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Topic Starter
Arusha Shuna
@Cn'F
i want the SB looked like the original PV but i daon't think improvising a bit isn't a bad idea :)

thanks for the SB addition (still can't tell what "origins" are for though :p)
sherrie__fay
[SB mod here]
First I'm not so good at English so I mod in both Chinese and English. Find a Chinese to translate if you get stuck with my English mod.
因为我英文不太好,所以我用中英两种语言做mod。英语看不懂的可以找个华人帮忙翻译下。

首先我看了下整体效果然后在代码里微调了SB歌词的间距
I had done some nazi mod to the code in .osb file.

这个这个直接丢串太费劲了。所以我直接改了代码并上传改完的osb文件。请下载并覆盖原osb文件。
This..this is too hard to explain this in post!!! >A<
So i fixed the code and uploaded it
DL it and replace your earlier .osb file plz QAQ thanks..

然后是一些代码里改不了的东西 需要亲手动改的哦
Then these are something which i had not done in code.you need fix them by yourself :3

00:13:998 for.png 所有效果往后移一条白线 make all events of "for.png" start a white tick later

01:20:298-01:20:448 RX.png消失 make 'RX.PNG' vanish at here.

02:30:798-02:30:948 把B2的淡出挪到这里。 'B2.jpg' should vanish at here.

白色出现就是在02:30:648这样了。and then 'white.png' should starts from 02:30:648.

*SB效果开始和结束落在重音会比较好。Just a suggest..SB events which put at downbeats will looks batter ;D

*还有我觉得很怪异为什么有的元件动作关键点没有对上tick而有的对上了
后来明白了原来你SB做到一半一定改off了对不对www
以后要么就全做完再改off 然后在design菜单里把所有元件都按timing挪;要么就先对准off再开始做整个SB~*
↑this is a useless suggest. please ignore it. if you REALLY want to know what this is, find a translater.

还有还有 不想被大脸哭喷的话 好好地重新地把所有元件的多余的透明边界都裁掉吧lol
谁叫他定rule了呢 其实我都不想说的
裁完透明边界说不定要reSB哦 因为中心点有变原始坐标会作废的哦
或者我们可以选择不叫大脸哭来看这个SBwww
Finally..(/quote)"There must not be any unnecessary transparency around storyboarded images, so crop and resize them as much as possible."--by Darekku
So crop them and reSB(for the images may change their positions after cropped),or avoid Darekku's SB mod...

star~!
AWESOME SB~

Download: Kagamine Rin & Len - Jutenija (Arusha Shuna).osb
Garven
Finally got started, but something I noticed: The the time signature is in 5/4.

Topic Starter
Arusha Shuna

Garven wrote:

Finally got started, but something I noticed: The the time signature is in 5/4.

is this just implemented recently or i never noticed this feature?
since i know it's 5/4 anyway :/

do not deny kds dang it
ziin
So yeah, I love the song.

But I'm disappointed in the SB. Could you link me the PV you are basing it off of? It looks nothing like the original:


Which, by the way would be FUCKAWESOME to emulate with a vocaloid theme. I would be more than happy to do most of the work for you, or help in finding images.
Topic Starter
Arusha Shuna
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DarkDunskin
I should have done this much earlier:

Download: Kagamine Rin & Len - Jutenija (Arusha Shuna) [Dunskin's Taiko Oni].osu

Please accept my little Taiko Guest-diff :)
Even if you don't want it, I really like your Map :D
And the Storyboard is very wel-madel too, I'm looking forward to a fast ranking!
Garven

Arusha Shuna wrote:

do not deny kds dang it
Whoops. I just auto-denied, haha. Oh well - something that minor doesn't need kudosu anyway. :P
Good luck with the set!
Topic Starter
Arusha Shuna

sherrie__fay wrote:

SB mod~
done some of them, thx for the fix!

