Naotoshi wrote:

[extra]
00:10:327 (1,2) - clickable plz =( sudden blue tick rhythm makes people mad and ruin free pp :angry:

02:40:327 (5,1) - space 1 more i think, feels kinda weak Ok

02:42:379 (3,4) - 1/1+circle works better here i think Ok

03:52:642 (1,2) - same as firt blue tick rhythm after the streams :angry:

04:16:011 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - can u follow a less dense layer here, feels really weird since song is becoming more calm Ok

04:29:274 (1,2,3,4) - aaaaaaa cmon dude its top diff u can map 1/3 clickableeeeee made clickable except 04:29:274 (1) - for at least the warning

[insane]
00:20:906 (5,6) - 1/1 slider on 5 fits a bit better i think, to emphasize cymbal more ok

00:35:511 (4,1) - this look kinda ugly, can u manual stack ok

00:58:011 (4,1) - ctrl g is cute to follow the bass guitar ok

01:00:537 (4,1) - same, etc ye

01:42:537 (1,5,1,2,3) - put nc on all of these? to follow the cymbals. atm looks weird cuz 5-1-2 all same sound and pattern but different combo fixd, did it on ex as well

03:53:906 - ?? d

[hard]00:20:906 (2,3) - 1/1 on 2 instead, cymbal suggest a 3/2 rhythm and there is not much at 00:21:063 - to click on ok

00:25:485 (1) - remove nc ok
00:22:958 (1) - and here too. song is pretty calm so long combos fit better imo ok doubled nc pattern on all calm parts for consistency or sth

00:31:011 (3) - 1/1 fits piano better i guess? ok

00:46:563 - fill? ok

01:58:642 (3,1) - i think 3 circle and 01:58:800 - 3/2 slider works better, piano is more obvious imo. also remove nc on01:58:958 (1) - , not really needed applied but keep 01:58:800 - as 1/1 slider since sound on 01:59:274 - is p strong

02:31:958 (2) - end it at 02:32:274 - .. made long slider instead for easier reads

also i think you should have some triples, i mean next diff has 5 and 9 stream so having no 1/4 in this diff is a bit off. especially in that part before last kiai where you put spinner and in insane diff there is a shit ton of 1/4. not good for spread filled on 02:27:537 - 03:49:800 - owo

03:53:906 - . .


[akitoshi's normal]
00:20:906 (5,6) - ctrl g fits better ok

02:26:432 (3,4) - wat is this rhythm. ctrl g and shorten the slider to end at 02:26:906 - remapped the rhythm lolz
[easy]
00:21:695 - remove some filler circle from this part. even though they are in the song, since it is calmer it should have lower rhythm density

00:32:748 (2,2) - for example ye

01:42:241 - same around (before) here oko

ending spinner is kinda long for low diffs.. maybe better to just delet monstrata's zense has almost same length of spinner on low diffs at end so i think its fine

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Electoz wrote:

[Expert]

1. 00:34:011 (4,1) - Could’ve spaced bigger for emphasis, currently 00:31:800 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - is like a big chunk with monotonous spacing buffed a bit
2. 01:01:800 - This is more prominent than 01:01:958 - so why did you skipped it (actually you didn't in Insane so zzz) expert is remapped and didn't compared with insane loler fixd btw
3. 02:15:379 (1,2,3) - Spacings don't look visually distinguishable tho. 02:15:379 (1,2) - Could be nerfed more according to how you spaced stuff more on white ticks. ok
4. 03:19:800 (1,2,3,4) - 03:33:695 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Pattern variation could've been more in-depth/consistent, like for these patterns you used squares most of the time but then some other shapes like those timestamps mentioned came off pretty randomly. Could've just varied things more consistently (by starting the shape you used at 03:33:695 - on 03:28:642 - onward) or used squares all the way zzz kinda intentional for slight intensity change from the background on that random 1/1 placing (at least the grids aren't off and 1/2 is consistently linear lul) also all squares looks rly repetitive since it's p long

[Insane]

