Kotringo - Harmonia · forum

Xayler

Joined November 2013

Xayler 2016-11-14T17:39:22+00:00

Hey, M4M from my queue.

General
I see that the Normal difficulty is missing? Since the spread between the last 3 difficulties are perfect while the gap between Easy and Advanced is basically 2 times higher.

01's Easy
Lots of blanket issues in this difficulty, I wont mention them so check them all.
00:24:890 (2,3) - The flow from (2) to (3) is not so good. Move (3) a bit right.
00:34:309 (4,2) - Don't overlap notes like this.
01:10:739 (4,1) - Bad flow, rotate (1) by 30 and move it linear with (4).
01:44:382 (2) - Move it down a bit.
01:43:513 (1,3) - Avoid the overlap here.
01:44:382 (2,1) - ^
02:10:856 (1,3) - ^ You can overlap them only if sliderhead or slidertail are completely overlapping eachother, keep it in mind for Easy difficulty.
02:17:472 (1) - Move it a bit down because the curve is a bit bad for this slider so the flow is ruined otherwise.

Advanced
00:13:961 - Add a circle here as the vocal starts from here.
01:00:240 (4,1) - This overlap doesn't look so good, even if it's almost unseen. Maybe place (1) on top of that slider? So move everything before it accordingly.
Nice diff!

Rocket's Hard
00:13:962 - Same as Advanced.
Otherwise nothing really to say, perfect! Really liking the way how you use the sliders!

Blue Skies
00:51:668 (6,1) - Increase the spacing between these since (6) is kinda loud note and the flow to (1) is better that way.
01:12:025 (8,1) - What about same curves for them? Feels more cleaner that way.
01:21:025 (1,3,4,5) - Avoid this overlap.

Nice set and peaceful song, nothing much to mod here, have a star! Good luck!
My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/533181

HappyRocket88

4,321 posts

Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2016-11-14T17:52:12+00:00

Xayler wrote:
Rocket's Hard
00:13:962 - Same as Advanced. Fixed! >w<
Otherwise nothing really to say, perfect! Really liking the way how you use the sliders! Thank you very much! \w/

Ora!!! Please, use this code instead of the one I posted above this post. /w\

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Source:心が叫びたがってるんだ
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BounceBabe

1,626 posts

Joined October 2010

BounceBabe 2016-11-15T13:55:19+00:00

HappyRocket88 wrote:
Additional Feedback

What I liked: Really well detailed mods as always. It's really good that you explain your mods specifically in the parts where you have a concern because it does show you looked up at your map and actually want to help.
What I disliked: The main concept of how spacing should be biased over Hard difficulties. Back in times, and I guess you'd already modded a diff of mine, the spacing was an issue all the time because it wasn't consistent. Nowadays, having those minor inconsistencies aren't an issue anymore due to it doesn't affect gameplay as much as it was tough. Having slight changes and minor differences among the notes doesn't mean it becomes unrankable or omgft-this-must-be fixed things.
What you could improve: I really liked that you explained the overall issue/problem/concern and gave a deep-full explanation about them however, it would have been cooler if you had provided examples or screenshots specifying how to fix it. It's nice to tell the problem but is nicer if you tell how you would like to be fixed.

Thanks for the feedback!

Wall of text if you care for a reply :p

I try to keep my mods consistent for beginners and experienced modders equally. I also am very strict about consistency because I believe that mapping should reflect the music. Thus, consistency is important to me, be it spacing, patterns, rhythm, CP, ... . That's why I point out a lot of spacing issues that I think need addressing as they seem crucial to me about whether the fluency, style and structure works of each mapset or difficulty. When patterns contradict musically and in consistency then I always wonder too what intentions the mappers had. May it be variety, style, you name it. A well structured mapset is key to quality for me.

I only provide screens and suggestions (and more explanation) when I feel like a certain way would work best for specific patterns or help fixing a certain issue or when I feel like new mappers need guidance. I don't necessarily add too many when I think mappers already have enough experience to find their best way of adjusting and fixing issues.

Though, I like to detail my mods since everyone can always improve in a way and if they already understand the issue and know how to fix it, they will skip the rest. In the end, they will remember their issues, my advice and ultimately become aware of mistakes themselves in the future. That's what's important to me. It will help mappers adjust, expand and develop their style.

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2016-11-19T16:36:01+00:00

Hi!
NM from my Queue~ ( つ･`д･´)っ

[General]

Where is the Normal diff?

[01's Easy]

00:15:033 (2,4) - Imperfect blanket.
00:23:604 (4,1) - Fix a blanket, should be better.
00:34:737 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket.
01:18:882 (4) - Add clap
01:21:025 (3,4) - Align I these two notes there.
01:49:601 (5,1) - Inconsistent spacing (x0.96)
02:05:821 (3) - Weird slider, it's not beautiful, fix this properly
02:17:058 (3,1) - Inconsistent spacing (x0.94)

I honestly think that this difficulty would need a lot of work aesthetic wise and spacing wise. This diff just got remapped (i think) but it needs further reworking/polishing on your end because it lacks structure and consistency.

[Advanced]

00:43:311 (5,6) - Not blanket?
01:02:168 (1) - Make a better overlap with 01:00:240 (4) - Like this
01:15:025 (3,1) - Imperfect blanket on the end of the slider 1
01:57:212 (8,4) - You need to stack this, because the rest of all your overlaps is stack, so if you don't stack this, should be inconsistent.

[Hard]

00:54:454 (3) - Just my preference but I would have put it straight (no curved) should be nice.
02:08:968 (4,2) - They contact
02:19:126 (1,2) - If this is supposed to be a blanket then it can be improved, try reshaping 02:19:126 (1) a bit for a better symmetry.

That's all for me!

GOOD LUCK FOR YOUR MAP!

Perklone

86 posts

Joined January 2014

Perklone 2016-11-20T03:34:23+00:00

reminder to all modder to not mod my diff atm, totally reworking it for better aesthetic and flows. thank you!

LordRaika

Elite Mapper

1,438 posts

Joined September 2013

LordRaika 2016-11-21T03:22:17+00:00

Uhh, so as requested, im here...
sry for the wait, too busy... srsly...
i still have so much things to do and things to fix but to make it short, i will be to the point

Not much to be hitsound here, but i do found some good sound to be hitsound which is the songs main bell or you could call it "drum-ride" type sound type thats really caught my attention... aside from the very low sound of clap/snare so here it is :

Bell -ish sound

as for the main bell, i remade a new one, which has good length and type for that...

>>> LR_Chm Bell M.wav <<<
you could simply name this as soft-hitwhistle, and use it across the whole map and even use it together with clap.

Low Clap/Snare -ish sound

i can simply suggest anything sounds LOW, and quite calm for the song... so i ahve like few option here for you...

more super calm drum type, and i say a bit more blending(a little but its good as HIT-sound)

>>> LR4_DrumCSNHS.wav <<<
or
>>> LR_Drum EDge.wav <<<

both is good in their own, whichever u think suits you better will do.
(this one could go to "soft-hitclap" either if you want to make it custom set 2 or else if u want to keep current clap)

or here a bit more CLAP-ish and less drum-ish

>>> LR_Clap LRV.wav <<<
good in any way if you choose clap-ish over the drum-ish

>>> LR_Clap Low 2.wav <<<
definitely similar with the song's type sound and ofc with clap-ish... this one will also catch more attention since its louder... a bit

Cymbal sound

the cymbal used on the song is pretty soft and short... so, another multiple choice here :

>>> LR_Cymbal SSF.wav <<<
most fitting(length and sound) but its a bit blend.

>>> LR_Cymbal SSD.wav <<<
more clearly HITsound and shorter.

>>> LR_Cymbal FSU.wav <<<
if you dont want both option above, this one is between those two.

Simply following the description could lead you to your choice and preferences

and yes, this one goes to soft-hitfinish type if used.

Well, thats it...
Good luck~

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Ora 2016-11-21T03:44:21+00:00

LordRaika wrote:
Uhh, so as requested, im here...
sry for the wait, too busy... srsly...
i still have so much things to do and things to fix but to make it short, i will be to the point

Not much to be hitsound here, but i do found some good sound to be hitsound which is the songs main bell or you could call it "drum-ride" type sound type thats really caught my attention... aside from the very low sound of clap/snare so here it is :

Bell -ish sound
as for the main bell, i remade a new one, which has good length and type for that...

>>> LR_Chm Bell M.wav <<<
you could simply name this as soft-hitwhistle, and use it across the whole map and even use it together with clap. yeah a mod told me to look for a hitsound for that cymbal part. Looks like I have one now

Low Clap/Snare -ish sound
i can simply suggest anything sounds LOW, and quite calm for the song... so i ahve like few option here for you...

more super calm drum type, and i say a bit more blending(a little but its good as HIT-sound)

>>> LR4_DrumCSNHS.wav <<<
or
>>> LR_Drum EDge.wav <<< This is exactly what I was looking for, perfect

both is good in their own, whichever u think suits you better will do.
(this one could go to "soft-hitclap" either if you want to make it custom set 2 or else if u want to keep current clap)

or here a bit more CLAP-ish and less drum-ish

>>> LR_Clap LRV.wav <<<
good in any way if you choose clap-ish over the drum-ish

>>> LR_Clap Low 2.wav <<<
definitely similar with the song's type sound and ofc with clap-ish... this one will also catch more attention since its louder... a bit

Cymbal sound
the cymbal used on the song is pretty soft and short... so, another multiple choice here :

>>> LR_Cymbal SSF.wav <<<
most fitting(length and sound) but its a bit blend.

>>> LR_Cymbal SSD.wav <<<
more clearly HITsound and shorter. yup going with this one!!

>>> LR_Cymbal FSU.wav <<<
if you dont want both option above, this one is between those two.

Simply following the description could lead you to your choice and preferences
and yes, this one goes to soft-hitfinish type if used.

Well, thats it...
Good luck~

Wow I really wasn't expecting this Raika! Thanks so much, it means a lot

Last edited by Ora 2016-11-21T09:06:55+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Ora 2016-11-21T07:18:53+00:00

Bouncebabe mod replied

Updated hitsounds, please redownload

Last edited by Ora 2016-11-21T09:30:51+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Ora 2016-11-21T09:30:40+00:00

Xayler wrote:
Hey, M4M from my queue.

General
I see that the Normal difficulty is missing? Since the spread between the last 3 difficulties are perfect while the gap between Easy and Advanced is basically 2 times higher.
yeah going to fix the spread if it's going to cause problems. Thanks!

Advanced
00:13:961 - Add a circle here as the vocal starts from here. fixed...
01:00:240 (4,1) - This overlap doesn't look so good, even if it's almost unseen. Maybe place (1) on top of that slider? So move everything before it accordingly. I kinda agree with you but I'm going to leave it unless someone else mentions it because I don't see it as that big of a problem. you're probably right though.
Nice diff!

Blue Skies
00:51:668 (6,1) - Increase the spacing between these since (6) is kinda loud note and the flow to (1) is better that way. agreed and fixed
01:12:025 (8,1) - What about same curves for them? Feels more cleaner that way. fixed 1 a little bit, but I want both of them to be just horizontal with the grid
01:21:025 (1,3,4,5) - Avoid this overlap. Yeah the overlap might look a little ugly but I think it plays fine. Lily mentioned the same mod but I think I'm going to keep how it is.

Nice set and peaceful song, nothing much to mod here, have a star! Good luck!
My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/533181

thanks so much Xayler! Going to get some sleep and get yours done tomorrow sorry for the late reply. Couldn't get on osu until this weekend D:

BounceBabe

1,626 posts

Joined October 2010

BounceBabe 2016-11-21T12:00:58+00:00

Normal difficulty when? I saw people posting about this several times.

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Ora 2016-11-21T12:02:05+00:00

BounceBabe wrote:
Normal difficulty when? I saw people posting about this several times.

I think we are going to try and turn Easy diff into a 1.8-2* normal, that should fix the spread

Fragmented

424 posts

Joined May 2011

Fragmented 2016-12-02T23:20:40+00:00

I am so sorry that i mod your map quite late! (I've been very busy for the past few days!! >.<)

And if you didn't know, im from my modding queue xD

Mod

01's Easy

00:33:025 (3) - You can make this slider a bit more curvier
00:55:570 (2,5) - Be careful of overlaps! these two are xD
02:03:723 (5,1) - This spacing is out of the blue, consider moving the slider closer to the circle
02:10:017 (3,4) - ^, but this time the circle needs to move closer to the slider

Thats all! I've check the other 3 diffs too, nothing seems wrong. Good luck with your map!!

Perklone

86 posts

Joined January 2014

Perklone 2016-12-03T07:17:38+00:00

CharmCaster wrote:
I am so sorry that i mod your map quite late! (I've been very busy for the past few days!! >.<)

And if you didn't know, im from my modding queue xD

Mod
01's Easy
00:33:025 (3) - You can make this slider a bit more curvier i think they are fine the way they were
00:55:570 (2,5) - Be careful of overlaps! these two are xD i think there are fine imo, there are 3 bars which i think is pretty long enough for people to read it
02:03:723 (5,1) - This spacing is out of the blue, consider moving the slider closer to the circle modified it a bit.
02:10:017 (3,4) - ^, but this time the circle needs to move closer to the slider^ ?

Thank you for the mod! i did some self-mod aswell.

for Ora

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Hikomori

840 posts

Joined November 2015

Hikomori 2016-12-04T11:11:37+00:00

Hi!
Mod from my queue ( sry if i didnt mod later i was busy ;( )

[General]

(This is on o1's Normal) Dont make curve sliders the whole time

[01's Normal]

00:18:890 (3) - maybe change this one, diff would look better
01:06:882 (3) - ^
01:13:739 (4) - ^
02:05:821 (4) - ^
02:09:178 (3) - ^

[Advanced]

00:46:739 (3,3) - they contact

[Rocket's Hard]

Nothing Found, Very Nice GD

[Blue Skies]

01:21:025 (1,3,4,5) - they contact
01:22:739 (1) - contacts with the triple

Sry if it was a short mod or bad mod, your map is good so well... i didnt finded more. GL!

Perklone

86 posts

Joined January 2014

Perklone 2016-12-16T07:22:04+00:00

reworked some stuff at the end

updated

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_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2016-12-20T07:53:36+00:00

Blue skies

00:34:737 (1,2,3) - how about increasing the spacing a bit? small spacing seems a bit forced https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6850404
00:30:885 (5,6) - highly recommend to stack. It doesn't make much sense to have these unstacked looking at the rest of the intro, especially considering that 00:30:457 (3,4) - are stacked and (6) is just as passive as (4)
01:21:025 (1,3,4,5) - when you enable stack these overlap https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6850439 Personally I dont mind but I'm not sure if you would like this kind of thing or not
02:14:164 (1,2) - suggestion for note placement for better flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6850518
02:27:000 (4) - how about this to emphasize the last note? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6850522

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Ora 2016-12-20T08:57:59+00:00

Kisses wrote:
Blue skies
00:34:737 (1,2,3) - how about increasing the spacing a bit? small spacing seems a bit forced https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6850404 yeah I had a feeling someone would mention this, just had trouble finding the right fix
00:30:885 (5,6) - highly recommend to stack. It doesn't make much sense to have these unstacked looking at the rest of the intro, especially considering that 00:30:457 (3,4) - are stacked and (6) is just as passive as (4) yup! not sure what I was doing there...
01:21:025 (1,3,4,5) - when you enable stack these overlap https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6850439 Personally I dont mind but I'm not sure if you would like this kind of thing or not yeah I've gotten plently of mods for this. The overlap doesn't look TOO pretty, but from testplays it actually flows well. If I change it, the triple will be spaced too far which will ruin the flow. I think it's fine how it is tbh
02:14:164 (1,2) - suggestion for note placement for better flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6850518 I liked the idea, but test played it and it immediately felt awkward. I might mess with this pattern later, but for now I think it flows okay
02:27:000 (4) - how about this to emphasize the last note? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6850522 sure I'll try it

Thanks Kisses!

