Nice Map! Hope it Rank <3
1|2|3|4[Remu no Nozomi]
Dellvangel wrote:
Ok finally i'm here.
[General]
- Personally think the OD and HP are too low, suggest to change the OD and HP to 7,5 . As suggested od 7.5 hp 7.5 change
- soft-hitwhistle has too many blank sound at the end after the sound itself, here i fix it for you http://puu.sh/v3eHo/24c30175a2.rar . thx xD
- .png file for bg is rankable, but the size is kinda big, would be better if you replace it with http://puu.sh/v3eP1/64ff06fa7b.jpg , still the same bg but i converted it to .jpg file, so the size isn't that big.
- Metadata:
Artist: レム(CV:水瀬いのり) -- no space after "レム". fixed
Romanised Artist: Rem(CV:Minase Inori) -- no space after "Rem". fixed
Source: http://puu.sh/v3fqa/4ba3c2c970.png from http://re-zero-anime.jp/product/music.html . What content to tag?- Delete "anime" from the tags, the genre itself will be added after this map gets qualified. I erased it.
1|2|3|4[Remu no Nozomi][Hitsound]
- 00:51:106 (51106|3) - move to column 1 would be nice imo, as the pitch isn't that high here and better for hand balance. Moved to 1 col for hand balance
- 00:56:306 - the pitch here is hogher than 00:56:706 - , would consider to change it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7692061 start from 00:55:106 - . Completed changes as suggested
- 00:59:056 - not going to map this? Kinda weird since you mapped 00:08:706 (8706|2,8756|3) - . I didn't hear it, but I heard it again.
fixed- 01:00:706 - the pitch here is higher than 01:00:306 - and there is a sound too at 01:00:656 - , probably try to change it like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7692090 ? Pattern changes completed
- 01:28:706 - start here, suggest to change the pattern like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7692113 to follow the PR better. Completed changes as suggested
- 01:43:506 - has exactly the same pitch with 01:44:706 - , would be better if you change it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7692127 . yeah fixed :3
- 01:45:906 (105906|2) - move to column 4 for PR with 01:44:706 (104706|3) - . fixed
- 01:47:906 (107906|3) - move this to column 1 for better flow as the vocal pitch at 01:48:706 - is higher, so you can emphasize it better.
fixed- 01:49:506 - until 02:00:706 - why all the LNs are at column 1 and 4? Might be better if you spread them to other columns too. this has been scattered in various ways
- 02:22:706 (142706|3,142906|2) - ctrl+left 1x for hand balance and better flow. Move completed
- 02:24:106 (144106|1,144306|2) - ctr;+h this, the pitch is getting lower, not higher here. fixed
- 02:25:306 (145306|1,145506|0) - swap the column here would be cool imo (1 to 2, 2 to 1) for pattern variation with 02:24:706 (144706|2,144706|1,144906|3,144906|0) - . fixed
- 02:29:106 (149106|1) - move to column 4, jacked this note with 02:29:306 (149306|1) - will make the pattern inconsistent with 02:22:706 (142706|2,142906|1) - , 02:25:906 (145906|2) - , 02:32:306 (152306|3,152506|2) - , etc. Changed to avoid jack
- 02:28:106 (148106|0) - move to column 4, idk why you jacked this with 02:27:906 (147906|0) - since it is unnecessary. fixed
- 02:31:306 (151306|0) - this one too, and this part has exactly the same pattern with previous part, so try to rearrange this with other pattern would be nice. Change as suggested
- 02:36:906 (156906|1,157106|2) - ctrl+h this one too, the pitch is getting lower here. fixed
- 02:37:706 (157706|2) - move to column 4 to avoid unnecessary jack with 02:37:506 (157506|2) - and for consistency with previous parts too. Move completed
