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Nao Tomori

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Nao Tomori 2016-11-01T00:43:54+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, May 31, 2017 at 8:15:16 AM

Artist: Junpei Fujita
Title: Deadlock
Source: グリザイアの果実 -LE FRUIT DE LA GRISAIA-
Tags: eroge the fruit of the grisaia visual novel game yahuri hobbes2
BPM: 144
Filesize: 5316kb
Play Time: 01:33
Difficulties Available:

Angelic (3.84 stars, 271 notes)
Hobbes2's Normal (1.84 stars, 164 notes)
Yahuri's Hard (2.74 stars, 218 notes)

Download: Junpei Fujita - Deadlock
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
mp3 from Kocari
Normal by Hobbes2
Hard by Yahuri
Angelic by me

juicy yuuji

angelic howl best route

metadata

http://lantis.jp/release-item/LACA-9207.html
http://media.vgm.io/albums/85/22458/224 ... 703252.jpg
https://puu.sh/w3jLY/677f52c558.jpg

Last edited by Nao Tomori 2017-05-31T13:15:41+00:00, edited 51 times in total.

Izzywing

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Izzywing 2016-11-08T05:36:41+00:00

Saw your GD request, can't say I like the song enough sorry

bump me when you finish the set and I"ll give it a free mod c:

Nao Tomori

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Nao Tomori 2016-11-08T05:45:41+00:00

holy shit my diff is bad

Danii

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Danii 2017-02-21T18:16:22+00:00

hi, m4m from your queue

[Juicy]

00:14:528 (3,1) - maybe move note left? this overlap looks really bad
00:17:028 (7) - why you skip sound at the blue tick? don't hesitate hard patterns since its high diff, make here kickslider
00:19:111 (4,5) - looks not very aesthetically, symmetry are totally lost
00:25:152 (6,1) - swap nc
00:30:361 (6,1) - ^
00:36:611 (5) - same as a 00:17:028 (7) -
00:39:736 (1,4) - swap nc
00:51:819 (7,1) - ^
00:54:527 (3) - there are no such strong sound for this repeat, just put note
00:58:486 (1,2,3,1) - sounds with every slider become stronger and stronger, overlaps would fit better
01:01:819 (4) - nc?
01:10:361 (1,2) - maybe use 1/1 notes as you did it 01:07:028 (1,2) - ? imo rhythm would better
01:08:694 (1,4,5,6) - try to avoid overlaps
01:22:861 (3) - i can see many triples through your map, but its the only one place when you do repeat slider, its strange

Nao Tomori

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Nao Tomori 2017-02-26T23:01:36+00:00

Danii wrote:
hi, m4m from your queue

[Juicy]
00:14:528 (3,1) - maybe move note left? this overlap looks really bad
00:17:028 (7) - why you skip sound at the blue tick? don't hesitate hard patterns since its high diff, make here kickslider
00:19:111 (4,5) - looks not very aesthetically, symmetry are totally lost
00:25:152 (6,1) - swap nc
00:30:361 (6,1) - ^
00:36:611 (5) - same as a 00:17:028 (7) -
00:39:736 (1,4) - swap nc
00:51:819 (7,1) - ^
00:54:527 (3) - there are no such strong sound for this repeat, just put note
00:58:486 (1,2,3,1) - sounds with every slider become stronger and stronger, overlaps would fit better i repeat this pattern at 00:22:444 (1) -
01:01:819 (4) - nc?
01:10:361 (1,2) - maybe use 1/1 notes as you did it 01:07:028 (1,2) - ? imo rhythm would better
01:08:694 (1,4,5,6) - try to avoid overlaps
01:22:861 (3) - i can see many triples through your map, but its the only one place when you do repeat slider, its strange

no reply = fix

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2017-03-04T15:02:41+00:00

Hello! M4M for #modreqs!

