updated!
aevin

Hello

NM from my queue!

[o!mania] deetsiu's queue! [NM & M4M & GD]


1,2,3,4



4K Easy
00:24:921 (24921|3) - Move to 3
00:52:747 (52747|3) - Move to 2
01:10:573 (70573|2,71008|2) - Move to 4

4K Normal
00:27:530 (27530|1,27747|2) - Ctrl + H
00:28:853 - 00:28:853 - Use Long Note in column 1
00:48:182 (48182|0) - Move to 3
genkicho
Hi


mapping for hard sake confirmed
why you put your "spam" map in my queue, i will try mod anyway cuz its not 6*++, but a bit blatant .. i dont mean to be rude :/
columns 1 2 3 4
4K Lunatic
i wont mod consistency because its totally weird
Please remap and change those minijacks trill shields consistency
00:01:897 (1897|3,2114|1,2331|2) - why 1/2
00:10:157 (10157|3,10375|1,10375|0,10592|2,10592|3,10810|1,10810|0,11027|2,11027|3,11244|1,11244|0,11462|2,11462|3) - rearrange
00:16:081 (16081|0,16136|1,16190|2,16244|3,16299|0,16353|1,16407|2,16462|3,16516|1,16570|0,16625|3,16679|2,16733|1,16788|0,16842|3,16896|2,16951|1,17005|0,17060|1,17114|2,17168|3,17223|0,17277|1,17331|2,17386|3,17440|0,17494|1) - want make it hard? no its not. ppl can spam. pls stop making nonsense notes
00:23:744 (23744|2,23853|3,23962|2,24070|3,24179|2,24288|3) - no
00:26:244 (26244|0,26353|0) - no
00:27:875 (27875|2,27983|2) - 1/4 shield in a song like this
00:31:353 (31353|1,31389|2,31425|3,31462|0,31498|1,31534|2,31570|3,31607|0,31643|1,31679|2,31733|3,31733|0,31788|1) - no
00:32:114 (32114|1) - move to 4
00:49:070 (49070|1,49288|1,49505|1,49723|1,49940|1) - avoid
01:01:896 (61896|3,62114|3,62331|3,62549|3,62766|3,62983|3,63201|3) - wtf?
01:03:636 (63636|3,63853|3,64070|3,64288|3,64505|3,64723|3,64940|3,65157|3,65375|3,65592|3,65810|3) - this is how you kill a finger
01:06:896 (66896|2,67005|3,67114|3,67114|2,67223|2,67331|3,67440|2,67549|3,67549|2,67657|3,67766|2,67875|3,67983|3,67983|2) - wew
01:12:766 (72766|2,72766|3,72983|1,72983|0,73201|2,73201|3,73418|1,73418|0) - 4 different sounds, avoid this
01:13:418 (73418|0,73636|3,73636|2,73744|0,73744|1,73962|0,73962|1,74070|3,74070|2,74288|2,74288|3,74396|0,74396|1,74505|2,74505|3,74614|1,74614|0) - recheck the beat
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