- 02:38:706 (158706|1,158906|1) - for consistency, don't jack these notes, change it to 2| 1| or 2| 4| would be nice imo. Move completed
- 02:45:306 (165306|2,165506|2) - don't jack this for consistency. 02:45:306 - So this went move to 4col
- 02:48:306 (168306|1,168506|1) - same, don't jack this for consistency. 02:48:306 - So this went move to 1col
- 02:54:706 (174706|2,174906|1) - ctrl+left this seems better for hand balance imo. Move completed
- 03:01:306 (181306|2) - move to column 4 for consistency with previous parts. fixed
- 03:04:506 (184506|1) - same here, move to column 1. fixed
- 03:12:306 (192306|3) - move this to column 2 would be better for hand balance. fixed
- 03:38:506 (218506|2) - move this to column 1 would b better to emphasize the different vocal pitch with the previous pattern. fixed
- 04:14:906 (254906|1) - move to column 4 for hand balance. fixed
- 04:34:306 (274306|3,275106|3) - you can move this to column 2 or 3 for consistency with 04:29:506 (269506|2,270306|2,271106|1,271906|1) - (you changed the column each 3 notes). 04:34:306 (274306|3,275106|3) - This moves to 3 col
- 04:48:706 (288706|2) - move this to column 2, same pitch with 04:49:506 (289506|1) - . fixed
- 04:52:706 (292706|2,293506|1) - ctrl+h this, same reason as above. fixed
- 04:55:106 (295106|2) - move to column 1 would be nice for the 1| 4| 1| 4| feeling that already built with the notes after this part. so this went move to 1col
- 05:02:906 (302906|2) - move to column 4 for pattern variation with 05:15:506 (315506|1,315706|2,315906|0,315906|1) - . so this went move to 4col
- 05:09:306 (309306|1) - same here, move to column 1. so this went move to 1col
- 05:34:706 (334706|1) - move to column 3, the pitch is kinda high here and for hand balance too. so this went move to 3col
- 05:37:906 (337906|0,338306|2) - swap the column here would be nice imo (1 to 3, 3 to 1) since the pitch at 05:37:906 - is higher than 05:38:306 - . 05:37:906 (337906|0) - so this went move to 3col 05:38:306 (338306|2) - This also moves to 1col
- 05:40:706 (340706|2,341106|1) - ctrl+h to follow the PR better. fixed
- 05:47:106 (347106|2,347506|0) - same, swap the column to follow the PR better, then move 05:48:306 (348306|3) - to column 1 to make everything balance again. fixed
- 05:50:306 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7692398 to follow the PR better. changes as suggested
Btw, have you applied Ibrahim's mod? And at least in the future don't just quote modders mod, at least give a simple explanation about which part that you applied or rejected. I forgot to answer that day and I will answer correctly next time.
- Nice HS. thx
And I accepted all the suggestions
all fixedDellvangel wrote:
Little more stuff, no kds.
- Metadata:
Artist: レム(CV:水瀬いのり) -- use ":" after "CV".
Romanised Artist: Rem(CV:Minase Inori) -- use ":" after "CV".
My bad, forgot to tell you about this before xd.- You can add "レム" and "水瀬いのり" to the tags, since there is no space at all in the Artist metadata.
- 02:25:306 (145306|0) - delete soft-hitwhistle2 here since this part doesn't really have any whistle sound.
- 02:55:906 (175906|3) - move to column 2 for hand balance?
- 03:51:906 (231906|1) - move to column 3 looks more balance for me.
- 04:54:306 (294306|1) - move to column 3 would be nice since this part actually still have the same feeling with 04:51:906 (291906|1,292706|1) - .
- 05:29:506 (329506|3,329906|2) - swap the column here? 4 to 3 and 3 to 4, since the pitch on 05:29:906 - is higher.