[Juicy]

CS 6 lolololol

00:48:486 (7,1) - 00:51:819 (7,1) - NC swap.
01:28:278 (7) - This Ctrl+G? cuz flowing better imo lol
01:31:819 (1) - This delete and.. 01:31:819 - note add 01:31:923 ~ 01:33:694 - spiner here better imo

GL! very good map :3

Nao Tomori

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Nao Tomori 2017-03-17T08:32:30+00:00

all changed

Yahuri

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Yahuri 2017-03-27T03:54:18+00:00

this has everything EXCEPT your diff

https://puu.sh/uZKhV/456f66562c.osz

-remove the kazuki picture?
-you can do the audio file adjustments, i dont know how loud you want them to be

sorry for shit timeliness pls forgive me ;w;

Izzywing

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Izzywing 2017-03-27T15:21:37+00:00

Hobbes2 wrote:
Saw your GD request, can't say I like the song enough sorry

SPOILER

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TitleUnicode:Deadlock
Artist:Junpei Fujita
ArtistUnicode:Junpei Fujita
Creator:Nao Tomori
Version:Hobbes2's Normal
Source:グリザイアの果実 -LE FRUIT DE LA GRISAIA-
Tags:eroge the fruit of the grisaia visual novel game
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Nao Tomori

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Topic Starter

Nao Tomori 2017-03-28T02:11:55+00:00

i like the kazuki bg tho but its spoilers so rip lol

[hobbes2's normal]
00:04:335 (2,3,4,1) - rly big density spike here for some reason
00:08:502 (1) - yea
00:32:668 (2,3) - this is kinda weird cuz that piano note is pretty strong, imo just follow that
00:35:793 (1,2,3,1) - plz follow piano here move everything up by 1/2 beat
01:31:002 (2,3,4) - really strong note on slider end here

Izzywing

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Joined March 2016

Izzywing 2017-03-28T21:37:21+00:00

Naotoshi wrote:
i like the kazuki bg tho but its spoilers so rip lol

[hobbes2's normal]
00:04:335 (2,3,4,1) - rly big density spike here for some reason
00:08:502 (1) - yea
00:32:668 (2,3) - this is kinda weird cuz that piano note is pretty strong, imo just follow that whats wrong tho i follow the piano note and then the drum tick on 00:33:085 - ? you mean cos the piano's extended? eh im confused
00:35:793 (1,2,3,1) - plz follow piano here move everything up by 1/2 beat I did try this, but its worse than what I have now. the piano itself isnt even snapped to the red and white ticks.
01:31:002 (2,3,4) - really strong note on slider end here looks like you fixed this for me

cool

fuk

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Yahuri

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Joined July 2014

Yahuri 2017-03-30T08:29:15+00:00

uwu

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Title:Deadlock
TitleUnicode:Deadlock
Artist:Junpei Fujita
ArtistUnicode:Junpei Fujita
Creator:Naotoshi
Version:Yahuri's Advanced
Source:グリザイアの果実 -LE FRUIT DE LA GRISAIA-
Tags:eroge the fruit of the grisaia visual novel game
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dont know if i was able to completely address the issues, but it should be at least better
didnt save the log so rip if i missed anything important
-added more flow changes
-made beginning less dense on clicks

here u go
https://puu.sh/v41i3/1016c259a1.wav
https://puu.sh/v41ig/eb1be4233a.wav
https://puu.sh/v41iD/4618d53d65.wav

and again
https://puu.sh/v48oG/54dabf328e.zip

Last edited by Yahuri 2017-03-31T04:48:54+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Electoz

1,886 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2017-03-31T04:25:01+00:00

[Hobbes2's Normal]

00:04:335 (2,3,4,1) - Looks so dense compared with everything else around that part.
00:14:543 (2,3) - Stacks don't really play well when the below object is weaker than the top.
00:28:710 (1) - That long slider is not really necessary imo, how about something like this?
00:37:877 (2) - These are totally different than 00:36:418 (2,3,1) so the rhythm here should be different, imo even 2 circles here is still reasonable as you can discern different sounds with different rhythms.
00:55:168 (1,1) - Not sure why these aesthetics are intended like this when other things are pretty much a different style.
01:09:335 - This would be more significant to map than 01:09:127 imo
01:11:418 (4,1,2,3) - [url=puu.sh/v43Sn/aa4ba50287.PNG]This[/url] would be a lot more interesting to map tbh. Well you can use sliders instead of circles, but you get my point.

The song is too chaotic to the point where we need to pin the rhythms down before going any further.

