1. Cup (1,49 stars, 171 notes)
2. Platter (2,57 stars, 255 notes)
3. Salad (1,74 stars, 161 notes)
4. SYAHME's Mix (4,03 stars, 367 notes)

1. Please unchecked "Enable countdown".
2. Please change hitcircle/slider color combos.
3. Your beatmap has no background image.
4. I think the BPM of this song is 150.010.
5. The notes placing in Cup & Salad is wrong.

1. 00:18:584 (5) - this is 1/4 which is not allowed in Cup, I suggest you to map 1/1 & 1/2 beat snap divisor.
2. 00:24:984 (6) - ^.
3. 01:16:784 - this break is too long, consider to map it.
4. 01:51:484 (5,6) - same as suggestion number one.
5. 01:55:484 (1,2) - ^.
6. 02:03:984 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^.

1. 00:25:284 - I can't hear a potential beat here, please remove.
2. 00:27:684 - ^.
3. 00:37:284 - ^.
4. 00:55:884 (5) - ^.
5. 00:58:884 - ^.
6. 01:00:484 (5) - ^.
7. 01:00:484 (5) - ^.
8. 01:08:484 (4) - ^.
9. 01:16:784 - this break is too long, consider to map it.
10. 01:43:684 (8) - I can't hear a potential beat here, please remove.
11. 01:45:284 (6) - ^.
12. 01:46:884 (6) - ^.
13. 01:50:884 (8) - ^.

SYAHME wrote:

Random mod, not from my modding queue.
[General]

1. Please unchecked "Enable countdown".
2. Please change hitcircle/slider colour combos.
3. Your beatmap has no background image.
4. I think the BPM of this song is 150.010.
5. The notes placing in Cup & Salad is wrong.

[Cup]

1. 00:18:584 (5) - this is 1/4 which is not allowed in Cup, I suggest you to map 1/1 & 1/2 beat snap divisor.
2. 00:24:984 (6) - ^.
3. 01:16:784 - this break is too long, consider to map it.
4. 01:51:484 (5,6) - same as suggestion number one.
5. 01:55:484 (1,2) - ^.
6. 02:03:984 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^.

[Salad]

1. 00:25:284 - I can't hear a potential beat here, please remove.
2. 00:27:684 - ^.
3. 00:37:284 - ^.
4. 00:55:884 (5) - ^.
5. 00:58:884 - ^.
6. 01:00:484 (5) - ^.
7. 01:00:484 (5) - ^.
8. 01:08:484 (4) - ^.
9. 01:16:784 - this break is too long, consider to map it.
10. 01:43:684 (8) - I can't hear a potential beat here, please remove.
11. 01:45:284 (6) - ^.
12. 01:46:884 (6) - ^.
13. 01:50:884 (8) - ^.

Good luck on ranking this & thanks for mod my maps.

xSonataBlaze wrote:

I'll mod some basic things...

General

I do not have much to talk about, but there's one thing that did not suit me:
↪ 00:51:232 - The Kiai effect should start at this minute, because of the beat Ok, added a Kiai
↪ At least I should have a photo on beatmap I know, but nothing has been found yet

Cup

↪ 01:35:978 (1) - Instead of the spinner start in that minute, it should start in this minute - 01:39:378 (1) I don't understand why it should be there, I think everything is fine
↪ 01:55:848 (3) - This part was to start a new combo Added

Salad

↪ 00:34:682 (7) - To not get too many fruits, could start a new combo Added
↪ 00:47:981 (1) - The spinner can start at this minute No, sorry
↪ 01:14:679 (9) - You should narrow the slider a bit. ^

You should narrow the slider a bit
and Good luck on beatmap

xSonataBlaze wrote:

I'll mod some basic things...

General

I do not have much to talk about, but there's one thing that did not suit me:
↪ 00:51:232 - The Kiai effect should start at this minute, because of the beat Ok, added a Kiai
↪ At least I should have a photo on beatmap I know, but nothing has been found yet

Cup

↪ 01:35:978 (1) - Instead of the spinner start in that minute, it should start in this minute - 01:39:378 (1) I don't understand why it should be there, I think everything is fine
↪ 01:55:848 (3) - This part was to start a new combo Added

Salad

↪ 00:34:682 (7) - To not get too many fruits, could start a new combo Added
↪ 00:47:981 (1) - The spinner can start at this minute No, sorry
↪ 01:14:679 (9) - You should narrow the slider a bit. ^

You should narrow the slider a bit
and Good luck on beatmap

Terton wrote:

Sended twice, lol

Terton wrote:

Very long wait.

liuzicheng4732 wrote:

M4M from queue~

Cup

There's no critical problem in this diff. All ranking criteria are met. However, I think you can make the map more interesting in the following ways:

1. 01:16:384 and 01:16:784 are beats. Please make notes on them. Besides, Please map the interval between 01:29:584 - 01:41:984 because the break is too long

2. Introduce 1/2 beats. In your map, all fruits are placed at the 1/1 beat. This is not a problem in a cup, but I do think varying between 1/1 and 1/2 beats can bring the map more fun. For example, between 00:51:184 (1) and 00:57:584 (3), I would suggest the following mods:

00:53:384 - add a note here, and of course you would need to modify the slider
00:54:184 - add a note here
00:55:784 - add a note here
00:56:984 - add a note here

This interval is not the only interval that you could modify, and the way I suggest is not the only way to change. But be careful, the distribution of your notes should be consistent in the repeated pieces of music.