Shiranai

2,186 posts

Joined August 2012

Shiranai 2016-12-22T10:27:06+00:00

Hello, I happen to see this on several queues month ago lol
Sugestion,

General

About the bg and your combo colors, why it's so gloomy more like sad to see (even she has no face xD)? eventho the lyric and your highest diff named Blue Sky, but there's no actual blue color or sky on the bg lol, maybe you should reconsider this thing
You have diffrent values on sliderborder and slider track override probably with Happy's diff, not sure if that unrankable, but better make the value same just to be safe

-R1 Normal

Add custom colors?
You need to hitsound your diff, otherwise it's unrankable. Or you can ask Ora to copy the hitsound
00:33:025 (3) - Could copy-paste this 01:26:596 (2) - or something, so the shape neater
00:42:454 (3,1,2,3,4) - The flows a bit too forced especially the movement on (3,1) seems too sharp to be on lower diff
01:08:168 (4,1) - A better blanket would be nice, regarding the current placement
01:09:882 (2,1) - Maybe stacked them together?
01:11:596 (1,2,3) - Weird flow again, why put (3) in such a weird place? I think it can break the flow on previous (1,2) imo, you probably want to change into https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6867343 so the flow more natural
01:57:430 (1,3) - Any overlap should be avoid on lower diff and with this kind low AR makes the overlapping occured during testplay, and the placement of (3) a bit too high it overlapping the hp bar too
02:05:402 (3) - I prefer to move that one downward tbh, something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6867362 so the overall flow on (2,3,4) could be improved
02:12:510 (3) - Try to paralel with previous curve slider would be nice for visual reason, just simply copy-paste (2) into https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6867367
02:20:780 (1,2) - Also another blanket could be improved
02:24:114 (1,2,3) - Try to rearrange them into http://puu.sh/sXuUJ/555c06256f.jpg ? I think it's good for visual and flow

If you happen to move something, don't forget to recheck the spacing in case it's getting too far or too close

Advanced

00:51:025 (7,1) - 01:03:453 (4,5) - Stacked better I guess, there's some more I won't mention them all
01:54:385 - Missing a hitsound on tail, due to your hitsound patterning I think on every second white tick there's supposed to a clap

Happy Hard

That's a very huge head on the bg haha xD
01:29:596 - and 02:10:856 - Volume conflict on green and red line
00:54:240 (2,1) - Fix the blanket maybe? very nazi I know but the curve on (1) slightly could be improved
02:15:404 (4,1) - 02:20:366 (3,1) - Stacked the tail better and probably there's more

Blue Sky

01:07:310 (1,6) - Stacked better
01:54:385 - Missing a hitsound on tail, due to your hitsound patterning I think on every second white tick there's supposed to a clap
02:06:660 (4,5) - A bit out a place imo and inconsistent, most triplet on this diff usually use circles, but not sure why only that one use 1/4 slider+circle

Lovely song except the bg, haven't check it throughly but I think they are ready to go

Perklone

86 posts

Joined January 2014

Perklone 2016-12-22T12:11:36+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
-R1 Normal
Add custom colors? will do
You need to hitsound your diff, otherwise it's unrankable. Or you can ask Ora to copy the hitsound i'll ask Ora to do it soon
00:33:025 (3) - Could copy-paste this 01:26:596 (2) - or something, so the shape neater done~
00:42:454 (3,1,2,3,4) - The flows a bit too forced especially the movement on (3,1) seems too sharp to be on lower diff i like the current pattern, but modified a bit so the angle aren't too sharp
01:08:168 (4,1) - A better blanket would be nice, regarding the current placementdone
01:09:882 (2,1) - Maybe stacked them together?nah stacking is not really fitting considering i don't stack at before and after it
01:11:596 (1,2,3) - Weird flow again, why put (3) in such a weird place? I think it can break the flow on previous (1,2) imo, you probably want to change into https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6867343 so the flow more natural modified (3)
01:57:430 (1,3) - Any overlap should be avoid on lower diff and with this kind low AR makes the overlapping occured during testplay, and the placement of (3) a bit too high it overlapping the hp bar toook done something with it
02:05:402 (3) - I prefer to move that one downward tbh, something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6867362 so the overall flow on (2,3,4) could be improved
02:12:510 (3) - Try to paralel with previous curve slider would be nice for visual reason, just simply copy-paste (2) into https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6867367 done
02:20:780 (1,2) - Also another blanket could be improvedalso done
02:24:114 (1,2,3) - Try to rearrange them into http://puu.sh/sXuUJ/555c06256f.jpg ? I think it's good for visual and flowdone aswell

If you happen to move something, don't forget to recheck the spacing in case it's getting too far or too close

Lovely song except the bg, haven't check it throughly but I think they are ready to go

thanks a lot Mako

really helpful mod for sure

For Ora

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O-Moei

O-Moei 2016-12-22T13:21:46+00:00

Okei, let's do this again

-R1's
00:29:601 (4,5) - Spacing

Di berbagai tempat, kayak 00:15:461 (3) - , agak labil rhythmnya. Klo saran aku sih tetep ngikut backsound aja ki !. Klo mw ngikut vocal, contohnya itu tadi, kusaranin descent aja bentuknya. Untuk Normal-Easy diff begini kusaranin rhythmnya solid, contoh, 00:14:176 (1,2,3,4) - kyk contoh dibawah atau coba liat Advanced diff

00:25:747 (3) - Beri lengkungan aja di pojok biar ga terlalu kaku

00:29:601 (4) - Jangan terlalu keluar gridbox

01:01:311 (4) - Seimbangin lengkung ?

01:29:596 - Ada suara hit jelas banget disini, klo bisa jadi circle sih

01:29:596 (1) - Ini selesainya di 01:33:075 - (1 measure length spinner)

02:05:821 (4) - Gak aneh ni ?

Perklone

86 posts

Joined January 2014

Perklone 2016-12-22T15:17:49+00:00

O-Moei wrote:
Okei, let's do this againOwO 2 kali modding

-R1's
00:29:601 (4,5) - Spacing rasanya gk ada yang error disini, tapi kalo ada, udh dibenerin

Di berbagai tempat, kayak 00:15:461 (3) - , agak labil rhythmnya. Klo saran aku sih tetep ngikut backsound aja ki !. Klo mw ngikut vocal, contohnya itu tadi, kusaranin descent aja bentuknya. Untuk Normal-Easy diff begini kusaranin rhythmnya solid, contoh, 00:14:176 (1,2,3,4) - kyk contoh dibawah atau coba liat Advanced diff
nggak dulu deh, tapi udah nambah dicircle di 00:17:176 - biar lebih konsisten

00:25:747 (3) - Beri lengkungan aja di pojok biar ga terlalu kaku [color=##40BF00]itu ngasih empasis ke lagunya, jadi keep dulu[/color]

00:29:601 (4) - Jangan terlalu keluar gridbox masih batas aman gan, don't worry. kalo ada yang point lagi boleh diubah

01:01:311 (4) - Seimbangin lengkung ? fixed

01:29:596 - Ada suara hit jelas banget disini, klo bisa jadi circle sih sip

01:29:596 (1) - Ini selesainya di 01:33:075 - (1 measure length spinner) okay~

02:05:821 (4) - Gak aneh ni ?
simpen dulu deh, imut karena

makasih banget mas moei dateng lagi

For Ora

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Source:心が叫びたがってるんだ
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Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Ora 2016-12-23T07:39:47+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
Hello, I happen to see this on several queues month ago lol
Sugestion,

General
About the bg and your combo colors, why it's so gloomy more like sad to see (even she has no face xD)? eventho the lyric and your highest diff named Blue Sky, but there's no actual blue color or sky on the bg lol, maybe you should reconsider this thing ill see what i can do :^). I agree with you but R1 kept telling me to keep this one
You have diffrent values on sliderborder and slider track override probably with Happy's diff, not sure if that unrankable, but better make the value same just to be safe I'm not sure what this means or how to change
Advanced
00:51:025 (7,1) - 01:03:453 (4,5) - Stacked better I guess, there's some more I won't mention them all yup got them all fixed I think now
01:54:385 - Missing a hitsound on tail, due to your hitsound patterning I think on every second white tick there's supposed to a clap The only problem is that the specific note there doesn't have the same clap sound as the one in the song and the one I use
Blue Sky
01:07:310 (1,6) - Stacked better ffdghhd
01:54:385 - Missing a hitsound on tail, due to your hitsound patterning I think on every second white tick there's supposed to a clap same from Advanced diff
02:06:660 (4,5) - A bit out a place imo and inconsistent, most triplet on this diff usually use circles, but not sure why only that one use 1/4 slider+circle You are right that I use mostly triples for these parts, but I do have another at 01:18:453 (3,4) - . Is it still considered inconsistent?
Lovely song except the bg, haven't check it throughly but I think they are ready to go It's hard to find an Anthem of the Heart background ._. The one I have now is based off of this https://i.ytimg.com/vi/DDN9YKCtBoo/maxresdefault.jpg. Maybe I can somehow get the image edited to a blue background.

Thanks Mako! Great mod

Sc4v4ng3r

1,232 posts

Joined August 2014

Sc4v4ng3r 2016-12-23T10:06:06+00:00

IRC mod with r1:

