ArcherLove wrote:

dari RMM karena yang lain males jadi saya saja

[hard]

00:01:156 (1156|4,1156|5) - 00:03:947 (3947|4,3947|5) - 00:04:993 (4993|1,4993|0,5342|2,5342|5,5691|4,5691|3) - 00:06:738 (6738|4,6738|1) - 00:09:528 (9528|3,9528|4) - 00:12:319 (12319|2,12319|5) - 00:14:063 (14063|0,14063|2) - 00:15:110 (15110|4,15110|2) - 00:23:482 (23482|2,23482|1) - ini semua nggak worh 2 note dari suaranya.. serius.. // mau keep dulu , nanti kalo ada yg nyebut kek gini lagi mungkin baru di apus :/

00:04:993 (4993|1,4993|0,5342|5,5342|2,5691|3,5691|4,6040|2,6040|6,6040|0) - http://puu.sh/uv2Qw/34ab39af38.jpg // pake cara lain
00:19:645 (19645|3) - vocal? gimana kalau http://puu.sh/uv2Se/94f717058e.jpg bukan vocal , tapi kalo di denger pake 25% ada suara disitu , suggestion nya di apply owo
00:20:691 (20691|3) - ctrl+atas 2x
00:22:784 (22784|4,22784|3,23482|2,23482|0,23482|1,23831|3,23831|4) - http://puu.sh/uv2U7/605cc895ba.jpg
00:27:668 (27668|1,28249|2,28307|3,28365|4) - http://puu.sh/uv2VK/029dd3e902.jpg
00:29:238 (29238|4,29412|3) - ghost? lebih bagus dihapus imo //piano
00:34:470 (34470|0,34645|5,34645|1,34819|3,34993|4,35168|5,35226|0,35284|1,35342|3) - http://puu.sh/uv2XP/e970236677.jpg // itu ada susunan buat pitch jadi keknya engga :u
00:35:691 (35691|0,35865|2,36040|1,36214|2,36389|6,36389|5) - http://puu.sh/uv2YR/bac90140b4.jpg
00:41:970 (41970|4) - ke 6 aja //keep :u
00:45:633 (45633|0,45807|0,45807|4,45982|1,45982|5,46156|2,46331|4,46331|3) - http://puu.sh/uv30G/2f685cf916.jpg
00:48:598 (48598|4,48772|5,48947|6) - ctrl+j
00:55:749 (55749|0,55749|6,55924|2,55924|4) - ctrl+j
01:07:784 (67784|1,68133|0,68133|2,68133|5,68482|4,68656|5,68831|4) - http://puu.sh/uv33F/536f91e0b9.jpg
01:11:272 (71272|3,71447|1,71621|3,71970|1,71970|2) - http://puu.sh/uv35C/d1511033cb.jpg
01:14:063 (74063|3,74238|0) - ke 6-3? //pake cara lain :3
01:16:854 (76854|6,77028|5,77203|6) - http://puu.sh/uv37Q/4bba48e439.jpg
01:21:389 (81389|5,81389|2,81389|1,81389|4) - http://puu.sh/uv38z/0a8809269d.png?
01:24:877 - add note, ada suara di situ lanjutan dari sebelumnya

[normal]

untuk yang suaranya 2 note tadi sama kayak di hard ... nggak worth 2 note, tolong dipikirkan lagi ya..
00:15:110 (15110|4) - ke 6
00:31:156 (31156|2) - ke 5 aja terus 00:31:505 (31505|4,31679|5,31854|6) - ke 2-3-4
00:35:168 (35168|0,35342|3) - ke 4-5?
00:44:761 (44761|1,44935|2) - ctrl+j terus ctrl+kanan 1x
00:45:807 (45807|1) - ke 1 aja, sma suaranya kaya sebelumnya
00:51:389 (51389|3,51738|3) - lebih baik di 2-6 ... untuk NM diff
00:58:017 (58017|1,58017|2,58365|4,58365|0) - http://puu.sh/uv3gh/8c385946a0.jpg //keep
00:58:714 - missing note, sekalian http://puu.sh/uv3iL/cbeaf59780.jpg?
01:10:575 (70575|4,70924|2) - ke 4-5 aja //keeppp :u
01:16:505 (76505|1) - ke 4
01:24:877 - add note, ada suara di situ lanjutan dari sebelumnya

[easy]

00:08:133 (8133|3) - ke 3 aja
00:09:528 (9528|2,10226|0) - ke 2-3 aja
00:12:319 (12319|3,13017|2) - ctrl+j
00:14:412 (14412|3) - ke 2 aja
00:29:063 (29063|2) - ke 1 terus 00:29:761 (29761|0) - ke 2
00:54:528 (54528|5) - ke 4 aja keep yang ini :3
01:07:435 (67435|2,67784|0,68133|1) - http://puu.sh/uv3pb/0695fe6511.jpg

itu modnya rata-rata buat visualisasi sama rasa saat bermain (gambar, move dll)
terus terang ini mapnya masih kasar di mata, walau kalau dimainin nggak masalah sih ..
semangat ya~ good luck:3

Gyukari wrote:

Rem & Gyukari Mania Moding!

hi ! Alsty- thank you for NM req !

