Rivals_7 wrote:

>2017
>shigatsu
smh // bentar lagi april bossq *-*)9

7!! - Orange (Anime Ver.)

[General]

1. Metadata: Clear
2. Hitsounds: Clear
3. Miscellaneous: Clear

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[Easy]

1. 00:15:807 (15807|1,15807|0) - i personally would swap the places. pretty hard to control by newbies
   
2. 00:32:552 (32552|1) - not adding a note here? refer - 00:35:342 (35342|6,35342|4) -
   
3. 00:39:528 (39528|0) - I prefer this on 3 for balance
   
4. 00:40:924 (40924|0) - ^ 5 // i swap it , maybe its look better
   
5. 01:15:807 (75807|5) - 2. same reason
   
6. 01:18:598 (78598|1) - 6. ^
   like.... balance is everything here and you should pay attention to that

[Normal]

1. 00:15:807 (15807|0) - same comment about balance thingy. //single notes moved to 6
   
2. 00:39:528 (39528|0) - also on 3.same reason as Easy
   
3. 00:45:633 (45633|1,45807|1) - wat? its a totally different pitch. also the left hand seems will be going to really have a bad day - 00:44:238 (44238|2,44412|1,44586|0,44935|2,45458|0,45633|1,45807|1,45982|2) - //re-arrange a bit, its better now i think

[Hard]

1. 00:20:691 (20691|2,20691|4,20691|3) - idk why is htere a triple LNs for such a low chord. probably delete two of those // its piano and sound like ckk , i forget what kind of sound is that , but i want to keep this triple.. but i change 4 with a single notes instad of LNs
   
2. 00:23:482 (23482|2) - probably move this to 4 for symmetrical
   
3. 00:45:633 (45633|2,45807|2) - same. i dont think this is on the same pitch // i change it on normal , but in hard i want to keep this mini jack , the sound is quite close i thought, so i think it will be okay leave it like that on hard

Rivals_7 wrote:

mager ftw // tenang aja ga terlalu ngerush kok owo)b

[Easy]

00:45:807 (45807|5) - now that i think that this double are probably out of nowhere since all the piano chords use mostly single (except for some occasion there's still SN + LN combination but this is just a 2 SNs which i don't see it anywhere else. sounds inconsistent).

tl;dr delete that note. inconsistent with the rest of the piano noise you've mapped // fixed , i changing it with just follow a single piano there and change a little things there https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7650062 see the blue part , thats all i changes

[Normal]

00:22:086 (22086|2,22086|0) - one of these should be an LN. like Easy has // fixed

Rivals_7 wrote:

بِسْمِ اللَّهِ الرَّحْمَنِ الرَّحِيمِ

AchsanLovers wrote:

gg, baru 2 page udh bub (y)

Kawawa wrote:

Hello, Altsy-!!

First of all, If you really want to keep them. then please reply it. I will respect them!
but I think It needs to see again.

[General]
※Missed a main timing
01:26:970 - Main timing does not matched, because you used 1/16 snap for the piano.
but you can make it match to each other.

01:26:665 - Let's make the redline https://puu.sh/vAs3U/7559fbc69c.png // i have found out that the last timing must be 80bpm , and its fixed now , i can snap them properly
And "Last LNs should be ended" here 01:29:455 -
Then It will be like that https://puu.sh/vAs74/8b2af2efa3.jpg
This gives players better accuracy and is also visually well done(should applied all the difficulties)

For example :: Avalon's map did not used this redline(because he ignored last piano sounds) so It was no need at that time.

※Hitsound volume
00:00:459 - to 00:52:086 - you used soft-hitnormal only.
but It's too noise a bit. and It made the piano faint.
so I recommend you to reduce the volume in this part(I thiink 20% is enough) // okay fixeed uwu

[Easy]
00:15:807 (15807|1) - Move to 4.
It is too distributed in Column 1 to 3. It will be helped for blance and shape. // applied

00:16:854 - ~ 00:17:203 - You should not use 1/4th stream on "Easy" difficulty
I recommend you to avoid 1/4th on the Easy difficulty.
It can be one of dq reason. I already have seen this case a lots.
In general, 1/4 rhythm is difficult for beginners to learn(got dq'd from those reason)
And I also don't think that needs 1/4th rhythm on the beginner Level(even If It's low bpm) // removed 1/4 streams all over the map , maybe it leave some 1/4 light jump and i think its okay

You can make it bundle as a one of LN, If you want. like this https://puu.sh/vAnp2/f7fe25087d.jpg
or just remove 1/4th notes. And keep them without LN. up to you!