[Yahuri's Advanced]

01:07:861 (3,1) - Why suddenly a 1/1 gap when you didn't do this anywhere earlier zz
Overall I disagree your rhythm choices as they focused too much on minor sounds to the point where they lose emphasizes on the more important ones or even the main melody, like:
1. 00:01:194 would be more emphasized with a hold sound while 00:01:402 is really minor and not necessarily need to be mapped.
2. 01:20:361 (1) - The rhythm here is slightly different from 01:19:528 (3,4) so the way it was represented should be different too, I would use a 1/1 slider+circle instead of 01:20:361 (1,2) .
3. Et cetera, I can point more things out but it would just being me telling my own interpretation of the song so there's that.

[Juicy]

00:00:361 (1,2) - 00:02:444 (2,3,4) - Not sure why you treated these differently despite being the same sound.
00:14:111 (2) - Could be 2 circles as these beats are equally prominent.
00:16:819 (4,5,6) - The stack doesn't play really well since the most prominent thing is 00:16:819 (4) and it's on top so there isn't any much emphasis on it, technically it should be at the bottom of the stack so something like this would prioritize the beats better according to their importance.
00:17:236 (7,8) - Should be changed to a 1/4 slider with a similar stack reasoning as above.
00:19:319 (2,3,4) - The pattern is arranged with 3 sliders but 00:19:319 (2) - is not musically the same as 00:19:736 (3,4) .
00:22:444 (1,2,3,4) - Like, there should be a better placement than this because stacking 00:22:444 (1,4) doesn’t reflect anything related to the song, the pattern would make more sense if they’re arranged in the way that 4 sliders are visually related, currently 00:24:319 (4) looks so random.
00:24:944 (5,1) - And these aren't rhythmically the same as 00:22:444 (1,2,3,4) anymore so it should be sth different than just repeating the flow with similar placements.
00:30:777 (3,4,6) - Don't stack reverse arrow pls.
Tbh overall the diff lacks structure, some patterns aren't really executed in a way that they could reflect the song properly, rhythms can be improved more too imo. I also would like to know if you have any reasoning/concept behind your spacings, because I don't understand some stuff you did like 00:12:236 (2,3,4) - 00:21:611 (2,3) - etc and idk if you have any solid reasoning/concept behind these.

Also the song at some point has 1/6 snaps but I don't feel like figuring them out zz

Yahuri

1,400 posts

Joined July 2014

Yahuri 2017-03-31T05:02:07+00:00

instrumental mapping is rip

Electoz wrote:
[Yahuri's Advanced]
01:07:861 (3,1) - Why suddenly a 1/1 gap when you didn't do this anywhere earlier zz i just felt like there wasnt anything worth mapping here xd
Overall I disagree your rhythm choices as they focused too much on minor sounds to the point where they lose emphasizes on the more important ones or even the main melody, like:
00:01:194 would be more emphasized with a hold sound while 00:01:402 is really minor and not necessarily need to be mapped. ok
01:20:361 (1) - The rhythm here is slightly different from 01:19:528 (3,4) so the way it was represented should be different too, I would use a 1/1 slider+circle instead of 01:20:361 (1,2) . in both cases, the first slider has a finish and the second slider has a clap. i tried showing the rhythm difference in piano by using straight vs curved sliders.
Et cetera, I can point more things out but it would just being me telling my own interpretation of the song so there's that.

i'll continue working on cutting down note density and whatever, but no changes yet

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2017-04-02T11:02:43+00:00

[General]

missing combo colors try those :

[Colours]
Combo1 : 140,140,140
Combo2 : 124,175,233
Combo3 : 89,192,71

AIMod :
Adding GDers to tags!
Why there's no hitsounds?