Log

2016-12-23 15:02 Sc4v4ng3r: yeeeee
2016-12-23 15:03 Sc4v4ng3r: tell me when u are ready
2016-12-23 15:03 [-R1]: sur
2016-12-23 15:03 Sc4v4ng3r: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1119826 Kotringo - Harmonia [01's Normal]]
2016-12-23 15:03 [-R1]: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1119826 Kotringo - Harmonia [01's Normal]]
2016-12-23 15:03 [-R1]: k
2016-12-23 15:03 Sc4v4ng3r: ok first thing
2016-12-23 15:03 [-R1]: btw, it seems he haven't updated my diff
2016-12-23 15:03 [-R1]: idk
2016-12-23 15:03 Sc4v4ng3r: lul really?
2016-12-23 15:04 [-R1]: maybe xd
2016-12-23 15:04 Sc4v4ng3r: probably
2016-12-23 15:04 Sc4v4ng3r: idk
2016-12-23 15:04 [-R1]: it doesn't show latest ver for me
2016-12-23 15:04 Sc4v4ng3r: yeaaa he updated 3 days ago
2016-12-23 15:05 Sc4v4ng3r: let me just update your diff now
2016-12-23 15:05 Sc4v4ng3r: xD
2016-12-23 15:05 [-R1]: lo
2016-12-23 15:05 Sc4v4ng3r: just copy paste the code i guess
2016-12-23 15:05 [-R1]: ofc xd
2016-12-23 15:05 Sc4v4ng3r: hopefully this is the latest version now
2016-12-23 15:05 Sc4v4ng3r: ok first thing
2016-12-23 15:06 Sc4v4ng3r: you heard this like 5000 times alr but some blankets are off
2016-12-23 15:06 [-R1]: which one
2016-12-23 15:06 [-R1]: 5001 times yea
2016-12-23 15:06 Sc4v4ng3r: lul
2016-12-23 15:06 Sc4v4ng3r: er
2016-12-23 15:06 Sc4v4ng3r: 00:15:461 (3,4) - this one
2016-12-23 15:06 [-R1]: 02:19:953 (5) - ?
2016-12-23 15:07 Sc4v4ng3r: like generally we call blankets are off if the approach circle of the previous note doesnt align with the next slider
2016-12-23 15:07 [-R1]: ik that method
2016-12-23 15:08 [-R1]: but it's triggering me i couldn't get it aligned
2016-12-23 15:08 Sc4v4ng3r: you could try to bring up the snap divisor
2016-12-23 15:08 Sc4v4ng3r: then you can bring the approach circle more closer to the border of the slider
2016-12-23 15:09 [-R1]: oh ok
2016-12-23 15:09 [-R1]: fixed.
2016-12-23 15:09 Sc4v4ng3r: lol ok
2016-12-23 15:09 Sc4v4ng3r: not gonna say anymore so try to find and fix them yourself
2016-12-23 15:11 Sc4v4ng3r: 00:20:176 - i feel like skipping those guitar sound damn weird cause you have been emphasizing on the general sound of guitar previously
2016-12-23 15:11 Sc4v4ng3r: by previously i mean 00:14:176 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 
2016-12-23 15:12 [-R1]: yea i got you
2016-12-23 15:12 [-R1]: i guess i'll do it, somebody picked about this aswell
2016-12-23 15:12 Sc4v4ng3r: lol ok
2016-12-23 15:12 [-R1]: cw8
2016-12-23 15:13 Sc4v4ng3r: 00:27:033 - since you applied my suggestion just now you should add an object here for consistency
2016-12-23 15:13 Sc4v4ng3r: 00:27:461 (1,2) - and NC should be swapped cause a new section of the song starts at (2)
2016-12-23 15:17 Sc4v4ng3r: 00:36:449 (3) - you tried to make the slider shape equal on both sides but the bottom is shorter than the top, try to adjust the red node so they are equal
2016-12-23 15:20 Sc4v4ng3r: 00:28:745 (3) - try to keep slider shapes a lot more simpler for normal and easy, the curves kinda extreme for a short slider
2016-12-23 15:20 [-R1]: i'm gonna reposition some stuff first
2016-12-23 15:20 Sc4v4ng3r: try to move the grey node above a lil bit
2016-12-23 15:20 Sc4v4ng3r: ok
2016-12-23 15:20 Sc4v4ng3r: should i keep sending more suggestions or?
2016-12-23 15:20 [-R1]: sure
2016-12-23 15:20 [-R1]: give me a minute
2016-12-23 15:20 Sc4v4ng3r: lolk
2016-12-23 15:21 [-R1]: Legacy of Lunatic Kingdom?
2016-12-23 15:21 [-R1]: OwO
2016-12-23 15:21 [-R1]: ok i'll stop
2016-12-23 15:21 [-R1]: Touhou addiction
2016-12-23 15:22 Sc4v4ng3r: lul
2016-12-23 15:22 [-R1]: i think that edgy slider 00:28:745 (4) - is fine?
2016-12-23 15:22 [-R1]: it just a small hump?
2016-12-23 15:23 Sc4v4ng3r: yea but this is the easiest difficulty of the set
2016-12-23 15:23 Sc4v4ng3r: so beginners are the target players
2016-12-23 15:23 [-R1]: but it's a normal
2016-12-23 15:23 Sc4v4ng3r: a normal which is the easiest difficulty still should be simple
2016-12-23 15:23 Sc4v4ng3r: the point is, this is the easiest difficulty
2016-12-23 15:24 Sc4v4ng3r: some 1/2 rhythm is fine in this case but the overall movement should be somewhat like an easy
2016-12-23 15:27 Sc4v4ng3r: oh and the difficulty lacks hitsounds
2016-12-23 15:27 [-R1]: i somewhat make this diff worse
2016-12-23 15:27 [-R1]: yea ora will do it soon
2016-12-23 15:27 Sc4v4ng3r: ok then
2016-12-23 15:27 Sc4v4ng3r: ahh derp gtg eat for awhile
2016-12-23 15:28 [-R1]: kk
2016-12-23 15:28 Sc4v4ng3r: ill be back in like 10 mins
2016-12-23 15:28 Sc4v4ng3r: ACTION away
2016-12-23 15:42 Sc4v4ng3r: that was more than 10 mins
2016-12-23 15:42 Sc4v4ng3r: damn
2016-12-23 15:43 [-R1]: dw
2016-12-23 15:43 [-R1]: i'm eating dorito
2016-12-23 15:43 [-R1]: rn
2016-12-23 15:43 [-R1]: fuck it's spicy
2016-12-23 15:43 Sc4v4ng3r: lmfao dorito
2016-12-23 15:43 Sc4v4ng3r: i never saw the real thing
2016-12-23 15:43 Sc4v4ng3r: :c
2016-12-23 15:44 [-R1]: psst
2016-12-23 15:44 [-R1]: it just atortilla chip
2016-12-23 15:44 Sc4v4ng3r: tru
2016-12-23 15:44 Sc4v4ng3r: wanna try some time tho
2016-12-23 15:44 [-R1]: not the real one, the one i'm eating
2016-12-23 15:44 [-R1]: Doritos too expensive
2016-12-23 15:44 Sc4v4ng3r: oh
2016-12-23 15:45 Sc4v4ng3r: lul
2016-12-23 15:45 [-R1]: 6RM prolly
2016-12-23 15:45 Sc4v4ng3r: how
2016-12-23 15:45 [-R1]: import
2016-12-23 15:46 Sc4v4ng3r: lol no wonder
2016-12-23 15:46 Sc4v4ng3r: well let me just list down wtv I see here
2016-12-23 15:46 [-R1]: yea
2016-12-23 15:47 [-R1]: i just rearranged some part to fit with the new circle
2016-12-23 15:47 [-R1]: at the beginning
2016-12-23 15:48 Sc4v4ng3r: kewl
2016-12-23 15:48 Sc4v4ng3r: 00:40:761 - shouldn't be left out for guitar as well
2016-12-23 15:49 Sc4v4ng3r: 00:45:025 (3,4) - blanket's off by a bit
2016-12-23 15:49 [-R1]: yea i fixed that
2016-12-23 15:49 [-R1]: i was bored af
2016-12-23 15:49 Sc4v4ng3r: lol
2016-12-23 15:49 [-R1]: so i fixes blanket
2016-12-23 15:50 Sc4v4ng3r: 00:46:954 (1) - any reason for spinner and a break here? this section is mappable, and leaving out those loud bells really sound weird
2016-12-23 15:50 [-R1]: meh rearrange some part again on that part, :040
2016-12-23 15:51 Sc4v4ng3r: lul
2016-12-23 15:51 [-R1]: 00:51:882 - cuz
2016-12-23 15:51 [-R1]: the main shit is on there
2016-12-23 15:52 Sc4v4ng3r: but if you hear closely the 'instrument section' at that point is different from the one at 00:48:454 - 
2016-12-23 15:52 Sc4v4ng3r: thus it makes the section in the break much more special
2016-12-23 15:53 [-R1]: but even if i mapped that part
2016-12-23 15:53 [-R1]: i can only think about slider reverse
2016-12-23 15:53 [-R1]: spam
2016-12-23 15:53 [-R1]: idk i like the current one
2016-12-23 15:53 Sc4v4ng3r: it's fine if you want to spam reversed sliders
2016-12-23 15:54 Sc4v4ng3r: variation is preferred but the point is, parts like this shouldn't be left unemphasized due to 'i only can think of this rhythm' etc etc
2016-12-23 15:55 [-R1]: but i wanna unemphasized that
2016-12-23 15:55 [-R1]: so i could emphasize the next mapped part
2016-12-23 15:56 Sc4v4ng3r: how does that work lol
2016-12-23 15:56 Sc4v4ng3r: like I said earlier, those 2 are different section of the song
2016-12-23 15:56 Sc4v4ng3r: i might be contradicting myself here but because the unemphasized part isn't repeated anywhere else in the song I think it should be emphasized
2016-12-23 15:59 [-R1]: well fine
2016-12-23 16:00 Sc4v4ng3r: remove the spinner if you are going to remove that break tho
2016-12-23 16:01 [-R1]: there's a vocal in there
2016-12-23 16:01 Sc4v4ng3r: but the RC says that you cant place notes after spinners for 2 beats for normal
2016-12-23 16:01 Sc4v4ng3r: so you will be leaving out beats like 00:48:882 - and even 00:48:454 - 
2016-12-23 16:01 [-R1]: tch
2016-12-23 16:03 Sc4v4ng3r: 00:55:740 (2,3) - yeaaaa im sure u fixed blanket alr
2016-12-23 16:05 [-R1]: blanket in training
2016-12-23 16:05 Sc4v4ng3r: lel
2016-12-23 16:05 Sc4v4ng3r: 01:00:454 (3,4) - what about this one tho, you fixed it alr?
2016-12-23 16:06 [-R1]: somewhat yea
2016-12-23 16:06 Sc4v4ng3r: well okay i trust u
2016-12-23 16:06 Sc4v4ng3r: 01:06:882 (3) - im nitpicking hurray
2016-12-23 16:06 [-R1]: are you gonna post that wallmod?
2016-12-23 16:07 Sc4v4ng3r: maybe
2016-12-23 16:07 Sc4v4ng3r: that slider has a curve at the start which is kinda redundant and looks a little bit deformed tbh
2016-12-23 16:07 Sc4v4ng3r: maybe if you smoothened it out a lil bit more it would look better
2016-12-23 16:07 [-R1]: that's the last edgy slider i have after remapping
2016-12-23 16:07 Sc4v4ng3r: lol
2016-12-23 16:08 Sc4v4ng3r: dw i think there is a few more
2016-12-23 16:08 Sc4v4ng3r: xd
2016-12-23 16:08 [-R1]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6875449
2016-12-23 16:09 Sc4v4ng3r: oh lul ora updated the map
2016-12-23 16:09 Sc4v4ng3r: no wonder it showed me not submitted
2016-12-23 16:09 [-R1]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6875449
2016-12-23 16:09 [-R1]: he changed the bg
2016-12-23 16:10 Sc4v4ng3r: lul
2016-12-23 16:10 Sc4v4ng3r: damn blue
2016-12-23 16:10 [-R1]: plastic blue
2016-12-23 16:10 Sc4v4ng3r: ikr
2016-12-23 16:10 Sc4v4ng3r: and for that slider just now I would fix http://puu.sh/sYwFH/8fac6a3756.jpg like this tbh
2016-12-23 16:11 Sc4v4ng3r: the flow is much more smoother this way
2016-12-23 16:12 [-R1]: that just look like a shit w slider
2016-12-23 16:12 Sc4v4ng3r: i know
2016-12-23 16:12 Sc4v4ng3r: idk personal preference but i get triggered when i see those curves so near to the slider head
2016-12-23 16:13 [-R1]: holy fuck
2016-12-23 16:13 [-R1]: why every malay
2016-12-23 16:13 [-R1]: is triggered by slider curve near the head
2016-12-23 16:13 [-R1]: like every single one
2016-12-23 16:13 [-R1]: i talked to
2016-12-23 16:14 Sc4v4ng3r: idk
2016-12-23 16:14 Sc4v4ng3r: looks untidy as crap
2016-12-23 16:14 Sc4v4ng3r: lol
2016-12-23 16:14 Sc4v4ng3r: but yea its subjective sooo
2016-12-23 16:14 [-R1]: yea move the anchor a bit
2016-12-23 16:14 [-R1]: and it become a ? slider
2016-12-23 16:14 [-R1]: so nah
2016-12-23 16:15 Sc4v4ng3r: i guess you could ask some other people for opinions too ;)
2016-12-23 16:15 [-R1]: no one point that out
2016-12-23 16:15 [-R1]: yet
2016-12-23 16:16 Sc4v4ng3r: 01:17:596 (3) - got triggered again luls, just suggesting but maybe you can change into http://puu.sh/sYwRv/c3330c5ce6.jpg this instead
2016-12-23 16:17 Sc4v4ng3r: makes a nice parallel pattern with 01:19:310 (1) - this as well
2016-12-23 16:18 [-R1]: got ya gam
2016-12-23 16:19 [-R1]: *fam
2016-12-23 16:19 Sc4v4ng3r: gam
2016-12-23 16:19 Sc4v4ng3r: :thinking:
2016-12-23 16:20 [-R1]: http://r1.s-ul.eu/n3vgoe5h
2016-12-23 16:20 Sc4v4ng3r: lol
2016-12-23 16:20 Sc4v4ng3r: so many thinking
2016-12-23 16:20 Sc4v4ng3r: 01:57:430 (1,2) - so close to being a double blanket but it isn't lol
2016-12-23 16:21 Sc4v4ng3r: you could instead try to make (2) a copy of (1)'s shape, then place them http://puu.sh/sYx17/80af6d991c.jpg
2016-12-23 16:21 Sc4v4ng3r: like that
2016-12-23 16:22 [-R1]: a parallel pattern
2016-12-23 16:22 [-R1]: i thinking about that aswell,
2016-12-23 16:22 [-R1]: but flow is not good enough
2016-12-23 16:22 Sc4v4ng3r: nahh it's fine really
2016-12-23 16:22 Sc4v4ng3r: in fact even in easies people like me use this 
2016-12-23 16:23 [-R1]: aaa do i have to
2016-12-23 16:23 [-R1]: i rly liked this one
2016-12-23 16:23 Sc4v4ng3r: well then at least try to make the pattern clear, whether it is a blanket or not
2016-12-23 16:23 Sc4v4ng3r: for aesthetics
2016-12-23 16:24 Sc4v4ng3r: a e s t h e t i c s
2016-12-23 16:24 [-R1]: dw i b l a n k e t thatshit
2016-12-23 16:24 Sc4v4ng3r: n o i c e
2016-12-23 16:24 [-R1]: y e a
2016-12-23 16:24 Sc4v4ng3r: 02:05:821 (4) - this is too damn edgy for a normal
2016-12-23 16:24 Sc4v4ng3r: i mean
2016-12-23 16:25 Sc4v4ng3r: a easy-normal
2016-12-23 16:25 [-R1]: NOOOOOOOO NOT THAT ONE
2016-12-23 16:25 [-R1]: fuck
2016-12-23 16:25 [-R1]: okay i think it look like shit aswell
2016-12-23 16:25 Sc4v4ng3r: lul
2016-12-23 16:25 Sc4v4ng3r: it could have been fine if the circle curve at the beginning was a lot more bigger
2016-12-23 16:25 Sc4v4ng3r: but yea it looks clunky
2016-12-23 16:27 Sc4v4ng3r: 02:07:499 - could be nice if you added a note here cause you've been following that 1/1 instrument thing, so skipping this feels weird
2016-12-23 16:27 [-R1]: got ya fam
2016-12-23 16:28 [-R1]: 02:14:164 - ?
2016-12-23 16:28 [-R1]: same
2016-12-23 16:28 [-R1]: ?>
2016-12-23 16:28 Sc4v4ng3r: yep
2016-12-23 16:29 Sc4v4ng3r: oh and go aimod and check the 'check distance snap' box
2016-12-23 16:29 Sc4v4ng3r: fix those distance issues
2016-12-23 16:29 [-R1]: k
2016-12-23 16:30 Sc4v4ng3r: 02:22:434 - why does the kiai end here anyway? the 'chorus' part of this song ends at 02:27:000 - so kiai ending prematurely is wrong
2016-12-23 16:31 Sc4v4ng3r: oh well all diffciulties have this i'll have to post this with my mod
2016-12-23 16:32 Sc4v4ng3r: ok thats for patterns and a e s t h e t i c s
2016-12-23 16:32 [-R1]: k
2016-12-23 16:32 Sc4v4ng3r: i still havent gone to the rhythm part lol
2016-12-23 16:33 Sc4v4ng3r: 1/2 rhythms aren't used at all in this difficulty so it can bring about some spread issues
2016-12-23 16:35 [-R1]: hmm
2016-12-23 16:35 Sc4v4ng3r: http://puu.sh/sYxs7/7f7b174fad.jpg so for instance 00:20:176 - you can use this rhythm here
2016-12-23 16:35 Sc4v4ng3r: my gosh i screwed up that formatting
2016-12-23 16:37 [-R1]: 00:25:747 (3) -
2016-12-23 16:37 [-R1]: so this kind of slider have to go?
2016-12-23 16:37 Sc4v4ng3r: those doesn't matter cause they follow vocals
2016-12-23 16:38 [-R1]: wow from 1.8 to 1.7
2016-12-23 16:38 [-R1]: gg
2016-12-23 16:38 Sc4v4ng3r: oh yea about those sliders tho, while 00:14:176 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these loosely follow the 1/1 beat, those sliders explicitly following the vocals feels weird
2016-12-23 16:38 Sc4v4ng3r: im pretty sure a modder has pointed out that?
2016-12-23 16:39 [-R1]: nooooooooooooooppppppeeeeeeeeeee
2016-12-23 16:39 Sc4v4ng3r: lol
2016-12-23 16:40 Sc4v4ng3r: so if you plan to keep 00:18:890 (3) - and alike you may want to follow the vocals more closely for 00:14:176 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 
2016-12-23 16:42 [-R1]: hm
2016-12-23 16:42 Sc4v4ng3r: i would suggest a rhythm like http://puu.sh/sYxFn/6abcde38e8.jpg
2016-12-23 16:44 [-R1]: ah i see
2016-12-23 16:44 [-R1]: 00:17:176 -
2016-12-23 16:44 [-R1]: this part is alright to keep empty?
2016-12-23 16:44 [-R1]: cuz the vocal ended at 00:16:961 -
2016-12-23 16:45 Sc4v4ng3r: well if you take only the vocal yes, but it leaves an awkward polarity with 00:17:604 (1) - 
2016-12-23 16:46 Sc4v4ng3r: i assume you know what is polarities?
2016-12-23 16:46 [-R1]: yea the mentorship discuss it few months ago
2016-12-23 16:47 [-R1]: adding a 1/2 rhythm boost my SR
2016-12-23 16:47 Sc4v4ng3r: so the reason why I extended the slider till 00:17:176 - and alike is to avoid that
2016-12-23 16:47 [-R1]: by 0.1
2016-12-23 16:47 Sc4v4ng3r: .1
2016-12-23 16:47 [-R1]: i love it
2016-12-23 16:47 Sc4v4ng3r: lol
2016-12-23 16:48 [-R1]: but 1/1+circle sound more fitting imo
2016-12-23 16:48 [-R1]: rather than extended slider
2016-12-23 16:48 Sc4v4ng3r: yeaaa true but since this section of the song is somewhat more calm I wanted to make a simpler rhythm xD
2016-12-23 16:49 Sc4v4ng3r: cause rhythms objectively should be a lot more easier when the song's more calm
2016-12-23 16:49 [-R1]: but the beat feels more satisfying
2016-12-23 16:50 Sc4v4ng3r: but in the end, this is the easiest difficulty, and the next difficulty use the exact same rhythm like you mentioned
2016-12-23 16:50 Sc4v4ng3r: except with the circle afterwards
2016-12-23 16:51 [-R1]: o
2016-12-23 16:51 [-R1]: shit
2016-12-23 16:52 [-R1]: i like this rhythm a lot
2016-12-23 16:52 [-R1]: but k
2016-12-23 16:53 Sc4v4ng3r: 00:21:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - apply for these too
2016-12-23 16:53 [-R1]: done
2016-12-23 16:54 Sc4v4ng3r: 00:40:761 - and 00:40:970 - cause your rhythm focus so much on vocal, you shouldn't leave this out as well
2016-12-23 16:54 Sc4v4ng3r: i would go for circle+1/2 slider but its up to you
2016-12-23 16:55 Sc4v4ng3r: same goes 00:44:382 - 
2016-12-23 16:55 [-R1]: what's wrong with that?
2016-12-23 16:55 [-R1]: the vocal stop
2016-12-23 16:55 Sc4v4ng3r: the vocal lul
2016-12-23 16:55 [-R1]: then start
2016-12-23 16:56 Sc4v4ng3r: because the white tick has the guitar sound, which you have been emphasizing with vocals, and the red tick has the vocals
2016-12-23 16:59 [-R1]: http://r1.s-ul.eu/GNkxrxtm ?
2016-12-23 17:01 Sc4v4ng3r: if you do that you are skipping the vocal at 00:41:179 - 
2016-12-23 17:01 Sc4v4ng3r: or am i looking at a different place
2016-12-23 17:01 [-R1]: yea u're looking at the right one
2016-12-23 17:02 Sc4v4ng3r: ok 
2016-12-23 17:07 Sc4v4ng3r: 01:02:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - like what you did at 00:14:176 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , make their rhythm the same for consistency
2016-12-23 17:08 [-R1]: ok
2016-12-23 17:09 Sc4v4ng3r: 01:09:025 (1,2,3,4,5) - same, but there is another vocal syllabus at 01:12:239 - , so try to fill that tick too
2016-12-23 17:10 [-R1]: kk
2016-12-23 17:10 [-R1]: wait
2016-12-23 17:12 [-R1]: wow how the fuck the SR got boosted
2016-12-23 17:12 [-R1]: to 2
2016-12-23 17:12 [-R1]: it got boosted like my csgo rank
2016-12-23 17:12 Sc4v4ng3r: wot
2016-12-23 17:12 Sc4v4ng3r: LOL
2016-12-23 17:12 Sc4v4ng3r: idk what did you do ;-;
2016-12-23 17:13 Sc4v4ng3r: oooook
2016-12-23 17:13 Sc4v4ng3r: er
2016-12-23 17:13 Sc4v4ng3r: 00:14:176 (1,2,3) - can you show me the rhythm here?
2016-12-23 17:14 [-R1]: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/527896
2016-12-23 17:14 Sc4v4ng3r: that's the link to the map LOL
2016-12-23 17:14 [-R1]: wait
2016-12-23 17:14 [-R1]: what
2016-12-23 17:14 [-R1]: http://r1.s-ul.eu/NNJi8Kfz
2016-12-23 17:16 Sc4v4ng3r: huh
2016-12-23 17:17 Sc4v4ng3r: weird
2016-12-23 17:17 Sc4v4ng3r: i tried to make those 1/2 rhythm myself and the rating ain't boosted like urs
2016-12-23 17:17 [-R1]: oh
2016-12-23 17:17 [-R1]: am i blind
2016-12-23 17:17 [-R1]: but it's back to 1.68
2016-12-23 17:17 Sc4v4ng3r: weird
2016-12-23 17:17 Sc4v4ng3r: .-.;
2016-12-23 17:18 [-R1]: 01:09:025 - for this
2016-12-23 17:18 [-R1]: can i use 1/2slider+1/2slider+circle?
2016-12-23 17:18 [-R1]: or just 1/2 for all of em
2016-12-23 17:19 Sc4v4ng3r: honestly if you made 01:02:168 (1,2,3) - these 1/1 slider+3/2 slider you should keep the same rhythm here, cause its the same section
2016-12-23 17:19 Sc4v4ng3r: but if you wish to do that you can change the previous rhythm accordingly
2016-12-23 17:20 [-R1]: why i felt that part have emphasizing vocal
2016-12-23 17:20 [-R1]: need to eat, brb
2016-12-23 17:20 Sc4v4ng3r: o ok
2016-12-23 17:20 Sc4v4ng3r: holy shit this has been going on for 2 and a half hours
2016-12-23 17:20 Sc4v4ng3r: lul
2016-12-23 17:21 [-R1]: for my diff only
2016-12-23 17:21 [-R1]: gg
2016-12-23 17:21 Sc4v4ng3r: xD
2016-12-23 17:30 [-R1]: done
2016-12-23 17:30 [-R1]: fuck it was good
2016-12-23 17:30 Sc4v4ng3r: what did you eat lol
2016-12-23 17:31 [-R1]: just some katsu
2016-12-23 17:31 Sc4v4ng3r: o 
2016-12-23 17:31 Sc4v4ng3r: nice
2016-12-23 17:32 Sc4v4ng3r: so im guessing you changed 01:09:025 (1,2,3,4,5) - this rhythm alr?
2016-12-23 17:32 [-R1]: yea
2016-12-23 17:32 Sc4v4ng3r: kewl
2016-12-23 17:34 [-R1]: 01:10:739 - http://r1.s-ul.eu/IH1yJ4GI
2016-12-23 17:36 Sc4v4ng3r: from (1) till (3) looks fine but from (4) you are skipping some vocals
2016-12-23 17:37 [-R1]: (4)become 1/2 and (5) become 1/1?
2016-12-23 17:37 Sc4v4ng3r: well instead u can do this http://puu.sh/sYzsp/48cc7e2141.jpg
2016-12-23 17:37 Sc4v4ng3r: you skip the white tick in the middle but that is to avoid long chain of 1/2
2016-12-23 17:40 [-R1]: that empty white tick feels weird
2016-12-23 17:40 Sc4v4ng3r: yeaaaaa i know
2016-12-23 17:41 Sc4v4ng3r: honestly idk how to make it better ahhh
2016-12-23 17:41 Sc4v4ng3r: oh well why not remove 01:10:525 (3) - instead?
2016-12-23 17:42 Sc4v4ng3r: that's the most weakest vocal beat in this measure
2016-12-23 17:42 [-R1]: consistency
2016-12-23 17:44 Sc4v4ng3r: uhhhh
2016-12-23 17:45 [-R1]: uhhhh
2016-12-23 17:45 Sc4v4ng3r: well I guess your initial rhythm is fine in that case, just make sure to add objects for 01:11:810 - , 01:12:025 -  and 01:12:239 - 
2016-12-23 17:45 Sc4v4ng3r: 3 hours of doing irc made my brain weird
2016-12-23 17:45 Sc4v4ng3r: ;)
2016-12-23 17:47 [-R1]: same
2016-12-23 17:48 [-R1]: http://r1.s-ul.eu/55xHTjbO
2016-12-23 17:48 [-R1]: the latest ver
2016-12-23 17:48 [-R1]: still rough i flesh them out later
2016-12-23 17:48 [-R1]: 2lazy
2016-12-23 17:50 Sc4v4ng3r: 02:15:818 (3) - lul unsnapped note
2016-12-23 17:51 [-R1]: gg keen eye
2016-12-23 17:51 Sc4v4ng3r: xD
2016-12-23 17:51 Sc4v4ng3r: we are almost done
2016-12-23 17:52 Sc4v4ng3r: 02:18:092 - dont miss out the vocal here
2016-12-23 17:52 Sc4v4ng3r: holy shit im getting damn lazy
2016-12-23 17:53 Sc4v4ng3r: yeaaaa other than those on the surface difficulty's fine
2016-12-23 17:55 Sc4v4ng3r: ill post this irc first, then i'll do another mod with the other difficulties ahhh