Mod

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• [General]

1. wide screen off

• [NM]

1. 00:10:226 (10226|4,10226|2) - Ctrl + H // i think its okay with my own placement
2. Overall, it is recommended to reduce long notes and place short notes. // maybe i will consider this , i think the longnotes is still okay because this map have really slow bpm and its pretty easy too
   ex)
3. 00:17:203 - 00:19:993 - 00:19:296 - 00:19:296 - It's all the same sound, recommend placing two notes.
4. 00:25:575 -
   It is recommended to express the high and low sound in this way.
5. 00:35:865 (35865|0,36040|2,36214|4,36389|6) - move to |1|2|3|4 // its pitch , i cant change it
6. 00:36:738 (36738|1,37086|3,37435|5,37784|0,38133|6,38482|5,38831|3,39179|1) - It is recommended to change to short note. // i think i have a same reason for reject this
7. 00:43:714 - 00:25:575 - It is recommended to express high and low as shown here. tbh i dont want to reduce this , but i will consider it
   
8. 00:55:575 (55575|2,55749|1,55924|0) - ctrl + J
9. 00:56:272 (56272|3,56272|4) - move to 1 and 3
10. 00:56:272 (56272|5) - move to 5 // maybe it should still there
11. 01:07:784 (67784|1) - delete // i see nothing there , really
12. 01:26:665 (86665|3,87188|6) - delete

It is a good idea to recreate the pattern by referring to someone another map

Good luck XD

Rivals_7 wrote:

>2017
>shigatsu
smh // bentar lagi april bossq *-*)9

7!! - Orange (Anime Ver.)

[General]

1. Metadata: Clear
2. Hitsounds: Clear
3. Miscellaneous: Clear

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[Easy]

1. 00:15:807 (15807|1,15807|0) - i personally would swap the places. pretty hard to control by newbies
   
2. 00:32:552 (32552|1) - not adding a note here? refer - 00:35:342 (35342|6,35342|4) -
   
3. 00:39:528 (39528|0) - I prefer this on 3 for balance
   
4. 00:40:924 (40924|0) - ^ 5 // i swap it , maybe its look better
   
5. 01:15:807 (75807|5) - 2. same reason
   
6. 01:18:598 (78598|1) - 6. ^
   like.... balance is everything here and you should pay attention to that

[Normal]

1. 00:15:807 (15807|0) - same comment about balance thingy. //single notes moved to 6
   
2. 00:39:528 (39528|0) - also on 3.same reason as Easy
   
3. 00:45:633 (45633|1,45807|1) - wat? its a totally different pitch. also the left hand seems will be going to really have a bad day - 00:44:238 (44238|2,44412|1,44586|0,44935|2,45458|0,45633|1,45807|1,45982|2) - //re-arrange a bit, its better now i think

[Hard]

1. 00:20:691 (20691|2,20691|4,20691|3) - idk why is htere a triple LNs for such a low chord. probably delete two of those // its piano and sound like ckk , i forget what kind of sound is that , but i want to keep this triple.. but i change 4 with a single notes instad of LNs
   
2. 00:23:482 (23482|2) - probably move this to 4 for symmetrical
   
3. 00:45:633 (45633|2,45807|2) - same. i dont think this is on the same pitch // i change it on normal , but in hard i want to keep this mini jack , the sound is quite close i thought, so i think it will be okay leave it like that on hard

Rivals_7 wrote:

mager ftw // tenang aja ga terlalu ngerush kok owo)b

[Easy]

00:45:807 (45807|5) - now that i think that this double are probably out of nowhere since all the piano chords use mostly single (except for some occasion there's still SN + LN combination but this is just a 2 SNs which i don't see it anywhere else. sounds inconsistent).

tl;dr delete that note. inconsistent with the rest of the piano noise you've mapped // fixed , i changing it with just follow a single piano there and change a little things there https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7650062 see the blue part , thats all i changes

[Normal]

00:22:086 (22086|2,22086|0) - one of these should be an LN. like Easy has // fixed

Rivals_7 wrote:

بِسْمِ اللَّهِ الرَّحْمَنِ الرَّحِيمِ

AchsanLovers wrote:

gg, baru 2 page udh bub (y)

Kawawa wrote:

Hello, Altsy-!!

First of all, If you really want to keep them. then please reply it. I will respect them!
but I think It needs to see again.

[General]
※Missed a main timing
01:26:970 - Main timing does not matched, because you used 1/16 snap for the piano.
but you can make it match to each other.

01:26:665 - Let's make the redline https://puu.sh/vAs3U/7559fbc69c.png // i have found out that the last timing must be 80bpm , and its fixed now , i can snap them properly
And "Last LNs should be ended" here 01:29:455 -
Then It will be like that https://puu.sh/vAs74/8b2af2efa3.jpg
This gives players better accuracy and is also visually well done(should applied all the difficulties)

For example :: Avalon's map did not used this redline(because he ignored last piano sounds) so It was no need at that time.