[Juicy]
00:20:569 (5) - consider unstack and maybe move it to x403 y178
00:20:778 (1) - why? like you skipping beats here
00:53:486 (5) - please make this shape more even it's fcking ugly
01:06:611 (4) - more spacing please for this loud downbeat thx
[]
can't find anything on lower diffs..
gl

Yahuri

1,400 posts

Joined July 2014

Yahuri 2017-04-19T06:18:01+00:00

more nerfing xd

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 39945
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13694,27027
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Deadlock
TitleUnicode:Deadlock
Artist:Junpei Fujita
ArtistUnicode:Junpei Fujita
Creator:Naotoshi
Version:Yahuri's Advanced
Source:グリザイアの果実 -LE FRUIT DE LA GRISAIA-
Tags:eroge the fruit of the grisaia visual novel game
BeatmapID:1252032
BeatmapSetID:527942

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"0020.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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92027,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
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Combo3 : 95,125,248
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de-nerf mod

01:04:527 (4) raise kiai difficulty
make jumps -> 1.5x DS

de-nerfed code

osu file format v14

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[Metadata]
Title:Deadlock
TitleUnicode:Deadlock
Artist:Junpei Fujita
ArtistUnicode:Junpei Fujita
Creator:Naotoshi
Version:Yahuri's Advanced
Source:グリザイアの果実 -LE FRUIT DE LA GRISAIA-
Tags:eroge the fruit of the grisaia visual novel game
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idk to wat extent u want me to increase the rhythm difficulty but i did some stuff

ne0ku

38 posts

Joined May 2015

ne0ku 2017-05-01T00:24:50+00:00

~~Hello there!~~ Hi! From #modreqs

I had a look at Angelic and there is really not a lot to change. But there are a few maybe's that you could check.

Angelic

00:56:402 (3) - Ctrl + g? Keeps consistency with the slider at 00:54:736 (1) - and also goes nicely with the lower note in the song as it's a downwards facing slider.

01:26:611 (5) - Ctrl + g? Feels more fluent, but I know you're trying to keep consistent with other sliders that are the same.

This is weird, ~~I know~~

Your beatmaps background involves a guy riding the bike at what seems a fast pace, and considering your map and song isn't the fastest, maybe you wanna change it? I know backgrounds don't really mean much but still, worth mentioning.

Sorry that I didn't add much, but I cannot see anything that wrong. Angelic seems by far good enough to be ranked, so I wish you luck!

- neoku

defiance

503 posts

Joined July 2015

defiance 2017-05-01T00:49:19+00:00

nao tomori.

General

y does the advanced have a kiai and not the other diffs

Hobbes diff has conflicting tags, a different offseT

get some combo colors nao owo

you should like make the bg max rankable size, http://waifu2x.udp.jp/

Hobbzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz normal

barely curved sliders are SEX

nice

Yahuri's Advanced

yheja this is p good 2 lmao

Angelic

here is a stack mod for ya

00:07:861 (3) - Is This Supposed To Be Stacked

00:13:902 (1) - god is dead

00:45:152 (1) - nao pls

00:54:111 (2) - pls

01:00:777 (2) - grate osu mapping skills

Good Luck Nao Tomori

Yahuri

1,400 posts

Joined July 2014

Yahuri 2017-05-01T04:41:56+00:00

ya

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 39945
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13694,27027
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Deadlock
TitleUnicode:Deadlock
Artist:Junpei Fujita
ArtistUnicode:Junpei Fujita
Creator:Naotoshi
Version:Yahuri's Advanced
Source:グリザイアの果実 -LE FRUIT DE LA GRISAIA-
Tags:eroge the fruit of the grisaia visual novel game yahuri hobbes2
BeatmapID:1252032
BeatmapSetID:527942

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"0020.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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60361,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
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anna apple