Over that 3 hours of chatting, we changed mostly everything.

HappyRocket88

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HappyRocket88 2016-12-23T17:10:09+00:00

Fixed everything from Mako! ><

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[Metadata]
Title:Harmonia
TitleUnicode:Harmonia
Artist:Kotringo
ArtistUnicode:コトリンゴ
Creator:Ora
Version:Rocket's Hard
Source:心が叫びたがってるんだ
Tags:the anthem of the heart animation original soundtrack mito (clammbon) [-R1] HappyRocket88
BeatmapID:1124806
BeatmapSetID:527896

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[Events]
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Ora 2016-12-23T20:02:16+00:00

Thanks btw for spending time on this map Sc4v4ng3r, hopefully we can move on with R1's diff soon

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Janpai 2016-12-24T07:40:13+00:00

Please send a vote on my queue to improve my modding =w=)y

DISCLAIMER:

The following things will be only opinions and suggestions so feel free to ignore them.

General

Uncheck widescreen support on 01's Normal and Rocket's Hard
Maybe it's just mine but your BG doesn't meet the required sizes, I think you can fix this easily on any editing software like Photoshop since that minimalist BG just have a blue background. Rocket's BG is consuming too much space in the beatmap, consider having the file type into .JPG format since his BG doesn't require transparency. Afaik, 1920 x 1200 is the newly-approved BG dimensions
01's Normal has no custom combo colours and the blue default combo color is really mixing with the BG
Why advanced has smaller CS than Hard?

01's Normal

Maybe buff up the HP to 3.5? to be linear with the advanced and also objects are easy to aim.
00:15:461 (3,4) - Fix blanket?
00:27:461 (1) - Remove NC and Nc at 00:27:890 (2) -
00:30:885 (5,1) - You could raise up 00:31:313 (1) - a bit or lower 00:30:885 (5) - down to have a better flow cuz (1) is a curved slider and it's kind abit edgy to play.
00:45:454 (2) - Wave is kinda... ugly for me xD maybe try sth like this? http://puu.sh/sZxFE/4e843f8f8d.jpg
00:55:740 (2,3) - I think it would be better to do a blanket here
01:57:430 (1,2) - Make them symmetrical?
Just a nitpicky comment here, the choice of slider shapes could be improved, or I should say have more variations, I could almost tell that most of the sliders are curved and edgy are placed randomly and not complementing each other. Some are better if they are symmetrical. But it's not bad. As I said it's just a nitpicky comment.

Rocket's Hard

I think AR 7.5 is a bit fast for calm song, maybe 7.2 or 7.3 would do since there are some overlaps. Also increase OD like 5.5 or 6? to be linear with the diff spread
00:18:890 (3,4) - Maybe switch them? to follow the vocals.
00:31:527 (2) - Place at 287|20 for better flow? the current flow you have here is kinda edgy

Blue Skies

00:24:890 (2) - Maybe placing this slider like this http://puu.sh/sZynR/f8ead45ce1.jpg will complement each other. (literally Ctrl+J then Ctrl+H)
01:00:025 (5,1) - Why sudden anti-jump when music suddenly changes here? Shouldn't it be have more spacing than the ohers?
01:19:310 (1) - Maybe move to 49|204 for better angle?
01:48:079 (6,7) - Ctrl+G for better jump structure? It wouldn't be a problem since 01:48:297 (7) - has a strong cello sound
02:14:164 (1) - Move to 496|322 for better angle? 02:14:164 (1) - triggers a stronger violin sound so it's better to have a larger DS

Goodluck on ranking!

Perklone

86 posts

Joined January 2014

Perklone 2016-12-24T07:50:16+00:00

Janpai wrote:

Please send a vote on my queue to improve my modding =w=)y

[notice][centre] [b]01's Normal
Maybe buff up the HP to 3.5? to be linear with the advanced and also objects are easy to aim.
00:15:461 (3,4) - Fix blanket? remapped part with sc4
00:27:461 (1) - Remove NC and Nc at 00:27:890 (2) - okay~~
00:30:885 (5,1) - You could raise up 00:31:313 (1) - a bit or lower 00:30:885 (5) - down to have a better flow cuz (1) is a curved slider and it's kind abit edgy to play. modified so it flows better
00:45:454 (2) - Wave is kinda... ugly for me xD maybe try sth like this? http://puu.sh/sZxFE/4e843f8f8d.jpg changed
00:55:740 (2,3) - I think it would be better to do a blanket herealready done that
01:57:430 (1,2) - Make them symmetrical?[color=#40BF00]nah this one flows better
Just a nitpicky comment here, the choice of slider shapes could be improved, or I should say have more variations, I could almost tell that most of the sliders are curved and edgy are placed randomly and not complementing each other. Some are better if they are symmetrical. But it's not bad. As I said it's just a nitpicky comment.[color=#40BF00] those slider i make to express the vocal more clearly, so it's kinda random, but they are there for a purpose
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Goodluck on ranking!

Thank you Janpai for the mod

posted the new ver with Sc4 discussion

For Ora

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Harmonia
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ArtistUnicode:コトリンゴ
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Version:01's Normal
Source:心が叫びたがってるんだ
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240,244,75882,6,0,P|272:204|328:204,1,110
428,200,76739,2,0,P|416:148|376:108,1,110
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96,368,82310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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88,120,86168,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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160,200,89596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,89813,12,0,93075,0:0:0:0:
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120,96,106557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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184,112,110036,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,176,110471,5,0,0:0:0:0:
176,248,110906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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512,128,113081,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,152,113515,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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264,328,115255,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,360,115690,2,0,P|136:312|128:256,1,110
96,168,116560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,116995,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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40,200,120367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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408,232,122045,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,176,122464,2,0,P|448:104|384:72,1,110
328,64,123304,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,136,123723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,96,124143,6,0,P|120:112|72:192,1,110
56,244,124982,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,300,125402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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168,76,127499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
107,155,127919,6,0,P|158:176|216:180,1,110
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396,216,129178,2,0,B|420:184|484:160|484:160|420:120|388:40,1,220
312,56,130436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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148,196,134164,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,108,134577,6,0,P|184:96|280:152,1,165
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252,240,137058,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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108,64,138712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,280,140780,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,147206,12,0,149268,0:0:0:0:

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Ora 2016-12-24T13:20:41+00:00

Janpai wrote:

Please send a vote on my queue to improve my modding =w=)y
DISCLAIMER:
The following things will be only opinions and suggestions so feel free to ignore them.
General
Uncheck widescreen support on 01's Normal and Rocket's Hardoops
Maybe it's just mine but your BG doesn't meet the required sizes, I think you can fix this easily on any editing software like Photoshop since that minimalist BG just have a blue background. Rocket's BG is consuming too much space in the beatmap, consider having the file type into .JPG format since his BG doesn't require transparency. Afaik, 1920 x 1200 is the newly-approved BG dimensions hmm I'll see what I can do about this
01's Normal has no custom combo colours and the blue default combo color is really mixing with the BG added!
Why advanced has smaller CS than Hard? I knew someone would bring this up, but I don't think it's a big deal. Rocket's CS fits his mapping style and I don't think it effects the mapset.