DarkDunskin wrote:

I should have done this much earlier:

[attachment=0:4f94c]Kagamine Rin & Len - Jutenija (Arusha Shuna) [Dunskin's Taiko Oni].osu[/attachment:4f94c]

Please accept my little Taiko Guest-diff :)
Even if you don't want it, I really like your Map :D
And the Storyboard is very wel-madel too, I'm looking forward to a fast ranking!
i appreciate your taiko diff, thanks!

sorry for the late reply everyone :(
ziin
Okay so I've got like 90% of the images, but they're not entirely imported yet. This would be around 10% done.

If you watch the video I posted and this SB side by side, you'll sort of get it. Make sure you back up your map and SB beforehand.

Now the only thing this would be replacing is the backgrounds. All the lyrics and even flashes would probably stay the same.

If you absolutely hate the idea and don't want to replace your SB, I understand, and I won't bother finishing it. If you like it though, I'll work quick to get a rough draft ready.

http://puu.sh/3qiD
DarkDunskin
Thanks for adding my diff :D

Just don't forget to mention me in the Tags too :)
Topic Starter
Arusha Shuna

ziin wrote:

Okay so I've got like 90% of the images, but they're not entirely imported yet. This would be around 10% done.

If you watch the video I posted and this SB side by side, you'll sort of get it. Make sure you back up your map and SB beforehand.

Now the only thing this would be replacing is the backgrounds. All the lyrics and even flashes would probably stay the same.

If you absolutely hate the idea and don't want to replace your SB, I understand, and I won't bother finishing it. If you like it though, I'll work quick to get a rough draft ready.

http://puu.sh/3qiD
i do like the concept, but i think the images are upscaled in the SB way too much. So...
i'm sorry but im afraid i have to refuse it. Terribly sorry for all your hard work :'(
ziin
that's fine. 10% work wasn't much and I enjoyed fiddling.
NatsumeRin
Sorry for taking so long, i thought i finished clearing my queue several days ago....orz, silly me.

[General]
I think an echo sound could work very well in you map (places like 01:18:798 (1), consider about it?
Download: soft-hitfinish.rar

[Calm]
Personally i'll suggest you not to add 1/1 too many circles since the BPM is really high, still your choice.
01:09:198 (5,1) - not recommend you to do stacks like this in a Easy diff.
01:37:698 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - also these notes. could you think a better way to arrange it?

[Gentle]
00:39:798 (1,1) - this is ok but why don't you still follow the 3/2 beats? (you used 3/2 in all the sliders before also it fits better)
02:30:198 (1,2) - switch whistle?
02:42:798 (2) - just curious...why want to draw a letter "s"?

[Dunskin's Taiko Oni]
00:47:448 (35) - k?
00:53:448 (79) - ^

[Breeze]
01:13:098 - add a note? (in this diff you usually have beats start here)
02:21:798 (1,2) - a bit ugly here... how about..?

03:03:798 (1) - move it left and down a bit...(not stack to the end of 03:02:748 (2)
03:20:748 (2) - miss a whistle at the beginning?

[Gale]
i doubt if you should use AR9 in this map. BPM is high enough, but your don't have really crowded beats there, AR8 is a better choice to me. Also HP8 is too much imo.
There are some sliderwhistles in this diff (example: 00:55:248 (2), it seems you did this on purpose but sounds not so good to me. If you want to change them, use a mute sliderwhistle would be a nice idea.
02:04:698 (3,4,5,6,7) - maybe... now (7) is in a strange place.

02:30:498 (2,3) - don't need to be that far?
02:53:598 & 02:54:048 - add notes?


Backfire
Requested taiko mod.

DarkDunskin's Taiko Oni -
01:24:798 (1) - K?
01:48:498 (42,43,44) - kkd?
01:54:498 (86,87,88) - kdd?
02:30:798 (1) - K?
03:30:798 (1) - Perhaps make a spinner till 03:33:498 ?

Really deliciously sexy.
DarkDunskin
You should definitly start teilling me if my diff gets modded ^^"

- Set AR and CS to max
- added NatsumeRins Suggestions
- added Backy's spinner

Download: Kagamine Rin & Len - Jutenija (Arusha Shuna) [Dunskin's Taiko Oni].osu
Topic Starter
Arusha Shuna

NatsumeRin wrote:

Sorry for taking so long, i thought i finished clearing my queue several days ago....orz, silly me.