1,245 posts

Joined March 2014

anna apple 2017-05-01T05:55:00+00:00

irc

2017-04-30 22:34 pyroflayer: 00:16:611 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 
2017-04-30 22:42 pyroflayer: 01:14:736 (4,5,1) - 
2017-04-30 22:46 pyroflayer: yahuri -> remap kds pls
2017-04-30 22:46 pyroflayer: hobbes2 -> gj
2017-04-30 22:46 pyroflayer: LOL
2017-04-30 22:46 Naotoshi: o
2017-04-30 22:46 Naotoshi: k
2017-04-30 22:47 pyroflayer: problem for me is, yahuri has the option for a bit more diversity in rhyth, but then choses to swap between two instruments a bit too frequently without real reason to in attempt to map everything 
2017-04-30 22:47 pyroflayer: or at least it seems that way
2017-04-30 22:47 Naotoshi: mm
2017-04-30 22:47 Naotoshi: my diff does same  thing
2017-04-30 22:47 Naotoshi: the song lends itself to that
2017-04-30 22:48 pyroflayer: eh
2017-04-30 22:48 pyroflayer: but you do it better
2017-04-30 22:48 Naotoshi: hm
2017-04-30 22:49 pyroflayer: like 00:00:361 (1,2,3,4) -  and 00:03:694 (1,2,3) - are the same musicallyu
2017-04-30 22:50 pyroflayer: well at least from the synth'd piano
2017-04-30 22:51 Naotoshi: i see what you mean
2017-04-30 22:51 Naotoshi: ok
2017-04-30 22:51 pyroflayer: but uh
2017-04-30 22:51 pyroflayer: (fuk this song tbh)
2017-04-30 22:52 Naotoshi: yea lol
2017-04-30 22:52 pyroflayer: i don't wanna say much else cuz feeling a little sick rn 
2017-04-30 22:52 Naotoshi: np
2017-04-30 22:52 Naotoshi: feel better
2017-04-30 22:52 pyroflayer: thank :^)

also mentioned was no bg on hobbes after bg switch

sorry for the flame

Yukiyo

425 posts

Joined June 2014

Yukiyo 2017-05-01T12:41:52+00:00

Hello love this song so I did some stuff C:
Can't really mod Normal sorry ^^"
Nao is god

[yahuri's advanced]
gonna talk about rhythm choice in the map here

00:03:694 (1,2,3) - and 00:00:361 (1,2,3,4) - are musically identical, how come they are mapped so differently?

00:08:277 (5,1) - i think this rhythm choice could be improved.
a rhythm like http://puu.sh/vBY5q/4e37283a90.jpg starting at 00:08:277 - follows the melody piano better. your current rhythm places it on a slider end then reverts to mapping the ostinato piano , which takes emphasis off of the held out note unnecessarily.
additionally, ctrl g on 00:09:111 (2,3) - has the same effect of following the piano and allowing the melody to be clickable.
00:09:944 (4) - having this as a 1/1 slider puts a really strong note that has a trill leading up to it on a slider end as well, leading up to 00:10:569 (1) - a weaker note being clickable. overall not the best way to go about things.

00:15:152 (6,1) - here i also suggest replacing these with a 1/1 slider. 00:15:152 - is basically a quieter progression of the note at 00:14:527 - so following it the same way makes sense.

00:21:402 (4,1) - here i believe placing 4 at 00:21:611 - works better since it follows that main string melody. the red tick rhythm here is really quiet and not worth doing imo.

00:32:653 (2) - doesn't it make sense to put a 1/1 slider here? it'd follow the loud piano a bit better imo.

00:33:694 (1,2,3,4) - i'd advise a rhythm like http://puu.sh/vC1nv/7b95a02b54.jpg to follow the chimes a bit more closely.

00:36:402 (2,4) - imo it isn't that important to follow all the quiet snare shit here, just putting 1/1 circles on the piano could create a nice effect like at 00:37:027 (1,2) - .

01:03:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - imo a rhythm like http://puu.sh/vC1CO/2f1ff86e3a.jpg suits the build up better. having a 1/1 space seems anticlimactic to me.

mostly focused on intro cuz thats where the song is a shitty ass clusterfuck of random sounds, kiai is fine

Yahuri

1,400 posts

Joined July 2014

Yahuri 2017-05-02T00:51:18+00:00

Yukiyo wrote:
Hello love this song so I did some stuff C:
Can't really mod Normal sorry ^^"
Nao is god

[yahuri's advanced]
gonna talk about rhythm choice in the map here

00:03:694 (1,2,3) - and 00:00:361 (1,2,3,4) - are musically identical, how come they are mapped so differently? ?? the pitches are different, the pattern here 00:00:361 (1,2) contains drums as well. 00:03:902 - is much weaker than the other iteration. 00:04:111 (2) - i could switch this into 1/2 + circle though, but 00:04:527 is still weaker than the other iteration imo