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▶ I think some LN's rhythm are over-extended.
00:28:365 (28365|6) - did not you expressed the organ instrument?
Actaully I can't feel it for long time.
This is not a background instrument like 00:54:528 (54528|6) - 00:56:272 (56272|5) -
And when player recognized about it, It will be awkward to them as rhythm.

How I have to do? here is solution!

For example(1):: 00:29:761 (29761|3) - This is okay, It's appropriate.

so you need to change the length of some LNs. It is as follows.
00:28:365 (28365|6) - 00:29:761 (29761|3) - 00:31:156 (31156|0) - 00:32:552 (32552|1) - 00:33:947 (33947|2) -
This needs to be consitent like this https://puu.sh/vApcw/099f406f90.jpg
(Please change this too 00:39:528 (39528|6) - 00:42:319 (42319|3) - 00:43:714 (43714|6) - )

For example(2):: 00:35:342 (35342|6) - This also okay.
because you made it shorter for the same timing with 00:35:865 (35865|0) - intentionally
so 00:40:924 (40924|0) - also can be shorter here 00:41:447 - It's the better way. // fixed all over extended LN that you mention , and try put some improvements on around that parts

※ If you fixed all things, It should be applied on the normal, hard too.
I will not repeat about it on that difficulty mods.
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00:35:342 (35342|6) - I already told this from above mods, but should be fixed by 1/4th stream.
what do you think about? https://puu.sh/vAqrT/06d7c8

00:41:796 (41796|6,41970|5,42145|4) - should avoid 1/4th.
so I think remove is better for that https://puu.sh/vApWr/a5bca70493.jpg

00:47:203 - 1/4 things.
00:48:598 - 1/4 things.

00:55:749 (55749|1) - You can ignore it.
01:06:912 (66912|4) - Same with above.// for this one , i'd rather keep the last one because it just feels wrong when i delete the last one

01:24:179 - 1/4 things. // fixed all uwu

[Normal]
First of all, It has to be fixed the LNs like "Easy difficulty" what I said. // done !!

00:43:714 - to 00:45:110 - I feel this stair pattern is so far from piano melody
I think It can be better for the pitch than this(Hard is better)
This is just a feedback :: https://puu.sh/vArkf/f09fb06dde.jpg // fixeed

00:50:517 - It can be calculated as important rhythm, because you used 1/4th piano synth as main rhythm.
so don't need to ignore it, And If you add here, It will not be harder than your thinking. don't worry. // added and re-arrange with a better note placements

[Hard]
First of all, It has to be fixed the LNs like "Easy difficulty" what I said.

00:43:017 (43017|3) - Move to 3, 00:43:017 (43017|1) - Move to 7.
It will be easier to press the patterns. And looks better. // fixed

I think It should be recheck what I said. // i just not noticed about the last part , and i think it should be what is it , but im just lazy ;w;
You can recheck with rivals! And after re-bubble, tell me! // okay owo)b
(+If you still have a trouble something, then poke me pm or in-game!)

Rivals_7 wrote:

wtf langsung beli.Bagi dong mz saia juga sama mau ngerank tapi g ada slot :u jk

00:56:272 - kiai gk start disini aja? bagian chorusnya kan disitu ayayayay sir , added timing point buat ngatur volume di tempat kiai tadi

[Hard]

00:43:365 (43365|4) - eeeeee follows nothing in particular. there's 2 vocal syllables or a 1/4 piano
either make it like https://puu.sh/vC7Pk/1ffb18c707.png (vocal) or https://puu.sh/vC7Rn/414346f05e.jpg (piano) // oke piano :v

Rivals_7 wrote:

siapa juga yg ngebubble map orang jam 11 malem

Kawawa wrote:

[All difficulties]
01:29:429 - Add a redline here too for last main timing section https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8011970

01:26:616 - Remove this one, It will be calculated as a ghost note.
I think should be started here 01:26:679 - It does not need to start from blue line, even If looks clean.

Kawawa wrote:

confimed in chat, Congratz!

Surono wrote:

kebanyakan maen pebe, tapi ngecit di bleksqwet.

ciri ciri nax/tjah animes

thronkeng

gratz, wibu anjigs...!1!11/1.