1. 00:29:274 (1) - No emphasis on this cymbal at all? zzz bigger spacing pls yh
2. 00:45:853 (2) - Can use the slider shape idea thing you did in Expert too. yh
3. 02:06:853 (2,1) - Could've looked more appealing aesthetically if these weren't placed this close. wtf
4. 02:46:327 (4,1) - Looks kinda stand out considering your usual aesthetics will have sliders interlocking/fitting each other like 02:33:695 (3,1) - 02:36:695 (1,4) - 02:44:906 (3,2) - etc but the one I mentioned doesn’t look like it lol fixd
5. 03:56:274 (1,4) - Was expecting some 1/1 slider stuff here like what you did in previous choruses. At first I thought you were trying to make the last kiai different from others but then you didn't do the same with 04:06:379 (1,3) - so I'm confused on what's the reason behind your rhythm choice of 03:56:274 (1,2,3,4,5) - . made 03:56:906 - 1/1, about on 03:56:274 (1,2,3) - the vocal rhythm is slightly different/clearer from previous choruses
6. 04:16:485 (4) - Isn't NC supposed to be here instead of 04:16:958 (1) - ? a
7. 04:26:748 (1,2,3,4) - Should use the same slider shape on all these cuz now they look like 2 2-slider patterns rather than a 4-slider pattern. ops

[Hard]

1. 00:13:800 (4,1) - 03:48:853 (1,2) - 04:04:958 (4,1) - DS? but like who cares so whatever still visually consistent :angry:
2. 00:17:906 (1,2,3,4) - 4 sliders thing would only stick out here cuz you didn't do this in other measures. If this was meant to be a variation then I expect 04:26:748 (1,2,3,4) - to be the same too? did 1/1 instead for consistency asdsfdgfd
3. 00:55:800 (1,2,3,4) - Could've moved things around a bit, now it doesn't look as pleasing cuz you're limiting your own space. Try changing 00:55:800 (1) - into a curve slider or other shapes so you can do something better (more aesthetically appealing) on 00:56:432 (3,4) - afterwards? did something !11!
4. 01:24:221 (3) - 2 circles like what you did in other places 01:14:116 (3,4) - 02:47:590 (3,4) - etc? aaaaa
5. 01:34:958 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythms from 01:37:485 (1,2,3,4) - 01:40:011 (1,2,3,4) - work better instead of this, like obviously rhythm is repeating every 2 measures and then idk why you did this differently from the other two. oko
6. 01:43:485 (1) - Don't get what the comboing is for, you didn't NC on every sound like higher diffs nor having a single combo on the entire thing like lower diffs so I don't really get this. Nani sore imi wakannai added NC at 01:44:432 - for more consistent, still didn't NC every 1 slider since might cause some reading problm for 6digits (higher diff has NC spam on every cymbals except the 1/2 slider)
7. 01:58:327 (2,3,4) - 02:03:379 (2,3,4) - Same rhythm for consistency? piano is hitting on different tick d
8. 02:16:642 (1,2,3,4) - ??? Isn't this supposed to be the same rhythm from 02:15:379 (1,2,3) - ? my old self was p sick :joy:
9. 04:10:800 (2,3,4) - Something something like https://puu.sh/z1bXy/d5555ccf91.jpg would look better? Currently the overlap 04:10:011 (5,1,4) - makes aesthetics looked pretty cramped. ok
10. 04:28:327 (2) - Why cymbal on tail you didn't do this in other diffs asjkfnkajsfnblaijk dgljkbnhvxcmjknskj

[Normal]

1. 00:39:379 (1,2) - DS wtf
2. 01:29:906 - 02:53:274 - 04:15:379 - In other diffs you usually drop rhythm density here so I was expecting that on these places too. droppd
3. 02:17:274 (4) - 2 circles on this would make 02:19:800 (4) - more stand out since there's a musical change on it. ok
4. 03:37:169 (2,4) - Are you scared of hp bar or what lol just move 03:38:116 (4) - up so your blanket will be big as other ones you usually did 03:22:958 (4,1) - 03:28:011 (4,1) - etc. w
5. 04:32:748 (6) - Not that it matters but you NC'd stuff around here in other diffs so I guess I'll just mention this. added nc

00:11:590 - 00:21:695 - These parts have like no difference in rhythm density at all despite having a different intensity so something needs to be done on either one of these. nerfed/converted to 2/1 on some sliders on around 00:21:695 -

[Easy]

1. 04:24:221 (3,4) - Was expecting a rhythm like 04:21:695 (3,4) - because most of the time (or every idk didn't bother checking) in lower diffs you always started rhythm variation on the third repetition of the melody 04:25:485 - . ok

catch diff is fine
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