00:08:277 (5,1) - i think this rhythm choice could be improved.
a rhythm like http://puu.sh/vBY5q/4e37283a90.jpg starting at 00:08:277 - follows the melody piano better. your current rhythm places it on a slider end then reverts to mapping the ostinato piano , which takes emphasis off of the held out note unnecessarily.
additionally, ctrl g on 00:09:111 (2,3) - has the same effect of following the piano and allowing the melody to be clickable.
00:09:944 (4) - having this as a 1/1 slider puts a really strong note that has a trill leading up to it on a slider end as well, leading up to 00:10:569 (1) - a weaker note being clickable. overall not the best way to go about things. my original intention was to map it out like a weird slider so that there's still a hold/emphasis throughout the trill anyways, fixed to the rhythm in the picture

00:15:152 (6,1) - here i also suggest replacing these with a 1/1 slider. 00:15:152 - is basically a quieter progression of the note at 00:14:527 - so following it the same way makes sense. i hear it. nice catch

00:21:402 (4,1) - here i believe placing 4 at 00:21:611 - works better since it follows that main string melody. the red tick rhythm here is really quiet and not worth doing imo. wew guess i missed the strings entrance

00:32:653 (2) - doesn't it make sense to put a 1/1 slider here? it'd follow the loud piano a bit better imo. i want to map the drums as well

00:33:694 (1,2,3,4) - i'd advise a rhythm like http://puu.sh/vC1nv/7b95a02b54.jpg to follow the chimes a bit more closely. i guess nao fixed this for me already lmao i dont remember what i had before

00:36:402 (2,4) - imo it isn't that important to follow all the quiet snare shit here, just putting 1/1 circles on the piano could create a nice effect like at 00:37:027 (1,2) - . the thing is, i also hear a bunch of piano glissando stuff and whatever around 2 and 4, so deleting those would completely miss that stuff. then putting another circle here 00:37:236 would just be a lot of circles at once xd

01:03:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - imo a rhythm like http://puu.sh/vC1CO/2f1ff86e3a.jpg suits the build up better. having a 1/1 space seems anticlimactic to me. good point, fixed

mostly focused on intro cuz thats where the song is a shitty ass clusterfuck yes of random sounds, kiai is fine

Thanks!
00:49:944 (4) - still kinda sounds like a ghost note
00:57:027 (1) - same

asdkjasd

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204,149,86194,2,0,L|227:66,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,36,86611,2,0,L|374:57,1,80,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,152,87027,6,0,B|440:196|418:227|418:227|381:241|381:241|349:266,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
289,320,87653,1,2,0:0:0:0:
235,259,87861,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,205,88069,1,8,0:0:0:0:
263,131,88278,2,0,P|226:113|186:110,1,80,0|0,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
108,116,88694,5,0,0:0:0:0:
48,169,88903,1,8,0:0:0:0:
79,285,89111,2,0,L|102:368,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,337,89528,2,0,P|213:323|253:324,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,360,89944,1,8,0:3:0:0:
372,296,90152,6,0,B|404:271|404:271|441:257|441:257|463:226|467:182,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,110,90778,2,0,P|391:104|356:88,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,52,91194,1,10,0:0:0:0:
213,88,91403,1,2,0:0:0:0:
141,51,91611,1,10,0:0:0:0:
34,105,91819,5,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,92028,12,0,93694,0:0:0:0:

Swell

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Joined October 2013

Swell 2017-05-06T03:43:47+00:00

Hobbes2

ugly sliders

Yahuri

00:03:694 (1,2,3) - Just want some clarification on this rhythm. Just seems odd that you're mapping the music box riff at first and then don't follow it the second time it comes around.

00:20:777 (3,4,5) - This really kills momentum I think when you were mapping so densely before. But I'm not sure if there's much if you can do about it.

00:56:402 (3,1) - strong sound on slider end I'd either go something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8011880 or place a note on each red tick

Angelic

00:13:277 (2,3) - so I guess my only issue is that this 1/2 has about as big of spacing as your 1/1s later in the map. While 1/2 rhythms mapped to similar sounds are given significantly less spacing.

00:38:486 (5) - this doesn't matter as much but I'd like this much better as a stream more than a multireverse

01:06:611 (5,6) - same thing here I guess. 5,6 have the same tone so they should be the same spacing as the last 4 sliders. The following NC is where the piano has a sudden loud chord so you could make the jump there instead.

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