Blue Skies
00:24:890 (2) - Maybe placing this slider like this http://puu.sh/sZynR/f8ead45ce1.jpg will complement each other. (literally Ctrl+J then Ctrl+H) I like the idea but I changed to a different variation of that.
01:00:025 (5,1) - Why sudden anti-jump when music suddenly changes here? Shouldn't it be have more spacing than the ohers? I think you may be right. The anti-jump never really felt awkward imo, but I'll try it spaced out for now
01:19:310 (1) - Maybe move to 49|204 for better angle? I'll consider it, but its not that important tbh. still has the same directional flow
01:48:079 (6,7) - Ctrl+G for better jump structure? It wouldn't be a problem since 01:48:297 (7) - has a strong cello sound I think having 01:48:297 (7,8) - the way they are flows nicely into the next slider
02:14:164 (1) - Move to 496|322 for better angle? 02:14:164 (1) - triggers a stronger violin sound so it's better to have a larger DS I've gotten multiple mods for this part and the way I have it now flows the best from testplays. I understand your reasoning, but just playing it doesn't feel right with this pattern.
Goodluck on ranking! Thanks Janpai!

YukiZura-

762 posts

Joined October 2015

YukiZura- 2016-12-25T12:10:06+00:00

from mod queue - Bye Bye 2016
sorry late lol xD

Normal

00:36:449 (3,4) - can be better blanket
01:44:382 - make this slider the same as this 01:43:513 - or make this slider 01:43:513 - same as this 01:44:382 - so that it will not look too messy with too many slider shape
01:46:992 (1,2) - you dont have to make too many slider tho .. just copy this 01:46:992 - and rotate it... look more nicer that way ^^
02:02:045 (2,3) - blanket this?
02:07:499 (6,1) - this one too ...
02:10:856 - i suggest straight slider here .. cuz the sound suddenly become strong ..for me it will fit more good with straight slider there^^
02:14:164 - move this a little bit to the right .... so that it will be blanket and look more nicer

see

Goodluck ^^
what a peaceful song xD

Syarika

445 posts

Joined August 2014

Syarika 2017-01-01T17:16:47+00:00

Hi there, small chat with [-R1]