[General]
I think an echo sound could work very well in you map (places like 01:18:798 (1), consider about it?
[attachment=2:2884b]soft-hitfinish.rar[/attachment:2884b] full submission will be done later, thanks for the hitsound!

[Calm]
Personally i'll suggest you not to add 1/1 too many circles since the BPM is really high, still your choice.
01:09:198 (5,1) - not recommend you to do stacks like this in a Easy diff. k
01:37:698 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - also these notes. could you think a better way to arrange it?im out of ideas

[Gentle]
00:39:798 (1,1) - this is ok but why don't you still follow the 3/2 beats? (you used 3/2 in all the sliders before also it fits better) overlooked this one, thanks!
02:30:198 (1,2) - switch whistle? k
02:42:798 (2) - just curious...why want to draw a letter "s"? out of pattern ideas for long sliders x_x

[Dunskin's Taiko Oni]
00:47:448 (35) - k?
00:53:448 (79) - ^

[Breeze]
01:13:098 - add a note? (in this diff you usually have beats start here)
02:21:798 (1,2) - a bit ugly here... how about..? i'll just curve them better
[attachment=1:2884b]102.png[/attachment:2884b]
03:03:798 (1) - move it left and down a bit...(not stack to the end of 03:02:748 (2) done
03:20:748 (2) - miss a whistle at the beginning? done

[Gale]
i doubt if you should use AR9 in this map. BPM is high enough, but your don't have really crowded beats there, AR8 is a better choice to me. Also HP8 is too much imo.done, drain8 is good enough, not that bad since the notes'll keep on coming
There are some sliderwhistles in this diff (example: 00:55:248 (2), it seems you did this on purpose but sounds not so good to me. If you want to change them, use a mute sliderwhistle would be a nice idea.
02:04:698 (3,4,5,6,7) - maybe... now (7) is in a strange place. let's stick to the flow, done a reversed C pattern
[attachment=0:2884b]103.png[/attachment:2884b]
02:30:498 (2,3) - don't need to be that far? the previous one (the first "JuteniJA!") are way further, so i guess it's fine
02:53:598 & 02:54:048 - add notes? i'll prefer to keep it calm in here
thank you!
Card N'FoRcE
- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)
  • I din't get the meaning of some of the tags, mind explaining them to me please?
- Calm:
  1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    00:48:798 (1,2) - doesn't match with 00:47:298 (4,5): this is a map which uses strict spacing that is constant through the whole song, so I believe you should fix it even if it's really minor. Just move a bit the end of 00:48:798 (1) and it's gonna be ok.
- Gentle:
  1. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    00:39:798 (1) - make it 1/4 shorter, i guess it resnapped badly.
Nothing else.
This map is so great aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ;__;

Let me know when you're done by forum or game PM and I'll bubble.

EDIT: after months, fixes applied xD
Bubbled.
Krisom
Hello ~

EDIT: 9th BAt modpost :3 (I almost lost the count D:!)


General.-
· Add "vocaloid" to tags on all diffs ~
· If you have a "sliderfollowcircle" you must complete the set by adding the sliderballs ~
· If you have a sectionpass.mp3 you must complete the set by adding the sectionfail.mp3
· Why is quinche on the tags? Unless he's related to the mapping of any diff/part you'll have to remove him. Same for wanhyrzh.
· There's a thumbs.db in the SB folder
· Lovely skin >w<

Gale.-
01:29:748 (2) - This sliderwhistle feels a tad out of place in this pattern, since it's the only one in this whole section
03:25:248 (2) - This sliderwhistle feels a tad out of place in this pattern, since it's the only one in the whole chorus
This diff plays nice, a tad too fast for me but nice regardless. Kudos for the sweet usage of sliderwhistles.