- 05:47:506 (347506|2,347906|3) - this one too, similar case with previous mod, swap the column here?
thx chicken 'W'W'W'W'W'Fresh Chicken wrote:
I almost slept2017-05-04 22:33 R e m u r i n g: 안농
2017-05-05 19:48 Fresh Chicken: ㄱ
2017-05-05 19:48 R e m u r i n g: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1120251 Rem(CV:Minase Inori) - Wishing [Remu no Nozomi]]
2017-05-05 19:48 R e m u r i n g: ㄱㄱ
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2017-05-05 19:50 Fresh Chicken: 뭘 모딩해야할지 감이 안잡히네 너무 쉬워서
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2017-05-05 19:50 R e m u r i n g: 잡기 진짜 애매함
2017-05-05 19:51 Fresh Chicken: 01:33:506 - 01:35:906 - 다른 부분하고 다르게
2017-05-05 19:52 Fresh Chicken: 롱놋 + 2개씩 썼는데
2017-05-05 19:52 Fresh Chicken: 무슨 이유가 있나?
2017-05-05 19:52 R e m u r i n g: 피아노 소리가
2017-05-05 19:52 R e m u r i n g: 좀 커서 두개를 박긴했는데
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2017-05-05 19:53 Fresh Chicken: 노래 미치겠네
2017-05-05 19:53 Fresh Chicken: 이거 매핑하면서
2017-05-05 19:53 Fresh Chicken: 안졸았어?
2017-05-05 19:53 R e m u r i n g: 졸기만했으면
2017-05-05 19:53 R e m u r i n g: 다행이지
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2017-05-05 19:53 Fresh Chicken: 잤나보군
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2017-05-05 19:55 Fresh Chicken: 02:12:439 (132439|2,132706|1) -
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2017-05-05 20:00 Fresh Chicken: rem minase inori
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2017-05-05 20:00 Fresh Chicken: レム 水瀬いのり
2017-05-05 20:00 Fresh Chicken: 왜넣으래?
2017-05-05 20:00 Fresh Chicken: 이유가뭔데?
2017-05-05 20:00 R e m u r i n g: You can add "レム" and "水瀬いのり" to the tags, since there is no space at all in the Artist metadata.
2017-05-05 20:01 Fresh Chicken: ㄴㄴ 지우셈
2017-05-05 20:02 R e m u r i n g: ㅇㅋ 업로드
2017-05-05 20:02 Fresh Chicken: rem minase inori
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2017-05-05 20:03 R e m u r i n g: rem inori만 지우면되지?
2017-05-05 20:03 Fresh Chicken: 미나세 이노리
2017-05-05 20:03 Fresh Chicken: 를 지우라니꼐
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2017-05-05 20:04 R e m u r i n g: 됫나
2017-05-05 20:05 Fresh Chicken: ㅇㅇ
thx cs moeCritical_Star wrote:
but i love emiliaI LOVE REM =w=
okii here i am 'x' haiiii
just some quick suggestion and we can fly this
Remu no Nozomi
00:42:306 (42306|3,42306|0) - it sound a little too early, i think it should be 1/16 late > 00:42:356 - yeah Sounds at 1/16 So change
01:57:506 (117506|2) - how about move to 4? okay move
02:42:306 - double note like 02:45:506 (165506|2,165506|0) - 02:48:706 (168706|2,168706|3) - ? I added notes
02:51:906 - should be double here as well ^ I added notes
03:03:706 - piano are pretty obvious here, add? oki added
03:19:506 (199506|3,199706|2,199706|1) - suggest > http://puu.sh/vItUF/e8f0e66c0d.png change all suggested pattern
03:26:106 (206106|2,206106|1,206306|0,206306|1,206306|3) - suggest > http://puu.sh/vItWx/fa50ae7c44.png like before, actually the current is fine too ^
04:55:906 (295906|3,296706|0) - it would be nice to CTRL+H them for PR like you did on previous part fixed
04:59:106 (299106|1) - same thing here, u can consider to move this to 3 fixed
05:24:306 (324306|2) - how about move to 4? fixed
Critical_Star wrote:
but i love emilia
yeyy, i love you even more <3Dellvangel wrote:
Critical_Star wrote:
but i love emilia
R e m u r i n g wrote:
Critical_Star wrote:
but i love emiliaI LOVE REM =w=
thx moe >w<please change it to emilia BG then i only qualify your map
alright rechecked and qualified !