chat here

2017-01-01 22:46 [-R1]: rasanya ane udh suruh yg punya setnya utk di HS
2017-01-01 22:46 [ Arika ]: sorry kalau misalkan nazi mod ya
2017-01-01 22:47 [-R1]: gpp kok, emang niat kaya gitu
2017-01-01 22:47 [-R1]: bntr ya kak
2017-01-01 22:47 [-R1]: aku redl dulu
2017-01-01 22:47 [ Arika ]: 00:13:962 - mending ditambah not deh bagian ini karena sesuai dengan difficult lainnya
2017-01-01 22:48 [ Arika ]: kalau aku saranin jangan langsung dibuat antijump, tapi lebih ke distance snap aja deh
2017-01-01 22:48 [-R1]: itu full make DS kok kak
2017-01-01 22:49 [ Arika ]: 108-28 juga boleh nih
2017-01-01 22:49 [-R1]: 108-28?
2017-01-01 22:49 [ Arika ]: dan, kalau bisa untuk new combo bagian 00:14:176 (1) - sebaiknya diganti di not awal dan karena itu cuman not biasa bukan slider jadi masih acceptable
2017-01-01 22:50 [ Arika ]: iyaap. 108=x 28=y
2017-01-01 22:50 [-R1]: sipp
2017-01-01 22:51 [ Arika ]: 00:14:818 (2,1) - (nazi-mod) bagian ini seharusnya bisa dibuat lebih blanket dengan titik point benar diarahkan di antara titik akhir slider sebelumnya
2017-01-01 22:51 [ Arika ]: (titik tengah)
2017-01-01 22:51 [ Arika ]: 00:20:176 (4) - ini new combo dan untuk 00:21:033 (1) - mending di remove aja
2017-01-01 22:51 [-R1]: ah i see
2017-01-01 22:52 [ Arika ]: tapi aku agak kurang yakin untuk bagian itu karena sebelumnya kamu pakai 1-1 not besar untuk new combonya
2017-01-01 22:52 [ Arika ]: atau mungkin bagian 00:21:033 (1) - tetap di keep juga engga masalah
2017-01-01 22:52 [-R1]: iya aku ngikutin vokal buat NCnya
2017-01-01 22:53 [ Arika ]: 00:20:604 (2,1) - lebih prefer ke blanket deh kayaknya
2017-01-01 22:53 [ Arika ]: waah.. boleh aja sih, tapi player lvl rendah mungkin agak bingung karena bagian awal langsung mengikuti aliran vocalnya
2017-01-01 22:54 [-R1]: terkesan dempet bgt sih, jadi aku buat antiflow juga nambahin Star Ratingnya
2017-01-01 22:54 [-R1]: kalo dibut blanket
2017-01-01 22:54 [ Arika ]: welp.. bukan masalah dempetnya, bagian itu bakal di koreksi modder lain soalnya
2017-01-01 22:55 [ Arika ]: tapi kalau (pun) memang mau di keep itu engga jadi masalah dan alasan yang jelas kenapa itu harus di keep
2017-01-01 22:55 [-R1]: 00:22:747 (1,2) - konsisten sama ini juga
2017-01-01 22:55 [ Arika ]: 00:27:033 (4) - aku lebih prefer dijadiin slider bagian ini sampai di 00:27:247 - dan ini juga engga jelek banget dan mengikuti tata beat sebelumnya untuk bagian 00:20:176 (1,2) - 
2017-01-01 22:56 [ Arika ]: 00:21:676 (2,1) - bagian ini memang engga perlu di blanket, jadi engga aku koreksi c:
2017-01-01 22:57 [-R1]: oh ok applied that slider
2017-01-01 22:57 [ Arika ]: 'tambahan' untuk bagian 00:27:033 (4) - kenapa harus saranin dibuat slider karena dibagian 00:27:247 - ada beat yang harusnya tidak di lewatin
2017-01-01 22:57 [ Arika ]: welp okey~
2017-01-01 22:57 [ Arika ]: lanjut yaa
2017-01-01 22:58 [-R1]: ~~
2017-01-01 22:58 [ Arika ]: 00:33:025 (3) - ini bisa dibuat lebih halus lagi? (mungkin)
2017-01-01 22:58 [ Arika ]: titik ke 2 dari head slider diarahin ke 233-313
2017-01-01 22:58 [ Arika ]: jadi bagian 00:31:313 (1,3) - lebih halus dan terlihat bagian ini blanket
2017-01-01 22:59 [ Arika ]: 00:34:737 (1,3) - coba dibuat lebih blanket?
2017-01-01 23:00 [-R1]: 00:36:449 (3,4) - aku niatnya blanket ini berdua
2017-01-01 23:00 [-R1]: jadi (1,2) aku jadiin flow based aja
2017-01-01 23:00 [ Arika ]: well, kamu bisa ubah tempat untuk bagian 00:34:737 (1,2) - 
2017-01-01 23:00 [ Arika ]: coba aku buat lebih halus ya
2017-01-01 23:01 [-R1]: atau aku ilangin aja red anchornya?
2017-01-01 23:01 [ Arika ]: 1 : 00:34:737 (1) - slidernya dipindahin ke 286-50. 2 : titik tengahnya dipindahin ke 228-44.
2017-01-01 23:03 [-R1]: slidernya aku pindahin ke 286-48
2017-01-01 23:03 [-R1]: biar sama spacingnya
2017-01-01 23:03 [ Arika ]: well boleh deh
2017-01-01 23:03 [-R1]: sip~
2017-01-01 23:04 [ Arika ]: 00:35:593 (2) - ini di rotate +10
2017-01-01 23:05 [ Arika ]: terus dibuat sejajar dengan slider sebelumnya (kira-kira) 89-96
2017-01-01 23:05 [-R1]: udh sama aku pindahin ke 88-10
2017-01-01 23:05 [-R1]: *88-100
2017-01-01 23:05 [ Arika ]: pertama di rotate dulu deh mending
2017-01-01 23:05 [-R1]: biar blanket 1
2017-01-01 23:05 [ Arika ]: soalnya engga bakal bisa ke blanket dan halus.. :3
2017-01-01 23:06 [ Arika ]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6949615
2017-01-01 23:06 [-R1]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6949616
2017-01-01 23:06 [ Arika ]: coba lihat susunan dan blanketnya deh
2017-01-01 23:07 [ Arika ]: aku engga bilang di hilangin loh titik merahnya ._.
2017-01-01 23:07 [-R1]: ooh masih make red anchor
2017-01-01 23:07 [ Arika ]: iyaaps!
2017-01-01 23:07 [-R1]: xD jadi kaku keliatnya jadi aku remove
2017-01-01 23:07 [ Arika ]: wkwkwk aku malah ngehancurin mapsetnya dong kalau gitu :)
2017-01-01 23:08 [ Arika ]: terus bagian 00:36:449 (3) - dipindahin ke 258-137
2017-01-01 23:08 [ Arika ]: 00:34:309 (4) - sekarang coba klik bagian ini di tempat beat ke 00:35:807 - 
2017-01-01 23:09 [ Arika ]: bisa dilihat? bagian ini juga bisa dibuat lebih blanket dan halus lagi..
2017-01-01 23:09 [-R1]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6949629
2017-01-01 23:09 [-R1]: gmn sekarang?
2017-01-01 23:12 [ Arika ]: well kalau menurutku masih terlalu maksa, coba slidernya di modif sedikit deh jadi seperti ini : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6949643
2017-01-01 23:12 [ Arika ]: memang engga terlalu bagus tapi itu masih bisa di read player pemula sih
2017-01-01 23:13 [-R1]: terakhir aku buat motif gitu slidernya
2017-01-01 23:13 [-R1]: dikomen mulu uwu
2017-01-01 23:13 [ Arika ]: yaa itu lebih bagus sih kalau menurutku
2017-01-01 23:13 [ Arika ]: mau susunannya?
2017-01-01 23:14 [-R1]: aku make yang v ini dulu deh
2017-01-01 23:14 [ Arika ]: tadinya mau aku buat jadi seperti ini : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6949653
2017-01-01 23:14 [ Arika ]: okeey..
2017-01-01 23:14 [-R1]: sori >//<
2017-01-01 23:14 [ Arika ]: engga papa kok, lagian cuman mod kan c:
2017-01-01 23:15 [ Arika ]: 00:38:589 (1) - ini bisa dibuat lebih halus lagi :3
2017-01-01 23:15 [ Arika ]: coba red tick nya di pas-kan di titik tengah slider deh
2017-01-01 23:15 [-R1]: :)
2017-01-01 23:15 [-R1]: lanjut xD
2017-01-01 23:16 [ Arika ]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6949664
2017-01-01 23:16 [-R1]: okay~
2017-01-01 23:17 [ Arika ]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6949670 <-- lebih smooth dari sebelumnya :)
2017-01-01 23:17 [-R1]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6949672
2017-01-01 23:18 [ Arika ]: well itu udah bagus, tinggal bagian end slidernya agak di deketin sedikit
2017-01-01 23:18 [-R1]: done~
2017-01-01 23:18 [ Arika ]: dan untuk 00:39:872 (2) - coba untuk middle tick nya dibuat pas dengan middle tick slider sebelumnya
2017-01-01 23:19 [ Arika ]: eh maap..
2017-01-01 23:19 [ Arika ]: (titik tengah)
2017-01-01 23:19 [ Arika ]: done?
2017-01-01 23:19 [ Arika ]: 00:39:872 (2) - sebaiknya New Combo (karena) timing di beat ini berubah
2017-01-01 23:19 [-R1]: aaaa susah atuh xDDD
2017-01-01 23:20 [ Arika ]: 00:41:597 (3) - ini jugaa..
2017-01-01 23:20 [ Arika ]: mau codenya?
2017-01-01 23:21 [-R1]: 00:39:872 (2) - ini gpp gk usah NC, vokalnya masih sambung
2017-01-01 23:21 [-R1]: boleh
2017-01-01 23:22 [ Arika ]: well then.. just incase kalau memang ada mod seperti coba dikasih penjelasan yaa :3
2017-01-01 23:22 [-R1]: beres~
2017-01-01 23:22 [ Arika ]: 140,208,38589,6,0,B|84:176|84:128|84:128|116:80|204:96,1,220
2017-01-01 23:22 [ Arika ]: 264,148,39872,2,0,P|264:204|192:252,1,110
2017-01-01 23:23 [-R1]: tfw gk bisa di copy paste xD
2017-01-01 23:23 [ Arika ]: wahh sorry.. sebentar ya
2017-01-01 23:23 [-R1]: koordinat (2) aja gmn?
2017-01-01 23:24 [ Arika ]: https://puu.sh/t7Iqy/0076c3bedf.txt
2017-01-01 23:24 [ Arika ]: done, tinggal copy-paste aja di .osu codenya
2017-01-01 23:24 [ Arika ]: cari bagian 38589
2017-01-01 23:24 [-R1]: oooo
2017-01-01 23:25 [ Arika ]: sudah?
2017-01-01 23:25 [-R1]: ok~
2017-01-01 23:25 [ Arika ]: di save dulu, terus keluar habis itu masuk lagi :3
2017-01-01 23:25 [ Arika ]: oke got it
2017-01-01 23:25 [-R1]: dahhh
2017-01-01 23:25 [ Arika ]: 00:41:597 (3) - New Combo ya
2017-01-01 23:26 [-R1]: udah :)
2017-01-01 23:26 [ Arika ]: harusnya sih bagian 00:39:872 (2) - ini juga di new combo :(
2017-01-01 23:26 [ Arika ]: tapi engga papa deh xD
2017-01-01 23:26 [ Arika ]: 00:41:597 (1,2) - mending dibuat blanket deh
2017-01-01 23:27 [ Arika ]: jadi ke 453-191
2017-01-01 23:27 [ Arika ]: 00:45:454 (4) - ini unik xD
2017-01-01 23:27 [-R1]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6949720
2017-01-01 23:27 [-R1]: jadi kaya gini :(
2017-01-01 23:27 [ Arika ]: 00:46:739 (1) - ganti ke slider deh mending yaa
2017-01-01 23:28 [ Arika ]: hee? engga kok di aku
2017-01-01 23:28 [ Arika ]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6949725
2017-01-01 23:29 [-R1]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6949728
2017-01-01 23:29 [-R1]: aku kaya gini aja xD
2017-01-01 23:29 [ Arika ]: okeey :)
2017-01-01 23:30 [ Arika ]: ey.. kayaknya bagian 00:46:739 (1) - engga jadi deh diganti ke slider ._.
2017-01-01 23:30 [-R1]: ;)
2017-01-01 23:30 [ Arika ]: aku bingung dengan susunan beatnya soalnya
2017-01-01 23:30 [-R1]: tru
2017-01-01 23:31 [ Arika ]: 00:51:025 (4) - ini ke 2013-216 deh
2017-01-01 23:31 [ Arika ]: 00:51:883 (1,2) - mending dibuat sejajar deh
2017-01-01 23:31 [-R1]: 2013 owo
2017-01-01 23:32 [ Arika ]: salah engga ada 1 nya maksudnya
2017-01-01 23:32 [ Arika ]: hehe
2017-01-01 23:32 [ Arika ]: 203 maksudnya xd
2017-01-01 23:32 [ Arika ]: itu tanpa sadar tertekan :>
2017-01-01 23:32 [-R1]: oh itu coordinatnya linear bgt
2017-01-01 23:32 [-R1]: takut kesusahan
2017-01-01 23:33 [ Arika ]: engga kok, justru sebelumnya itu engga pas sama sekali dengan 00:49:311 (2,3) - 
2017-01-01 23:34 [ Arika ]: 00:52:740 (2) - kayaknya dinaikkin ini ke y:177-180 deh aku agak bingung soalnya
2017-01-01 23:34 [ Arika ]: 00:52:740 (2,3) - terus blanket ulang
2017-01-01 23:34 [ Arika ]: 00:53:597 (3,4) - sama dengan 00:51:883 (1,2) - 
2017-01-01 23:35 [ Arika ]: dibuat sejajar
2017-01-01 23:35 [-R1]: 196-180
2017-01-01 23:35 [-R1]: karena spacing
2017-01-01 23:35 [-R1]: everything else fixed
2017-01-01 23:36 [ Arika ]: bukan cuman spacing, tapi karena bagian itu kalau di hr bakal susah karena engga lurus
2017-01-01 23:36 [ Arika ]: (pemula) yaa
2017-01-01 23:36 [-R1]: gk kalo di 177 spacingnya broken
2017-01-01 23:36 [ Arika ]: oh okeey
2017-01-01 23:37 [-R1]: ~~+
2017-01-01 23:37 [ Arika ]: 00:55:740 (2,5) - sebenarnya aku agak kurang suka dengan overlap kayak gini sih, tapi engga masalah selagi engga ada comment dari modder lain
2017-01-01 23:37 [ Arika ]: 00:57:454 (5,2) - susunannya jadi agak berantakan deh :)
2017-01-01 23:37 [-R1]: ~
2017-01-01 23:37 [ Arika ]: okey, next ya
2017-01-01 23:38 [-R1]: okay
2017-01-01 23:38 [-R1]: nanti aku tanya lagi sama yang lain
2017-01-01 23:38 [ Arika ]: 01:00:454 (3,4) - ini kayaknya maksa banget deh x.x
2017-01-01 23:38 [ Arika ]: engga bagus, tapi engga jelek juga..
2017-01-01 23:38 [-R1]: aww i like that one
2017-01-01 23:38 [ Arika ]: well that's your own decision
2017-01-01 23:38 [-R1]: ada saran?
2017-01-01 23:39 [-R1]: wigglenya biar cocok sama guitar-ish soundnya
2017-01-01 23:39 [-R1]: UwU
2017-01-01 23:39 [ Arika ]: hmm.. ada sih, tapi bakal aneh
2017-01-01 23:40 [ Arika ]: 01:01:311 (4,1) - ini engga di blanket tapi dipindah ke point ke dua dari wiggle si slider
2017-01-01 23:40 [ Arika ]: atau mungkin...
2017-01-01 23:40 [-R1]: bukannya bagus di blanket?
2017-01-01 23:41 [ Arika ]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6949799
2017-01-01 23:41 [-R1]: gk keren :3
2017-01-01 23:41 [ Arika ]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6949802
2017-01-01 23:41 [ Arika ]: jadinya gini
2017-01-01 23:41 [ Arika ]: okey :3
2017-01-01 23:41 [ Arika ]: itu hanya saran xD
2017-01-01 23:42 [-R1]: yha kalo gitu perlu di rearrange
2017-01-01 23:42 [-R1]: mager xD
2017-01-01 23:42 [-R1]: okay~
2017-01-01 23:42 [ Arika ]: ahaha okey deh kalau masalah mager aku skip masalah itu xd
2017-01-01 23:42 [ Arika ]: aku fokus ke slider dan placement
2017-01-01 23:42 [ Arika ]: aja
2017-01-01 23:42 [ Arika ]: .
2017-01-01 23:42 [-R1]: boleh~
2017-01-01 23:43 [ Arika ]: 01:02:810 (2,1) - blanket lebih baik deh
2017-01-01 23:43 [ Arika ]: 01:03:882 (1) - ini juga di remove combonya ya
2017-01-01 23:43 [-R1]: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6949812
2017-01-01 23:44 [ Arika ]: better than before xD
2017-01-01 23:44 [-R1]: okay~
2017-01-01 23:44 [-R1]: ini udh remap brp kali disuruh sama BN xD
2017-01-01 23:44 [ Arika ]: 01:06:882 (3,4) - ini bisa dibuat blanket lagi mungkin? dan.. ini 01:08:168 (4,1) - 
2017-01-01 23:45 [ Arika ]: ini akward sekali x.x
2017-01-01 23:45 [-R1]: both fixed
2017-01-01 23:45 [ Arika ]: 01:10:739 (1) - mending slider ini dibuat sama sekalian dengan 01:09:668 (2) - 
2017-01-01 23:46 [-R1]: 01:10:739 (1,2) - CTRL+G aja kah?
2017-01-01 23:46 [ Arika ]: harusnya slider ini 01:11:382 (2) - berhenti di 01:11:810 - 
2017-01-01 23:46 [ Arika ]: 01:12:025 (3) - ini ganti slider untuk nyambung di 01:12:453 (4) - 
2017-01-01 23:47 [-R1]: 01:12:025 - ini gmn?
2017-01-01 23:47 [ Arika ]: ini jadi slider sampai di 01:12:239 - .
2017-01-01 23:47 [-R1]: slider 3 berturut-turut aneh >//<
2017-01-01 23:47 [ Arika ]: well.. dari pada sebelumnya?
2017-01-01 23:47 [ Arika ]: mau gimana?
2017-01-01 23:48 [ Arika ]: coba aja didenger baik" suara beat yang kamu buat sebelumnya
2017-01-01 23:48 [-R1]: Avoid slider-only sections. Aiming and following a lot of sliders in a row can be tiring for new players. In such cases, circles and rest moments without objects to click or follow should be used.
2017-01-01 23:48 [-R1]: guideline buat Normal
2017-01-01 23:48 [ Arika ]: 01:11:810 - pi- 01:12:025 - ku- 01:12:239 - ku
2017-01-01 23:48 [ Arika ]: sorry..
2017-01-01 23:49 [-R1]: pi? ku?
2017-01-01 23:49 [ Arika ]: 01:12:239 - pi- 01:12:453 - ku-  
2017-01-01 23:49 [ Arika ]: denger deh
2017-01-01 23:49 [ Arika ]: aku ga tau dia nyanyi apa tapi suaranya begitu
2017-01-01 23:49 [-R1]: LOL
2017-01-01 23:49 [ Arika ]: apa engga aneh?
2017-01-01 23:50 [-R1]: boleh liat patternnya?
2017-01-01 23:50 [-R1]: aku masih bingung mau gmn xD
2017-01-01 23:50 [ Arika ]: kalaupun memang mau dibuat kayak begitu harusnya ada di bagian 01:13:525 - ini not. 01:13:096 - ini slider sampai di 01:13:310 - 
2017-01-01 23:51 [ Arika ]: https://puu.sh/t7JAR/be9d0635c7.png
2017-01-01 23:52 [-R1]: slider semua dong
2017-01-01 23:52 [-R1]: hmm
2017-01-01 23:52 [ Arika ]: 01:13:739 - back to vocal
2017-01-01 23:52 [ Arika ]: mau dibuat 1-2 not juga engga masalah kok
2017-01-01 23:53 [ Arika ]: kenapa aku koreksi bagian itu, karena itu benar" aneh di dengar x(
2017-01-01 23:53 [-R1]: aku put on hold dulu
2017-01-01 23:54 [-R1]: lagi aku diskusiin sama BN
2017-01-01 23:54 [ Arika ]: okey deh kalau gitu
2017-01-01 23:54 [-R1]: lanjut aja dulu deh
2017-01-01 23:54 [ Arika ]: 01:13:739 (1,2) - sudah cek ds?
2017-01-01 23:54 [-R1]: hahaha iya udh ku fix~
2017-01-01 23:55 [ Arika ]: okey~ kalau bisa sih dibuat sama dengan slider sebelumnya
2017-01-01 23:55 [ Arika ]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6949876
2017-01-01 23:56 [ Arika ]: aku pikir map ini easy..
2017-01-01 23:57 [ Arika ]: tapi normal, aku engga berani nambahin yang engga penting soalnya bakal ngerusak mapset sih
2017-01-01 23:57 [ Arika ]: soalnya dari tadi 1-1 semua kebanyakan
2017-01-01 23:58 [ Arika ]: contohnya bagian ini : 01:25:953 - 01:26:382 - 
2017-01-01 23:58 [ Arika ]: harusnya ada not di 01:25:953 - dan ini 01:26:168 - jadi slider sampai ke 01:26:382 - 
2017-01-01 23:59 [-R1]: jangan rame2 ah disitu
2017-01-01 23:59 [ Arika ]: 01:29:596 (4) - kenapa engga di 221-260? x.x
2017-01-01 23:59 [ Arika ]: makanya aku bilang engga berani nambahin kan :3
2017-01-01 23:59 [-R1]: 184-240 aja
2017-01-01 23:59 [-R1]: spacing karena
2017-01-02 00:00 [ Arika ]: bukan spacing yang aku omongin xd
2017-01-02 00:00 [-R1]: iya karena kalo ditaruh disitu spacingnya jadi rusak
2017-01-02 00:00 [ Arika ]: tapi ini : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6949901
2017-01-02 00:00 [ Arika ]: well then..
2017-01-02 00:00 [ Arika ]: sorry :(
2017-01-02 00:01 [-R1]: itu mah 216-260 di aku
2017-01-02 00:01 [-R1]: ;)
2017-01-02 00:01 [ Arika ]: 01:48:731 (1) - remove new combo
2017-01-02 00:01 [ Arika ]: yayayaya deh :)
2017-01-02 00:01 [ Arika ]: terserah xD
2017-01-02 00:01 [-R1]: done
2017-01-02 00:01 [-R1]: xD
2017-01-02 00:01 [-R1]: maap kak
2017-01-02 00:01 [-R1]: :p
2017-01-02 00:03 [ Arika ]: 02:07:499 (6,1) - cek ds deh
2017-01-02 00:04 [-R1]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6949927 fine disini kayanya
2017-01-02 00:04 [ Arika ]: waa salah ya x.x
2017-01-02 00:04 [-R1]: gpp kok
2017-01-02 00:05 [-R1]: ngantuk kali kak XD
2017-01-02 00:05 [ Arika ]: 02:22:434 (4) - new combo deh
2017-01-02 00:05 [ Arika ]: 02:20:573 (6,1) - ini ber2 coba di buat lurus deh dengan akhiran slider 02:19:953 (5) - 
2017-01-02 00:05 [-R1]: masih satu kalimat
2017-01-02 00:05 [ Arika ]: jadi lebih enak di ikutin soalnya
2017-01-02 00:06 [ Arika ]: itu time changing haduh ;-;
2017-01-02 00:06 [ Arika ]: okey deh, engga masalah kalau gitu
2017-01-02 00:07 [-R1]: done
2017-01-02 00:08 [ Arika ]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6949949 - mungkin lebih better begini deh
2017-01-02 00:08 [ Arika ]: 02:24:114 (1,2,3) - 
2017-01-02 00:08 [-R1]: owo that's nice
2017-01-02 00:08 [ Arika ]: 02:24:114 (1) - 268-340 , 02:24:938 (2) - 89-252 , 02:25:763 (3) - 265-153
2017-01-02 00:09 [ Arika ]: 02:26:588 (4) - ini stack dengan akhir slider dari 02:24:114 (1) - 
2017-01-02 00:09 [-R1]: sippppp
2017-01-02 00:09 [ Arika ]: 02:27:000 (5) - ini stack dengan kepala slider 02:24:938 (2,5) - 
2017-01-02 00:09 [-R1]: okk
2017-01-02 00:10 [ Arika ]: 02:23:694 (5) - sebenarnya sih ini agak mati dengan slider 02:22:434 (4) - 
2017-01-02 00:10 [ Arika ]: kalau lebih bagusnya sih coba dipindahin ke 345-284 ?
2017-01-02 00:10 [-R1]: apanya
2017-01-02 00:10 [ Arika ]: itunya ._.
2017-01-02 00:10 [-R1]: 3
2017-01-02 00:11 [-R1]: flownya gk kaku kak?
2017-01-02 00:11 [ Arika ]: okeey.. itu cuman saran xD
2017-01-02 00:11 [-R1]: sip kak :D
2017-01-02 00:11 [ Arika ]: aneh sih, tapi slidernya jadi engga perlu gitu ditekuk xD
2017-01-02 00:12 [ Arika ]: (kayak)
2017-01-02 00:12 [-R1]: nanti aku liat lagi
2017-01-02 00:13 [ Arika ]: kayaknya kalau masalah pattern aja sih engga terlalu masalah, karena aku engga berani ngubah slidernya, nanti jadi aneh kan xD
2017-01-02 00:13 [ Arika ]: aku post ya? o.oa
2017-01-02 00:13 [-R1]: ok :D
2017-01-02 00:14 [-R1]: makasih banget ya o_o

Yahuri

1,400 posts

Joined July 2014

Yahuri 2017-01-01T21:15:22+00:00

m4m from my queue~
cute song and hitsounds

General
-combo 2 is very dark (Ora diffs), its hard to see especially in full dim.
-volume is just 50% all the way through until the end (Ora, 01). 01:53:950 - this is where it builds back up with the instruments (drum) from before, so i would like to see gradual volume increase until here 01:57:430 where it drops out the violin

Blue Skies
01:18:453 (3) - 02:06:660 (4) - these 1/4 sliders only happen twice throughout the diff, if youre not following a specific pattern then i would just make them both triples to match the other triples
00:23:176 (2,3,1) - fix stack
00:24:890 (2,3) - instrument isnt that intense, decrease DS?
00:32:169 (3,4,5,6) - change up this pattern a little bit so you can get a higher DS to 5 (has clap) instead of 4,6?
01:05:596 (1,2) - the sharp angle change doesnt flow well here imo, since 2 isnt that intense
01:07:310 (1,6) - fix stack
01:19:310 (1,3) - ^
01:24:453 (1,2) - 2 is pretty much a ghost note, so dont put a jump there (or put a circle at all)
01:27:882 (1,6) - fix stack
01:43:513 - since you use pretty large spacing here, volume increase? (if you make this change, adjust volume on all diffs)
02:04:772 (2) - sharp angle change doesnt flow well here imo because 2 isnt that intense
02:10:436 (8,1) - this is a pretty small jump going into the kiai, make it bigger (at least as big as 01:43:947 (3,4)?)