3. Avoid placing consecutive notes at the same x position at stressed beats. I think it is okay to set two consecutive notes at same x coordinates, but don't do this before a hard beat. Make a move!

00:13:984 (3,4) - Move 3 to its left
00:25:184 (4,1) - Move 1 to its right
00:28:384 (1,2) - Move 1 to its left
00:34:784 (1) - Make it tilt
00:51:584 (2,1) - Move 1 to its left
00:57:984 (1,2) - Move 2 to its left
00:59:984 (2,1) - Move 1 to its right
01:09:584 (2,3) - Move 2's tail to its right
01:09:584 (2,3) - Move 2 to its right
01:11:184 (2,1) - Move 1 to its left
01:49:984 (2,1) - Move 2 to its right
01:53:184 (2,1) - Move 2 to its left
02:02:784 (4) - Make it tilt

Salad

00:24:984 (6,7) - There should be a dash between them because the beat is stressed here.
00:57:184 (2) - Move to x:176 or so.
01:02:784 (4,1) - Please manage a dash in between.
01:09:584 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this part is too hard for salad (possibly platter-level). I suggest you cancel the dash between 2&3 Where did you find the dashes here? All that needs to be done is to stand still for a little longer, which can hinder the hasty players.
01:16:784 - Add a note here.
01:42:384 - I'd recommend you add a note here instead of using a slider tail ???
01:45:584 (1,2) - This does not match the rhythm. Maybe this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8710577 is better
01:47:984 (2,3,4) - Same as 01:09:584 (1,2,3,4,5,6) Same as my answer above :^)
01:53:784 (2) - Change it by a single note at 01:53:884 instead
01:58:384 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Please rearrange the pattern something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8710676, or just copy the pattern of
02:01:984 (1,2) - Make them tilt!

Platter

This one's better than the previous two

00:25:183 (7,1) - I think here it needs a hyperdash.
00:30:983 (5,6) - This one is a edge dash. Please either decrease their gap or make it hyper.
00:34:183 (5,6) - ^
00:34:783 (1,2) - ^
00:50:383 (3) - This is an anti-flow after a hyperdash, which is not allowed in ranking criteria. There are many way to fix it and you can see which one you like best.
01:03:783 (5,6) - At least you should make a gap between them, if you don't make it a hyper.
01:05:383 (5,1) - This is an anti-flow after a hyperdash.
01:12:183 (1,2,3,4,5) - This flow is really hard and maybe not suitable for platter. I'd suggest you decrease the gaps between 2,3&4
01:29:582 - 01:35:982 - I think you should map this interval.
01:42:382 (2,1) - This is an anti-flow after a hyperdash.
01:45:982 (1,2,3,4) - It may be better if you make them move more, not staying in the same vertical position
01:47:982 (2,1,1) - There are edge dashes in between. I think you can decrease the gaps in between
01:54:782 (2,1) - Maybe make a hyperdash between?
02:07:182 (4,5) - ^

SYAHME's Mix

This diff.'s pattern fits very well with the rhythm. I like it

I'll ask SYAHME about it

00:25:383 (2,1) - I'd suggest to make a hyperdash here, but keep it if you have your own idea.
00:38:182 (2,3) - Please make a hyper here.
01:02:980 (1,2,3,4) - A little bit overdose, but it's good though.

Cool song choice and good luck with the map!

Hehe >.<

1. 00:28:184 (7,1) - Cup Diff? This one needs a dash to reach it while in cup you don't need any dash. Move it to x : 224
2. 00:53:584 (5) - Move it a bit near to the left
3. 00:56:784 (1,2,3,4,5) - If you want. Make the patterns simillar like this. Much easier. Click
4. 01:42:784 (2,3) - Like this ? Easy pattern for newbies. Click
5. 01:44:784 (3) - CTRL + G This?
6. 01:45:384 (4) - Move to x: 288

1. 00:19:184 (1) - CTRL + H then x : 60. Better vision
2. 00:19:984 (3) - ^ . But move this one to x : 284
3. 00:25:384 (7) - x : 120. Too far. Newbies will always have shitmiss in there
4. 01:31:184 (3,4) - If you want. Make this a slider as well
5. If you agree with ^ . Make the 01:31:584 (4) - like this with 01:31:184 (3) -
6. 01:34:384 (3) - After dashing. Give them a bit room for breathing. Do it like this and move to x : 168

1. 00:31:383 (7) - x : 104 . Better for me.
2. 00:45:583 (1,1,1) - Remove NC
3. 00:47:983 (5) - Add NC
4. 01:31:782 (5) - Move to x : 272
5. 01:32:782 (6) - NC
6. 01:34:382 (4) - x : 248 is better
7. 01:39:982 (1,2) - Move to x : 208. that 3 Hdash xd
8. 01:42:582 (3) - x : 280. Reduce spacing
9. 01:48:382 (1) - x : 368 ?