Breeze.-
01:12:198 (4,5,6) - Weird stack appears in-game. (5,6) stacks but (4) doesnt stacks with them.
02:36:798 (1) - This sliderwhistle feels a tad out of place in this pattern, since it's the only one in this whole section

Oni.-
Seems ok ~

Gentle.-
Seems ok ~

Calm.-
Seems ok ~

Ok then, I can either rebubble when the changes are done or wait until you get a rebubble and rank this. Tell me what will it be ~
Topic Starter
Arusha Shuna

Krisom wrote:

Hello ~

EDIT: 9th BAt modpost :3 (I almost lost the count D:!)


General.-
· Add "vocaloid" to tags on all diffs ~ done
· If you have a "sliderfollowcircle" you must complete the set by adding the sliderballs ~ done
· If you have a sectionpass.mp3 you must complete the set by adding the sectionfail.mp3 done
· Why is quinche on the tags? Unless he's related to the mapping of any diff/part you'll have to remove him. Same for wanhyrzh. done
· There's a thumbs.db in the SB folder done
· Lovely skin >w<

Gale.-
01:29:748 (2) - This sliderwhistle feels a tad out of place in this pattern, since it's the only one in this whole section done
03:25:248 (2) - This sliderwhistle feels a tad out of place in this pattern, since it's the only one in the whole chorus
This diff plays nice, a tad too fast for me but nice regardless. Kudos for the sweet usage of sliderwhistles. done

Breeze.-
01:12:198 (4,5,6) - Weird stack appears in-game. (5,6) stacks but (4) doesnt stacks with them. done
02:36:798 (1) - This sliderwhistle feels a tad out of place in this pattern, since it's the only one in this whole section done
thanks!
qinche
Q.Q
Topic Starter
Arusha Shuna

qinche wrote:

Q.Q
gomen q-nyan
i can't even find the time to get in the game
Sallad4ever
[Breeze]
  1. Use AR 7, AR 6 make 02:56:298 (1,2) a bit hard to read
[Gale]
  1. 02:49:098 (2) - this is very awkward, you should totally add another repeat or add a circle at 02:49:548, because that place have the same rhythm as 02:43:098 (1,2,3,4) and 02:44:298 (1,2,3,4,5,6) those 2 sounds better too
  2. 02:50:598 (2) - ^
EDIT: I lol'd
I mean Re-bubble!!!
Bassio13
Really good Map!

I nothing found what isn't correct!
Nice Storyboard!
Garven
[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song really well. Tick 1 sounds really awkward on the off-beat sliders.

[Calm]
02:00:798 (1,2,3) - These slider shapes felt pretty weak.
02:27:798 (1) - I don't recommend stacking under slider ends since it's difficult to tell the rhythm for new players, and you change the rhythm up from the straight 2/1 at this point
02:48:798 (1,2) - Kind of a tough stack for new players. I'd keep stacking to simple 1/1 or 1/2 rhythms

[Taiko]
Set time signature to 5/4

[Breeze]
01:30:798 (2,3) - The overlap on these is kinda ugly. Think you can get it so that the circle parts of the sliders aren't overlapping?
03:30:798 (1) - Raise volume on this to line up with other difficulties (though I prefer it silent myself)
Garven
[Breeze]
01:31:248 (3) - That finish intended?
Garven
This rank intended?
Magicphoenix
It's a rank !
Topic Starter
Arusha Shuna
oh god qinche and wanhyrzh will yell at me for this.
oh well, in any case, YAAAAAAAAAAAAY
ertyukjh010
=w=b 好圖 GoodMap
dNextGen
gratz
raxar
lolgratz. Took you long enough to complete this map and get this map ranked xD
Backfire
Wait, holy crap, arusha got a rank?
Grats, my VN loving friend.
Niva
Congratulations Arusha Shuna :3
nanda2009
grats~ :D
music suku pedalaman
q ga ngerti bahasanya, srius...~
Sallad4ever

Garven wrote:

This rank intended?
oh you :lol:

selamat akhirnya udah ke rank juga :D
qinche
horraaaaaay!!!
LunarSakuya
I like this map :)
Topic Starter
Arusha Shuna
I bet this map got bad rating cuz people can't understand a shit what are they singing lol
Or its the SB
Sallad4ever
nggak ah
kalo emang gitu lagu jepang juga bakal dapet rating kecil dung :P
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