01's Normal
-change combo colors
-add hitsounds
-if you plan on using different curvatures for 1-anchor curve sliders, i would recommend using them in pairs (at least), not by themselves. for example, 01:15:025 (2,1,2) - all of these sliders have different curvatures (but 1 really sticks out) so it looks messy.
01:43:513 (1,2) - ^
01:46:992 (1,2) - ^
01:51:341 (3,4) - ^
02:10:856 (1,2) - ^ change 1 to match 2
-copy-paste is your friend (especially for blanket sliders) 00:56:168 (3) - this is a pretty good blanket so use that if you need to redo any blankets.
01:08:168 (4) - slider end unsnapped, fix blanket
01:08:168 (4,1) - fix blanket
01:15:882 (1,2) - ^
01:23:596 (2,3) - ^ those are just a few, you can get the rest on your own
00:33:025 (3) - i think this would look better if you put the red anchor in the middle of the slider (apply to all similar sliders)
01:01:311 (4) - slider really sticks out because it's short and somewhat complex. either remove it, or replace a few other short sliders with it too (since theres a triple during the slider, maybe put it at similar places)
01:10:739 (1,2,3,4,5) - this string of objects is longer than usual, maybe move 5 here? 01:13:310
01:48:731 (1,2) - fix DS
01:57:430 (1,3) - overlap doesnt look good, space them out
02:24:114 (1,2,3) - how about making a triangular shape with these? (copy-paste one of the sliders, rotate it 120 and 240 degrees to get the other sliders) result should be something like this: https://puu.sh/t7Wk7/9fdc39c153.png

Good luck!

Perklone

86 posts

Joined January 2014

Perklone 2017-01-02T11:45:38+00:00

Yahuri wrote:
m4m from my queue~
cute song and hitsounds

01's Normal
-change combo colors Ora will do that
-add hitsounds^
-if you plan on using different curvatures for 1-anchor curve sliders, i would recommend using them in pairs (at least), not by themselves. for example, 01:15:025 (2,1,2) - all of these sliders have different curvatures (but 1 really sticks out) so it looks messy. 01:15:882 (1,2) - now have same shape
01:43:513 (1,2) - ^ fixed
01:46:992 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:51:341 (3,4) - ^
02:10:856 (1,2) - ^ change 1 to match 2 i'm fine with dis
-copy-paste is your friend (especially for blanket sliders) 00:56:168 (3) - this is a pretty good blanket so use that if you need to redo any blankets.
01:08:168 (4) - slider end unsnapped, fix blanket done
01:08:168 (4,1) - fix blanket ^
01:15:882 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:23:596 (2,3) - ^ those are just a few, you can get the rest on your own already did that
00:33:025 (3) - i think this would look better if you put the red anchor in the middle of the slider (apply to all similar sliders) done
01:01:311 (4) - slider really sticks out because it's short and somewhat complex. either remove it, or replace a few other short sliders with it too (since theres a triple during the slider, maybe put it at similar places) i think it's fine the way it is right now, it's for complementing the guitar in the bg
01:10:739 (1,2,3,4,5) - this string of objects is longer than usual, maybe move 5 here? 01:13:310 the old place was fine, it's not that long anyway
01:48:731 (1,2) - fix DS done
01:57:430 (1,3) - overlap doesnt look good, space them outokay~
02:24:114 (1,2,3) - how about making a triangular shape with these? (copy-paste one of the sliders, rotate it 120 and 240 degrees to get the other sliders) result should be something like this: https://puu.sh/t7Wk7/9fdc39c153.png did smth like that but not that.

Good luck!

thanks for the mod!! and applied Arika's mod aswell

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28,188,78882,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,240,79310,6,0,B|160:219|160:219|280:267|328:235,1,220
424,248,80596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,336,81025,2,0,B|352:368|232:320|232:320|191:340,1,220
96,368,82310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,288,82739,6,0,P|16:216|48:160,1,110
112,136,83596,2,0,B|157:123|157:123|205:163,1,110
272,240,84453,2,0,P|296:200|288:96,1,110
280,40,85310,2,0,L|168:80,1,110
88,120,86168,5,0,0:0:0:0:
48,208,86596,2,0,B|58:272|136:259|136:259|142:313|200:343,1,220
288,320,87882,2,0,P|336:160|216:240,1,330
160,200,89596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,89813,12,0,93075,0:0:0:0:
72,80,103513,6,0,P|112:144|192:176,1,110
232,200,104382,2,0,P|274:234|299:282,1,110
216,336,105252,2,0,B|200:256|96:248|96:248|80:168,1,220
120,96,106557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,72,106992,6,0,P|273:52|352:80,1,110
420,72,107862,2,0,P|440:129|412:208,1,110
424,276,108731,6,0,B|392:236|328:237|328:237|314:186|240:164,1,220
172,100,110036,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,172,110471,5,0,0:0:0:0:
172,244,110906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,332,111341,2,0,P|264:300|328:292,1,110
408,272,112211,2,0,P|461:270|494:228,1,110
512,128,113081,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,152,113515,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,88,113950,6,0,P|280:104|256:184,1,110
224,240,114820,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,328,115255,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,360,115690,2,0,P|136:312|128:256,1,110
96,168,116560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,116995,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,84,117430,6,0,P|321:112|339:163,1,110
296,256,118269,2,0,P|251:228|233:177,1,110
196,84,119108,2,0,P|156:44|28:108,1,220
40,200,120367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,272,120786,6,0,B|168:240|216:264|216:264|248:192|360:232,1,220
408,232,122045,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,176,122464,2,0,P|448:104|384:72,1,110
328,64,123304,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,136,123723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,96,124143,6,0,P|120:112|72:192,1,110
56,244,124982,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,300,125402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,256,125821,2,0,B|244:214|324:222|324:222|272:168|292:120,1,220
256,32,127080,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,76,127499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
107,155,127919,6,0,P|158:176|216:180,1,110
312,164,128758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,216,129178,2,0,B|420:184|484:160|484:160|420:120|388:40,1,220
312,56,130436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,68,130856,6,0,P|180:108|212:172,1,110
268,232,131683,2,0,P|308:208|372:200,1,110
400,296,132510,2,0,P|360:320|296:328,1,110
248,320,133130,2,0,P|216:308|168:312,1,55
100,284,133750,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,196,134164,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,108,134577,6,0,P|184:96|280:152,1,165
300,156,135404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,124,135818,2,0,P|392:188|360:232,1,110
320,312,136645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,240,137058,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,280,137472,6,0,P|104:264|40:192,1,110
40,188,138092,2,0,P|36:160|48:108,1,55
108,64,138712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,92,139126,2,0,P|260:116|300:148,1,110
392,172,139953,2,0,P|360:220|288:236,1,110
272,264,140573,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,280,140780,5,0,0:0:0:0:
140,224,141193,2,0,P|180:184|244:176,1,110
328,148,142020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,88,142434,2,0,B|436:152|404:200|404:200|440:240|444:292,1,220
368,356,143694,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,340,144114,6,0,P|199:337|147:297,1,110
112,236,144938,2,0,P|145:193|195:171,1,110
288,200,145763,2,0,P|288:253|263:301,1,110
172,344,146588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,324,147000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,147206,12,0,149268,0:0:0:0:

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Ora 2017-01-03T01:21:06+00:00

Yahuri wrote:
m4m from my queue~
cute song and hitsounds

General
-combo 2 is very dark (Ora diffs), its hard to see especially in full dim. you're probably right, going to re-do combo colors
-volume is just 50% all the way through until the end (Ora, 01). 01:53:950 - this is where it builds back up with the instruments (drum) from before, so i would like to see gradual volume increase until here 01:57:430 where it drops out the violin fixed all audio!

Blue Skies
01:18:453 (3) - 02:06:660 (4) - these 1/4 sliders only happen twice throughout the diff, if youre not following a specific pattern then i would just make them both triples to match the other triples decided after all the mods I've gotten to just change
00:23:176 (2,3,1) - fix stack wow I suck at stacks
00:24:890 (2,3) - instrument isnt that intense, decrease DS? it's really not that big :s
00:32:169 (3,4,5,6) - change up this pattern a little bit so you can get a higher DS to 5 (has clap) instead of 4,6? fixed
01:05:596 (1,2) - the sharp angle change doesnt flow well here imo, since 2 isnt that intense I don't see issues with flow here. plays really well imo
01:07:310 (1,6) - fix stack fsfasfsa
01:19:310 (1,3) - ^ safewr342452
01:24:453 (1,2) - 2 is pretty much a ghost note, so dont put a jump there (or put a circle at all) I hear guitar that it goes with, but maybe you're right about the jump. I'll see if a BN mentions
01:27:882 (1,6) - fix stack ew
01:43:513 - since you use pretty large spacing here, volume increase? (if you make this change, adjust volume on all diffs) All volume is fixed
02:04:772 (2) - sharp angle change doesnt flow well here imo because 2 isnt that intense not that big of a deal imo, the angle is a little sharp, but there's nothing really intense about the way it's mapped
02:10:436 (8,1) - this is a pretty small jump going into the kiai, make it bigger (at least as big as 01:43:947 (3,4)?) fix!

Good luck! thanks for the m4m!

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Ora 2017-01-12T22:27:08+00:00

map is not deaddd, just getting some timing issues fixed up.

Sc4v4ng3r

1,232 posts

Joined August 2014

Sc4v4ng3r 2017-01-14T05:14:30+00:00

Just note that the mod came late cause I got reminded - I clearly stated this in my userpage.
No kds btw

[General]

Kiai is ending in different times on the GDs and your difficulties - and since their ends don't emphasize the same thing in the music, this doesn't make sense. In fact, the chorus' stanza continues until 02:27:000 - , so your kiai shouldn't end prematurely at 02:24:114 - or 02:22:434 - for the GDs. Please have the kiai end at same ticks for all difficulties.
Hope that timing is fixed soon lol
The difficulty setting's spread is a mess right now. Advanced currently has a higher CS than Hard, so the difficulty curve is destroyed. Higher CS means the notes are a lot more easier to hit, which makes the difficulty(I mean hard) a lot more easier than the difficulty below it. I highly recommend a simple spread of 3>3.5>3.5>4 or something, so that it's progressively increasing. Also check on other settings for reasonable 'gaps' between each difficulties for the values.

[01's Normal]

Still no hitsounds ahhhh
00:15:890 (1) - Unnecessary NC - you place NC every 2 downbeats so remove it.
00:16:533 (2,2) - Although kinda not noticeable, but the tail of the second slider is almost touching the first slider's body. This will look visually unappealing for most players as the 'visual distance' isn't similar to the actual DS between 1/1 notes. So for instance, if you made a slider blanket instead, you would get this - the visual distance between these 2 slider borders are somewhat similar to the distance of 1/1 notes. Try to have these somewhat like this.
00:21:676 (2,1) - So applying the same principle here too, you can simply just move (1) down a little bit more to give a more appealing pattern.
00:22:747 (1) - Unnecessary NC again
00:34:737 (1,2) - I've gone over this, either make this a clear blanket or not at all.
00:40:761 (1) - Unnecessary NC again, but instead you should NC 00:41:597 (3) - here.
00:43:311 (1) - So this NC has to go. NC again will be added at 00:45:025 (3) - , then removed at 00:46:739 (1) - .
01:00:454 (3,4) - And again, these looks a tad bit too close to each other. Instead I'll try to make a blanket like this(notice that I added another anchor to give a smoother curve, and made smaller curve so that the blanket is possible), but you will have to move 01:02:168 (1) - this and the following notes down if you are applying it this way. You can use other patterns but I recommend using this.
01:03:882 (1) - Srsly there's too much of this unnecessary NC
01:09:668 (2,1) - Instead of straight up using a different curve for (1), why not try a slider blanket? Like this would work. Just make sure the slider you are blanketing with aligns exactly onto the blanketed slider perfectly.(And that's how you check those, at least for me)
01:10:739 (1) - Again :c
01:12:453 (4,1) - Swap NC between these 2 ahhhh
01:13:096 (5) - Nothing really special lands on this note or tick in general, so I would move this circle to the next white tick(at 01:13:310 - ) where there are actually audible instruments.
01:15:882 (1,2) - When there's a perfect opportunity for blanket you kinda wasted it like this, so it doesn't look too good. Maybe try to blanket them?
01:19:310 (1,3) - Again about the visual to actual distance comparison thing, but this time they are really close lol. I would fiddle around with (3)'s shape a little bit and have a pattern like this. Just note that they are not exact replicas of each other xD
01:26:596 (2) - Previously when you used this kind of slider, you made both 'sides' of it have equal 'curve' to it, so having it unequal here doesn't feel too appealing again. You can have them equal by having the red anchor point on the slidertick, then using that as a 'mirror line' for the other 2 grey anchors, like this, and you can use this for other similar sliders as well.
01:48:731 (1) - Unnecessary NC fhadpfhap
02:13:130 (4) - If you hear to the song closely, you only can hear a very minor sound here - which doesn't really justify the sliderhead on the red tick instead of the white tick, where it have more prominent sounds than it. I would just remove the slider entirely, and place a circle only instead.
02:14:164 (6,1) - You didn't do this kind of NC for the next section at 02:20:780 (1,2) - so please keep them consistent.
02:14:577 (1,2) - Rhythmically this feels weird cause you never skipped the 1/1 beats(except only on 2/1 sliders), so you should shorten down (1) to 1/1 and follow up with a 1/2 slider instead of a circle, so the rhythm becomes 1/1 slider+1/2 slider.
02:19:953 (5) - Blanket's still a little bit off on the tails.
02:20:573 (6) - Again a note which lands on almost no sound - really, musically this doesn't make sense at all. Remove this note.
02:21:813 - If you applied my suggestion at 02:14:577 (1,2) - , add a 1/2 slider on this tick then remove the circle for consistency.
02:22:434 (4) - On 02:15:818 (4,5,6) - you didn't make a 2/1 slider to skip so much mappable beats so this feels lazy. Try to have more 1/1 beats emphasized.
02:26:382 - This bell is on the special side cause this wasn't here in any of the other sections, so maybe you should add an object here to emphasize on this.