1. 00:52:981 (1) - Make it vertical slider? Nerf it a bit
2. 00:59:380 (1) - ^
3. 01:00:180 (1) - ^
4. 01:44:877 (3) - Move to x : 336
5. 01:46:677 (3) - x : 304
6. 01:46:977 (1) - Reduce it's spacing. x : 176

Skycreeper- wrote:

Hello. From my NM Queue
Sry for coming late. I had many things to do before >.<

[General]
If you want. Set the "Stack Leniency" as Always stack. I did this before on your map before modding it

Hehe >.<

[Cup]

1. 00:28:184 (7,1) - Cup Diff? This one needs a dash to reach it while in cup you don't need any dash. Move it to x : 224
2. 00:53:584 (5) - Move it a bit near to the left
3. 00:56:784 (1,2,3,4,5) - If you want. Make the patterns simillar like this. Much easier. Click I don't understand why you all don't like this pattern, but okay
4. 01:42:784 (2,3) - Like this ? Easy pattern for newbies. Click
5. 01:44:784 (3) - CTRL + G This?
6. 01:45:384 (4) - Move to x: 288

[Salad]

1. 00:19:184 (1) - CTRL + H then x : 60. Better vision
2. 00:19:984 (3) - ^ . But move this one to x : 284
3. 00:25:384 (7) - x : 120. Too far. Newbies will always have shitmiss in there Changed, but moved to x:100
4. 01:31:184 (3,4) - If you want. Make this a slider as well
5. If you agree with ^ . Make the 01:31:584 (4) - like this with 01:31:184 (3) - Changed, but Ctrl+H it
6. 01:34:384 (3) - After dashing. Give them a bit room for breathing. Do it like this and move to x : 168

[Platter]

1. 00:31:383 (7) - x : 104 . Better for me.
2. 00:45:583 (1,1,1) - Remove NC I didn't change this, because I specially singled out this moment NC
3. 00:47:983 (5) - Add NC
4. 01:31:782 (5) - Move to x : 272 Moved to x:224
5. 01:32:782 (6) - NC
6. 01:34:382 (4) - x : 248 is better
7. 01:39:982 (1,2) - Move to x : 208. that 3 Hdash xd No, because I like this pattern
8. 01:42:582 (3) - x : 280. Reduce spacing
9. 01:48:382 (1) - x : 368 ?

[Syahme's Mix]

Waiting for SYAHME. I think he's really busy and idk when he come again.

1. 00:52:981 (1) - Make it vertical slider? Nerf it a bit
2. 00:59:380 (1) - ^
3. 01:00:180 (1) - ^
4. 01:44:877 (3) - Move to x : 336
5. 01:46:677 (3) - x : 304
6. 01:46:977 (1) - Reduce it's spacing. x : 176

Good Luck with the beatmap >.<)/

liuzicheng4732 wrote:

M4M from queue~

SYAHME's Mix

This diff.'s pattern fits very well with the rhythm. I like it - Nice

00:25:383 (2,1) - I'd suggest to make a hyperdash here, but keep it if you have your own idea. - Sorry, it is nice without hyperdash.
00:38:182 (2,3) - Please make a hyper here. - Larger the distance a little bit.
01:02:980 (1,2,3,4) - A little bit overdose, but it's good though. - I think it fit well with the rhythm.

Cool song choice and good luck with the map! - Nice and thank you

Skycreeper- wrote:

Hello. From my NM Queue
Sry for coming late. I had many things to do before >.< - It is okay tho, I'm busy too.

[General]
If you want. Set the "Stack Leniency" as Always stack. I did this before on your map before modding it

Hehe >.<

[Syahme's Mix]

1. 00:52:981 (1) - Make it vertical slider? Nerf it a bit - I think the pattern is okay.
2. 00:59:380 (1) - ^ - ^.
3. 01:00:180 (1) - ^ - ^.
4. 01:44:877 (3) - Move to x : 336 - It fit well with hyperdash.
5. 01:46:677 (3) - x : 304 - ^.
6. 01:46:977 (1) - Reduce it's spacing. x : 176 - The distance is okay to me.

Good Luck with the beatmap >.<)/ - Thank you