※Hitsound volume
00:00:459 - to 00:52:086 - you used soft-hitnormal only.
but It's too noise a bit. and It made the piano faint.
so I recommend you to reduce the volume in this part(I thiink 20% is enough) // okay fixeed uwu

[Easy]
00:15:807 (15807|1) - Move to 4.
It is too distributed in Column 1 to 3. It will be helped for blance and shape. // applied

00:16:854 - ~ 00:17:203 - You should not use 1/4th stream on "Easy" difficulty
I recommend you to avoid 1/4th on the Easy difficulty.
It can be one of dq reason. I already have seen this case a lots.
In general, 1/4 rhythm is difficult for beginners to learn(got dq'd from those reason)
And I also don't think that needs 1/4th rhythm on the beginner Level(even If It's low bpm) // removed 1/4 streams all over the map , maybe it leave some 1/4 light jump and i think its okay

You can make it bundle as a one of LN, If you want. like this https://puu.sh/vAnp2/f7fe25087d.jpg
or just remove 1/4th notes. And keep them without LN. up to you!

==========================================
▶ I think some LN's rhythm are over-extended.
00:28:365 (28365|6) - did not you expressed the organ instrument?
Actaully I can't feel it for long time.
This is not a background instrument like 00:54:528 (54528|6) - 00:56:272 (56272|5) -
And when player recognized about it, It will be awkward to them as rhythm.

How I have to do? here is solution!

For example(1):: 00:29:761 (29761|3) - This is okay, It's appropriate.

so you need to change the length of some LNs. It is as follows.
00:28:365 (28365|6) - 00:29:761 (29761|3) - 00:31:156 (31156|0) - 00:32:552 (32552|1) - 00:33:947 (33947|2) -
This needs to be consitent like this https://puu.sh/vApcw/099f406f90.jpg
(Please change this too 00:39:528 (39528|6) - 00:42:319 (42319|3) - 00:43:714 (43714|6) - )

For example(2):: 00:35:342 (35342|6) - This also okay.
because you made it shorter for the same timing with 00:35:865 (35865|0) - intentionally
so 00:40:924 (40924|0) - also can be shorter here 00:41:447 - It's the better way. // fixed all over extended LN that you mention , and try put some improvements on around that parts

※ If you fixed all things, It should be applied on the normal, hard too.
I will not repeat about it on that difficulty mods.
==========================================

00:35:342 (35342|6) - I already told this from above mods, but should be fixed by 1/4th stream.
what do you think about? https://puu.sh/vAqrT/06d7c8

00:41:796 (41796|6,41970|5,42145|4) - should avoid 1/4th.
so I think remove is better for that https://puu.sh/vApWr/a5bca70493.jpg

00:47:203 - 1/4 things.
00:48:598 - 1/4 things.

00:55:749 (55749|1) - You can ignore it.
01:06:912 (66912|4) - Same with above.// for this one , i'd rather keep the last one because it just feels wrong when i delete the last one

01:24:179 - 1/4 things. // fixed all uwu

[Normal]
First of all, It has to be fixed the LNs like "Easy difficulty" what I said. // done !!

00:43:714 - to 00:45:110 - I feel this stair pattern is so far from piano melody
I think It can be better for the pitch than this(Hard is better)
This is just a feedback :: https://puu.sh/vArkf/f09fb06dde.jpg // fixeed

00:50:517 - It can be calculated as important rhythm, because you used 1/4th piano synth as main rhythm.
so don't need to ignore it, And If you add here, It will not be harder than your thinking. don't worry. // added and re-arrange with a better note placements

[Hard]
First of all, It has to be fixed the LNs like "Easy difficulty" what I said.

00:43:017 (43017|3) - Move to 3, 00:43:017 (43017|1) - Move to 7.
It will be easier to press the patterns. And looks better. // fixed

I think It should be recheck what I said. // i just not noticed about the last part , and i think it should be what is it , but im just lazy ;w;
You can recheck with rivals! And after re-bubble, tell me! // okay owo)b
(+If you still have a trouble something, then poke me pm or in-game!)

Rivals_7 wrote:

wtf langsung beli.Bagi dong mz saia juga sama mau ngerank tapi g ada slot :u jk

00:56:272 - kiai gk start disini aja? bagian chorusnya kan disitu ayayayay sir , added timing point buat ngatur volume di tempat kiai tadi

[Hard]

00:43:365 (43365|4) - eeeeee follows nothing in particular. there's 2 vocal syllables or a 1/4 piano
either make it like https://puu.sh/vC7Pk/1ffb18c707.png (vocal) or https://puu.sh/vC7Rn/414346f05e.jpg (piano) // oke piano :v

Rivals_7 wrote:

siapa juga yg ngebubble map orang jam 11 malem

Kawawa wrote:

[All difficulties]
01:29:429 - Add a redline here too for last main timing section https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8011970

01:26:616 - Remove this one, It will be calculated as a ghost note.
I think should be started here 01:26:679 - It does not need to start from blue line, even If looks clean.

Kawawa wrote:

confimed in chat, Congratz!

Surono wrote:

kebanyakan maen pebe, tapi ngecit di bleksqwet.

ciri ciri nax/tjah animes

thronkeng

gratz, wibu anjigs...!1!11/1.