[Advanced]

00:38:589 (2) - I don't know why you emphasize those held vocals differently here and in 00:31:313 (1,2,3) - they essentially are the same even though they start in different ticks, so I don't know why one is emphasized so loosely while the other is fully emphasized, ignoring every other instruments. What's more is that you've been following those guitar sounds, so suddenly changing to vocal doesn't make sense whatsoever. I suggest you to map this out like 00:31:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , not with a long slider.
00:45:025 (1,2,3) - Here too, skipping those obvious drums and guitars over the vocals, which you still managed to emphasize it wrongly, feels especially awkward. Try to have a rhythm like the previous parts where it emphasized more guitar and drum sounds, as they are clearly present here. Vocals can come as a secondary emphasis.
00:51:454 (8) - Since the current rhythm has slider heads on every bells, skipping over this doesn't really feel smooth as you abruptly remove the emphasis. Maybe separate this into 2 circles instead?
01:12:453 (1,2) - Like what I've mentioned on the first 2 points, apply similarly here.
01:26:596 (3,4) - Uh huh, you know what I mean
01:46:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Suddenly being dense on rhythm when the music doesn't suggest anything about it, then going back to 1/1 rhythm at 01:50:471 (1,2,3,4) - musically doesn't make sense. You totally can hear that the music isn't suddenly intense then calm again in between those 2 parts, so I don't see a reason for this. Try to reduce down the note density in this section so that it makes a simple 1/1 rhythm instead.
02:07:499 (1,2,3) - You basically know what I mean by this, just refer to the first point already
02:24:114 (1,2,3) - As I've mentioned in the general section, this still has the same stanza as the chorus, so there's no point for this to have a lower note density than them. I would fill the 1/2 gaps with circles.
02:26:588 (5,1) - Such a small rhythmic gap between these two notes can give such a little time for players at this skill level to react to the spinner, which can be a surprise factor affecting performance. Try to increase the gap to at least 1/2.
But really, in the end, the patterns are cool, and I like the difficulty in general. Just work on those rhythms and the difficulty would be ready to go.

[Rocket's Hard]

00:34:309 (4) - This is the only jump that has a distance of higher than 3.0x, which isn't really justified as other snares like 00:39:444 (4) - are lower. You might want to reduce it down. Plus this being in somewhere early in the map can catch players by surprise.
00:39:872 (1) - This spinner ignores so much guitar and vocals which you have been following, so it really feels out of place. The vocal isn't even held until the end of the spinner, and if you say that the red lines each beat is hindering you from mapping this out, it's a stupid excuse. If you mapped out all other guitars and vocals fine, you should be able to do it here, and I strongly suggest you to do so.
00:51:882 - I have no idea why from this point onwards till 01:02:168 - , the jumps just dramatically increase in number. This section of the song isn't too special by any means - it's not the chorus so it isn't too intense, and the bells actually land on the upbeats from this point on, which is the case that persists until the next section, and yet in the next section you had lesser jumps, even with vocals. My point is, I understand the jumps and all, but jumps almost every beat can be hard as the previous sections all didn't have it. I would just leave the downbeat jumps and remove all others, but it's your choice.(I still recommend you to change though)
01:19:310 (1) - In 00:31:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , the similar held vocals wasn't emphasized as a single long slider, in a calmer part no less. Using a long slider to emphasize solely on the vocals feels really weird(by calm I mean the previous part didn't had the bells, and was somewhat more quieter), especially when this is in the more intense section of the song. I highly suggest you to map this out.
01:26:168 (1) - Although in play it feels fine, but the wiggle at the middle is somewhat questionable as the wiggle is so minimalistic that it can affect the speed, although minor. For safety I suggest you to go for a simple curve slider or a bigger wiggle. This applies for 01:27:882 (1) - as well - just making a bigger wiggle would be better.
01:50:036 (4,1) - The hitburst from (4) blocks off (1)'s first repeat, which only is visible after (1) is being played, which only gives a small window of time for players to react. This is unrankable, and even if I'm wrong somewhere here, the small window that the player gets can result in an unintuitive play. Fix this.
02:03:304 (3,1) - Is the off-stack intentional? Feels a little bit off cause your other patterns which involves stacks aren't stacked like this.
02:13:130 (2) - Feels weird for me to skip over that loud violin at the middle of this slider - while the previous rhythms like this does make sense(for example, 01:02:168 (1,2,3,4) - this works as the vocals land at the red tick and you follow this for the whole section), this doesn't as no other sound can justify the head being at the red tick. I would just separate this slider into a circle+1/2 slider.
02:17:472 (1) - Try to add a downbeat jump here? This is the only place which there's no jump for the downbeat, so I would prefer it to be consistent.
02:22:020 (3) - I'm quite nazi here but this isn't a proper slider blanket with 02:22:434 (1) - the tail's a little off. Move up the tail by 1 grid and stack it back properly.

[Blue Skies]

00:30:457 (3,4,5,6) - These stacks really remove the emphasis you gave at 00:28:745 (3,4,5,6) - , so if you are going to make stacks for this, either have it on all similar beats or just not use them at all.
00:41:597 (1,2,3) - Note this this kinds of movement is really easy on insanes as the slider leniency of (1) allows players to just move from (1)'s head to (2), without moving to (1)'s tail. This also means that the actual DS in effect here is really low, so I suggest you to increase the distance here. Same goes for 00:42:454 (4,5,6) - .
00:45:025 (1,2) - This rhythm feels really damn lazy; you could have easily mapped out the guitars and such, yet you decided to skip those and go for the simple 1/1 rhythm. Because of your previous rhythm this is inconsistent as well, so musically this doesn't make sense. I highly recommend you to change this rhythm into something more complex.
00:47:597 (3,4,5) - A jump to give emphasis on how different this sound is would be nice.
00:48:454 (1) - This is a part transition, and it's where the bells kick in, so I definitely see a potential for a jump here.
00:58:311 (6) - You had higher distance for those upbeat bells, so I suggest you to increase the distance here to 1.8x at least.
00:58:740 (1,3) - Nazi, but the place of (3) makes these 2 feel very uneven in terms of visual distance. Moving (3) to x=312 y=192 would feel a lot more better.
01:21:025 (1,3,4,5) - This minimalistic overlap seems out of place to me, as you didn't do this kinds of overlap later in the difficulty. Either overlap more or just don't overlap them at all.
01:26:382 (2,3) - (2) and (3) are different sounds; that is, (2) has guitars, and (3) have guitars, as well as vocals and snares, so a stack can remove all those potential emphasis. I would like to see them unstacked.
02:02:045 (4,1) - This strong vocals previously were emphasized pretty nicely without the usage of slider leniency, but here, due to slider leniency the emphasis for the strong vocals are removed. I would space (1) out more so that it actually feels like a jump.
02:09:178 (5) - You are missing out on NC here lol
02:14:164 (1,2) - All the other 'normal' notes didn't have short distances like this, so especially in the chorus where the instruments are at the their peak strength, this can be unintuitive. I would space them out more, to at least 1.3x or something.
02:26:588 (3,4) - Again, due to slider leniency the emphasis for these notes are removed. Instead, for this pattern I would suggest you to place (4) in the right side, so that the emphasis is there.
Mostly the difficulty feels fine but those slider leniency could have been used better - they remove some important emphasis.

Good luck!

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Ora 2017-01-14T06:42:36+00:00

Thanks sc4v4ng3r you really didn't have to c:

hope you are feeling better

Little

2,509 posts

Joined November 2012

Little 2017-01-14T22:07:35+00:00

[General]

Are you sure about the timing? Maybe get it checked.

[01's Normal]

00:13:962 (1) - Maybe just delete this. It's a bit hard to catch this beat since it happens before the downbeat without any real cue and you ignore the note in the phrase at 00:15:676 anyway.
00:20:604 (5,1) - Blanket would be nice. Also, I don't see any need have such large distance spacing here. Consider trying to keep the distance spacing consistent throughout the map. Check distance spacing in other parts of the map too.
00:22:747 (1) - Maybe move this down a bit so it isn't so close to 00:21:676 (2) It will look cleaner.
00:38:589 (1) - Would be prettier if it was symmetrical.
01:00:454 (3,4) - Would look cleaner this way: http://puu.sh/tmqsy/d9f84010dc.jpg
01:06:882 (3,4,1) - Make more even blankets. Check your other blankets too. You can make clean blankets by having the distance between the objects consistent all the way around.
01:43:513 (1,3) - Maybe try to avoid overlap.

[Advanced]

00:38:161 (1,2) - Angle here's a bit awkward. Consider moving (2) to the right a bit or widening the curve.
01:03:882 (5,6,7) - Feels a bit stiff to have straight flow here. Would be nice if (6) fit the curve of motion by being a bit lower.
01:58:269 (3,4) - Parallel would be nicer for style consistency since you use a lot of parallel sliders earlier in the map.

[Rocket's Hard]

00:22:747 (5,6) - Spacing could be a bit cleaner: http://puu.sh/tmr8Z/6af8b48bb1.jpg
01:07:953 (2,3,4) - Space equally as triangle?
01:32:205 (2,1) - Maybe come up with a nicer way to overlap this so it doesn't look messy.
01:50:036 (4,1) - Avoid covering the slider reverse arrow.

[Blue Skies]

00:30:457 (3,4,5,6) - I think it would be better not to stack these. Maybe use a pattern similar to 00:33:881 (3,4,5) since they are the same part of the phrase.
00:54:883 (6,1) - Weird flow dropoff here. I think you should try to use a smoother flow.
01:17:596 (1,6) - Stack might look nice.
01:57:212 (5,1) - I think jump would have better emphasis than stack.

KappaPraise

316 posts

Joined November 2015

KappaPraise 2017-01-17T07:09:57+00:00

Some IRC with timing fix

IRC

2017-01-17 09:05 WISPG_G: hi
2017-01-17 09:06 WISPG_G: sorry for delay, I made timing for rest part of harmonia
2017-01-17 09:07 Ora: hello ^^
2017-01-17 09:07 Ora: so how should I do this
2017-01-17 09:08 WISPG_G: wait a moment
2017-01-17 09:08 Ora: without ruining everything xd
2017-01-17 09:08 Ora: kk
2017-01-17 09:09 WISPG_G: https://puu.sh/tp7zm/e951a5fb88.txt
2017-01-17 09:09 WISPG_G: this is whole timing of map
2017-01-17 09:09 WISPG_G: just paste it, there are green lines too
2017-01-17 09:09 Ora: ok is that for blue skies?
2017-01-17 09:09 WISPG_G: yes
2017-01-17 09:11 Ora: time to resnap everything I guess lol
2017-01-17 09:11 WISPG_G: yus
2017-01-17 09:12 WISPG_G: well, if you steel want give something back, you can mod my gd for me xd I finished it recently and I need mods. You can mod only my dif or whole set, whatever you want xd
2017-01-17 09:13 WISPG_G: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1181914 Hatsuki Yura - Salamandra no Odoriko]
2017-01-17 09:13 WISPG_G: thx
2017-01-17 09:13 WISPG_G: about you another map, I'll check it later
2017-01-17 09:13 WISPG_G: your*
2017-01-17 09:13 WISPG_G: steel/still I dont remember xD
2017-01-17 09:13 Ora: still xd
2017-01-17 09:13 Ora: i got you
2017-01-17 09:13 Ora: dont worry :^)
2017-01-17 09:14 Ora: what "another map"?
2017-01-17 09:14 WISPG_G: ACTION is listening to Gareth Coker - Naru, Embracing the Light (feat. Rachel Mellis)
2017-01-17 09:14 WISPG_G: You asked me check timing
2017-01-17 09:15 Ora: ohhhh
2017-01-17 09:15 Ora: the ori map
2017-01-17 09:15 Ora:

2017-01-17 09:15 Ora: yeah any help is appreciated
2017-01-17 09:16 WISPG_G: I tried play ori, but I didnt like because of control

all time clicking jump on walls and cant reach top, or is that too hard for me or I dont understand something
2017-01-17 09:17 Ora: hmm are you sure you were going the right way? xD
2017-01-17 09:17 Ora: I still need to beat the game
2017-01-17 09:17 Ora: I only played 50%
2017-01-17 09:17 WISPG_G: Ye, I am sure
2017-01-17 09:21 WISPG_G: do you like atmospheric games like ori?
2017-01-17 09:24 Ora: yeah but I dont know many of them :c
2017-01-17 09:24 Ora: do you
2017-01-17 09:24 Ora: ?
2017-01-17 09:28 WISPG_G: well, I can reccomend Child of Light and Transistor
2017-01-17 09:28 WISPG_G: 10/10 games xd
2017-01-17 09:33 WISPG_G: how is new timing for you?
2017-01-17 09:33 Ora: good...I should have resnapped the green points first -_-
2017-01-17 09:34 Ora: some of the sections SV got messed up but i can fix
2017-01-17 09:34 WISPG_G: is that such hard for you? xd
2017-01-17 09:39 Ora: omg this is so much better
2017-01-17 09:39 Ora: dsfjklasfjkld
2017-01-17 09:39 WISPG_G: \o/
2017-01-17 09:40 Ora: i can actually acc
2017-01-17 09:40 Ora: xD
2017-01-17 09:40 Ora: and good UR
2017-01-17 09:40 Ora: i love you
2017-01-17 09:40 WISPG_G: I love me too xd
2017-01-17 09:40 WISPG_G: np xd
2017-01-17 09:41 WISPG_G: ACTION is playing Panda Eyes & Teminite - Highscore [REVERSE JUMPS]
2017-01-17 09:41 WISPG_G: cant even jump
2017-01-17 09:41 Ora: wait there is 1 part
2017-01-17 09:41 WISPG_G: wtf with my acc
2017-01-17 09:41 Ora: pls help
2017-01-17 09:41 WISPG_G: what is it?
2017-01-17 09:41 Ora: let me update
2017-01-17 09:41 WISPG_G: ok
2017-01-17 09:41 Ora: k
2017-01-17 09:41 Ora: 01:44:435 (4,5,6) -
2017-01-17 09:42 Ora: feels like it gets behind
2017-01-17 09:42 Ora: the first part of that section
2017-01-17 09:44 WISPG_G: are you update it already?
2017-01-17 09:45 Ora: yes
2017-01-17 09:47 WISPG_G: ah, cant hear main sounds correctly because of that violin rip xD
2017-01-17 09:48 Ora: but it sounds like it picks up fine
2017-01-17 09:48 Ora: near the end of the section
2017-01-17 09:48 Ora: :s
2017-01-17 09:48 Ora: idk
2017-01-17 09:49 WISPG_G: move this red line to here 01:43:542 -
2017-01-17 09:49 WISPG_G: and add another here 01:50:500 -
2017-01-17 09:51 WISPG_G: and I have a question... why thus pattern 01:47:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - such bad? xD may be triangle could be better?
2017-01-17 09:52 Ora: fk is it really that bad? :c
2017-01-17 09:53 Ora: I still have to go through p/5746142/ D:
2017-01-17 09:53 WISPG_G: from point of flow is fine, but from point aesthetic (I am not sure I write this word right xD) it lookes messy
2017-01-17 09:54 WISPG_G: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7079982 this looks much better
2017-01-17 09:56 WISPG_G: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7079989
2017-01-17 09:56 Ora: woah cool
2017-01-17 09:56 Ora: I like

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